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Pride, Prejudice & Secrets
“Seldom, very seldom, does complete truth belong to any human disclosure; seldom can it happen that something is not a little disguised, or a little mistaken.”
Jane Austen
It is always the completely unforeseen events that lead to the most unexpected consequences, and such is the case in this variation on Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice. One of the crucial points in Austen’s novel is Miss Elizabeth Bennet’s fiery and passionate refusal and denunciation of the equally passionate but infinitely more repressed Fitzwilliam Darcy. What might eventuate if the robustly healthy Elizabeth falls prey to illness for almost the first time in her life just when Darcy comes to call? Bemused by her illness, she hardly comprehends what Darcy is asking, and her simple nod of acknowledgment is misinterpreted as acceptance of his suit by a joyous Darcy. By the time Elizabeth regains her health, it seems that every one of her acquaintance and many outside of it accept that she has become engaged to the last man in the world she would ever have considered marrying. Can she openly demand her engagement to the amorous but prideful Darcy be broken, a course fraught with hazards in the social milieu of Regency England? In a maelstrom of confusion, choices have to be made and disclosures closely considered. Elizabeth knows that nothing in her life will ever be the same, and the consequences will likely spread further than she can imagine.
Jane Austen
It is always the completely unforeseen events that lead to the most unexpected consequences, and such is the case in this variation on Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice. One of the crucial points in Austen’s novel is Miss Elizabeth Bennet’s fiery and passionate refusal and denunciation of the equally passionate but infinitely more repressed Fitzwilliam Darcy. What might eventuate if the robustly healthy Elizabeth falls prey to illness for almost the first time in her life just when Darcy comes to call? Bemused by her illness, she hardly comprehends what Darcy is asking, and her simple nod of acknowledgment is misinterpreted as acceptance of his suit by a joyous Darcy. By the time Elizabeth regains her health, it seems that every one of her acquaintance and many outside of it accept that she has become engaged to the last man in the world she would ever have considered marrying. Can she openly demand her engagement to the amorous but prideful Darcy be broken, a course fraught with hazards in the social milieu of Regency England? In a maelstrom of confusion, choices have to be made and disclosures closely considered. Elizabeth knows that nothing in her life will ever be the same, and the consequences will likely spread further than she can imagine.
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First published January 1, 2015
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C.P. Odom
11 books76 followersBy training, I’m a retired engineer, born in Texas, raised in Oklahoma, and graduated from the University of Oklahoma. Sandwiched in there was a stint in the Marines, and I’ve lived in Arizona since 1977, working first for Motorola and then General Dynamics. I raised two sons with my first wife, Margaret, before her untimely death from cancer, and my second wife, Jeanine, and I adopted two girls from China. The older of my daughters recently graduated with an engineering degree and is working in Phoenix, and the younger girl is heading toward a nursing degree. I’ve always been a voracious reader and collector of books, and my favorite genres are science fiction, historical fiction, histories, and, in recent years, reading (and later writing) Jane Austen romantic fiction. This late-developing interest was indirectly stimulated when I read my late wife's beloved Jane Austen books after her passing. One thing led to another, and I now have three novels published: A Most Civil Proposal (2013), Consequences (2014), and Pride, Prejudice, and Secrets (2015). My fourth novel, Perilous Siege, was just published. I retired from engineering in 2011, but I still live in Arizona with my family, a pair of dogs (one of which is stubbornly untrainable), and a pair of rather strange cats. My hobbies are reading, woodworking, and watching college football and LPGA golf (the girls are much nicer than the guys, as well as being fiendishly good putters). Lately I’ve reverted back to my younger years and have taken up building plastic model aircraft and ships (when I can find the time).
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January 2, 2017
What If Elizabeth Bennet Is Ill When Mr. Darcy Proposes?
Elizabeth Bennet prides herself on her robust constitution and ability to never succumb to illness. But while visiting her friend Charlotte, the unthinkable happens and Lizzy finds herself feeling most unwell. Instead of staying in bed and calling for the apothecary, Lizzy ventures downstairs and receives a visit from a concerned and solicitous Mr. Darcy who anxiously seizes the opportunity to propose marriage. Feeling feverish, foggy, and weak Lizzy doesn’t exactly have her wits together and her absent-minded nod to his query is taken as acceptance! Elizabeth knows she must find a way to undo this massive misunderstanding. But is it already too late…?
I loved the opening premise for this story! Lizzy was quite adamant about not being ill and she certainly paid the price for her stubbornness! Mr. Darcy was adorable with his elation and eagerness to proceed with his engagement. Before Lizzy breaks free from her forced bedrest he has already been to Longbourn, received consent from Mr. Bennet, and met Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner in London. This Mr. Darcy is quick to banish his prejudice and easily welcomes encounters with Elizabeth’s family. And since Lizzy has no knowledge or Mr. Darcy’s interference between Jane and Bingley and did not receive an insulting and prideful proposal, her dislike for Mr. Darcy quickly dissipates as she resigns herself to this unexpected yet not completely intolerable situation.
With such a colossal misunderstanding and secret, I was expecting to see a turbulent relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth full of conflict. After all, Elizabeth was quite intense with her dislike, and Mr. Darcy’s officious nature and selfish manners were never brought to his attention. But this story surprisingly went in a different direction! Instead of angst and trials between Darcy and Elizabeth, this variation highlights several secondary characters and illustrates how their lives are changed by Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s engagement!
I really enjoyed the secondary characters in this tale and seeing the unique directions the author decided to take them. The characters that receive the most attention are Jane Bennet, Caroline Bingley, Colonel Fitzwilliam, George Wickham, and one new character – Captain George Fitzwilliam of His Majesty’s navy, who is one of Colonel Fitzwilliam’s older brothers. I thought Mr. Odom did a fantastic job of fleshing out these characters and inventing some unique twists to their stories. It will surprise many readers to see some characters so altered, but I found the alterations to be plausible and gratifying – even Wickham’s and Caroline’s! I was most intrigued by George Fitzwilliam and his unpolished manners and decisive actions. I wish we saw more of him and his bride in the latter half of the book like we did the other characters!
