Pros:
- n/a
Cons:
- AI generated.
- ChatGPT 4o-isms out the wazoo.
- All the key ChatGPT 4o sci-fi words are here.
- Ridiculously overspaced paragraphs to pad out pages.
Comments:
Sigh, yet another completely uninspired prompt about sci-fi dystopia. We start off immediately with an AI simile where our MC plays a don't blink game with a monitor. Then we hit "pulse" and "divergence" immediately in the first paragraph, followed by "noise". All ChatGPT loved sci-fi-esque words. And of course, "not X, just Y", and odd ellipsis placements. And em-dashes. Em-dashes, em-dashes, em-dashes to an absurd inappropriate degree, such as with:
"Hey--Jonas," she called to the nearest engineer.
Completely unnecessary, unless you're 4o.
Absolutely unreadable. Hard DNF.