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Abandoned Luna: Now Untouchable book 1: Updated Version
Updated edition uploaded on January 28, 2026 to correct an earlier file error. Sorry for the hiccup and thank you for your patience.
For eight years, Cecilia Moore was the perfect Luna, loyal, and unmarked.
Until the day she found her Alpha mate with a younger, purebred she-wolf in his bed.
In a world ruled by bloodlines and mating bonds, Cecilia was always the outsider.
But now, she's done playing by wolf rules.
She smiles as she hands Xavier the quarterly financials-divorce papers clipped neatly beneath the final page.
“You're angry?” he growls.
“Angry enough to commit murder,” she replies, voice cold as frost.
A silent war brews under the roof they once called home.
Xavier thinks he still holds the power-but Cecilia has already begun her quiet rebellion.
With every cold glance and calculated step,
she's preparing to disappear from his world-as the mate he never deserved.
And when he finally understands the strength of the heart he broke...
It may be far too late to win it back.
For eight years, Cecilia Moore was the perfect Luna, loyal, and unmarked.
Until the day she found her Alpha mate with a younger, purebred she-wolf in his bed.
In a world ruled by bloodlines and mating bonds, Cecilia was always the outsider.
But now, she's done playing by wolf rules.
She smiles as she hands Xavier the quarterly financials-divorce papers clipped neatly beneath the final page.
“You're angry?” he growls.
“Angry enough to commit murder,” she replies, voice cold as frost.
A silent war brews under the roof they once called home.
Xavier thinks he still holds the power-but Cecilia has already begun her quiet rebellion.
With every cold glance and calculated step,
she's preparing to disappear from his world-as the mate he never deserved.
And when he finally understands the strength of the heart he broke...
It may be far too late to win it back.
296 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 5, 2025
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January 8, 2026
Not really 4 stars but rating it purely on vibes… def a guilty pleasure kind of read. Those IG ads get me -.- anyway, so many errors/inconsistencies & grammar is terrible, but so addicting.. need to know how it ends 😅
December 11, 2025
I read this on the app FreeNovel. I finally gave up at chapter 123 which honestly is about 40 chapters longer than I should have given it. I rated it 2 stars instead of 1 because this app is set up so that you can watch ads to unlock chapters instead of using actual money. The plot of this book was insane. It has some of the most ridiculous plot points I have ever read. I have listed some of my biggest issues below.
1. Cecilia gets kidnapped and almost raped 4 separate times in the first 70 chapters.
2. Sebastian is able to rescue her from both the rape and the kidnapping all 4 times.
3. The main character is named Cecilia and the woman her husband is cheating on her with is named CiCi. That was both weird and confusing.
4. Cecilia has 2 separate wish fulfillment moments where she gets the people who have wronged her arrested, humiliates them and impresses a crowd.
5. She got a huge divorce settlement but still works as Sebastian's secretary even though she constantly gets mad at him for acting like a jerk.
6. The relationship between Sebastian and Cecilia is basically the same 3 or 4 interactions being recycled over and over with essentially no meaningful progression/development whatsoever.
7. CiCi just keeps getting progressively more evil but somehow is not in serious trouble despite committing a fuckload of very obvious very provable crimes.
8. The ex husband was basically just a joke of a character. It seemed like his purpose was just to impress upon the reader how perfect Cecilia is as a person and to follow her around being jealous and begging her for another chance.
9. The exclamation points. There are just so many exclamation points in the dialogue.
10. Cecilia is the dumbest most oblivious character in the world and she continually makes life harder for herself.
All in all this is actually not the worst book I have ever read but it was not good....at all. I definitely do not recommend it to anyone else.
1. Cecilia gets kidnapped and almost raped 4 separate times in the first 70 chapters.
2. Sebastian is able to rescue her from both the rape and the kidnapping all 4 times.
3. The main character is named Cecilia and the woman her husband is cheating on her with is named CiCi. That was both weird and confusing.
4. Cecilia has 2 separate wish fulfillment moments where she gets the people who have wronged her arrested, humiliates them and impresses a crowd.
5. She got a huge divorce settlement but still works as Sebastian's secretary even though she constantly gets mad at him for acting like a jerk.