As you might guess from this review, this variation has quite a bit going on as we follow several characters’ and their storylines. In addition to the romantic and personal affairs of these characters, Mr. Odom seamlessly weaves in some action and details of the Peninsular War. Since many of the secondary characters were military men, I greatly appreciated seeing a bit of the military action through their eyes! With so many story-lines to switch back and forth from, I did occasionally find some narratives to be a little on lengthy side. And sometimes the internal monologues would slow down the pace just a little too much for my taste. I much preferred the action and dialogue sequences.
The big secret in Pride, Prejudice and Secrets is that this story is so much more than a Darcy-and-Elizabeth-centered misunderstanding! This all-encompassing tale includes several romances, surprising redemptions, engaging secondary characters, and stirring historical details. Well done, Mr. Odom, I hope we some more from you soon!
Note: Due to some references of intimate scenes, I’d recommend this book for PG-13 audiences.
Austenesque Reviews
Elizabeth Bennet prides herself on her robust constitution and ability to never succumb to illness. But while visiting her friend Charlotte, the unthinkable happens and Lizzy finds herself feeling most unwell. Instead of staying in bed and calling for the apothecary, Lizzy ventures downstairs and receives a visit from a concerned and solicitous Mr. Darcy who anxiously seizes the opportunity to propose marriage. Feeling feverish, foggy, and weak Lizzy doesn’t exactly have her wits together and her absent-minded nod to his query is taken as acceptance! Elizabeth knows she must find a way to undo this massive misunderstanding. But is it already too late…?
I loved the opening premise for this story! Lizzy was quite adamant about not being ill and she certainly paid the price for her stubbornness! Mr. Darcy was adorable with his elation and eagerness to proceed with his engagement. Before Lizzy breaks free from her forced bedrest he has already been to Longbourn, received consent from Mr. Bennet, and met Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner in London. This Mr. Darcy is quick to banish his prejudice and easily welcomes encounters with Elizabeth’s family. And since Lizzy has no knowledge or Mr. Darcy’s interference between Jane and Bingley and did not receive an insulting and prideful proposal, her dislike for Mr. Darcy quickly dissipates as she resigns herself to this unexpected yet not completely intolerable situation.
With such a colossal misunderstanding and secret, I was expecting to see a turbulent relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth full of conflict. After all, Elizabeth was quite intense with her dislike, and Mr. Darcy’s officious nature and selfish manners were never brought to his attention. But this story surprisingly went in a different direction! Instead of angst and trials between Darcy and Elizabeth, this variation highlights several secondary characters and illustrates how their lives are changed by Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s engagement!
I really enjoyed the secondary characters in this tale and seeing the unique directions the author decided to take them. The characters that receive the most attention are Jane Bennet, Caroline Bingley, Colonel Fitzwilliam, George Wickham, and one new character – Captain George Fitzwilliam of His Majesty’s navy, who is one of Colonel Fitzwilliam’s older brothers. I thought Mr. Odom did a fantastic job of fleshing out these characters and inventing some unique twists to their stories. It will surprise many readers to see some characters so altered, but I found the alterations to be plausible and gratifying – even Wickham’s and Caroline’s! I was most intrigued by George Fitzwilliam and his unpolished manners and decisive actions. I wish we saw more of him and his bride in the latter half of the book like we did the other characters!
As you might guess from this review, this variation has quite a bit going on as we follow several characters’ and their storylines. In addition to the romantic and personal affairs of these characters, Mr. Odom seamlessly weaves in some action and details of the Peninsular War. Since many of the secondary characters were military men, I greatly appreciated seeing a bit of the military action through their eyes! With so many story-lines to switch back and forth from, I did occasionally find some narratives to be a little on lengthy side. And sometimes the internal monologues would slow down the pace just a little too much for my taste. I much preferred the action and dialogue sequences.
The big secret in Pride, Prejudice and Secrets is that this story is so much more than a Darcy-and-Elizabeth-centered misunderstanding! This all-encompassing tale includes several romances, surprising redemptions, engaging secondary characters, and stirring historical details. Well done, Mr. Odom, I hope we some more from you soon!
Note: Due to some references of intimate scenes, I’d recommend this book for PG-13 audiences.
Austenesque Reviews
January 8, 2015
What if instead of getting the chance to declare in ringing tones that Fitzwilliam Darcy was the last man in the world she would consent to marry, Elizabeth Bennet was so ill from fever that her distracted response was taken as a yes and she was now engaged to a man she despised?
Yep, that is the basis of this new engaging story. Talk about enemies to loves trope, right? In the Regency Era, engagements were taken seriously much in the way of a formal contract and it was your honor, your reputation and your family's position in society along and the community along with that of the other party tat was at stake when one broke such a contract.
While dealing with a severe illness, Elizabeth first sets out angrily determined to sort it out with a sound refusal until caution forces her to let it play out. Darcy is blind to Elizabeth's less than enthusiastic response and behavior as he experiences love and determination to have his Elizabeth even if it must mean going against the most powerful members of his family and upper class society expectations. A cooler head prevails as Elizabeth thinks through her new tough situation and starts to see things aren't adding up about what she allowed herself to believe about the enigmatic, silent man who has declared his love for her. Is he the proud, arrogant, selfish and cold man or is he the caring, loyal, dutiful, shy, sometimes arrogant companion or maybe a bit of both? She is confronted with the evidence of her own eyes and experience that her first impressions about the man she detested might not have been accurate and others might have been right all along. The rest of the book tells how they begin again on shaky ground and build something new with the secrets from their pasts shadowing them. They observe and interact with family members, friends and even enemies living out their lives both at home and abroad.
It was a wholly encompassing story in that Darcy and Lizzy's story isn't told in isolation, but is nested amongst the story of several connected members of their extended friends and family group. There are multiple points of view and multiple story threads that weren't tough to follow, but I confess that some were more of interest than others. Let's just say that everyone gets more of a story and I mean everyone. It was like getting a set of stories all smooshed up into one that may be great or not so great depending on how you feel about the particular characters in question or how much extra detail away from the main plot interests you. I was fine with it being a nosy, curious sort, but I did feel the bulky quality of this story while in the middle. It was full of so many things since it went off in several directions. I wasn't expecting all that, but I was heartily happy for it nonetheless. The big impression for me is that there is just more all around of all the things I enjoy- story, characters, background.
