Copy provided by Young Adult Books Central
A path in a busy but out-of-the-way park has a host of people trying to enjoy it. There are bicyclists, children on scooters, dog walkers, runners, a nature photographer, and a mother with a fractious baby. They all love the path, but don't necessarily enjoy sharing it. The bicyclist almost runs over the roller skater, the crying baby causes a heron to fly off so it can't be photographed, and a runner almost plows down a young couple who are discussing a possible date. Everyone is a little irritated until a cloud of birds causes everyone to stop and pause. The nature photographer tells everyone that it is a "murmuration" of birds, who are all flying together so they can take care of each other. This causes the people to interact differently; the runner encourages a little girl on a bicycle, the photographer points out an owl in a tree to some children, and the roller skater helps out the dog walker when she becomes entangled in leashes. Everyone leaves the park in a better mood now that they are not so irritated with each other.
Considering that a man inexplicably looking at two phones wandered into my side of a bike path the other day, and later there were children on eBikes just sitting across the entire route, I can certainly understand the frustration of some of the characters! Public paths are just that... public! All of the interactions are completely understandable, and a busy park is full of all kinds of activities. I'm not sure that a murmuration of birds would really cause people to stop and rethink their irritation, but it's a nice thought, and the message about building community is a good one.
The best part of this book are Leng's illustrations, which have a whispy, Quentin Blake-esque feel to them that captures the leaves and grass in the park particularly well. Many of the pages have almost comic book style panels that focus on different people or groups who are engaging in activities, but there are also two page spreads showing many people together. This difference is a great way to show the individual differences slowly dissolving and becoming more community focused. I wouldn't have thought the illustrations could add to the entire theme of the book so well, rather than just supporting the narrative, but in this book, it works.
This is a gentle picture book that might work well for younger and older readers, and might serve as a good mentor text. Add to other books that highlight the importance of both nature and community like Graham's The Concrete Garden, Marino's We All Belong, Boswell and Mostov's Go, Bikes, Go, or Muskie's Linden: A Story of a Tree.