I'm not sure what was worse:
-The heroine's continual stuttering & trembling while getting turned on by the hero's brusque treatment just as much as his gentler moments.
-The hero's blackmailing her into marriage because of some dippy island myth.
-The heroine's self-reproaches because she should be MOAR submissive than she already is -- maybe instead of a doormat she could be a shoe-scraper?
-The hero's arm-grabbing & manipulation of a naive girl who can barely feed herself. What a hunk! Not.
-The heroine's husky voice. (<--repetitious adverb alert)
-The hero's pathetic jealousy when this twit holds reasonable conversation with other men in his own family.
-The heroine falling for the most obvious scheme ever to discredit her promises...in the final 10 pages.
Also, here's a sample of their dynamic relationship:
"You do not sound very enthusiastic," he said shortly. "Have you something against learning our language?"
"No, of course I haven't." She tried vainly to do something about the way her pulse was responding to the firm hold he had on her arm, the strong fingers so tight as to be almost a warning about stepping out of line, a gesture she resented but at the same time found disturbingly stimulating to her senses.
...This occurs after she dares to gently suggest that she would prefer to discuss future life details in a pretense of choice, rather than someone informing her that she will learn Greek because Damon says so. But don't worry -- that little rebellion died quickly. No matter how submissive you are, ladies...it's not enough! YOU CAN DO BETTER!
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Turns out the awesome vintage blouse on the front cover really was the best part. Humbug. >:P I still have another Stratton; hopefully it's better.