There was one feature in the storytelling style that while it gave great insight, it was also distracting. There are bits of character monologue from whichever character is telling the story. It's in italic font so its obvious what it is, but its just the nature of it being there with the dialogue and actions that make it too much for me to concentrate on the story. It was particularly hard when in the beginning Elizabeth was having a whole conversation in her head each time she heard or did something. Darcy says something so off she goes into a long think, but oh yes, where were we? I'll take responsibility that maybe this little niggle is just me being distractable, but with all else going on (other storylines and POVs) it was a bit much for me. It added to my understanding of what all went into their thinking behind the words and actions, but didn't really forward the story.
The historical background is definitely well researched from the details of Regency daily life to the climate of society to the time period of a country at war. I love all that. It was there, but it didn't dominate over the plot. The war scenes were a good balance to show the reality, but softened since it is part of a romance story. The usual settings were well represented too in balls, family parties, London and country activities, but they were all driven by the characters and not just boring descriptive actions to fill things in.
I will also say that for those familiar with the original P&P story this one does some strong deviating when it came to the direction of the characters' lives and situations. It delved into motive more and allowed the reader to get to know so many more characters better through the additional plot threads and POVs. People can change and grow and people can be more than they seemed while others were exactly what they seemed. Without spoiling things which I would if I went into detail of explanation about that statement, I'll just say that I love where this story went for several minor characters that were not so minor as a result. The big surprise was original character Captain George Fitzwilliam the older, middle brother to Colonel Fitzwilliam. I loved his rugged, rough and piercingly honest personality particularly when he went up against the sly wit of Mr. Bennet. Delightful scene that left Mr. Bennet speechless with his shock and awe technique. I think he'll give even heart-stopping hero, Darcy, a run for his money with readers.
An extra feature that I found a nice bonus was the author putting out a Q&A about the book giving extra insight that I found informative and enriching to the reading experience.
All in all, I found it slow, but satisfying. Fans of Austeneque will definitely want to pick this up. Lovers of sweet historical romance with a large cast of characters, character-driven plotting and bonus romances included should give it a try too.
My thanks to the author and Meryton Press for the opportunity to read this one in exchange for an honest review.
Yep, that is the basis of this new engaging story. Talk about enemies to loves trope, right? In the Regency Era, engagements were taken seriously much in the way of a formal contract and it was your honor, your reputation and your family's position in society along and the community along with that of the other party tat was at stake when one broke such a contract.
While dealing with a severe illness, Elizabeth first sets out angrily determined to sort it out with a sound refusal until caution forces her to let it play out. Darcy is blind to Elizabeth's less than enthusiastic response and behavior as he experiences love and determination to have his Elizabeth even if it must mean going against the most powerful members of his family and upper class society expectations. A cooler head prevails as Elizabeth thinks through her new tough situation and starts to see things aren't adding up about what she allowed herself to believe about the enigmatic, silent man who has declared his love for her. Is he the proud, arrogant, selfish and cold man or is he the caring, loyal, dutiful, shy, sometimes arrogant companion or maybe a bit of both? She is confronted with the evidence of her own eyes and experience that her first impressions about the man she detested might not have been accurate and others might have been right all along. The rest of the book tells how they begin again on shaky ground and build something new with the secrets from their pasts shadowing them. They observe and interact with family members, friends and even enemies living out their lives both at home and abroad.
It was a wholly encompassing story in that Darcy and Lizzy's story isn't told in isolation, but is nested amongst the story of several connected members of their extended friends and family group. There are multiple points of view and multiple story threads that weren't tough to follow, but I confess that some were more of interest than others. Let's just say that everyone gets more of a story and I mean everyone. It was like getting a set of stories all smooshed up into one that may be great or not so great depending on how you feel about the particular characters in question or how much extra detail away from the main plot interests you. I was fine with it being a nosy, curious sort, but I did feel the bulky quality of this story while in the middle. It was full of so many things since it went off in several directions. I wasn't expecting all that, but I was heartily happy for it nonetheless. The big impression for me is that there is just more all around of all the things I enjoy- story, characters, background.
There was one feature in the storytelling style that while it gave great insight, it was also distracting. There are bits of character monologue from whichever character is telling the story. It's in italic font so its obvious what it is, but its just the nature of it being there with the dialogue and actions that make it too much for me to concentrate on the story. It was particularly hard when in the beginning Elizabeth was having a whole conversation in her head each time she heard or did something. Darcy says something so off she goes into a long think, but oh yes, where were we? I'll take responsibility that maybe this little niggle is just me being distractable, but with all else going on (other storylines and POVs) it was a bit much for me. It added to my understanding of what all went into their thinking behind the words and actions, but didn't really forward the story.
The historical background is definitely well researched from the details of Regency daily life to the climate of society to the time period of a country at war. I love all that. It was there, but it didn't dominate over the plot. The war scenes were a good balance to show the reality, but softened since it is part of a romance story. The usual settings were well represented too in balls, family parties, London and country activities, but they were all driven by the characters and not just boring descriptive actions to fill things in.
I will also say that for those familiar with the original P&P story this one does some strong deviating when it came to the direction of the characters' lives and situations. It delved into motive more and allowed the reader to get to know so many more characters better through the additional plot threads and POVs. People can change and grow and people can be more than they seemed while others were exactly what they seemed. Without spoiling things which I would if I went into detail of explanation about that statement, I'll just say that I love where this story went for several minor characters that were not so minor as a result. The big surprise was original character Captain George Fitzwilliam the older, middle brother to Colonel Fitzwilliam. I loved his rugged, rough and piercingly honest personality particularly when he went up against the sly wit of Mr. Bennet. Delightful scene that left Mr. Bennet speechless with his shock and awe technique. I think he'll give even heart-stopping hero, Darcy, a run for his money with readers.
An extra feature that I found a nice bonus was the author putting out a Q&A about the book giving extra insight that I found informative and enriching to the reading experience.
All in all, I found it slow, but satisfying. Fans of Austeneque will definitely want to pick this up. Lovers of sweet historical romance with a large cast of characters, character-driven plotting and bonus romances included should give it a try too.
