She ran from one monster…straight into the arms of another. When Alia traded her future for her sister’s freedom, she knew exactly what awaited her—a murderous husband with a trail of vanished wives. Upon discovering a hidden lamp, she makes a desperate wish to save her life, not knowing that genie magic always comes with a cruel twist.
Alia is hurled halfway across the world and straight into the clutches of Zafir, a villainous vizier with ambitions of his own. Now Alia is trapped in a foreign kingdom, her sister is in more danger than ever, and the murderous husband she fled is hunting for her.
So Alia strikes a dangerous bargain with the one man she absolutely should not trust. The problem is…an overdose on a highly illegal love potion leaves them questioning which feelings are real and which are not.
With her sister out of reach and a villain chained to her side, how is she supposed to save anyone, least of all herself?
Bluebeard’s Bride is a standalone no-spice fantasy romance packed with villain vibes, sharp-tongued banter, forced proximity, and love potion shenanigans perfect for fans who love their fairy tales clever, edgy, and delightfully unhinged.
Tropes in Bluebeard's Hate at First SightEnemies to LoversOverdosing on Love PotionHandcuffed TogetherOnly One BedKissing Lessons with the VillainSnarky Banter What Readers Are "Bluebeard meets Aladdin in a story that keeps you on your toes."
"If you’re a fan of enemies to lovers, Aladdin retellings and unexpected plot twists, you definitely want to read this story!"
Mary Mecham writes high stakes, high swoon, no spice romantasy and fairy tale retellings packed full of adventure and romances. Her greatest joy is writing snarky banter and morally grey characters.
She is a born and raised Texan with a love of theater and books overshadowed only by her passion for disability advocacy. Her favorite food is chips and queso, her favorite holiday is April Fool's Day, and her favorite trope is enemies to lovers.
When she isn't writing, Mary enjoys spending time with her family and trying out new experiences, from fire breathing and axe throwing to trapeze flying and power paragliding.
She currently lives in Texas with her husband and three children.
You can get a FREE e-copy of her Rumpelstiltskin retelling, A Curse of Gold and Beauty, when you sign up for her newsletter at MaryMecham.com
Oh my gosh. This was a masterpiece of enemies to lovers banter, no spice romance, and high stakes. Each character was dynamic and wonderfully crafted with their own charming (or not so charming) personalities and traits. Alia and Zafir?? Perfection. Adore them. Love them. Favorite couple I’ve read in a book in quite a long time! Also my first favorite of this year! The plot was so good, so intriguing and gripping, and I basically read this in one sitting, I just could NOT put it down!! I was smiling like a little girl, giggling, and snorting in laughter, refusing to speak to anyone who wanted my attention while I read this lol I could fangirl about this book allllllll day. All month. All year. Literally. I will probably reread it soon because I neeeeeeeed this type of book in my life!! Yall when I say I’m obsessed with this book!!! There were so many scenes that I just completely adore and when I get my physical copy, will probably tab so I can find them quickly…but then again there’s too many of them for me to do that…I’d mark every page 🤣 so I guess I’ll be rereading a lot hehe But the way Zafir is with Alia?! So respectful so honorable, yet so fun and charming and wonderful and lovely. Alia is so full of spunk and personality, and the two of them make a wonderful pair! Also the villain!! So wonderfully done but man was he intense!! If I had to pick one thing about the book I loved the most is Zafir and Alia’s relationship. I know that’s mostly what the book is about, but truly it’s my favorite part. He truly is the epitome of what a guy should be like in treating a woman (you’ll see when you read it) even if he is gruff at the beginning. I love that he’s real and authentic. I love that Alia tries to see past his guard and truly cares about his walls and why he built them. I love how he cares so gently with her but would fight for her until his last breath. I love how she fights for him too. A beautiful impactful romance of real emotions and real connection!
