Negotiation

by entanglednow

Derek's usually really good at shoving him around and making it clear what he wants.

Words: 1158

Genres: M M Romance, Fan Fiction, Short Stories, Paranormal

6 pages, ebook

First published February 15, 2013

Reviews

[Trisha Harrington · Rating 4 out of 5]

Really really short, but also really really good.

[Alice · Rating 3 out of 5]

This is only a few pages of a story. It is an awkward, almost stilted conversation between Stiles and Derek after having sex. As always, Entanglednow somehow manages to pack the feels into a few pages with carefully constructed lines and a heavy silence between the two. I always feel everything Entanglednow is worth the read.

[BWT · Rating 1 out of 5]

That literally took me less than five minutes to read.

[Sandra · Rating 2 out of 5]

2.5 stars This was okay, not as sexy as I was expecting. Mostly just stiles awkwardly trying to tell his friend/fuck buddy/boyfriend? Derek that we wants to try new things in bed. I think.

[Trix · Rating 2 out of 5]

Very short story. But it did manage to capture Stiles and Derek's characteristics.

Stiles is his usual self of saying anything that crosses his mind, which is not always logical or sequential to the listener. But he is adorable and doesn't mean anything bad by it. And Derek comes off as protective and understanding, and not willing to push any boundaries. But luckily, Stiles is willing to discover and explore those boundaries so he has the task of convincing Derek to try.

Very neutral in terms of explicit scenes but nicely rendered. Short and easy.

[Jennifer☠Pher☠ · Rating 3 out of 5]

That was just kind of odd.