My thanks to the author and Meryton Press for the opportunity to read this one in exchange for an honest review.
June 23, 2018
First: this book was a kindle loan. I have only recently read this author's books through several of these loans, although his books have been on my Wish List. He is a new favorite.
This book is an epic tale in how many life stories are related and in the length of time covered, in squashing several life stories into one book. And Mr. Odom does it with a big red bow. It also is surprising as it includes stories of the redemption of three of Jane Austen's most despised characters. Two of these are ones who are just annoying but in canon are swept aside as their actions are recognized for what they are and handled as they should be. The other is one I never expected to be reformed in any variation. Indeed, I remember cheering at his demise in one or two of those. But his transformation is not voluntary as is that of the other two characters. A "Godfather" type character appears and more or less puts the fear of God into this villain. I did so like how the author brought this man's change to a 180° turnabout by the end of the many years covered herein.
I also have to add that in our Caroline's considering the advice of a well-worded set down and her subsequent actions in the months that followed, I actually had tears. (But I do cry easily.) She did have Mrs. Hurst reinforcing the words of that judgment and wisely pointing out to her the fate of her present course of action.
Mr. Collins - you did your wife and your cousin proud. I held my breath to see if your esteemed patroness would, indeed, bring her wrath onto your head as the story progressed.
And those secrets in the title – I remember a “Dear Abby” column that stated one did not need to share every bit of information with one’s spouse and/or partner: things from the time before a couple met, things that had nothing to do with their relationship, and/or information that would only hurt, unnecessarily, the other person. So Darcy and Elizabeth have some matters in their past but would disclosing information or even opinions and feelings about those matters bring their union forward? The old cliché of “letting sleeping dogs lay” might be appropriate in the circumstances set forth in this part of the story.
The inclusion of quotes or poetry at the beginning of each chapter along with the dates and settings helped in orienting this reader in this many faceted tale. There are many things going on in many places: the Iberian Peninsula, Bermuda and those parts of Britain with which we are already acquainted. And the young lady sailing off to Bermuda - last person I would have guessed to make such a life changing decision. Mr. Odom, you do have some twists here, which are well explained. We might resist your choosing to turn this person's destiny in another direction but you do lay the ground work well.
I also found the Question and Answers at the end very informative, especially as I have only a vague knowledge of world affairs in the time period. The realities of war were real without being nauseatingly pictured.
I especially liked the long look into the future of all those we love in P&P: Mr. and Mrs. Bennet, Lord and Lady (“My bedroom door is closed to you…”) Matlock, Lady Catherine, Anne, Charlotte & Mr. Collins, the Bingleys, the Bennet sisters, Aunt and Uncle Gardiner, Wickham and Mary King. And we meet a few new ones: Richard Fitzwilliam’s older (and the middle) brother, George, shows up in a significant way as does the Godfather type figure I mentioned earlier.
For me this was another page turner which I read over the course of two days. This is one I highly recommend but be prepared here for “the road not taken” in most variations.
This book is an epic tale in how many life stories are related and in the length of time covered, in squashing several life stories into one book. And Mr. Odom does it with a big red bow. It also is surprising as it includes stories of the redemption of three of Jane Austen's most despised characters. Two of these are ones who are just annoying but in canon are swept aside as their actions are recognized for what they are and handled as they should be. The other is one I never expected to be reformed in any variation. Indeed, I remember cheering at his demise in one or two of those. But his transformation is not voluntary as is that of the other two characters. A "Godfather" type character appears and more or less puts the fear of God into this villain. I did so like how the author brought this man's change to a 180° turnabout by the end of the many years covered herein.
I also have to add that in our Caroline's considering the advice of a well-worded set down and her subsequent actions in the months that followed, I actually had tears. (But I do cry easily.) She did have Mrs. Hurst reinforcing the words of that judgment and wisely pointing out to her the fate of her present course of action.
Mr. Collins - you did your wife and your cousin proud. I held my breath to see if your esteemed patroness would, indeed, bring her wrath onto your head as the story progressed.
And those secrets in the title – I remember a “Dear Abby” column that stated one did not need to share every bit of information with one’s spouse and/or partner: things from the time before a couple met, things that had nothing to do with their relationship, and/or information that would only hurt, unnecessarily, the other person. So Darcy and Elizabeth have some matters in their past but would disclosing information or even opinions and feelings about those matters bring their union forward? The old cliché of “letting sleeping dogs lay” might be appropriate in the circumstances set forth in this part of the story.
The inclusion of quotes or poetry at the beginning of each chapter along with the dates and settings helped in orienting this reader in this many faceted tale. There are many things going on in many places: the Iberian Peninsula, Bermuda and those parts of Britain with which we are already acquainted. And the young lady sailing off to Bermuda - last person I would have guessed to make such a life changing decision. Mr. Odom, you do have some twists here, which are well explained. We might resist your choosing to turn this person's destiny in another direction but you do lay the ground work well.
I also found the Question and Answers at the end very informative, especially as I have only a vague knowledge of world affairs in the time period. The realities of war were real without being nauseatingly pictured.
I especially liked the long look into the future of all those we love in P&P: Mr. and Mrs. Bennet, Lord and Lady (“My bedroom door is closed to you…”) Matlock, Lady Catherine, Anne, Charlotte & Mr. Collins, the Bingleys, the Bennet sisters, Aunt and Uncle Gardiner, Wickham and Mary King. And we meet a few new ones: Richard Fitzwilliam’s older (and the middle) brother, George, shows up in a significant way as does the Godfather type figure I mentioned earlier.
For me this was another page turner which I read over the course of two days. This is one I highly recommend but be prepared here for “the road not taken” in most variations.
July 17, 2016
I absolutely adored this P&P Alternative time line; what if. The characters are believable and the story is original. There are several what-ifs that occur quickly and impact the story
What if #1
What if Lizzy Bennet was almost never ill; so if she awakens one morning in Hunsford feeling out of sorts... would she dress and insist that she fine?
What if #2 And what if while she is rather addled and ill Mr. Darcy comes to call and manages to propose politely? And she nods and poof she's engaged to Mr. Darcy.