Content: No spice romance, kissing, talking of seducing a man and lessons on how to do so, blood, violence, death, some scenes that could be disturbing to some because of violence, potions and poison
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Thank you so much Mary Mecham for this ARC! When I got the ARC for this I nearly screamed out of pure unbridled joy! Mary Mecham is my favorite author for a reason guys I love everything she writes. I would read literally anything if she wrote it. Also this had a pronunciation guide which was extremely helpful. And when I saw that we would get to see Tarquin and Azora from ‘Assassin of Fire and Sacrifice’ again I was so excited because I love them both so much. The opening scene was already amazing. I loved this so much! The banter was freaking amazing omg it was hilarious. Every interaction between Alia and Zafir (when they still hated each other) had me laughing so hard. I loved that it was a female Aladdin falling in love with Jafar. That was such an interesting way to do this story. Everything was so creative and I loved the nods to the original fairytales as well as the elements original to this story. Azora, Rapunzel, and Alia would be such good friends. When he ODed on love potion that was hilarious I loved that part. I highlighted so many parts basically the entire book in my e arc copy. And that plot twist!? That was insane. I didn't see that coming at all. I loved the epilogue so much!
The Characters ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Alia ~ I absolutely loved her, she was amazing!
Zafir ~ I loved him! He was so perfect for Alia even if she didn't realize it for most of the book. And omg he was such a gentleman! When he wanted to be rude he could be really rude but when he was nice he was so freaking sweet!
Nadia ~ she was ok. I didn't love her but she was alright.
Tarquin ~ I still loved him for the few paragraphs he was in this book.
What To Expect 🗝️Amazing Banter 🗝️Bluebeard X Aladdin Retelling 🗝️Hate At First Sight 🗝️Overdose on Love Potion 🗝️Flirting Lessons 🗝️Handcuffed Together
Quotes ~~~~~~~ “Did you sleep better?” His arms didn’t move. “Much better. But I’m surprised you slept in,” I told him. “You always wake up early.” He propped himself up on his elbow and his eyes searched my own. “You aren’t the only one who dislikes being alone at night. And if I’m going to be with someone, I want it to be you.”
“Flaming phoenixes, I had fallen for him so hard. He had to know it, despite all my hostility and barbed insults.”
“You’re being kind,” I stood up, “When I’m not busy being a venomous viper or plotting to murder my ex-husband, I’m actually a very kind person.”
“How long are the effects supposed to last?” “At least another hour.” “Can you make an antidote?” “Not in the allotted time left. Just don’t talk. Or move. Or exist. It’s too distracting.”
Content ~~~~~~~ ❤️🔥Romance| several kisses ranging from semi detailed to detailed, flirting, mentions of seducing, blushing, Alia blushes and admires Zafir’s muscles, Zafir gives Alia Flirting Lessons and kissing lessons, Zafir ods on love potion and nearly kisses Alia so he tells her to lock herself in the bathroom so he doesn't do anything stupid, Alia and Zafir share a bed so he can comfort her after a nightmare (they only kiss),
🤬Language| blast, blasted,
🗡️Violence| tackling, stabbing, attempted murder, elbowing, Alia kicks a man in the groin, slapping, Body slamming, throwing through windows,
🏳️🌈LGBTQ| none.
✝️Religion/Spirituality| mentions of praying, mentions of a worship house,
🍷Alcohol/Drugs| Zafir ODs on love potion,
⚠️Other| an unwanted kiss with no detail, robbery, blood, pregnancy,
This book was very enjoyable with so many unexpected twists. An Aladdin retelling in such a unique way.
Alia was a very strong FMC with sarcasm and banter for days. Her character did become annoying when she just refused to listen and almost made grave mistakes. Characters like this just annoy me to a point where I don’t enjoy reading about them.
There are 2 male characters in this book, worlds apart. Escape from one monster to the next.
The flow of the story was great and easy to follow. The story was fast paced and full of interesting events and twists you never see coming.
I loved Zafir and his story breaks your heart. The book was filled with emotions and at some stage you want to laugh and cry and be angry all at the same time.
This is a clean fairytale retelling romance and recommend to any fairytale reader who enjoys a twisty story with a happy ending.
