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Melodies of the Damned
A MONSTER FORGED BY THE GODS TO KILL HER. A PRINCESS WHO ISN'T AFRAID TO DIE. DESIRE WAS NEVER PART OF THE PROPHERCY... AND IT WILL DESTROY THEM BOTH.
Princess Lyra Meridian would do anything to be free, even if it promised death.
The sacrificial rite of Ascension is her only chance to escape. A ruthless offering to estranged gods where mortals either die or rise as their soldiers. She expected to die. Instead, when she leaped into the cursed ocean... It recognised her and something ancient awakened.
Now monsters crawl from the Hells to hunt her and her kingdoms nightmare, The Commander of Death, is the first to find her. Forced into a blood bargain, Lyra is his prisoner. But the Commander has motives far darker than she realised, and none of them involve letting her go.
As monsters close in and prophecy coils tighter around her throat, Lyra must decide whether the Commander is her captor, her protector... Or the temptation that will damn them both.
Princess Lyra Meridian would do anything to be free, even if it promised death.
The sacrificial rite of Ascension is her only chance to escape. A ruthless offering to estranged gods where mortals either die or rise as their soldiers. She expected to die. Instead, when she leaped into the cursed ocean... It recognised her and something ancient awakened.
Now monsters crawl from the Hells to hunt her and her kingdoms nightmare, The Commander of Death, is the first to find her. Forced into a blood bargain, Lyra is his prisoner. But the Commander has motives far darker than she realised, and none of them involve letting her go.
As monsters close in and prophecy coils tighter around her throat, Lyra must decide whether the Commander is her captor, her protector... Or the temptation that will damn them both.
424 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 14, 2026
About the author
Nakita Kirwan
2 books54 followersHi, I’m Nakita. I love creating dark worlds filled with romance that hurts.
I am a mum of four, emergency nurse, and the author behind stories that will make you feel seen.
I write about broken girls who become powerful, men who would destroy the world for them, and love that will make you kick your feet at 2am.
If you love enemies to lovers, fated mates, tension, and just enough chaos that will keep you up at night… Step into the dark with me. I am so glad that you are here.
I am a mum of four, emergency nurse, and the author behind stories that will make you feel seen.
I write about broken girls who become powerful, men who would destroy the world for them, and love that will make you kick your feet at 2am.
If you love enemies to lovers, fated mates, tension, and just enough chaos that will keep you up at night… Step into the dark with me. I am so glad that you are here.
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Review of advance copy received from Author
Thanks to Nakita Kirwan for providing the eARC. This is my honest opinion.
A Melody That Haunts
Some books are meant to be read. Others are meant to be felt. ‘Melodies of the Damned’ firmly belongs to the second category.
From the very first page, Nakita Kirwan pulls the reader into a dark, hauntingly beautiful world that refuses to let go. The atmosphere is intense and heavy with emotion, steeped in shadows and moral ambiguity. This is fantasy that dares to be uncomfortable, where every choice carries weight and nothing comes without consequence.
Kirwan’s writing style is immersive and evocative, with a rhythm that feels almost musical. Each chapter ends with the irresistible urge to keep going, making it dangerously easy to lose track of time. The pacing is well balanced, allowing space for worldbuilding and emotional depth without ever stalling the story. Everything feels intentional, from the slow unveiling of the world to the carefully constructed tension.
What truly elevates this book are the characters. They are layered, flawed, and deeply human despite the fantastical setting. Morally grey, emotionally scarred, and compelling in their complexity. The relationships crackle with tension, and the romantic elements are woven seamlessly into the plot. Rather than softening the darkness, they intensify it, adding emotional stakes that cut even deeper.
‘Melodies of the Damned’ is dark, gripping, and emotionally powerful. It lingers long after the final page, echoing like a song you cannot quite forget. A stunning start that promises so much more to come.
Highly recommended for readers who love dark fantasy, romantasy, and stories that are unafraid to explore the shadows.
Enemies-to-Lovers | Slow Burn Romance | Morally Grey Characters | Dark Fantasy | Romantic Tension | Forbidden Love | Emotional Depth | Magic & Mystery | Page-Turner | Character-Driven Story
A Melody That Haunts
Some books are meant to be read. Others are meant to be felt. ‘Melodies of the Damned’ firmly belongs to the second category.
From the very first page, Nakita Kirwan pulls the reader into a dark, hauntingly beautiful world that refuses to let go. The atmosphere is intense and heavy with emotion, steeped in shadows and moral ambiguity. This is fantasy that dares to be uncomfortable, where every choice carries weight and nothing comes without consequence.
Kirwan’s writing style is immersive and evocative, with a rhythm that feels almost musical. Each chapter ends with the irresistible urge to keep going, making it dangerously easy to lose track of time. The pacing is well balanced, allowing space for worldbuilding and emotional depth without ever stalling the story. Everything feels intentional, from the slow unveiling of the world to the carefully constructed tension.
What truly elevates this book are the characters. They are layered, flawed, and deeply human despite the fantastical setting. Morally grey, emotionally scarred, and compelling in their complexity. The relationships crackle with tension, and the romantic elements are woven seamlessly into the plot. Rather than softening the darkness, they intensify it, adding emotional stakes that cut even deeper.
‘Melodies of the Damned’ is dark, gripping, and emotionally powerful. It lingers long after the final page, echoing like a song you cannot quite forget. A stunning start that promises so much more to come.
Highly recommended for readers who love dark fantasy, romantasy, and stories that are unafraid to explore the shadows.
Enemies-to-Lovers | Slow Burn Romance | Morally Grey Characters | Dark Fantasy | Romantic Tension | Forbidden Love | Emotional Depth | Magic & Mystery | Page-Turner | Character-Driven Story
January 25, 2026
ARC review
Wow, this book was truly amazing. I’ve had to give it 6 stars because 5 stars just wasn’t enough. THE ENDING?! I GASPED. My heart was racing after finishing this book😅 I genuinely loved every single second of this book, the twists, turns, the slow burn and the characters? Just perfection!
The Commander? Yes, yes please. The tension, yearning and brooding? Perfection.
Riven had me laughing out loud so many times throughout this book.
Lyra was an incredible FMC. Such a strong character and the growth was 👌🏻 loved the way she just couldn’t stop herself from saying anything!
Everyone needs to read this book!
Wow, this book was truly amazing. I’ve had to give it 6 stars because 5 stars just wasn’t enough. THE ENDING?! I GASPED. My heart was racing after finishing this book😅 I genuinely loved every single second of this book, the twists, turns, the slow burn and the characters? Just perfection!
The Commander? Yes, yes please. The tension, yearning and brooding? Perfection.
Riven had me laughing out loud so many times throughout this book.
Lyra was an incredible FMC. Such a strong character and the growth was 👌🏻 loved the way she just couldn’t stop herself from saying anything!
Everyone needs to read this book!
February 5, 2026
I am not usually into slow burns but the story sounded intriguing so I gave it a shot. It was so good, just wow. This book was fantastic. Those twists. I need book two now. Definitely check this out.