What if #3. No bad proposal, no refusal, no fight, no letter, no defending Wickham, no hearing that Jane was disinterested.
Instead Darcy leaves for Meryton and Lizzy slowly recovers in Hunsford. Lizzy reaches an acceptance of the situation, and Darcy. They return to Longbourn and her father announces her engagement.
There are plenty of surprises and shocks in this volume but none for ODC.
What if #1
What if Lizzy Bennet was almost never ill; so if she awakens one morning in Hunsford feeling out of sorts... would she dress and insist that she fine?
What if #2 And what if while she is rather addled and ill Mr. Darcy comes to call and manages to propose politely? And she nods and poof she's engaged to Mr. Darcy.
What if #3. No bad proposal, no refusal, no fight, no letter, no defending Wickham, no hearing that Jane was disinterested.
Instead Darcy leaves for Meryton and Lizzy slowly recovers in Hunsford. Lizzy reaches an acceptance of the situation, and Darcy. They return to Longbourn and her father announces her engagement.
There are plenty of surprises and shocks in this volume but none for ODC.
April 21, 2024
I Quite Liked it
I really enjoy reading this author. He really knows how to change up the story and always surprises me. This is the last of three variations I’ve read that he’s written (of which I am aware), so I hope he writes more.
I liked how Elizabeth decides to leave the issues that particularly annoyed her behind, like questioning Darcy about Wickham and Bingley’s departure from Netherfield at Darcy’s partial hand. I also enjoyed the new Fitzwilliam brother. The biggest surprises come with Mr. Collins and Wickham. Both those outcomes quite pleased me.
After reading two other of his books, I was looking for a bit more dialogue, which I felt this one provided, but I do love a good dialogue and hope future writings will include more. A few proofreading errors in this one, but they weren’t major.
Mature content.
I didn’t enjoy this narration very much. There is not much expression in the monotone performance. I had to push my way through it. I did enjoy the previously-read book.
I really enjoy reading this author. He really knows how to change up the story and always surprises me. This is the last of three variations I’ve read that he’s written (of which I am aware), so I hope he writes more.
I liked how Elizabeth decides to leave the issues that particularly annoyed her behind, like questioning Darcy about Wickham and Bingley’s departure from Netherfield at Darcy’s partial hand. I also enjoyed the new Fitzwilliam brother. The biggest surprises come with Mr. Collins and Wickham. Both those outcomes quite pleased me.
After reading two other of his books, I was looking for a bit more dialogue, which I felt this one provided, but I do love a good dialogue and hope future writings will include more. A few proofreading errors in this one, but they weren’t major.
Mature content.
I didn’t enjoy this narration very much. There is not much expression in the monotone performance. I had to push my way through it. I did enjoy the previously-read book.
August 3, 2021
More drawn-out fluff than a structured story.
Synopsis:
Lizzy is genuinely indisposed with a flu while at Hunsford but proud, obstinate girl she is, refuses to concede to any physical weakness. When Mr Darcy comes to make his proposal he can plainly see she is unwell and thus keeps it to the point, serendipitously circumventing insulting her and unwittingly adding any fodder to the flame of her grievances.
Lizzy, out of it, nods in acknowledgement only to understanding him and Darcy takes it- as anyone would- as her acquiescence. Had she accepted her limitation and stayed in bed she would have been spared the accidental engagement- so I found this a very clever alternative snare of Lizzy's own proud doing.
Now Lizzy must find a way out of it without tanking her reputation and before Darcy seals the engagement by making it common knowledge.
When Georgiana is introduced to Lizzy she shocks her out of her 'Darcy Prejudice' when she throws her arms around her, weeping in relief that her brother found someone to care for him. Lizzy seeing Wickham's claim of a proud girl is patently false, now doubts all his words and has to build a new opinion of Mr Darcy from scratch.
Some other notable variations are thrown in that spice up the lot, for one Col Fitz is a third son, and the second Fitzwilliam brother, George, is a captain in the navy who has recently received a sizable prize 100.000 pounds due to his work. He becomes romantically interested in a Bennet sister.
What Worked:
♡This is a premise I have oft wanted to explore and never had encounter in JAFF before, so finding it was thrilling; what if Lizzy truly was unwell?
♡Odom includes mentions in certain conversations of the political current events of the time & it adds to the immersion of the setting as well as affording some authenticity to the dialogue.
♡
♡The Georgiana moment that worked as the catalyst to Lizzy realizing she had Darcy wrong. I felt the emotions were well conveyed in that particular scene; I was touched by the exchange, and endeared by dear Georgie.
♡Wickham celebrates too early after succeeding in an elopement and gets more than he bargained for, which never fails to be cathartic.
Though the whole episode takes up too much page time, for what is at the best a loose end, without relevance to the central story.
What Irked:
✗There is no emotion or tension with ODC. Their courtship and interactions are painted with a broad brush and are fairly pulseless, which leaves much to be desired for those who read craving a tangibility to ODC- at least for me that is the crux I look for in my JAFF.
✗Too much reflection and rehashing of events & we get these inner thought bulky paragraphs that just disrupt the flow leaving one impatient for it to get back on track.
✗The other side couples receive far too much page time and ODC become background characters for periods of time. If the story was a person, it couldn't walk and chew gum at the same time; given the 'walk' was following ODC and their journey, and 'gum' was juggling another side plot; every time a different conflict/ side character thread comes up you can expect not to hear much from Darcy or Lizzy- beyond their commenting on the introduced development- for the chapters that particular sub plot absorbs the stage.
I have enjoyed side couples in JAFF, like in a Linda Wells or a Darcie Rochester, but the key is that those characters were 'jump off the page' interesting, and I did not mind in the slightest siphoning off some of the page time on them, but here everyone is quite staid.
Indeed it gets to the point that Darcy is so bored with his courtship, he becomes a matchmaking matron- not kidding! He is actively interested in pairing his cousin with Jane, and then even more invested in Miss Bingley and Col Fitz- which to put it delicately is redonculous!
I actually threw in the towel and quit the book when it got to Darcy's engagement dinner and he has nothing but eyes for Caroline & Richard instead of his soon to be bride!
