Ah, GOOOD! A GOOD SciFi Drama! And, Mostly Set on Mars, to Boot! Hurray!
Well, OK, after gushing about how happy I was to read a good Space-related SciFi story, let me get into some of the nuts and bolts of the book.
First off, the premise of this Mission to Mars almost immediately takes on a sense of the unbelievable, when an abrupt shift of “Who is in command ?”takes place, at a very stupid point in the Mission Timeline. Personally, I can’t imagine this event taking place under ANY realistic circumstance, but ESPECIALLY NOT in the timing presented by The Author. But, “Oh, well!” — it’s his story, not mine — but I suspect other Readers will have problems with this type of attitude, too.
THEN, the new Commander is practically an idiot, at least with respect to knowing how to command and/or ensuring the safety of his crew. The Author truly makes him out to be selfish and narrow-focused, and frankly — I don’t see how such a person would be thrust into the Commander’s role; it makes no sense, and it’s primarily The Crew that will suffer.
At some point in the story, there’s a lost crew member, apparently stranded out in a Mars Dust Storm (which we all should know by now, would never be as horrible and threatening as depicted by many SciFi Writers). Still, after an effort to go out and find the crew member is aborted due to common sense (ie — the Rescuers might get lost) — WHY would they not simply tie a rope to the Mars Habitat, and to themselves, and therefore ensure each Rescuer could find their way back without the least little bit of effort? The fact that this isn’t even offered as an option, sounds like pretty poor thinking by The Author, and a weak link in the story.
I also find it interesting, that The Author BARELY remembers to give the Mars crew the superhuman strength they deserve while on Mars. That is, the crew has muscles and capabilities that are suited from growing up and living in a 1G environment on Earth — but, here they are on Mars — and they SHOULD be able to lift and move things — even themselves — much better than on Earth. But, no, except for one instance of being about to suddenly hop uphill better — The Author completely strips the crew from having any additional strength and/or of being able to perform better at a given physical task than on Earth. This makes no sense, including how they move about — they should have much more bounce in their steps on Mars, than on Earth!
The Author also digresses from familiarity the crew has with each other, to almost always referring to the original ‘chief’ as ‘Commander Holman’ — but most of the others are referenced almost exclusively by their first names. I’ve never been much of one to use titles to address another person, and I’ve no military background — but once Kate’s title and position on the crew was made clear in the book, The Author’s persistent use of ‘Commander Holman’ seems excessive for a group that mostly considers themselves close as a family.
Unfortunately, to This Reader’s surprise and dread — you’ll also soon discover that the writing of this ‘great’ SciFi novel in fact draws a mixture of plot lines from The Mummy Returns and King Tut’s Curse. Surely, The Author didn’t need to fail over to THAT, did he?
Last, but not least — HOW in the world (or out of this world?) did The Author think NASA managed to send a HUGE, ENTIRELY pre-confab housing development to Mars, ahead of the 1st astronauts to land there? Did it just land in a little cube, they added water and it sprouted?!? Oddly enough, The Author makes no attempt to have the existence of these living arrangements make any sense — they just are there, part of the unspoken plot that need never be explained.
The ‘bad guys’ in this book are a bit hollow, greedy and flat-out stupid; the ‘good guys’, of course, may be beaten down and decimated, but persevere from one chapter to the next. There are also a few liberties taken by The Author with spaceflight dynamics, Solar radiation, poisoning, deaths and other details — but, like I accepted at the beginning of this review — “Hey, it’s The Author’s Plot, not mine!”