This builds up to be better than it starts with. It is one of those exaggerated stories that thrives on being vaguely ridiculous, but it actually works better when it boils itself down to just be an actual romance.
Momoka has a type and it’s apparently antisocial with a hint of danger. Shuuto is the new kid in class and he’s exactly that and, perhaps, a little over the top to begin with.
I feel introducing Shuuto with threats to kill any girl who gets close is a lot. Yes, I know he doesn’t mean it, but it’s kind of off-putting anyway. He’s much more extreme than the usual scary-looking dude and it doesn’t add much. He was enough before all that, but that’s just me.
His whole deal turns out to be blushing like mad around girls and being embarrassed, so he shuns people and wears a mask. And Momoka can’t get enough, which slowly turns from stanning to swooning as the story goes on.
And the way they come together is pretty dang winning. Momoka decides to make it so everybody knows how great Shuuto really is and also tries to help him get over his girl block.
This ends up blowing back on her when she starts to see that he really is kind of great and sweet, but she ALSO starts to help her classmates see it and subsequently draws other female gazes to Shuuto.
Momoka is one of those ‘damn the torpedoes’ heroines that I always prefer in my shojo. She completely inserts herself in Shuuto’s life, but without being overbearing. She’s the platonic ideal of the madcap relationship in I’ll Win You Over Yet, Senpai!.
There are a decent number of strong set pieces here, backed up by Momoka’s down to earth friend who is entirely too normal for this story, but that’s precisely why she works. Her judicious deployment keeps the story a little more grounded than it otherwise would be.
The haunted house and pool scene are really adorable and I loved the way that Momoka and Shuuto first meet. And when Momoka reveals the reason she doesn’t do anything but stan her faves, Shuuto really does step up. There are no shortage of genuinely romantic bits.
I wouldn’t say this is essential reading, but I liked it well enough once it got going. It’s a very good version of a standard romance that overcomes a protagonist who starts off as a total arse.
I’m really excited to see Momoka finding love, even if it is with Shuuto (who does crumble pretty easily once he starts getting used to her, so it’s honestly not that bad). It won’t be a must-read, but you won’t regret it if you like this style of romance.
3.5 stars - yeah, okay, this managed to become sweet enough by the time it was done. I’ll let it round up because I’m rather looking forward to more of this.