That does not bode well! I am all for Miss Bingley having more to her beyond being a one-dimensional instrument of antagonism and being paired off with the Colonel- that's one thing- but that is not this! This is Darcy shipping his bizarre OTP and orchestrating their courtship.
I can't conceive why Darcy would want to play cupid, he is a grown ass landowner who has just landed his dream wife, you'd think his plate would be full. And he clearly thinks poorly of Caro in this version and he likes his cousin, so it's not like a brilliant underhanded form of vengeance hoisting a conniving wife on the Colonel - which would have been a viable venue to spice up this yarn. Beyond that, why he would think the son of an earl and the daughter of a tradesman were a suitable match eludes me, especially for a Darcy who was never confronted or chastised by Lizzy for his pride.
Instead of 'Pride & Prejudice & Secrets,' I humbly submit it should be more appropriately retitled as 'P&P & Wedding Planning,' since I got up to 70% and I could not ferret out what this supposed 'secret' that lured me in could be in reference to, but the brunt of the story gives inordinate focus to wedding arrangements & matchmaking.
The Brass Tacks:
It is one of those books I was rooting to like- desperately so- as I find myself in a bit of a JAFF rut and likely due to that I clung on longer then my patience is wont to permit, but it was not to be. Truly, there were those instances that elucidated this author genuinely likes JAFF and that always translates on page and endears me. It isn't necessarily badly written in terms of dialogue or syntax, but there isn't a point or compelling story, it wants conflict, some depth of character, and a cohesive theme.
Reading this was a hike, but not like a pleasant, 'oh look, a fox!' hike; it was a 'will I ever reach the summit before I bite it in the death zone?' That sounds harsh, but you know when you get so bored you feel physically uncomfortable? That is where I was at.
To drag out the mountaineering analogy, in the death zone you've got to move fast through, and that is what went wrong with the excursion into this story: the author lingered, circled, and deviated in the 'Bored-to-Death Zone details'- Jane and Captain Fitz, Wickham, ODC apart and marriage planning- instead of guiding us somewhere, working up to a summit, building up to a climax.
꙳ Spice Scale rating: Bell Pepper Chaste 🌶 /5 ꙳
May 30, 2016
I enjoyed this book a great deal, despite its faults, so this is 3.5 stars rounded up to 4. I liked that Darcy and Elizabeth's engagement was neither compromise nor forced necessity (I like those, too, but it's always nice to see something different). I liked how all of the people who knew about it piled up around Elizabeth, forcing her to think seriously about it and not break off the engagement on a knee-jerk reaction. It was also interesting to see Elizabeth deal with the Wickham situation in a mature fashion. However, both of those circumstances meant that there was almost no conflict whatsoever in the story. I had fun along the ride, but it probably could have been a 5-star book if the characters had had to work at anything to find happiness.
I also would have preferred if things had focused solely on Darcy and Elizabeth, because most of the secondary plots were wholly unconnected with the main story (other than being about characters we know) and could easily have been deleted without affecting anything. The epilogue, too, did that thing I hate where it chronicled the next multitude of years for every character.
But again, I did really enjoy the story, and especially seeing how Elizabeth came around to Darcy in a rational, sensible way. Not the most exciting story--I definitely can't call it gripping--but quietly entertaining.
I also would have preferred if things had focused solely on Darcy and Elizabeth, because most of the secondary plots were wholly unconnected with the main story (other than being about characters we know) and could easily have been deleted without affecting anything. The epilogue, too, did that thing I hate where it chronicled the next multitude of years for every character.
But again, I did really enjoy the story, and especially seeing how Elizabeth came around to Darcy in a rational, sensible way. Not the most exciting story--I definitely can't call it gripping--but quietly entertaining.
September 9, 2020
I tend to like this author, but I don't think I liked this book. There is something tongue in cheek and contrived about this not so canon story.
There was something almost modern about much of the dialog, especially where the topic of intimacy came up.
It is a cute story, just not a great one.
There was something almost modern about much of the dialog, especially where the topic of intimacy came up.
It is a cute story, just not a great one.
July 2, 2018
The development of ODC's relationship was the highlight of this book. No dramatic events but rather getting to know one another through observation and experience.
Elizabeth fell ill at the parsonage in Hunsford, not used to being ill, she denies the fact vehemently.
A worried Darcy believed Elizabeth's conformations that she was well and proposed. Accepting her silent nod as a yes. Elizabeth, however, was feeling rather poorly and swooned in the next moment. Confined in her bed for days, the reality of her predicament, hit hard when she was finally recuperating. To end the engagement proved more difficult than predicted and the repercussions would be dire...
Loved how they came to a better understanding in an understated way. It was very cleverly done.
The story followed several of the other Austen characters in addition to a couple of new ones.
The additions was the Colonel's two older brothers, particularly liked the second son.
Jane and Bingley had their HEA although not together. Really liked the twist to their story.
The Wickham debacle was another twist to canon that I thoroughly enjoyed. Odom ventured off canon early on and made a respectable man of the scoundrel.
Even the usually unpalatable miss Bingley was redeemed in this book although kicking and screaming while it happened.
Ends in an satisfying epilogue of all the characters later years and a wrap up of the secrets...
Recommend.
Elizabeth fell ill at the parsonage in Hunsford, not used to being ill, she denies the fact vehemently.
A worried Darcy believed Elizabeth's conformations that she was well and proposed. Accepting her silent nod as a yes. Elizabeth, however, was feeling rather poorly and swooned in the next moment. Confined in her bed for days, the reality of her predicament, hit hard when she was finally recuperating. To end the engagement proved more difficult than predicted and the repercussions would be dire...
Loved how they came to a better understanding in an understated way. It was very cleverly done.
The story followed several of the other Austen characters in addition to a couple of new ones.
The additions was the Colonel's two older brothers, particularly liked the second son.
Jane and Bingley had their HEA although not together. Really liked the twist to their story.
The Wickham debacle was another twist to canon that I thoroughly enjoyed. Odom ventured off canon early on and made a respectable man of the scoundrel.
Even the usually unpalatable miss Bingley was redeemed in this book although kicking and screaming while it happened.
