I received this as an ARC through netgalley and I was actually super excited to read it, as the description sounded right up my street, but I have to admit I really disappointed.
The description gives the impression this is a fantasy book about an alchemist who has to basically spy on a school in what I think is essentially another realm. It says she will have to overcome obstacles due to her inability to keep her mouth shut, but she will basically be the saviour in an upcoming war.
I would say this is sort of true. Shiloh does get asked to report back to - what I think is - the government, and she does get forced to attend this university. But the majority of the story is long ramblings that barely make sense (made me think of joey in Friends when he uses tbe thesaurus to write the letter for the adoption agency) and Shiloh trying to get laid, and eventually ending up with sky for 2 night then Sky dies the next day.
The first two chapters of the book dont give enough information to make sense. I enjoyed the chapters where Shiloh first arrives at the University and up until she goes to meet Ezra for the first time.
The rest of the books is a mystery to me. its long ramblings about various topics, that go on for too long and get boring. With sprinkling of actual plot. Small insights into the world Shiloh has entered are thrown in here and there, at about 60% she is finally told she has to enter the tournament, but its not a full focus of the book.
I understand that Shiloh was on drugs, but even that isnt always clear, and that if its her retelling then the story would be a bit confusing and blocks would be missing where she cant remember - but this book made very little sense to me and I genuinely dont know what its about.
I was expecting an exciting fantasy book about a girl coming into herself in this new world and learning to control her power, but its not what was delivered.
There were many errors in this book, words missed out or spelled incorrectly.
I think the premise is great and it could have been amazing book if it was just simplified quite a bit.