It took over one hundred pages for the story and intrigue to fully develop, and then the last hundred pages felt as though it was rushed. There were details where it was extraneous to the plot and character, and sparse details where it would have further fleshed out the story and pushed the "thrill" level up.
I know HP Lovecraft revolutionized the whole "let the mind fill in the details to make it scary", but this book is in no way Lovecraftian so it makes little sense to give scant information and just expect the reader to go along with it and get worried.
Want a synopsis of the story? Read the blurb on the "cover". Spoilers be here:
When Jennifer Bolton cheats on her boyfriend, it's okay, because he is one of the bad guys you just don't know it yet....That is one of the worst reasoning's to cheat EVER. From her perspective Evan has been a loyal and involved boyfriend. She then sleeps with Eric, who is hot and a doctor and feels no remorse about this, only includes the afterthought of "I guess Even and I are broken up now."
THEN, a day later she finds out Evan's one of the bad guys. NEWSFLASH! Even though your boyfriend turns out to be the bad guy it does not mean that it absolves you from your own actions. Jennifer sold out any integrity she had with that move, especially since one of the boring character subplots is how much she hated her mother for cheating on her dad. So she's a cheater and a hypocrite, but that's okay because other people were bad first.
Liberal logic at its worst.
Plot wise it's somewhat interesting. Boy with psychic powers goes up against secret cabal, Koontz style, complete with charming dog named Butterscotch.
I don't recommend. Read Watchers by Koontz instead.