Ends in an satisfying epilogue of all the characters later years and a wrap up of the secrets...
Recommend.
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November 19, 2022
Good book
I liked this book happy endings for everyone. Caroline marries well, Bingley married well, Jane Bennett married well. Of course Lydia always the same foolish girl.
I liked this book happy endings for everyone. Caroline marries well, Bingley married well, Jane Bennett married well. Of course Lydia always the same foolish girl.
January 27, 2015
Well thought out variation
Elizabeth becomes ill which changes how she receives Darcy's proposal. She's so woozy that she can barely take in what he is saying so she simply nods as people do when listening. But Darcy takes it as a yes and tells all and sundry about their engagement, thus trapping Elizabeth in an engagement she doesn't want. However, she determines to make the best of it. In addition, we see some very interesting variations for Jane, Wickham and Miss Bingley. I loved it. One of the best.
Elizabeth becomes ill which changes how she receives Darcy's proposal. She's so woozy that she can barely take in what he is saying so she simply nods as people do when listening. But Darcy takes it as a yes and tells all and sundry about their engagement, thus trapping Elizabeth in an engagement she doesn't want. However, she determines to make the best of it. In addition, we see some very interesting variations for Jane, Wickham and Miss Bingley. I loved it. One of the best.
February 14, 2015
My god this was boring.
February 6, 2017
Enjoyed this book and the twists within the premise.
July 1, 2023
Spiders web
I think Spider’s Web would have been a better title since the predicament Lizzie finds herself in is described that way.
At the parsonage Lizzie becomes ill with a high fever. So when Darcy comes to propose to her, her thinking is cloudy and accidentally nods a yes while he is proposing.
So this is an accidentally betrothed story. 😀 Not many of those around. Very entertaining story which I’ve read 3 times in the last few years. I recommend the story highly.
I think Spider’s Web would have been a better title since the predicament Lizzie finds herself in is described that way.
At the parsonage Lizzie becomes ill with a high fever. So when Darcy comes to propose to her, her thinking is cloudy and accidentally nods a yes while he is proposing.
So this is an accidentally betrothed story. 😀 Not many of those around. Very entertaining story which I’ve read 3 times in the last few years. I recommend the story highly.
January 28, 2015
Loved it. Great Wickham and Jane story lines. Well written and entertaining.
October 5, 2015
2.5 Stars
June 19, 2022
Elizabeth is ill for real that night in Hunsford, and consequently Darcy's proposal is rather brief and Elizabeth accidentally accepts, hardly knowing what he asked. Initially she contemplates breaking off the engagement but Darcy has promptly informed everyone and it would be a scandal. As she gets to know him better she finds out she is fond of him after all. Their relationship has very little conflict. The book title mentions secrets but nobody is harboring any huge secrets as far as I can tell. It's only that Darcy's proposal wasn't quite so brutally honest about his disgust of the Bennet family, Elizabeth asks no questions about Wickham, and Darcy never finds out that she didn't like him when they got engaged.
From the wedding onwards the book meanders into several side stories. Jane finds her true love, the war makes a man out of George Wickham, Caroline Bingley finds redemption.
I enjoyed the writing style and the general feel of the story but some extra threads might have been cut to make it tighter.
From the wedding onwards the book meanders into several side stories. Jane finds her true love, the war makes a man out of George Wickham, Caroline Bingley finds redemption.
I enjoyed the writing style and the general feel of the story but some extra threads might have been cut to make it tighter.
February 24, 2015
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Last year I had the pleasure of being introduced to Jane Austen fan fiction author C. P. Odom via his novel Consequences. His writing invoked deep feelings, as he was able to draw me in completely to his story. He had me fully enveloped in his characters and their lives, which resulted in Consequences being one of my favorite reads of 2014. When I heard about his latest “what-if” novel, Pride, Prejudice and Secrets, I immediately began searching for a way to receive a review copy.
Secrets tells the tale of our beloved Lizzie and Darcy in Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, although it’s Elizabeth now instead of Jane who falls ill in an untimely manner. Darcy has just worked up the courage to deliver an ill-conceived and prideful offer of marriage, and Elizabeth, still in a haze and unsteady from sickness, accepts his offer. When she fully recovers from her ailments, however, she is mortified to learn that she is betrothed to “the last man in the world whom I could ever be prevailed on to marry.” Not only this, but all of society has become accustomed to the prospect, so for her to break off said engagement would be the equivalent of social banishment, not to mention the effect it would have on her unmarried sisters. How, then, is she to avoid this unfortunate misunderstanding and escape with her and Darcy’s pride unharmed? She has to use every ounce of her sharp wit and captivating personality to pull off this accomplishment. Will she be forced to remain with Darcy or will she be able to extract herself with her reputation intact?
For those of you who have read Consequences, let me forewarn you that this particular work is not as dark as I had imagined that all of Odom’s works might be. I had prepared myself to be emotionally devastated again, and interestingly enough this work did not go as deep emotionally, which may make it better suited for a first-time reader of Odom.
Just as in Consequences, Odom was able to tap in to this deep well of emotion and make me care about the plights of the characters. Elizabeth and Darcy are not the only characters whose stories are re-written. Caroline, Bingley, Jane and Wickham are all given special attentions. The originality showcased in altering the stories of these four characters is testament to Odom’s strong writing style. Much of the book is about Lizzie discovering her own pride and prejudices via an internal monologue, which I found to be an interesting plot device. Rather than figuring this out by sparring with Darcy, she observed the interactions of Darcy with her loved ones and would then reevaluate her former thoughts and assumptions about the man. This was a great way to track Elizabeth’s growth as a character and it definitely kept me hooked throughout.
Odom’s penchant for historical research is well-represented in the story, but most especially in Wickham and Col. Fitzwilliam’s storylines. What could be dry and droll fact regurgitation actually makes for some edge-of-your-seat storytelling. Creative, imaginative, and well-characterized, Odom has a sure hit on his hands with Pride, Prejudice, and Secrets. If you’re already a fan or if you’ve never had the pleasure of reading any of his prior work, do yourself a favor and pick this one up.