6. The relationship between Sebastian and Cecilia is basically the same 3 or 4 interactions being recycled over and over with essentially no meaningful progression/development whatsoever.
7. CiCi just keeps getting progressively more evil but somehow is not in serious trouble despite committing a fuckload of very obvious very provable crimes.
8. The ex husband was basically just a joke of a character. It seemed like his purpose was just to impress upon the reader how perfect Cecilia is as a person and to follow her around being jealous and begging her for another chance.
9. The exclamation points. There are just so many exclamation points in the dialogue.
10. Cecilia is the dumbest most oblivious character in the world and she continually makes life harder for herself.
All in all this is actually not the worst book I have ever read but it was not good....at all. I definitely do not recommend it to anyone else.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 2, 2026
Cliffhanger
Book leaves on a cliffhanger! As far as I can tell there isn’t a second one. Incomplete at needed to be finished
Book leaves on a cliffhanger! As far as I can tell there isn’t a second one. Incomplete at needed to be finished
January 11, 2026
This is a 3.5 for the whole series!
While this is available on the Zon, there's a lot of problems with the books. I read this on the Free Novel app, and I'm still unsure if it's completed or not. This story is good, I was actually obsessed with it until about chapter 200 (app). Then it just started getting long, and felt like it should of ended sooner. It's not a bad read, but it's damn interesting.
While this is available on the Zon, there's a lot of problems with the books. I read this on the Free Novel app, and I'm still unsure if it's completed or not. This story is good, I was actually obsessed with it until about chapter 200 (app). Then it just started getting long, and felt like it should of ended sooner. It's not a bad read, but it's damn interesting.
January 11, 2026
Story abruptly stops.
The chapter to chapter transitions in the first 2/3 of the book are sometimes choppy and awkward. The last 4 or 5 chapters are poorly written with lots of bad grammar, misused words, and misspellings. But the most egregious sin is that the book stops in the middle of a scene!! I checked to see if the storyline picks up in book 2, but the characters in book 2 don't have the same names.
The chapter to chapter transitions in the first 2/3 of the book are sometimes choppy and awkward. The last 4 or 5 chapters are poorly written with lots of bad grammar, misused words, and misspellings. But the most egregious sin is that the book stops in the middle of a scene!! I checked to see if the storyline picks up in book 2, but the characters in book 2 don't have the same names.
April 12, 2026
This is one of my favorite werewolf/human stories! It's well-written, has a good pace, and the author doesn't leave any loose ends. The character development is great, and I just love the author's sense of humor. There were so many one-liners, as well as some extremely funny scenes (the honey cake). I was laughing so often. Only thing I didn't like about it was that it was serialized and I hate waiting for endings. But this one's finished now (at least I think it is) so read away!
January 16, 2026
Okay story, Terribly written
I first became acquainted with this series through the MoboReader app while reading Book 2. There is no ending, Book 2 starts with a completely different Luna & story, and the grammar and writing are so awful it almost seems like it’s written with AI, but I’d hope AI writes better than this.
I’m honestly seriously disappointed.
I first became acquainted with this series through the MoboReader app while reading Book 2. There is no ending, Book 2 starts with a completely different Luna & story, and the grammar and writing are so awful it almost seems like it’s written with AI, but I’d hope AI writes better than this.
I’m honestly seriously disappointed.
December 8, 2025
Very confusing but great read
I really enjoyed this book, but it just ends & can't find the follow on story about scarlett & Lucian. I've bought the next 3 books but theres no more info on their on going relationship. Its very confusing.
I really enjoyed this book, but it just ends & can't find the follow on story about scarlett & Lucian. I've bought the next 3 books but theres no more info on their on going relationship. Its very confusing.
December 21, 2025
Inconsistent, incomplete.
Started out strong, I am thoroughly disappointed that I chose this book. There's a lot of inconsistencies in the story. The book ends midway through the story.
Started out strong, I am thoroughly disappointed that I chose this book. There's a lot of inconsistencies in the story. The book ends midway through the story.
January 9, 2026
This was a good read
I have no problem with the book other than the end. I thought when I started book 2 of the series it would pick up where the story left off. Instead it’s a whole other story, which gives the first book no ending what so ever!