January 27, 2026
Holy wow, I am SHOOK. Everything about this was amazing. It was fast paced. It was twisty and dark and I truly had no idea what was what, and who was who. It had several of my favorite troped all packaged up into a beautiful box. The Commander was another perfect representation of “shadow daddy”, and I absolutely LOVED Lyra. I seriously cannot wait for the next one, this was wonderful!!
March 4, 2026
A friend lent me A Monster Forged by the Gods to Kill Her, and...
I was hooked from the first page.
Princess Lyra’s fight for freedom, the dark prophecy, and the terrifying Commander of Death make it impossible to put down.
The story is fast-paced, intense, and full of twists that keep you thinking long after you turn the page.
A thrilling, dark fantasy that pulls you in and won’t let go.
Yeap, a five-star read!
I was hooked from the first page.
Princess Lyra’s fight for freedom, the dark prophecy, and the terrifying Commander of Death make it impossible to put down.
The story is fast-paced, intense, and full of twists that keep you thinking long after you turn the page.
A thrilling, dark fantasy that pulls you in and won’t let go.
Yeap, a five-star read!
February 19, 2026
This book started off strong, and I was genuinely interested in where the story was going. Unfortunately, as it progressed, it became boring.
Lyra’s character initially seemed intriguing, gradually turned frustrating and idiot. She pretends to be strong but she is annoyingly naive. Honestly, she was so blind for the truth.
The plot also became boringly predictable.
It was a pretty “meh” read for me.
I received an advance copy in exchange for an honest review.
Lyra’s character initially seemed intriguing, gradually turned frustrating and idiot. She pretends to be strong but she is annoyingly naive. Honestly, she was so blind for the truth.
The plot also became boringly predictable.
It was a pretty “meh” read for me.
I received an advance copy in exchange for an honest review.
Review of advance copy received from Author
She crashes a holy ritual, dives into the ocean, and dares the gods to either save her… or end her.
Instead? She survives and lands in brutal military initiation trials.
Add magic, fae, sirens, reincarnation, hidden identities, and fated mates.
Beautiful world, big feelings.
My only complaint is there was just TOO many things happening, like save some tropes for book 2.
Instead? She survives and lands in brutal military initiation trials.
Add magic, fae, sirens, reincarnation, hidden identities, and fated mates.
Beautiful world, big feelings.
My only complaint is there was just TOO many things happening, like save some tropes for book 2.
Review of advance copy received from Author
Holy fucking shit.
This ARC read blew me away. The ending had my emotions all over the place. That Cliffhanger? *Chefs Kiss* If From Blood and Ash and Quicksilver had a baby, it would be this book.
This book is action packed, sexy, and full of secrets, lies and betrayal. It is most definitely going to be a best seller one day. It has everything we love in a fantasy book. Fae warriors, a shadow daddy, monsters, gods and goddess.
This is a dark fantasy read with so much more to come. I recommend this to any Dark fantasy/Fantasy reader. Pick this book up as soon as its published. I promise you won't be disappointed.
This ARC read blew me away. The ending had my emotions all over the place. That Cliffhanger? *Chefs Kiss* If From Blood and Ash and Quicksilver had a baby, it would be this book.
This book is action packed, sexy, and full of secrets, lies and betrayal. It is most definitely going to be a best seller one day. It has everything we love in a fantasy book. Fae warriors, a shadow daddy, monsters, gods and goddess.
This is a dark fantasy read with so much more to come. I recommend this to any Dark fantasy/Fantasy reader. Pick this book up as soon as its published. I promise you won't be disappointed.
Review of advance copy received from Author
I feel so lucky, this story was an experience. Thank you to the author, Nakita Kirwan and Hawthorne and Aster for the opportunity to read this debut as an ARC. The following review is written and posted of my own volition.
Sultry and seductive. It sang and I am now enthralled by its pages. Captured by Lyra's melody.
She is simply tragic, and I loved her instantly for it. Trapped and tortured, yet paraded around as a princess. A charade. A caged animal ready to drown for her sorrows. Except fate has bigger plans and it won't take Lyra giving up as the answer.
Of course it's a broken one that I am called to. On their last hope, lashing out. Consequences thrown out to sea.
In seeking death, Lyra finds power, and acceptance. Fate takes over and she must shift through the pieces to make sense of it.
This, I very much enjoyed, the story had so much to it that when I thought I figured out one aspect, another piece would be placed and throw a kink in my sleuthing. It provided a challenge, twists on familiar elements that had me doubting myself and worrying for Lyra.
The story fed the darkness, challenging my spirit, evoking a sense of giddy adventure that added up to a story that was everything and more of what I look for. It was wonderfully delightful and will most definitely be one I talk about for a while.
Sultry and seductive. It sang and I am now enthralled by its pages. Captured by Lyra's melody.
She is simply tragic, and I loved her instantly for it. Trapped and tortured, yet paraded around as a princess. A charade. A caged animal ready to drown for her sorrows. Except fate has bigger plans and it won't take Lyra giving up as the answer.
Of course it's a broken one that I am called to. On their last hope, lashing out. Consequences thrown out to sea.
In seeking death, Lyra finds power, and acceptance. Fate takes over and she must shift through the pieces to make sense of it.
This, I very much enjoyed, the story had so much to it that when I thought I figured out one aspect, another piece would be placed and throw a kink in my sleuthing. It provided a challenge, twists on familiar elements that had me doubting myself and worrying for Lyra.
The story fed the darkness, challenging my spirit, evoking a sense of giddy adventure that added up to a story that was everything and more of what I look for. It was wonderfully delightful and will most definitely be one I talk about for a while.
Review of advance copy received from Author
Before I start my review I just need to give a huge shout out to Nakita Kirwan and Hawthorn and Astor for this opportunity
This book is destined to be a BEST SELLER!!!
I absolutely inhaled Melodies of the Damned and I am desperate for Book 2!
This story is dark, lyrical, and utterly immersive. The world-building is rich and haunting, layered with gods, monsters, prophecy, and dangerous magic that feels ancient and alive. The writing is so vivid it pulls you under and refuses to let you resurface. I finished it in less than a day!
Our FMC Lyra is beautifully fractured yet fiercely resilient. Watching her awaken to her power, even as everything hunts her, is both heartbreaking and empowering. And the MMC? The Commander of Death himself. Dark, brooding, morally grey perfection. Protective, possessive, and dripping with 'MINE' energy 💀🔥
Enemies to lovers. Loathing to fate-bound. Blood bargains, court politics, and a devastating 'who did this to you?' moment that absolutely wrecked me. The side characters shine just as brightly, each adding depth and tension rather than fading into the background
Just when you think you know who to trust… everything unravels.
And that ending? A brutal cliffhanger that left me stunned and desperate for more. This book is unforgettable, and I have no doubt it’s destined to be a bestseller.
GOD TIER READ
♾️⭐️
This book is destined to be a BEST SELLER!!!
I absolutely inhaled Melodies of the Damned and I am desperate for Book 2!