DNF @ 63% I’m sad because I really wanted to like this one because I’ve loved other books by this author. Most of my problems with it were mostly because of the Bluebeard part of story, I was expecting it to be a little ehhhhh but not to the extent it was. I did not like the main girl, she made a lot of comments that were just too much for me. Plus the whole makeup thing, she asked for it and wanted the guy to do it yet also was like “oh he wouldn’t like me if I wasn’t wearing makeup” Plus that whole situation where she wanted him to kiss her and he was under a spell and struggling and she was honestly just being a brat. I also didn’t like the clothes, she threw a fit when the guy wouldn’t let her wear a dress that showed everything. Dude he was protecting you! And when she teased him when she needed help with her dress and she was like “oh you’ve never seen a lady’s bare back before?” No just no. Plus there was a minor thing about someone being physically abused in a relationship, plus Bluebeard killing women left and right. I’ve seen some reviews of this where there is even more content that I’m not comfortable with so I just decided to stop. Someone else might be okay with it, but it’s not for me.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Are you kidding, Bluebeard and Aladdin??? Count me in!
This book was *weeping* beautiful🥹😍 Not only was Alia a fiery FMC but she had depth and, the best part: she wasn't annoying 🤯🎉 And the MMC was so hot 🥵 I think my heart genuinely leapt out of my chest at least 10 times❤️💥 The chemistry between them was crazy!!! This book made me forget I was reading, it was just me, Alia, and Zafir.
When Mary Mecham was releasing this book I was so excited, I love Bluebeard and I love Mary Mecham, so you better believe I was telling Everyone about how this book was coming out. And in all, it met, and went beyond, my expectations!!!
This book was very original Blackbeard until it WASN'T 🤯 In two words, this book is Pure Genius!!! My favorite aspects of this book: potions✨, enemies to lovers😗, facial hair🤤 The one thing, not even a critique, I kinda want to see Zafir's POV.
Mary Mecham, please keep the books coming!!! ❤️📚
Thanks to the author for an ARC in exchange for my honest review.
Disclaimer: i received a free advanced reader copy in exchange for an honest review. I wasn't required to leave a positive review. All thoughts and opinions expressed are my own.
FJDJSJAKA THIS BOOK IS AMAZING GO READ IT!!!! Like I have no words. I devoured it in one sitting. 10/10 will reread.
This was almost going to be a three star review until I read the ending…the twist was a beautifully crafted masterpiece!
Mary Mecham is evidently a very talented author and I can’t wait to read more of her books!!
I’m not the hugest fan of forced enemies to lovers (i.e. they insta-despise each other for absolutely no reason because it can feel artificial) but the witty banter? So good!
As for addictive levels? Through the roof! I needed to study, but every time I swiped to the next page to pause, it drew me in and I couldn’t stop!
I know it’s a good book when the last chapters are read in my head at 2x speed which is what happened here. I was holding on to every word and like I said, the end was the best part (in a good way!)
And I laughed out loud (not really iykwim) when there was a guy named Julian with a lemur (and later a lemur named Julian)—get it? King Julian the lemur from Madagascar? Didn’t know that was one of the retelling aspects…
Amazing for Romantasy fans of swoon without spice!
I received an ARC in exchange for an honest review
No one does twists like Mary! I wasn’t sure if there was going to be one, and then the last 10% hit, and HELLO, what was twist. 😂
The banter was killing me, hahaha, and kept me up way too late. The love potions and flirting lessons were hilarious. But Zafir and Alia were everything. So ridiculously adorable and snarky. They might be my new favourite Mecham couple. 🥹
This one did feel older than Mary’s other books—almost more NA than YA—due to character ages, but it’s still sweet, stabby, and amazing with no questionable content for teens!
Alia marries a man known for leaving a trail of missing wives behind him, but she does it to save her sister. In an attempt to save her own life she makes a desperate wish when she finds a mysterious lamp - and ends up in the clutches of a powerful vizier. Has Alia gone from bad to worse?
This is a mashup retelling of Bluebeard and Aladdin, and it works really well! Although it's part of the Displaced Fairytales series it's a standalone fantasy romance with no spice, but with high stakes and lots of snarky banter!
“When I’m not busy being a venomous viper or plotting to murder my ex-husband, I’m actually a very kind person.”
Alia has many good qualities, but sometimes I just want to yell "NO, what are you doing?!" and stop her. Zafir (the vizier) is more or less her opposite, very cool and calculated. The only thing they truly have in common is their love for potions. This is a real enemies-to-lovers and a slow-burn, where we have to wait for the romance. Unless we count the flirting lessons Zafir gives Alia when she's going to seduce another man in order to get him to pay for her journey home...
