Adding this to my KU library was definitely a choice, but the plot is moving faster than my Wi-Fi!🤔
They just met today, and suddenly it’s a "soulmate connection." I’m honestly a little shocked at the timeline! I mean... the FMC gives herself to the monster on the very same day (or night) they meet. I know they had a quick chat, but risking it all before the sun goes down is a bold strategy!
The FMC is basically like: (👩:Hey Darling Monster, let’s do the Boombayah so I can help you release that heat from your body. What do you think?)
And yes Ma'am, I was SO READY for a steamy monster romance but I think I missed the chapter where the MMC became a mind reader.🤯🤯 Suddenly he knows her name, and I’m over here frantically scrolling back to see if I skipped ten pages. Did I miss the introductions? Or does he just have telepathic powers along with those monster instincts?
Listen. . .we probably chose this book for the same reason: monster-smut. I'm here to tell you, if you want to read something quick and dirty, choose something else.
The writing style does not fit the theme, in my opinion. Read it felt like the equivalent of learning to drive a stick shift. Someone else's review said it read like poetry. I guess you could say that. . .if you're trying to be nice.
The author loves half sentences. Short. Intense. Her flowery words aren't enough to hide the truth. They're bare. Meaningless.
Okay, sorry. I shouldn't make fun of the writing but it was too easy 🤣
In all seriousness though, the writing isn't bad, I just don't think it has a place in the genre. I think alot of us know what to expect from a 50is-page book that has a horned demon on the cover. I didn’t want poerty, didn’t want the 🌶spicy🌶 scenes to be watered down and condensed into a couple of paragraphs. But that's exactly what I got.
The book was… bad For it being called steamy the spicy scenes were over within a page or two and the rest was like 40 pages of crammed, confusing and incomplete plot.
Too short, too instalove on the mate thing, and too little to grab into. FMC gets tossed in prison for no reason but to be bait to wake up a demon who then breaks out while not killing people. Just meh. This could’ve been good if it had been a real full length novel and any actual connection to the characters beyond the surface and if the smut was smutting. I give a two for effort and some flow.
Lily thinks she was thrown into the monster prison by mistake, but it seemed more like calculated cruelty to me. I mean, she hadn't done anything to warrant being imprisoned AND she was put in the cell with one of the most dangerous monsters. Although, to be fair, I'm going to go out on a limb and say ALL the monsters in the prison are dangerous. So maybe Malek isn't the MOST dangerous.
But the guards didn't expect her to survive the night. Which says to me, they fully put her in there with cruel intent.
Anywho. Lily and Malek. She's a nurse put in a terrible position. He's a demon kept chained and bound. He thinks she's a fever dream when he first scents her since the fates would never bless him with a mate. Not after centuries of letting him rot in this prison. But she's real. And she's brave. And she's definitely his.
On Lily's end, she's terrified, but she has the fake it 'til you make it mask down. So she puts on a brave front, helps Malek when he's injured, and start to trust the big demon with everything inside her. Soon the two are breaking out, causing a little mayhem, and doing what they need to do to survive.
A dark prison, a demon who'd let go of hope, and the human lady who wasn't about to leave anybody behind. Least of all the monster who protected her and treated her like a treasure. *thumbs up*
2.75 This rating is a surprise even for me, but honestly, this had something. It didn't have everything...there was no way it could have layered development with it only being 40ish pages, but it definitely gave off a vibe that I liked. My biggest gripe is that it read more like poetry than prose, probably because of the short sentences/sentence fragments everywhere. It's a style choice, so I won't judge that, but y'all should be aware that's what you are getting into. It takes a moment to get used to.
I LOVE a good "lady gets thrown into monster prison" book/take,but this monster was so castrated it wasn't even funny. Apparently some massive monster that has literally leveled cities and is the beast of legend that people warn their kids about decides to merely stun any guard he encounters in his escape flight with his mate. Tepid adult fun time scenes. The premise was amazing, execution was lackluster. My thoughts only. Feel free to read and form your own. But don't say you weren't warned.
I’m not really into demons but the blurb was interesting and I’m glad I took a chance! Lily is thrown into a monster’s prison cell by mistake, or so she thinks. What she finds is an ancient demon who has been bound by magic and asleep for hundreds of years. Because the cell is pitch black she has no idea he’s in the cell and accidentally touches him. Her touch awakens him and all he’ll breaks loose…literally. It was a short read, steamy and violent. I loved it.
I did not realize this was a novella when I started it, so I had to reset my expectations. I liked the characters though the FMC’s background was limited. Marak was great, and the story of their escape was entertaining. Low spice even though steamy is in the title.
Got cheated by "a STEAMY monster romance" when the steam was like a maximum of one and a half pages. The only thing they got right was that it was indeed a short read.
Slightly intrigued to read on to find out more about the Authority, how they came about and what are the reason for capturing these monsters.
The concept is great but the delivery was not there. Super short story but it could use more words to help the sentences feel complete. Several times I had to read something over because it lacked information.
This is the bones of an excellent novel. I wish it were 470 pages instead of 47. I had so many unanswered questions and threads I wanted to tug on, but obviously there wasn’t time.
It’s was an ok read. Wanted more. The monster wasn’t exactly being a monster. Start away too calm for my liking even though he’s met his mate. Could have been better but the plot when somewhere else. Looking for a super short read and no depth, then this is it.
Confusing plotline, meet way too many sentence fragments. This doesn’t feel purposeful. It feels like a first draft. Disappointing like the last two books.
It wasn’t bad, it just wasn’t good either. Saying it’s spicy is a bit of a push. It had like two scenes, and they were okay at best. I mean he had a tail…missed opportunity there 😔
For a short novella I really enjoyed it. It was a quick morning read before getting ready for the day.
It had some plot, lore, spice and fated mates. Things happened quickly but that's because it's short but even with the pace being fast it was still a fun and interesting read!