Mary Jane loses a bet, and her friend Sarah dares her to play the Elevator Game. But after attempting to enter the Underworld, Mary Jane begins suffering vivid hallucinations, and the world around her no longer feels real. A dark presence follows her, lingering like a storm cloud she can’t escape, and Mary Jane fears she may have brought something back with her. Something that will never leave her alone.
This was short and free so I gave it a shot. I was enjoying the first part but it was still hard to follow the here, then there aspect. Also it kept switching between "underworld" and "otherworld". Chapter 5. labeled the Epilog felt like a completely different story.