Some parts are predictable, but others surprise me. This is not a cozy fantasy (the stakes are too high), but the tone is still lighthearted and humorous.
* I received an ARC from the author and I'm giving my honest review. *
Romance ❤️🔥: Kissing Only (Semi Descriptive make out)
Violence ⚔️: There is mild violence and description of blood from a cut nothing overly graphic
⚠️ Abusive relationship, on page death⚠️
Tropes/Micro tropes - Single POV - Enemies to Lovers - Flirting Lessons - He does her makeup - Sisterly bonds - Tied together
My Thoughts:
Initial: UGH SO SO GOOD!!! I devoured this book and it had me reading it as fast as I was able to. I absolutely adore Alia and Zafir. All the banter and snarky commentary back and forth. Their initial encounter is everything 🤣
Again Mary getting me with these plot twist! This was truly such an enjoyable story and I absolutely have to read Assassin of Fire and Sacrifice soon! I’m gonna have more of a review to come!
Final:
Alia is a pure fireball who is sassy and ready to do whatever it takes to help keep her sister safe. She is also a true fighter and one to not give up easily. Her and Zafir's first interactions were absolutely hilarious to me. The flirting lessons and all their plans were so fun to read and follow. It was great seeing their relationship develop!
Thanks so much to the author for the ARC ebook of this wonderful story! All thoughts and opinions are my own!
I read this in basically one sitting and it was really good. I absolutely loved the banter and laughed at several different scenes. The beginning was eerily familiar like I had read that plot before (and I think I know which book. I just have to fact check on it) but once Alia relocated (to avoid spoilers) that feeling of familiarity left. I loved the Easter eggs to the other books in the same world. I have read Rapunzel's Gambit but not Assassin of Fire and Sacrifice just yet. This was a fun whirlwind of a story! I enjoyed it so much and look forward to buying a copy for my trophy shelf.
Are you a no-spice reader with a love for fairytales? Bluebeard’s Bride is a high stakes, hate at first sight Bluebeard retelling that is absolutely CAPTIVATING. ✨
Our snarky female lead, Alia is an orphaned street rat who is also responsible for her younger sister, Nadia. They run into trouble and Alia is forced into marrying Rahil/Bluebeard to save her sister. He’s had many wives who mysteriously disappeared or died, but is rich beyond belief. How bad could it be? 👀😅
This book kept me on the edge of my seat!! 😧
Anytime I had to put it down to do “adulting”, I felt like I was being ripped out of Alia’s world. 🫠
The twist at the end was something I NEVER saw coming and really brought the tiniest of details full circle. 😱
If this is your first read by Mary Mecham, don’t stop here!! 👏🏻👏🏻
I received this book as an ARC, but the thoughts and feelings about this book are entirely my own.
This author is known for clean fairytale retellings and this was certainly clean. Even moments that toed the line a bit were still squeaky clean and there is nothing more in this book than a few kisses. This is a mashup of Bluebeard and Aladdin (with a female Aladdin). It took me approximately forever to figure out that Alia was the Aladdin character. I really liked how the two fairy tales fit together, especially at the end of the book. It was really well done, especially the Bluebeard parts. I found the middle to be a little draggy and they spent way too much time trying to figure out how to make the other guy like Alia. Zafir was an interesting character and I liked how snarky Alia was to him. The romance was cute. The story was enjoyable, even though it felt a bit long in the middle.
review of the audiobook:
This was narrated by Talon David, and I thought she did a pretty good job. She was a little more exuberant of a reader than the last audiobook I listened to so that threw me off a little bit when I first started listening. Some of the voices she did sounded similar, especially the guys, but overall it was a well performed audiobook.
This book needs 17 stars to accurately express how much I loved it! An incredibly clever mashup of Aladdin and Bluebeard. The final twist at the end is one of the reasons I loved it so much. I was not prepared and it makes SO MUCH sense. Also I loved the cameo of Azora. She’s still awesome 😂 Thanks Mary Mecham for a book I didn’t know I needed.
