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Ayodhya Cherina Krishna
ఏం కోల్పోతామో తెలిసి కూడా ధర్మం వైపు నిలబడ్డ రాముడి కథ అందరికి తెలిసిందే, కానీ కలియుగంలో మన కథానాయకుడు కృష్ణ కూడా అదే మార్గం ఎంచుకున్నాడు. మరి ఎన్ని అరణ్యవాసాలు, అజ్ఞాతవాసాలు దాటాల్సివచ్చిందో జరుగుతుందో లేదో తెలియని ఒక పట్టాభిషేకం కోసం”... "అయోధ్య చేరిన కృష్ణ " - మధ్య తరగతి కుర్రాడి నిత్య జీవిత యుద్ధం
158 pages, Paperback
Published September 24, 2025
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December 25, 2025
Ayodhya Cherina Krishna is a novel where the author clearly puts in sincere effort to build a meaningful story. It has emotions, progress, ups and downs, love, family, and relationships. You can see that the intention is genuine and that the author wants the story to stand for something.
However, what strongly affected my reading experience was how often the author steps away from the story to preach or motivate. Whenever a character is going through a situation, instead of letting the emotion unfold naturally, the narration shifts into explanations and life lessons. At many points, it felt unclear whether the emotions belonged to the character or if the author was directly addressing the reader.
For me, a novel should trust its readers. If a reader is truly invested, they will understand the emotions, meanings, and takeaways through the story itself. Fiction should allow space for readers to think, feel, and evolve on their own. Constantly forcing motivation or inserting thoughts takes away that freedom and ends up influencing the reader rather than engaging them.
Because of these deviations, I found myself skipping some pages. Even after doing so, I honestly did not miss any part of the story, which made those sections feel unnecessary. The frequent use of famous quotes also felt excessive, and I am not very sure what the author intended to prove through them.
Overall, the story had potential, but the unnecessary preaching made it feel repetitive and a little boring for me.
However, what strongly affected my reading experience was how often the author steps away from the story to preach or motivate. Whenever a character is going through a situation, instead of letting the emotion unfold naturally, the narration shifts into explanations and life lessons. At many points, it felt unclear whether the emotions belonged to the character or if the author was directly addressing the reader.
For me, a novel should trust its readers. If a reader is truly invested, they will understand the emotions, meanings, and takeaways through the story itself. Fiction should allow space for readers to think, feel, and evolve on their own. Constantly forcing motivation or inserting thoughts takes away that freedom and ends up influencing the reader rather than engaging them.
Because of these deviations, I found myself skipping some pages. Even after doing so, I honestly did not miss any part of the story, which made those sections feel unnecessary. The frequent use of famous quotes also felt excessive, and I am not very sure what the author intended to prove through them.
Overall, the story had potential, but the unnecessary preaching made it feel repetitive and a little boring for me.
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