This story is dark, lyrical, and utterly immersive. The world-building is rich and haunting, layered with gods, monsters, prophecy, and dangerous magic that feels ancient and alive. The writing is so vivid it pulls you under and refuses to let you resurface. I finished it in less than a day!
Our FMC Lyra is beautifully fractured yet fiercely resilient. Watching her awaken to her power, even as everything hunts her, is both heartbreaking and empowering. And the MMC? The Commander of Death himself. Dark, brooding, morally grey perfection. Protective, possessive, and dripping with 'MINE' energy 💀🔥
Enemies to lovers. Loathing to fate-bound. Blood bargains, court politics, and a devastating 'who did this to you?' moment that absolutely wrecked me. The side characters shine just as brightly, each adding depth and tension rather than fading into the background
Just when you think you know who to trust… everything unravels.
And that ending? A brutal cliffhanger that left me stunned and desperate for more. This book is unforgettable, and I have no doubt it’s destined to be a bestseller.
GOD TIER READ
♾️⭐️
May 15, 2026
Have you ever picked up a book thinking you were just gonna read one chapter… and suddenly it’s 3AM, your eyes are burning, your emotional stability is GONE, and you’re sitting there whispering ‘what the hell did I just read’ while aggressively flipping pages because you physically cannot stop?
THAT… is Melodies of the Damned by Nakita Kirwan.
And tonight… we are talking about one of the most addicting indie dark romantasy books I’ve read in a long time.
Tonight we are diving headfirst into blood, betrayal, mystery, gothic atmosphere, terrifying truths, insane reveals, and one cliffhanger that had me ready to THROW MYSELF into the void demanding book two immediately.
First off…
Melodies of the Damned is NOT one of those books that punches you in the face with nonstop chaos in chapter one just for the sake of pretending to be exciting.
No.
This book is smarter than that.
This book breadcrumbs you.
And when I say breadcrumbs… I mean Nakita Kirwan leaves little action-packed pieces of mystery scattered across EVERY SINGLE PAGE until you realize you’ve accidentally consumed over 300 pages in one sitting because your brain refuses to let you stop.
That was me.
I sat down thinking, ‘I’ll read a little tonight.’
That turned into:
‘Okay one more chapter.’
Then:
‘Okay I NEED to know what that meant.’
Then:
‘WAIT WHAT?’
Then suddenly the sun was practically rising and I was emotionally deteriorating in the best way possible.
That is the magic of this book.
It keeps pulling you deeper and deeper into the darkness.”
“So let’s talk about the story WITHOUT spoilers because trust me… this is a book you need to experience blind.
The story follows Lyra.
And Lyra’s life is horrifying from the very beginning.
She’s a princess… but not the kind sitting in castles wearing crowns and living comfortably.
No.
Her own father keeps her locked away in a dungeon.
And already the atmosphere in this story feels suffocating.
You can FEEL the isolation.
You can FEEL the manipulation.
You can FEEL the secrets lurking underneath every conversation.
Then there’s the priest.
This man has been taking Lyra’s blood for years under the excuse that her magic is supposedly too dangerous… that draining her blood is somehow protecting the kingdom from destruction.
But even early on…
You KNOW something isn’t right.
You can FEEL the sinister energy radiating off this entire situation.
And that’s one thing Nakita does EXTREMELY well in this book.
The tension.
The unease.
The constant feeling that everyone is lying to Lyra… and that something much darker is hiding underneath the surface.”
“And eventually…
Lyra reaches her breaking point.
She refuses to continue being controlled.
She refuses to marry the man she’s betrothed to.
And she makes a decision that changes EVERYTHING.
She enters the Ascension.
Thinking she’s sacrificing herself to the Dead Sea.
But instead?
She survives.
And from THERE…
this story absolutely takes off.”
“Once Lyra washes ashore and gets pulled into the world of the Iron Guard…
that’s when this book really starts showing its teeth.
The pacing ramps up.
The mystery deepens.
The world expands.
The danger escalates.
And then the Fae attack.
And I need you all to understand something…
the action scenes in this book are GOOD.
Not confusing.
Not overly bloated.
Not fifty pages of people flipping around dramatically while nothing actually happens.
These scenes MOVE.
They’re cinematic.
Chaotic.
Violent.
Emotional.
And from there…
the Commander of Death enters the picture.
And OH MY GOD.
Listen…
I’m not spoiling anything.
But dark romantasy readers?
Y’all are gonna EAT THIS UP.
The energy surrounding this character?
The mystery?
The tension?
The dangerous atmosphere?
Absolutely addictive.
And the more the story unfolds…
the more you start realizing:
nothing is what it seemed in the beginning.
Not Lyra.
Not the kingdom.
Not the blood.
Not the people around her.
NOTHING.”
“And that’s honestly where this book shines the most.
The reveals.
Because Nakita Kirwan doesn’t dump exposition on your head like homework.
She trusts the reader.
She slowly feeds you information piece by piece.
Every chapter answers one question while creating three more.
Every reveal completely changes how you see previous scenes.
And before you know it…
you are fully consumed by the mystery trying to figure out what is ACTUALLY happening.
That’s why I say this book doesn’t hit all at once.
It creeps into your bloodstream.
It slowly infects your thoughts.
And suddenly you’re emotionally spiraling over characters you thought you understood three hundred pages ago.”
“And can we PLEASE talk about the gothic atmosphere in this book?
Because this thing DRIPS with dark romantasy energy.
The blood magic.
The prisons.
The secrets.
The haunting emotional undertones.
The death imagery.
The dangerous romance.
The morally gray energy.
This book feels gothic without trying too hard to cosplay as gothic.
And that’s important.
Because some books scream:
‘LOOK HOW DARK WE ARE.’
Meanwhile this one just quietly drags you into its darkness until you realize you’re already trapped there.
That’s effective storytelling.”
“And I also need to give Nakita Kirwan credit for something else…
this book is addictive WITHOUT torturing the reader.
And if you’re a fantasy reader…
you know EXACTLY what I mean.
Some books confuse ‘slow burn’ with:
‘Nothing happens for 400 pages.’
That is NOT this book.
Yes, it builds.
Yes, it develops mystery.
Yes, it layers information carefully.
But it NEVER feels stagnant.
There’s always movement.
Always tension.
Always another piece of the puzzle waiting around the corner.
The story constantly rewards your investment.”
“And then…
THAT ENDING.
I’m not spoiling a SINGLE thing.
But let me just say this:
That ending had me crashing out.
Completely.
Emotionally ruined.
Because once Nakita finally starts revealing the truth behind everything…
it HITS.
And then the cliffhanger comes crashing down and suddenly you’re staring at the wall wondering how you’re supposed to function until the next book releases.
That’s exactly what happened to me.
I finished this book and immediately needed book two injected directly into my veins.”
“And honestly?
Moments like that are why I love indie authors so much right now.
Because indie authors are TAKING RISKS.
They’re creating stories that feel passionate.
Stories that feel emotionally alive.
Stories that aren’t being watered down by trend chasing.
