I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The General's Perfect Wife is a sweet, low-stakes romance inspired by Ancient China. The story follows Yun-Yao, the eldest daughter of the Chancellor, and Zhen-Ting, a famous general and their arranged marriage.
Yun-Yao, despite being the daughter of a powerful man, has remained unmarried because of certain circumstances, and is rumoured to be cursed. She is both a dutiful daughter and the image of the perfect noblewoman, a young woman caught between daring to dream for herself and doing her duty, the latter being the one she chooses most of the time. So, when she learns that the Emperor himself has decided she will marry Zhen-Ting, she accepts.
Zhen-Ting is the kind of MMC I love. In extremely simple words, he's not just a green flag, he's a green forest. I loved his interaction with Yun-Yao, the vital role he played in regards to her character development, as well as the way he has always tried to protect her.
The writing was beautiful, and the author did an amazing job of building these complex characters.
There were, unfortunately, some things that I didn't like.
The first is a large portion of the plot. I liked the story itself, but there were moments when I got so bored I had to take a moment, go on a walk around my house or find something to do for a couple of minutes because I wanted to finish the book, but it was definitely a challenge. In truth, when there were about ten chapters left (or something like that), I was starting to wonder why it is so long (the book is not long, it only has twenty-eight short chapters). I'm not sure how to explain this, but I felt that, while the characters moved forward, the action did not. I would say that, although it was nice to read about the way Yun-Yao and Zhen-Ting get closer to each other, the period after the wedding and before Zhen-Ting is forced back to the front was hard to get through.
Another thing that has something to do with the fact it bored me at some point is the world-building. Medieval fantasy is my favourite thing to read, Regency romances being the second. As the book draws inspiration from a society I had, unfortunately, never read before, I was so exited to learn more about Ancient China (or, at least, the elements the author decides to incorporate in this story). Unfortunately, the world-building felt rather undeveloped (to my standards, at least), and it did disappoint me.
Another thing that I can't say exactly I liked was the translation of titles. Of course, there are some titles that can be translated into English without any problem (king, emperor), but I have always loved books that, especially when being inspired from different cultures, use titles is their original form. Now, I don't speak Chinese, and I had to Google the pronunciation of names, but I would have loved to see titles in their native language. Of course, I understand this is a tricky thing because there are people who might see too many words in a foreign language and decide that they make the book too hard to read.
When it comes to my own opinion, a book doesn't have to have sort of incredible prose to be a good book. For me, a good story is one with interesting world-building, complex characters and intriguing actions. Unfortunately, the General's Perfect Wife only checks one box and a half of those.
I still believe it is a nice story, and I did like it. It just didn't exactly meet my expectations in terms of world-building more than anything else.