I have no problem with the book other than the end. I thought when I started book 2 of the series it would pick up where the story left off. Instead it’s a whole other story, which gives the first book no ending what so ever!
January 12, 2026
where is the continuation?
Where is the continuation of Lucien and Scarlett? The cliffhanger is unresolved as the vote has not happened. And book 2 has new characters.
Otherwise I would have given a 5.
Where is the continuation of Lucien and Scarlett? The cliffhanger is unresolved as the vote has not happened. And book 2 has new characters.
Otherwise I would have given a 5.
January 27, 2026
It was alright I was watching a ton of ads to unlock chapters of this book on a app and the ending was so open ended and a cliffhanger and this app doesn’t have the second book you can only buy it on kindle so that isn’t very convenient
March 20, 2026
Es una historia entretenida, tanto que me atrapó a través de una propaganda de una app de lectura, pero no finaliza en éste libro, queda la historia en un "continuará" muy extrano y no ubico la continuación de la historia. Muy decepcionante la verdad.
March 23, 2026
I got sucked in to the story initially, but the spelling and gramatical errors are abundant. After a while the story gets stagnant and doesn't really move, seems more like high school drama. I dnf after 160 very short chapters.
May 15, 2026
is a good story but the author made a mistake
The author made a mistake saying at the beginning of the story that Cecilia was human but then says is a shewolf. My rating is 4 because of that
The author made a mistake saying at the beginning of the story that Cecilia was human but then says is a shewolf. My rating is 4 because of that
October 2, 2026
This is a decent story with a strong female lead. I honestly have an issue with sentence structure making it hard to read. It leaves on a cliffhanger. I’m not continuing because of the poor writing quality.
December 20, 2025
Great book
Exciting to read . Not as romantic as i wish it was .. a little drawn out but still a good book.
Exciting to read . Not as romantic as i wish it was .. a little drawn out but still a good book.
December 31, 2025
Luna
I loved this book. It kept me reading, waiting for the end.
Only thing I hated is I have to next book to get ending
I loved this book. It kept me reading, waiting for the end.
Only thing I hated is I have to next book to get ending
January 8, 2026
not what you think!
This is only part of the book, I was led to believe it was the entire book and I paid over $8 for it….i don’t pay that much for books ever. Lesson learned
This is only part of the book, I was led to believe it was the entire book and I paid over $8 for it….i don’t pay that much for books ever. Lesson learned
January 10, 2026
Good but LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG. Ms. Moore is a magnet for attracting bad wolf energy.
February 9, 2026
Great main characters!
The main characters are very engaging. I am looking forward to their development as the series continues in upcoming books.
The main characters are very engaging. I am looking forward to their development as the series continues in upcoming books.
March 1, 2026
Awesome read!
I really thought this was a good read and I did not want to stop going! Would recommend to everyone who enjoys this genre!
I really thought this was a good read and I did not want to stop going! Would recommend to everyone who enjoys this genre!
March 12, 2026
Intriguing read
I don't think I've hated a fictional character more than I have Xavier and CiCi. Storyline is great so far!
I don't think I've hated a fictional character more than I have Xavier and CiCi. Storyline is great so far!
Did Not Finish
March 14, 2026to much adds 🥺
March 20, 2026
second werewolf story I've delved into... this is so insanely dramatic but it did kinda have me hooked. like the classic 'watch like a car crash, you don't want to watch but cant look away' feeling
August 16, 2026
Great book
This is a good read right from the start and it just keeps better and better. I can’t wait to finish it.
This is a good read right from the start and it just keeps better and better. I can’t wait to finish it.
August 25, 2026
Never read a book about werewolves before, so this is a first. I’m now impressed enough to read book no.2
December 25, 2025
I had no clue about the wolf term “Luna.” Wolf behavior is amusing.
March 30, 2026
Cecilia's journey from rejected Luna to a woman reclaiming her power is what kept me turning pages. The story delivers plenty of drama, betrayal, and emotional confrontations as she refuses to remain trapped in a relationship built on disrespect. While some plot points follow familiar rejected-mate tropes, Cecilia's determination and growing confidence make her easy to root for. Fans of werewolf romance, strong heroines, revenge arcs, and second-chance tension will likely enjoy this fast-paced series.
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