And Melodies of the Damned absolutely feels like a story written with passion.
You can tell Nakita cared about the mystery.
The atmosphere.
The reveals.
The emotional payoff.
And it WORKS.”
“So who is this book for?
If you loved books like Noctadia…
If you loved Anathema…
If you love gothic dark romantasy…
If you love dangerous tension…
Blood magic…
Morally gray characters…
Mystery-heavy fantasy…
Fae chaos…
Emotionally addictive storytelling…
THIS BOOK IS FOR YOU.
And yes…
there is spice in this book.
And yes…
there are trigger warnings.
Please respect them before reading.
But my GOD…
this story is addictive.”
“And honestly…
this review exists for one reason.
Because I NEED more people talking about this book.
I NEED dark romantasy readers to stop sleeping on indie authors like Nakita Kirwan.
Because books like this deserve attention.
This is the exact kind of story that reminds you why reading is addicting in the first place.
Not because of hype.
Not because BookTok told you to buy it.
Not because some marketing team shoved it in your face.
But because the STORY itself grabs you by the throat and refuses to let go.”
“So final thoughts?
Melodies of the Damned is dark, atmospheric, emotionally consuming, mystery-driven, addictive, and impossible to put down once the story sinks its claws into you.
Nakita Kirwan absolutely nailed the breadcrumb storytelling in this book.
Every reveal matters.
Every mystery pulls you deeper.
And by the end…
you are completely trapped inside this world begging for more.
This is one of those books that reminds you why indie fantasy and indie dark romantasy are absolutely dominating right now.
Highly.
HIGHLY.
Recommend.”
And if you haven’t picked up Melodies of the Damned yet…
what are you waiting for?
Go grab it on Amazon right now.
And trust me…
clear your schedule first.
Because once this book gets its hooks into you…
you’re not escaping.
THAT… is Melodies of the Damned by Nakita Kirwan.
And tonight… we are talking about one of the most addicting indie dark romantasy books I’ve read in a long time.
Tonight we are diving headfirst into blood, betrayal, mystery, gothic atmosphere, terrifying truths, insane reveals, and one cliffhanger that had me ready to THROW MYSELF into the void demanding book two immediately.
First off…
Melodies of the Damned is NOT one of those books that punches you in the face with nonstop chaos in chapter one just for the sake of pretending to be exciting.
No.
This book is smarter than that.
This book breadcrumbs you.
And when I say breadcrumbs… I mean Nakita Kirwan leaves little action-packed pieces of mystery scattered across EVERY SINGLE PAGE until you realize you’ve accidentally consumed over 300 pages in one sitting because your brain refuses to let you stop.
That was me.
I sat down thinking, ‘I’ll read a little tonight.’
That turned into:
‘Okay one more chapter.’
Then:
‘Okay I NEED to know what that meant.’
Then:
‘WAIT WHAT?’
Then suddenly the sun was practically rising and I was emotionally deteriorating in the best way possible.
That is the magic of this book.
It keeps pulling you deeper and deeper into the darkness.”
“So let’s talk about the story WITHOUT spoilers because trust me… this is a book you need to experience blind.
The story follows Lyra.
And Lyra’s life is horrifying from the very beginning.
She’s a princess… but not the kind sitting in castles wearing crowns and living comfortably.
No.
Her own father keeps her locked away in a dungeon.
And already the atmosphere in this story feels suffocating.
You can FEEL the isolation.
You can FEEL the manipulation.
You can FEEL the secrets lurking underneath every conversation.
Then there’s the priest.
This man has been taking Lyra’s blood for years under the excuse that her magic is supposedly too dangerous… that draining her blood is somehow protecting the kingdom from destruction.
But even early on…
You KNOW something isn’t right.
You can FEEL the sinister energy radiating off this entire situation.
And that’s one thing Nakita does EXTREMELY well in this book.
The tension.
The unease.
The constant feeling that everyone is lying to Lyra… and that something much darker is hiding underneath the surface.”
“And eventually…
Lyra reaches her breaking point.
She refuses to continue being controlled.
She refuses to marry the man she’s betrothed to.
And she makes a decision that changes EVERYTHING.
She enters the Ascension.
Thinking she’s sacrificing herself to the Dead Sea.
But instead?
She survives.
And from THERE…
this story absolutely takes off.”
“Once Lyra washes ashore and gets pulled into the world of the Iron Guard…
that’s when this book really starts showing its teeth.
The pacing ramps up.
The mystery deepens.
The world expands.
The danger escalates.
And then the Fae attack.
And I need you all to understand something…
the action scenes in this book are GOOD.
Not confusing.
Not overly bloated.
Not fifty pages of people flipping around dramatically while nothing actually happens.
These scenes MOVE.
They’re cinematic.
Chaotic.
Violent.
Emotional.
And from there…
the Commander of Death enters the picture.
And OH MY GOD.
Listen…
I’m not spoiling anything.
But dark romantasy readers?
Y’all are gonna EAT THIS UP.
The energy surrounding this character?
The mystery?
The tension?
The dangerous atmosphere?
Absolutely addictive.
And the more the story unfolds…
the more you start realizing:
nothing is what it seemed in the beginning.
Not Lyra.
Not the kingdom.
Not the blood.
Not the people around her.
NOTHING.”
“And that’s honestly where this book shines the most.
The reveals.
Because Nakita Kirwan doesn’t dump exposition on your head like homework.
She trusts the reader.
She slowly feeds you information piece by piece.
Every chapter answers one question while creating three more.
Every reveal completely changes how you see previous scenes.
And before you know it…
you are fully consumed by the mystery trying to figure out what is ACTUALLY happening.
That’s why I say this book doesn’t hit all at once.
It creeps into your bloodstream.
It slowly infects your thoughts.
And suddenly you’re emotionally spiraling over characters you thought you understood three hundred pages ago.”
“And can we PLEASE talk about the gothic atmosphere in this book?
Because this thing DRIPS with dark romantasy energy.
The blood magic.
The prisons.
The secrets.
The haunting emotional undertones.
The death imagery.
The dangerous romance.
The morally gray energy.
This book feels gothic without trying too hard to cosplay as gothic.
And that’s important.
Because some books scream:
‘LOOK HOW DARK WE ARE.’
Meanwhile this one just quietly drags you into its darkness until you realize you’re already trapped there.
That’s effective storytelling.”
“And I also need to give Nakita Kirwan credit for something else…
this book is addictive WITHOUT torturing the reader.
And if you’re a fantasy reader…
you know EXACTLY what I mean.
Some books confuse ‘slow burn’ with:
‘Nothing happens for 400 pages.’
That is NOT this book.
Yes, it builds.
Yes, it develops mystery.
Yes, it layers information carefully.
But it NEVER feels stagnant.
There’s always movement.
Always tension.
Always another piece of the puzzle waiting around the corner.
The story constantly rewards your investment.”
“And then…
THAT ENDING.
I’m not spoiling a SINGLE thing.
But let me just say this:
That ending had me crashing out.
Completely.
Emotionally ruined.