I am an arc reader and willingly and freely leave my review. Mary has knocked it out of the park again. I loved the banter, action, plot twist and the world building. 10 out of 10 stars for me
This is the first time I'm reading anything from Mary mecham
So it took me a minute to get in to her style of writing.
I received a ARC for an honest review so here we go.
I won't give any spoilers for starters.
It was an interesting take on two tales Bluebeard and Aladdin.
I did think it maybe took a minute to get into as introducing characters right is essential (I just wanted it to move a little quicker)
Once the story started moving well it got moving so much so that I absolutely loved the banter between A and Z and I wanted it to last a lot longer (I could have also done with more flirting lessons!) honestly had me laughing a lot.
Now at this point the story did have a rushed vibe (I was not a fan of that) and well I understand things had to be resolved (I just wanted more)
Anyway once I got started it was hard to stop (so in my case excellent story telling and fun characters kept me entertained)
Why 4* then well I wanted a lot more and I did feel a little unsure if I'd keep reading but I did feel intrigued about other characters introduced and found they also had a book so I do plan on reading a lot more from Mary Mecham
All in all good, fun and entertaining(with a bit of threat and violence, maybe a bit of gore (due to a stab wound so might be a little uncomfortable to some readers)
4⭐️ ARC Review: That forced proximity man. It gets ‘em every time! I’m loving this series so far. This is a powerhouse group of fantasy authors. At this point though I’ve only read this and one other one, so I’m excited to read more. But the two that I’ve read couldn’t be any more opposite lol.
This one is gritty, tension-filled, suspenseful at times, and has some fantastic snarky banter. I’m coming to find that that is the Mary special. Enemies to lovers at its finest.
Zafir and Alia are complex and passionate characters, and I loved them. They are abrasive and you can maybe define them as ‘villians’ (not really) but on the inside they feel A LOT and just want to be loved. They had some serious chemistry too. I enjoyed watching them go from enemies to lovers. Zafir shows his growing love for her by getting increasingly jealous and protective. That sounds toxic but it’s not lol. But I think they both had a thing for each other from the beginning. Although maybe not the very beginning. Their meet-cute is not cute lol.
The plot was almost perfect for me. The beginning was a bit slow, and people may think the time they are chained together is slow too, but I loved it. And they basically spend the entire time in Zafir’s home together. That usually doesn’t go well for me when they are in one setting for most of the book, but it worked here. It results in the main characters having lots of dialogue and moments together which I eat up.
Now. Mary’s books are clean (as far as language and romance go) but this definitely has the most heat of all of her books when it comes to the romance. I’m not complaining at all. Just thought I’d make those aware who are looking for something squeaky clean. But your teen could still read this in my opinion.
I loved that this book takes place in the same world as the books ‘Rapunzel’s Gambit’ and ‘Assassin of Fire and Sacrifice’. We even get Azora and Tarquin cameos! Kind of fun.
Another side note, there is NO cheating! You may think there might be but trust me. I’m really grateful Mary took the time to make sure of that.
I loved this. Mary is probably my top 5 if not my favorite fantasy author. Auto-buy.
Read if you enjoy: - Bluebeard/Aladdin mashup - Fairytale retelling - Enemies to lovers - Single POV - Forced proximity (chained together)
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Mary Mecham has officially proven that she is the queen of banter, and this is only my first book by her. The banter between Alia and Zaphir is top tier, sharp, witty, and laugh-out-loud funny in so many places. I swear half the time I was grinning because of their constant snark. And the tropes in this book?? Absolute perfection. • Hate at First Sight • Enemies to Lovers • Love Potion Shenanigans • Handcuffed Together • Only One Bed • Kissing Lessons with the Villain • He does Her Makeup • Snarky Banter for days The love potion scenes were some of my favorite parts of the entire story. The mix of tension, humor, and pure chaos made those moments unforgettable. And the scene where Zaphir does Alia's makeup?? I was not expecting that, and I loved every second of it. Mary Mecham somehow manages to balance humor, romantic tension, and heartfelt moments so effortlessly. The chemistry between the characters jumps off the page, and every interaction feels alive thanks to the incredible dialogue. Huge thank you to the author for the ARC! I had so much fun reading this story and cannot wait for more from Mary Mecham.
