Merry & Faking It is a sweet holiday romance novel by Rory Quinn. Mollie is a neurodivergent-coded protagonist who is about to spend the week at her family's cabin. Her family thinks she is a flake who can never hold on to a job or a partner, so when she is dumped by her boyfriend, she cannot face the prospect of having failed again. She enlists the help of her brother's straight-laced friend, Adam, to play the role of her fake boyfriend, Steve.
I enjoyed the author's take on the fake boyfriend trope as well as the overall plot of the story. Mollie, Adam, and the rest of the family were characters the reader can truly care about. The story is very cute, the characters are relatable, and the premise offers a fresh perspective on the neurodivergent/straight-laced dynamic. I started out liking the book so much that I was unable to put it down.
Unfortunately, the experience was characterized by jarring inconsistencies. Due to this lack of continuity, I found myself distracted and unable to fully enjoy the narrative. For example, in the beginning of the book, Mollie states that she dated Steve for two years, but she later tells Adam they were together for ten months. In another scene, a character is described as stretched out in nothing but cotton shorts, yet a few lines down, their jeans are being taken off button by button. I went back and read those lines two or three times to see if I was mistaken- I wasn’t. There were a few more inconsistencies that were equally distracting, though I will not share them here as they contain spoilers. Finally, the pacing felt uneven; the ending felt a bit rushed, while other scenes, such as a snowball fight, dragged on.
While the story itself is charming and the characters are likable, the poor editing made it difficult to stay immersed in the book. In addition, Adam was a dreamy MMC & how quickly he fell for Mollie was very believable. Mollie was adorable and her attraction to Adam was quite justified. Their chemistry in and of itself is the top reason I would recommend Merry & Faking it. However, I would not recommend this book to anyone simply because of the poor editing and confusing timelines.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.