Because once Nakita finally starts revealing the truth behind everything…
it HITS.
And then the cliffhanger comes crashing down and suddenly you’re staring at the wall wondering how you’re supposed to function until the next book releases.
That’s exactly what happened to me.
I finished this book and immediately needed book two injected directly into my veins.”
“And honestly?
Moments like that are why I love indie authors so much right now.
Because indie authors are TAKING RISKS.
They’re creating stories that feel passionate.
Stories that feel emotionally alive.
Stories that aren’t being watered down by trend chasing.
And Melodies of the Damned absolutely feels like a story written with passion.
You can tell Nakita cared about the mystery.
The atmosphere.
The reveals.
The emotional payoff.
And it WORKS.”
“So who is this book for?
If you loved books like Noctadia…
If you loved Anathema…
If you love gothic dark romantasy…
If you love dangerous tension…
Blood magic…
Morally gray characters…
Mystery-heavy fantasy…
Fae chaos…
Emotionally addictive storytelling…
THIS BOOK IS FOR YOU.
And yes…
there is spice in this book.
And yes…
there are trigger warnings.
Please respect them before reading.
But my GOD…
this story is addictive.”
“And honestly…
this review exists for one reason.
Because I NEED more people talking about this book.
I NEED dark romantasy readers to stop sleeping on indie authors like Nakita Kirwan.
Because books like this deserve attention.
This is the exact kind of story that reminds you why reading is addicting in the first place.
Not because of hype.
Not because BookTok told you to buy it.
Not because some marketing team shoved it in your face.
But because the STORY itself grabs you by the throat and refuses to let go.”
“So final thoughts?
Melodies of the Damned is dark, atmospheric, emotionally consuming, mystery-driven, addictive, and impossible to put down once the story sinks its claws into you.
Nakita Kirwan absolutely nailed the breadcrumb storytelling in this book.
Every reveal matters.
Every mystery pulls you deeper.
And by the end…
you are completely trapped inside this world begging for more.
This is one of those books that reminds you why indie fantasy and indie dark romantasy are absolutely dominating right now.
Highly.
HIGHLY.
Recommend.”
And if you haven’t picked up Melodies of the Damned yet…
what are you waiting for?
Go grab it on Amazon right now.
And trust me…
clear your schedule first.
Because once this book gets its hooks into you…
you’re not escaping.
February 3, 2026
Really great potential with this one. I was hooked from the start but the middle just kept going back and forth between keeping me interested and the lagging in excitement.
This was given to me as an advanced reader copy for my honest review
This was given to me as an advanced reader copy for my honest review
March 3, 2026
Sirens, and shadows and gods…twists and turns…loved it!
Review of advance copy received from Author
If you are looking for a dark fantasy romantasy that will swallow you whole, Melodies of the Damned is your next obsession. From the very first page, the atmosphere is incredibly intense and the world-building is so immersive you can practically feel the shadows closing in.
At the heart of it all is Lyra, a heroine who is the definition of resilient. After a lifetime of being told to hide her true self, she finally snaps and rebels against her father’s wishes right out of the gate—a move that sets a high-stakes tone for her entire journey. Watching her discover her unique magic and realize exactly what she is capable of was easily one of my favorite parts of the story.
Then, there is the romance.
This is Enemies to Lovers done to perfection. The Commander of Death is the ultimate brooding shadow daddy... and he’s shirtless for approximately 90% of the book, which I am definitely not complaining about. 🥵 The yearning and top-notch banter kept me on the edge of my seat, and the slow burn? It was a literal forest fire.
The side characters really made this world feel alive, and Solas is an absolute gem who added so much heart to the found family dynamic.
But be warned: the plot twists are masterfully done, and the betrayal in this book hurt. The author knows exactly how to twist the knife, and that cliffhanger is the definition of "cliffhangery." I’m still screaming!
At the heart of it all is Lyra, a heroine who is the definition of resilient. After a lifetime of being told to hide her true self, she finally snaps and rebels against her father’s wishes right out of the gate—a move that sets a high-stakes tone for her entire journey. Watching her discover her unique magic and realize exactly what she is capable of was easily one of my favorite parts of the story.
Then, there is the romance.
This is Enemies to Lovers done to perfection. The Commander of Death is the ultimate brooding shadow daddy... and he’s shirtless for approximately 90% of the book, which I am definitely not complaining about. 🥵 The yearning and top-notch banter kept me on the edge of my seat, and the slow burn? It was a literal forest fire.
The side characters really made this world feel alive, and Solas is an absolute gem who added so much heart to the found family dynamic.
But be warned: the plot twists are masterfully done, and the betrayal in this book hurt. The author knows exactly how to twist the knife, and that cliffhanger is the definition of "cliffhangery." I’m still screaming!
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
FIVE STARS BECAUSE NO YOU HAVE TO READ THIS !!!
if it tell you I was hooked from the very first chapter, would you believe me ? because I sure as hell was . I couldn't put this book down .
Nakita's writing is beautiful, so easy to read and so in depth , I never had a dull moment reading this story !.
Prepare yourself to be torn apart but what you think you know whilst reading this story. The amount of plot twists and drama is freaken just perfect. My head is still feeling after finishing this book and its literally become all I can talk about .
Please if your into dark paranomal fantasy this is definitely a pick up . I completely stopped reading Vicious Fae from the Ruthless boys of the Zodiac to finish this amazing book and im so happy I did ... It toke me just 2 days to read :)
if it tell you I was hooked from the very first chapter, would you believe me ? because I sure as hell was . I couldn't put this book down .
Nakita's writing is beautiful, so easy to read and so in depth , I never had a dull moment reading this story !.
Prepare yourself to be torn apart but what you think you know whilst reading this story. The amount of plot twists and drama is freaken just perfect. My head is still feeling after finishing this book and its literally become all I can talk about .
Please if your into dark paranomal fantasy this is definitely a pick up . I completely stopped reading Vicious Fae from the Ruthless boys of the Zodiac to finish this amazing book and im so happy I did ... It toke me just 2 days to read :)
May 29, 2026
dark fantasy, shadow daddy… and add in a major plot twist and I really couldn’t ask for more. 5 stars.
May 18, 2026
Captivating. Couldn’t put it down.
The plot twists throughout the whole book was Insane.
Cannot wait for the next book!
Yesssssssss to spicy scenes that show emotions and add to the plot 🤩
The plot twists throughout the whole book was Insane.
Cannot wait for the next book!
Yesssssssss to spicy scenes that show emotions and add to the plot 🤩
February 15, 2026
Melodies of the Damned by Nakita Kirwan is a dark, emotionally charged romantasy that fully pulled me into its intense world and morally complex character dynamics.
This story explores power, survival, and emotional conflict in a way that feels raw and immersive. The central relationship is layered with tension, mistrust, and a dangerous pull that keeps you constantly invested. Rather than romanticizing the darkness, the narrative leans into the heavy emotional stakes, allowing the characters’ struggles, trauma, and growth to feel authentic and impactful.