Holy cow! lol you may have to hold onto your chair arms after reading this.
It is so cool, complex, adventurous, and has magic and fantasy and closed door romance!
Also, this book reminded me- not just in romance, but in healthy relationships in general, real trustworthy people do not threaten or coerce you into risky behavior. (Like, sexual behavior or taking drugs or alcohol without your consent).
Please be careful!
You are made in the image of God- you can learn to protect yourself and a godly partner or friend will protect you and advocate for you.
Best quotes: “I’d do anything for you.” “ “The only way to truly free yourself from the bonds of poverty and ignorance is to force yourself to delay gratification in exchange for a greater reward.”
Where do I even begin? Mary comes in again with a swing and a homerun. The novel opens up with an intriguing action scene and just keeps going. I’m all about the forced contact trope so that was a funny addition. I don’t feel like enough people appreciate a good love triangle where we loathe the third person. It was very entertaining. I would love to see where the sister ends up going with her life. The banter was hilarious and enemies to “lovers” made it even better. I say lovers with quotation marks because these books don’t include sex but I think enemies to sweetie pies doesn’t have the same vibe. Go read this so you can give me many thanks for the recommendation
It has been awhile since I binged a book and this one DELIVERED!!! The banter is on point and the twists were perfection!! Definitely my favorite book by Mary Mecham to date. Highly recommend if you need a book to get you out of a reading slump or to just bring the smiling kicking feet vibes.
I highly enjoyed this book! The ending! What?! How does Mary Mecham’s plot twists always get me? Maybe I just get too engrossed in the moment of the story that I don’t think of any possible plot twists.
Alia and Zafir are perfect in this book! I wouldn’t want them any other way. I loved the villain vibes and the banter. With the story being told by the 6th wife’s POV it helped make this retelling even more unique than it already was.
About the Narrator: After how many audiobooks I listen to that are narrated by Talon David you might think I would get tired of listening to the same person all the time, but no Talon David as always does a fantastic job narrating and I don’t think I could ever tire of her.
So so fun! Great dialogue! Fantastic story. The two fairytales were both done incredibly well. The ending was absolutely perfect. Couldn't have asked for anything better
This was such a creative way to combine Aladdin and Bluebeard. I appreciated how it had so many elements from both stories, but it didn't feel like it was forcing one or both of them too much.
I also felt like the characters were well-developed and pretty consistent, even as they did go through some changes. It felt like they had moments of growth, but never a complete personality change, which was really nice. With this, the enemies to lovers felt really smooth. It didn't feel like they were enemies one minute and then suddenly best friends for eternity in the next. It felt more natural and gradual.
I thought the pacing was really good, too. It was fast enough that I stayed captivated, but not so fast that I missed out on discovering who the characters really were for myself. We got to see the romance happen, but we didn't have to be there for every single second of every single day and night, which was really nice.
The one thing I will say, though, is that there were so many cheesy and cliche lines, which, I mean, it's a romance book, so that's a given, but still. I found myself rolling my eyes several times, but other than that I really enjoyed it!
I received an ARC in exchange for my honest review.
I’m not even gonna bother with content stuff bc it’s Mary Mecham and she’s reliably clean. That’s why we love her (well, one of the reasons).
Where to begin…
I have never read a Mecham book I didn’t adore until this one… and even then, it was only the first 40%—50% that I didn’t like. I’ll explain why.
The banter wasn’t bantering like her other books, for one. I found myself cringing multiple times in the beginning. Examples:
• Zafir chuckled and stopped tapping the ring. “So much venom. Are you a woman or a viper?” “Come closer and find out.”
That made me cringe so hard, but that is the beginning of a desperately mood-killing pet name. “Little viper.”
• Zafir cocked an eyebrow. “You’re quite an astute little viper, aren’t you?” “I have my moments.”
• “Even for you, little viper?” Zafir said, the corner of his mouth twitching. “Watch it. I could bite you.” His smirk broadened. “Be careful. I bite back.”
