Anne de Bourgh is dying, her body weak, ruined by her father's and her own alchemical experiments. She has just one chance to save herself and get everything she ever wanted.
All she has to do is steal someone else's life.
Elizabeth Bennet doesn't know how lucky she is. She's strong, beautiful, clever... and oblivious to the fact that Fitzwilliam Darcy is hopelessly in love with her.
Such a waste.
Or it would be, if Anne didn't have a plan.
What would you do if someone stole your life?
Elizabeth Bennet wakes in a strange bed unable to breathe. Her body won't obey. Her reflection shows another woman’s dying face. Anne de Bourgh has used forbidden alchemy to switch their bodies, and she's already using Elizabeth's stolen form to claim everything Elizabeth never knew she wanted.
When Darcy proposes, Anne says yes and demands they marry immediately.
Now Elizabeth is trapped in Anne's failing body, kept sedated and guarded, while Anne plans a wedding that's only days away. Once Anne marries and leaves for Pemberley as Mrs. Darcy, she'll be forever beyond Elizabeth's reach, and Elizabeth will be left at Rosings to die.
Elizabeth contacts her sister Jane, the only person who will believe the impossible. Together, they race to brew a reversal potion. But Anne has been planning this theft for years. She has Mrs. Jenkinson keeping Elizabeth drugged and guarded. She knows Elizabeth will never obtain the rare, expensive ingredients needed for reversal. She has Darcy's love, or at least, she has him loving Elizabeth's stolen face.
Elizabeth has only days, one sister, and a body that's failing with every breath.
But she's still Elizabeth Bennet. And she's never surrendered in her life.
Two women. One life. And only days to determine who gets to keep it.
A spellbinding Pride and Prejudice variation about desperation and identity. What makes you yourself when everything that defines you can be stolen?
I've been writing since I was 5 years old. I've always had to set it aside and try to concentrate on so-called 'real life' though. I've had a number of interesting careers - engineer, real estate sales agent, owner of an electrical goods store, silversmith - but finally the time has come for me to return to my first love. Writing.
I've always loved the works of Jane Austen, so perhaps it's fitting that my first published work should be a variation on the much beloved Pride And Prejudice.
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The idea is interesting. I liked Elizabeth’s determination, Jane’s role, and Anne’s attempts to fit in. However the book probably should have been a short story. There is a lot of repetition.
The plot is disjointed and seems like two different stories. The book starts with everyone including Darcy knowing something is up and with Anne is a bad actor, then pushes to end in a wedding. No one intervenes and Darcy looks like he’s set on having Elizabeth regardless of her feelings. There are a number of places where the context changes midway, such as the conversation with Colonel Forster that begins and ends with a shock reveal of Darcy’s engagement. Sometimes two different storyline options are placed beside each other, such as one chapter discussing an annulment with Colonel Fitzwilliam where Elizabeth decides she wants to stay married and feels hopeful, followed by a chapter discussing options for annulment with the Earl of Matlock and Elizabeth deciding she has to stay married and feels coercive. Needs a good editor.
The end stretched believability IMO. Skimmed last chapters otherwise it would be 2 stars.
Such an unusual premise, and handled extremely well. Lots of dramatic tension and suspense make a tale that was hard to put down. Well written and worth reading.
Suspend belief for just a little while. This is a body swap variation, one where Anne de Bourgh uses an alchemical potion to change places with Elizabeth Bennet. I have read several with this theme, but I think this is the best one I’ve read to date.
Elizabeth Bennet has it all — beauty, intelligence, robust health, and most of all, the love of Fitzwilliam Darcy. In Anne de Bourgh’s opinion, she deserves none of it. Elizabeth appreciates nothing that she has been blessed with and she doesn’t even like Darcy. Meanwhile Anne is trapped in a dying body and soon will have nothing at all. It isn’t fair. And Anne has been promised Darcy all her life. He is hers! Fortunately, Anne has a plan and the assistance and means to carry it out.