I especially appreciated the morally grey character arcs and the steady build of tension throughout the plot. Every choice feels consequential, and the emotional weight lingers long after each chapter. The pacing balances character depth and plot progression beautifully, making it difficult to put down.
I had the privilege of reading this as an ARC, and I’m incredibly grateful to the author Nakita Kirwan and publisher Hawthorn & Aster for the opportunity to experience this story early for an honest review in return. It was a compelling, intense, and unforgettable read that left a lasting impression.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
This story explores power, survival, and emotional conflict in a way that feels raw and immersive. The central relationship is layered with tension, mistrust, and a dangerous pull that keeps you constantly invested. Rather than romanticizing the darkness, the narrative leans into the heavy emotional stakes, allowing the characters’ struggles, trauma, and growth to feel authentic and impactful.
I especially appreciated the morally grey character arcs and the steady build of tension throughout the plot. Every choice feels consequential, and the emotional weight lingers long after each chapter. The pacing balances character depth and plot progression beautifully, making it difficult to put down.
I had the privilege of reading this as an ARC, and I’m incredibly grateful to the author Nakita Kirwan and publisher Hawthorn & Aster for the opportunity to experience this story early for an honest review in return. It was a compelling, intense, and unforgettable read that left a lasting impression.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
May 26, 2026
I devoured this book completely, leaving no crumbs behind! From the very first page, I was captivated by its wild ride. An impressive debut that has me eagerly awaiting the sequel. Dark, immersive, and with a truly unique storyline, it kept me hooked from start to finish!
This has been one of my favorite reads of the year so far, with the character arcs absolutely perfect! The badass FMC paired with the Shadow Daddy MMC?
Say less and just give me more!
😉𝙀𝙣𝙚𝙢𝙞𝙚𝙨 𝙩𝙤 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙨
🔒𝙈𝙤𝙧𝙖𝙡𝙡𝙮 𝙜𝙧𝙚𝙮 𝙁𝙈𝘾
🌡️𝘾𝙖𝙥𝙩𝙤𝙧 / 𝙘𝙖𝙥𝙩𝙞𝙫𝙚 𝙩𝙚𝙣𝙨𝙞𝙤𝙣
🔥 𝙁𝙤𝙧𝙗𝙞𝙙𝙙𝙚𝙣 𝙧𝙤𝙢𝙖𝙣𝙘𝙚
🌶️ 𝙎𝙡𝙤𝙬-𝙗𝙪𝙧𝙣 𝙩𝙤 𝙎𝙋𝙄𝘾𝙀
📏 𝙃𝙚𝙞𝙜𝙝𝙩 𝙙𝙞𝙛𝙛𝙚𝙧𝙚𝙣𝙘𝙚 (𝙢𝙤𝙣𝙨𝙩𝙧𝙤𝙪𝙨 𝙈𝙈𝘾 / 𝙨𝙢𝙖𝙡𝙡𝙚𝙧 𝙁𝙈𝘾)
🩸 𝘽𝙡𝙤𝙤𝙙 𝙗𝙖𝙧𝙜𝙖𝙞𝙣 𝙗𝙤𝙣𝙙
🌕 𝙁𝙖𝙩𝙚𝙙 𝙢𝙖𝙩𝙚𝙨
🔮 𝙁𝙤𝙧𝙗𝙞𝙙𝙙𝙚𝙣 𝙢𝙖𝙜𝙞𝙘
Thanks to Hawthorn & Aster for the arc opportunity!!
This has been one of my favorite reads of the year so far, with the character arcs absolutely perfect! The badass FMC paired with the Shadow Daddy MMC?
Say less and just give me more!
😉𝙀𝙣𝙚𝙢𝙞𝙚𝙨 𝙩𝙤 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙨
🔒𝙈𝙤𝙧𝙖𝙡𝙡𝙮 𝙜𝙧𝙚𝙮 𝙁𝙈𝘾
🌡️𝘾𝙖𝙥𝙩𝙤𝙧 / 𝙘𝙖𝙥𝙩𝙞𝙫𝙚 𝙩𝙚𝙣𝙨𝙞𝙤𝙣
🔥 𝙁𝙤𝙧𝙗𝙞𝙙𝙙𝙚𝙣 𝙧𝙤𝙢𝙖𝙣𝙘𝙚
🌶️ 𝙎𝙡𝙤𝙬-𝙗𝙪𝙧𝙣 𝙩𝙤 𝙎𝙋𝙄𝘾𝙀
📏 𝙃𝙚𝙞𝙜𝙝𝙩 𝙙𝙞𝙛𝙛𝙚𝙧𝙚𝙣𝙘𝙚 (𝙢𝙤𝙣𝙨𝙩𝙧𝙤𝙪𝙨 𝙈𝙈𝘾 / 𝙨𝙢𝙖𝙡𝙡𝙚𝙧 𝙁𝙈𝘾)
🩸 𝘽𝙡𝙤𝙤𝙙 𝙗𝙖𝙧𝙜𝙖𝙞𝙣 𝙗𝙤𝙣𝙙
🌕 𝙁𝙖𝙩𝙚𝙙 𝙢𝙖𝙩𝙚𝙨
🔮 𝙁𝙤𝙧𝙗𝙞𝙙𝙙𝙚𝙣 𝙢𝙖𝙜𝙞𝙘
Thanks to Hawthorn & Aster for the arc opportunity!!
February 15, 2026
I don’t even know how to begin to describe how much I loved this book😮💨 Melodies Of The Damned by Nakita Kirwan has RUINED me🥲I woke up this morning and immediately added it to my Amazon shopping cart because I can’t go a minute longer than necessary without having this book in my hands. I know that’s drastic, but when you guys read it, you will understand! I cried, I laughed, I clutched my chest from PHYSICAL pain, I screamed at people who could hear me, I stared off at a wall blankly. There wasn’t one emotion that I didn’t experience while I read this book. This painfully tragic love story full of the most intense YEARNING, secrets, and betrayal was nothing short of a masterpiece. I would reread this time and time again. The world is so beautifully built and the characters have SOOOOO much depth😩❤️the plot unravels beautifully. And it’s a TRUE enemies to lovers there for a minute, so do not take that lightly! 👀 I mean it was just perfect. No notes. I was hooked from the first chapter. You couldn’t have PAID me to put it down. I literally stayed up until 4 am finishing this book because I couldn’t help myself. I got completely lost in the story❤️I highlighted SOOO MUCH for this book😅it was impossible not to! I almost cried when I finished the book because I NEED book 2 more than I need air. I hate that I have to leave this beautifully intricate world🥺thank you so much again Nakita Kirwan and @hawthorn.and.aster.services for giving me the opportunity to read this book that will now be one of my favorites🥹❤️I cannot wait to read the next book! And just look at the art at the bottom right!!😩👀an absolute 6 star, MUST READ so add to your TBR asap!
✨Fated Mates
✨Gods and Prophecy
✨Secrets and Betrayal
✨Intense YEARNING😩
✨TRUE Enemies To Lovers
✨Spice
✨Morally Gray Shadow Daddy👀
✨Stabby FMC
✨One Horse/One Bed😮💨
Cannot wait to add this book to my shelf! Nakita Kirwan you are somewhat of a genius in writing❤️I cannot wait to read ANYTHING you write!