There’s more, but you get the point. I don’t remember it being like this in Assassin of Fire and Sacrifice. About the first 30% of the books dialogue felt stilted and it didn’t flow like it should have. It was just… too much. I quite literally almost DNF’d. However, the fact that I intentionally signed up for this ARC spurred me on.
I’m glad I kept going.
After about 40%-50% the cringe stopped/slowed. I’ve never been more grateful.
I also got a really good line from this book around 42% in:
• “Ah, but if the normal population was motivated to learn, they would be much harder to control. When people are only focused on fast entertainment, true knowledge and advancement pass them by and they become slaves to their own immediate gratification.” — wise words from our homeboy Zafir, who, after he stopped with all the little viper stuff, was actually good.
(We are gonna ignore his over the top, wattpad forced enemies feeling, written by a 12 y/o, first encounter that I almost stopped bc of)
Speaking of that… for all of his talk about not wanting a woman to have to fear a man, he was REALLY aggressive and inconsiderate of her when she showed up covered in blood. Having guards man-handle her, telling her not to bleed on your furniture, not administering healing things until AFTER she starts passing out, trying to interrogate her as soon as possible as she actively is bleeding out, and then being unsympathetic even after she explains what happened…
Doesn’t work with that supposed value of his.
I’m not gonna talk about her wiping blood on his furniture completely immaturely to spite him. That was SO cringy. I wanted to be embarrassed for her, but I couldn’t. They both sucked in the beginning.
BUT THEN THE STORY STARTED AND THAT ALL BECAME SEMI-IRRELEVANT!
I’m just gonna leave a little quote here that will make you very happy when you finish the book:
• “Wear green.”
IYKYK!!
Does anyone want character breakdowns btw? The plot was to save the FMC from the antagonist that tried to kill her, but really nothing happened with that until the 80% mark… so we’re gonna leave that bit alone for the time being.
Zafir. I actually loved his dynamic. He seemed very cut and dry for a while, but when I found out WHY he was that way, I actually loved it. I also think it was a really cool way to potentially portray substance abuse to cover trauma (trying to not spoil, so that’s very much not was this was, there is no substance abuse in this book, but— anyway, stop trying to twist my words. Just read the book.) I think he is the first MMC from Mecham that I’ve read that felt real. The others are sweet, but he actually felt like an individual that you could read without it being tainted by the FMC POV. Idk if that makes sense (especially considering the whole book is her POV). Anyway, I loved him after he stopped obsessing over calling Alia “little viper”.
ALSO I LOVED THE AZORA AND TARQUIN AND RAZO CAMEOS!!! ESPECIALLY THE TARQUIN ONE!!!
• Tarquin went after her, shooting a wink at Julian as he passed. “Find your own ball of rage. That wild woman’s all mine.”
THATS MY TARQUIN!!! ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥 (forever a favorite MMC. Go read Assassin of Fire and Sacrifice by Mary Mecham)
Now, Alia…
It’s not that I hated her as an FMC. I just didn’t like her. Hardly at all. She was better than some I’ve read, but she was almost too snarky. Take this quote for instance (she asked the MMC to tie her dress for her):
• “Are you embarrassed?” I teased. “Is the sight of a woman’s bare back too much for you to handle? Maybe you should occasionally actually look at a woman rather than keep your nose in your books. You’re right; this Julian will very much like watching you squirm. I do.”
“Are you embarrassed?” would have sufficed. I felt like she had a lot of dialogue like that. It got old. Fast. Thankfully after she started liking him it slowed down, but until then, I couldn’t hardly handle her.
Now, Rahil. I suspected that plot twist at around 60%. It was a good one though. The take-down felt slightly anti-climactic, but this is a tomantasy, we’re not trying to expound upon the villain, we’re trying to grow a romance.
Also, for all my complaining about a lot of this, the romance progressed perfectly. I was really happy with the pace. It didn’t feel insta-lovey or too slow, it felt right.
Anyway, this is a long review. Gosh I hope the gifs show up. I looked up a random tutorial and then immediately believed it.
EXTREME SPOILER:
The magic from the wishes didn’t wear off… but Nadia came back from the gem and all of the wives were released… but those were wish-induced captivities. How? I don’t get how they could be released.
END SPOILER
I received an ARC copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review! ❤️🔥