Elizabeth has just learned from Richard Fitzwilliam that Darcy intentionally separated Bingley from her most beloved sister, Jane. Elizabeth is furious as she steams into the Hunsford parsonage when Charlotte stops her, requesting that she join herself and Anne de Bourgh for tea. Elizabeth is a guest and must comply, though she would much rather retire to her room and fume against the many injustices wreaked by Darcy. When Charlotte leaves and Anne serves tea to Elizabeth she finds herself becoming ill and retires to bed. When she awakens she discovers, to her horror, that she is in the body of Anne de Bourgh. She has no idea how such a thing could be accomplished but she is truly trapped in a dying body.
How did this happen? What does Anne plan to do while she is now inhabiting Elizabeth’s body? Who will believe Elizabeth if she tries to explain her situation? How will she ever return to her own body and who can or will help her?
This is a bit of a dark tale with a supernatural element. Elizabeth is fully trapped, by Anne’s feeble body and the ever watchful Mrs Jenkinson, while watching Anne de Bourgh posing as herself and making plans to marry Darcy. I wouldn’t call it black magic, but something akin.
I liked this story. I’ve read other body swap stories where it’s Caroline switching with Elizabeth, and I liked those stories too. I thought it was very inventive and clever to have Anne as the villain, and I thought the method of performing the switch was well done.
This is a story with a strong Jane who still maintains her canon characteristics of kindness and compassion.
Up until the events after the wedding, I thought this would be 5-stars. I don’t want to include spoilers, but the book would have been a lot better if things had wrapped up quicker following the wedding. I think the story could have been tighter and the pacing better.
Read through KU, but I’m considering adding it to my library. I know the author is an excellent narrator of audiobooks, and I think this would be a great audiobook.
Warning: Meant for mature audiences. Contains scenes that would scandalize the ton. Readers of a delicate constitution are advised to keep their fans and vinaigrettes close at hand. Scenes mentioning the subjects of neglect and harm.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is part of the ‘Pride & Prejudice Variations’ series. All books are standalone reads and can be read in any order as each book is an exploration of a different alternate story.
Discover a captivating series of variations on Pride and Prejudice, where love, drama, and adventure intertwine to offer new destinies for Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy. Each book explores alternate paths, revealing unexpected secrets and forging unlikely alliances. Journey with Elizabeth and Darcy to overcome challenges where courage and wit triumph over misunderstandings. Through tragedy and triumph, our beloved couple discover the strength of family and the importance of following their hearts. These enchanting tales of resilience and discovery will appeal to all fans of Jane Austen, offering an intriguing dive into the world of eternal love and unbreakable family bonds. Immerse yourself in a world where prejudice fades and true love always finds its way.
A spellbinding variation about desperation and identity. What makes you yourself when everything that defines you can be stolen? Two women, one life, and only days to determine who gets to keep it. How far would you go to save yourself? Anne de Bourgh is dying, her body weak, ruined by her father's and her own alchemical experiments. She has just one chance to save herself and get everything she ever wanted. All she has to do is steal someone else's life. Elizabeth Bennet doesn't know how lucky she is. She's strong, beautiful, clever, and oblivious to the fact that Fitzwilliam Darcy is hopelessly in love with her. Such a waste, or it would be, if Anne didn't have a plan.
What would you do if someone stole your life? Elizabeth Bennet wakes in a strange bed unable to breathe. Her body won't obey. Her reflection shows another woman’s dying face. Anne de Bourgh has used forbidden alchemy to switch their bodies, and she's already using Elizabeth's stolen form to claim everything Elizabeth never knew she wanted. When Darcy proposes, Anne says yes and demands they marry immediately. Now Elizabeth is trapped in Anne's failing body, kept sedated and guarded, while Anne plans a wedding that's only days away. Once Anne marries and leaves for Pemberley as Mrs. Darcy, she'll be forever beyond Elizabeth's reach, and Elizabeth will be left at Rosings to die.
Elizabeth contacts her sister Jane, the only person who will believe the impossible. Together, they race to brew a reversal potion, but Anne has been planning this theft for years. She has Mrs. Jenkinson keeping Elizabeth drugged and guarded. She knows Elizabeth will never obtain the rare, expensive ingredients needed for reversal. She has Darcy's love, or at least, she has him loving Elizabeth's stolen face. Elizabeth has only days, one sister, and a body that's failing with every breath, but she's still Elizabeth Bennet, and she's never surrendered in her life. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.