✨Fated Mates
✨Gods and Prophecy
✨Secrets and Betrayal
✨Intense YEARNING😩
✨TRUE Enemies To Lovers
✨Spice
✨Morally Gray Shadow Daddy👀
✨Stabby FMC
✨One Horse/One Bed😮💨
Cannot wait to add this book to my shelf! Nakita Kirwan you are somewhat of a genius in writing❤️I cannot wait to read ANYTHING you write!
February 14, 2026
HAPPY RELEASE DAY!! ❤️ ❤️
It deserves EVERY single star that is available to receive. I highly recommend this book 1000%
I LOVED this book, and I think everyone should read this book ASAP. This will be available Valentine's Day!!
Go grab and read NOW!!
Once you start reading, you will not be able to put this down. You will want to keep reading and in the end it will stay with you for days. I finished days ago, and I am still thinking about it.
I read this book over a couple of days during the evening time. Well, actually into the early morning hours because I HAD to read just one more chapter. 🥰❤️🥰
Look at the tropes and blurb on the slides and tell me that it doesn't scream to go read it. The cover itself says, PICK me up now!!! That cover is a BEAUTIFUL thing. ❤️🔥❤️
I want to say THANK you to the author for the privilege to be one of the first ones to read this early and fall in love with the characters in between the pages. Maybe one character more than others 😉🥵🥰
I will be telling EVERYONE about this book. I need book two ASAP. I also can't wait to have this trophy beauty on my shelves.
#MOTD #melodiesofthedamned #nakitakirwan
#streetteam #review
It deserves EVERY single star that is available to receive. I highly recommend this book 1000%
I LOVED this book, and I think everyone should read this book ASAP. This will be available Valentine's Day!!
Go grab and read NOW!!
Once you start reading, you will not be able to put this down. You will want to keep reading and in the end it will stay with you for days. I finished days ago, and I am still thinking about it.
I read this book over a couple of days during the evening time. Well, actually into the early morning hours because I HAD to read just one more chapter. 🥰❤️🥰
Look at the tropes and blurb on the slides and tell me that it doesn't scream to go read it. The cover itself says, PICK me up now!!! That cover is a BEAUTIFUL thing. ❤️🔥❤️
I want to say THANK you to the author for the privilege to be one of the first ones to read this early and fall in love with the characters in between the pages. Maybe one character more than others 😉🥵🥰
I will be telling EVERYONE about this book. I need book two ASAP. I also can't wait to have this trophy beauty on my shelves.
#MOTD #melodiesofthedamned #nakitakirwan
#streetteam #review
February 16, 2026
THIS!! This right here?! This is it 👏🏽
An amazing debut that left me speechless. Every damn time I thought I figured it out, she’d pull the rug right out of my feet without mercy.
•shadow daddy
•forced proximity
•captor/captive
•unhinged FMC
•morally grey
•fated mates
Lyra escapes one prison only to land in another, except this one is dressed up like salvation 😮💨 The adrenaline? Unmatched. Between being hunted by monsters, getting tangled in a prophecy she barely understands, and the MMC who’s watching her like she’s both the key and the curse that had me craving more. Tell me why I was absolutely feral for every interaction.
And that slow burn?? I was on edge the entire time. But the moment he loosens her chains with one hand while binding her to him with the other..oowee I was DONE. A certified goner.
Thank you Nakita and Hawthorn & Aster for the eARC!
I’m applauding you loud and proud 🙌🏽
An amazing debut that left me speechless. Every damn time I thought I figured it out, she’d pull the rug right out of my feet without mercy.
•shadow daddy
•forced proximity
•captor/captive
•unhinged FMC
•morally grey
•fated mates
Lyra escapes one prison only to land in another, except this one is dressed up like salvation 😮💨 The adrenaline? Unmatched. Between being hunted by monsters, getting tangled in a prophecy she barely understands, and the MMC who’s watching her like she’s both the key and the curse that had me craving more. Tell me why I was absolutely feral for every interaction.
And that slow burn?? I was on edge the entire time. But the moment he loosens her chains with one hand while binding her to him with the other..oowee I was DONE. A certified goner.
Thank you Nakita and Hawthorn & Aster for the eARC!
I’m applauding you loud and proud 🙌🏽
February 15, 2026
I read through Melodies of the Damned in 2 days and ran to order a copy when I finished, It. Is. That. Good.
If you have not read this book, YOU NEED TO!<——It’s available now on Kindle Unlimited 👀
Perfect for readers who enjoy:
🩸 Unhinged FMC
🌑 Shadow Daddy
⚖️ Morally Grey Characters
🧵 Fated Mates
⛓️ Forced Proximity
🗝️ Captor Romance
🔥 Slow Burn to ON FIRE Spice
⚔️ Enemies to Lovers
Princess Lyra is completely unhinged and I am here for it! She is strong, unforgettable, and watching this character bloom into her confidence was everything I didn’t know I needed.
The commander , listennnn y’all- if you need your shadow daddy fix come 👏and👏get👏it👏👏👏. He is every bit demanding, commanding, and dropping with spice.
Riven is the dark unhinged comedian that leaves you every bit emotionally scared. That boy has done some serious emotional damage to me and I need more.
Nakita, thank you so much for writing this book and allowing me to be part of your ARC team! I need more I’m begging you 😫
If you have not read this book, YOU NEED TO!<——It’s available now on Kindle Unlimited 👀
Perfect for readers who enjoy:
🩸 Unhinged FMC
🌑 Shadow Daddy
⚖️ Morally Grey Characters
🧵 Fated Mates
⛓️ Forced Proximity
🗝️ Captor Romance
🔥 Slow Burn to ON FIRE Spice
⚔️ Enemies to Lovers
Princess Lyra is completely unhinged and I am here for it! She is strong, unforgettable, and watching this character bloom into her confidence was everything I didn’t know I needed.
The commander , listennnn y’all- if you need your shadow daddy fix come 👏and👏get👏it👏👏👏. He is every bit demanding, commanding, and dropping with spice.
Riven is the dark unhinged comedian that leaves you every bit emotionally scared. That boy has done some serious emotional damage to me and I need more.
Nakita, thank you so much for writing this book and allowing me to be part of your ARC team! I need more I’m begging you 😫
February 14, 2026
I received an advanced reader copy in exchange for an honest review!
Melodies of the Damned was such a great read.
The pacing of the story was superb. I felt the need to keep reading, getting that "just one more chapter" feeling. MOTD follows Lyra, an abused princess, through a journey of discovery and self-worth. The portrayal of overcoming trauma and feminine rage was divine. Nikita continued to show that just because healing has occurred, trauma is still real and can manifest when confronting the past. The twists and turns were not wholly unexpected but were just surprising enough to keep me on the edge of my seat. Thankfully, the Lyra's story doesn't end with this book - I'm excited that there's more to come for her!
Shout out to Hawthorne & Aster PR Services for setting up the ARC opportunity!
Melodies of the Damned was such a great read.
The pacing of the story was superb. I felt the need to keep reading, getting that "just one more chapter" feeling. MOTD follows Lyra, an abused princess, through a journey of discovery and self-worth. The portrayal of overcoming trauma and feminine rage was divine. Nikita continued to show that just because healing has occurred, trauma is still real and can manifest when confronting the past. The twists and turns were not wholly unexpected but were just surprising enough to keep me on the edge of my seat. Thankfully, the Lyra's story doesn't end with this book - I'm excited that there's more to come for her!
Shout out to Hawthorne & Aster PR Services for setting up the ARC opportunity!
February 6, 2026
I highly recommend this dark fantasy in which we see FMC Princess Lyra having lived her life trying not to be seen but obey all her father’s commands. She suffered madness and cruel punishment, which led her to wanting to end her life. She was finally brave enough to join the annual Ascension in which mortals sacrificed their souls to the Gods. Instead of dying, she drowned in the sea and came out the other side a different and more powerful woman. This story is the 1st book in a duet, in which we get to see Lyra grow her power, confidence, find her bonded mate and try to save the mortal and fae realms. The ending may shock many, but it was needed. I look forward to book 2!
Review of advance copy received from Author
(4.5) I loved the opening of this story and how the writing flowed like its own melody. Lyra is a storm waiting to be unleashed and I am always here for that energy!
The pacing did not falter one step after the opening, with all the pivotal moments blending in together and building off on one another. This kept me interested and involved through the whole story!
The story has every romantasy element that I eat up from the genre and written in so well! Yes, we have that heart stopping cliff hanger but it was flawless and so in line with the backstory and build up so you know I can't wait for Book 2!
The pacing did not falter one step after the opening, with all the pivotal moments blending in together and building off on one another. This kept me interested and involved through the whole story!
The story has every romantasy element that I eat up from the genre and written in so well! Yes, we have that heart stopping cliff hanger but it was flawless and so in line with the backstory and build up so you know I can't wait for Book 2!
Review of advance copy received from Author
✨️ ARC Read ✨️
Thank you Namita Kirwan for allowing me to advance read your amazing book and giving me my new obsession
I have never—and I mean NEVER—had a book completely consume me like this. It shattered my expectations in the best possible way. I didn’t want to put it down for even a second, and the moment I finished, all I wanted was to start it again. AND IT’S A DEBUT?! Immediate, no-questions-asked auto-buy author from here on out.
This is a dark, action-packed romantasy with high stakes, morally gray characters, and intense emotions that do not let up.
I’m staying intentionally vague because going in mostly blind was the best decision I could’ve made, and I don’t want to take that experience away from anyone. Just know this: if infinite stars were an option, this book would have them.
The FMC is unbelievably strong—after everything she’s endured, she never loses her humanity, never breaks, never bows. Head held high the entire time. And the MMC? A force of nature from start to finish. The ultimate shadow daddy.
The found family? Present and perfect.
The action? Relentless—this book throws you straight into it and never slows down.
The pacing? Not a single dull moment.
I was on the edge of my seat the entire ride, heart racing, emotions wrecked, fully unwell.
Tropes include:
• Enemies to Lovers
• Shadow Daddy
• Forced Proximity
• Arranged Marriage
• Curses
• Only One Bed
• “Who did this to you?”
• Fated Mates
• Trauma
• He Would die for Her
If you love powerful FMCs, obsessive devotion, found family, and nonstop romantasy chaos, this book is absolutely for you. Please check content warnings—this story does not pull its punches.
I could keep going—but I won’t. Do yourself the ultimate favor and get your hands on this book. On 2/14, The Commander of Death is calling your name this Valentine’s Day.
Are you answering the call? 🖤🔥
Thank you Namita Kirwan for allowing me to advance read your amazing book and giving me my new obsession
I have never—and I mean NEVER—had a book completely consume me like this. It shattered my expectations in the best possible way. I didn’t want to put it down for even a second, and the moment I finished, all I wanted was to start it again. AND IT’S A DEBUT?! Immediate, no-questions-asked auto-buy author from here on out.
This is a dark, action-packed romantasy with high stakes, morally gray characters, and intense emotions that do not let up.
I’m staying intentionally vague because going in mostly blind was the best decision I could’ve made, and I don’t want to take that experience away from anyone. Just know this: if infinite stars were an option, this book would have them.
The FMC is unbelievably strong—after everything she’s endured, she never loses her humanity, never breaks, never bows. Head held high the entire time. And the MMC? A force of nature from start to finish. The ultimate shadow daddy.
The found family? Present and perfect.
The action? Relentless—this book throws you straight into it and never slows down.
The pacing? Not a single dull moment.
I was on the edge of my seat the entire ride, heart racing, emotions wrecked, fully unwell.
Tropes include:
• Enemies to Lovers
• Shadow Daddy
• Forced Proximity
• Arranged Marriage
• Curses
• Only One Bed
• “Who did this to you?”
• Fated Mates
• Trauma
• He Would die for Her
If you love powerful FMCs, obsessive devotion, found family, and nonstop romantasy chaos, this book is absolutely for you. Please check content warnings—this story does not pull its punches.
I could keep going—but I won’t. Do yourself the ultimate favor and get your hands on this book. On 2/14, The Commander of Death is calling your name this Valentine’s Day.
Are you answering the call? 🖤🔥
February 7, 2026
ah! this was sooo good! this had me in a grip so hard i didn't care if I couldn't breath! I know February just started but this is my favorite of February. this story was awesome and addictive. the adventure, the secrets and betrayal at the end ah! I was in edge! my heart hurt because I want to know so badly I got so worried and for good freaking reason too!! ah I need the next one so fast. and man i liked that guy! come on! I feel so betrayed!
Review of advance copy received from Author
this was so good ! from the very start, it had my attention, kept me captivated.
the writing and the pace of things truly pulled me in , and just makes you want to keep reading. there was a slowish part around the middle for me, though, but nothing major and easily overlooked with the overall plot and writing that Nakita kirwan had set , locked, and loaded.
AND WITH THAT ENDING !!!??? she easily shot me down.
I will be picking up that second book.
very honoured to have been an arc reader for this book.
the writing and the pace of things truly pulled me in , and just makes you want to keep reading. there was a slowish part around the middle for me, though, but nothing major and easily overlooked with the overall plot and writing that Nakita kirwan had set , locked, and loaded.
AND WITH THAT ENDING !!!??? she easily shot me down.
I will be picking up that second book.
very honoured to have been an arc reader for this book.
February 3, 2026
Interesting read from an emerging author. The plot twist had me guessing and I enjoyed the storyline. Good first novel from a promising fantasy writer.
Thank you Nakita, and Hawthorne and Aster for the advance read. Looking forward to seeing what Nakita writes in the future.
Thank you Nakita, and Hawthorne and Aster for the advance read. Looking forward to seeing what Nakita writes in the future.
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