Last year I had the pleasure of being introduced to Jane Austen fan fiction author C. P. Odom via his novel Consequences. His writing invoked deep feelings, as he was able to draw me in completely to his story. He had me fully enveloped in his characters and their lives, which resulted in Consequences being one of my favorite reads of 2014. When I heard about his latest “what-if” novel, Pride, Prejudice and Secrets, I immediately began searching for a way to receive a review copy.
Secrets tells the tale of our beloved Lizzie and Darcy in Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, although it’s Elizabeth now instead of Jane who falls ill in an untimely manner. Darcy has just worked up the courage to deliver an ill-conceived and prideful offer of marriage, and Elizabeth, still in a haze and unsteady from sickness, accepts his offer. When she fully recovers from her ailments, however, she is mortified to learn that she is betrothed to “the last man in the world whom I could ever be prevailed on to marry.” Not only this, but all of society has become accustomed to the prospect, so for her to break off said engagement would be the equivalent of social banishment, not to mention the effect it would have on her unmarried sisters. How, then, is she to avoid this unfortunate misunderstanding and escape with her and Darcy’s pride unharmed? She has to use every ounce of her sharp wit and captivating personality to pull off this accomplishment. Will she be forced to remain with Darcy or will she be able to extract herself with her reputation intact?
For those of you who have read Consequences, let me forewarn you that this particular work is not as dark as I had imagined that all of Odom’s works might be. I had prepared myself to be emotionally devastated again, and interestingly enough this work did not go as deep emotionally, which may make it better suited for a first-time reader of Odom.
Just as in Consequences, Odom was able to tap in to this deep well of emotion and make me care about the plights of the characters. Elizabeth and Darcy are not the only characters whose stories are re-written. Caroline, Bingley, Jane and Wickham are all given special attentions. The originality showcased in altering the stories of these four characters is testament to Odom’s strong writing style. Much of the book is about Lizzie discovering her own pride and prejudices via an internal monologue, which I found to be an interesting plot device. Rather than figuring this out by sparring with Darcy, she observed the interactions of Darcy with her loved ones and would then reevaluate her former thoughts and assumptions about the man. This was a great way to track Elizabeth’s growth as a character and it definitely kept me hooked throughout.
Odom’s penchant for historical research is well-represented in the story, but most especially in Wickham and Col. Fitzwilliam’s storylines. What could be dry and droll fact regurgitation actually makes for some edge-of-your-seat storytelling. Creative, imaginative, and well-characterized, Odom has a sure hit on his hands with Pride, Prejudice, and Secrets. If you’re already a fan or if you’ve never had the pleasure of reading any of his prior work, do yourself a favor and pick this one up.
March 24, 2015
I love this novel. I borrowed it from Amazon on my kindle and this is my second time reading it in a week. I just wanted to re experience. The first time I was so engrossed I read into the night and rushed so I wanted to take it slower and enjoy it even more. I'm only on the 6th chapter this time around but so far every main character we are used to has at least been mentioned. I love how this is set up for me personally. The writing is very easy to follow. I love how the dates are included to help us keep perspective and shows us what is happening each day in each locale. The quotes from a variety of sources at the beginning of each chapter lends a small hint of what is to come and are very enjoyable. I love how the italicized parts show what our characters are thinking. It helps to see how they come to their decisions which is vital. Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam is as usual funny, witty, and supportive of darcy. He keeps one laughing. For example in chapter 2 Richard advises Darcy that "best retreats are usually conducted under cover of darkness" in regards to lady Catherine..as well as dueling with the 2 in the a.m. What a funny scene to imagine. Richard also mentions how his mother lady matlock has trained his father in being better socially and to her liking as a marriage mate since his youth. Hysterical. Darcy is well read and forward thinking. He even has a sense of humor. Who would have guessed? Darcy stands up to lady C and his dialogue with mr. Bennet and mr. Gardiner are touching. You can see the man inside. Elizabeth's character and especially while she is ill is described to a tee. My head hurt just reading the description. Charlotte's character is as you would expect to see in a best friend. She knows her friend inside and out and she is a very wise woman. I liked that about Charlotte. The descriptions of carriages, boots on the floor, ornate chairs being uncomfortable are genuine, well described and invaluable. There is just too much good stuff to mention about this novel. I could write pages. Way to go author!
January 25, 2015
I was so excited for this book. I had the pleasure of reading C.P’s Consequences and completley fell in love with his style of writing. The plot of this book is fabulous! Lizzy is so sick, she agrees to marry Darcy with nothing more than a simple nod…So FUNNY!!! And poor Mr. Darcy as happy as can be because he loves her so much!! The twists and turns that follow this disastrous engagement, make for a rather wonderful read. I was engaged from beginning to end!! This variation of “What if” has been different from others I have read. It was a fast, fun, series of unfortunate events that leave our favorite couple in a strange predicament….Do Darcy and Lizzy find their happily ever after in Secrets? You have to read this book to find out!!
Mr. Odom, Please sir, keep them coming!!
This book was brilliant! I could not put it down!
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Mr. Odom, Please sir, keep them coming!!
This book was brilliant! I could not put it down!
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June 1, 2015
This was a solid 4 star book for me. There wasn't really any conflict for the last two thirds of the book but the author still kept it interesting. There were a number of story lines in this book and while they seemed unnecessary they were still enjoyable. I liked seeing how Caroline and Wickham's story played out and I enjoyed the original character Captain Fitzwilliam.
July 16, 2015
A pleasant read, with a believable character's construction and evolution for both protagonists and a setting crafted in an amazing way. I undoubtedly appreciated the historical accuracy and the puntual descriptions of the war, but I think it took to much space, nevertheless I can see how much the author worked on it and the result was commendable.
August 30, 2015
I am not a big fan of this book. I like the pivot point from the original story but there was sooo much unneeded detail about everything else.
May 5, 2019
Wonderful
I have yet to be disappointed by this author, and look forward to the next book. He is a master storyteller who knows how to properly develop every situation and character. The premise of the story, that Elizabeth mistakenly accepts Darcy's offer of marriage at Hunsford parsonage because she is ill and delirious, was immediately entertaining, as events spiral out of control and she has to dig her way out of a hole of her own making. This version of Elizabeth, one who thinks before she speaks or acts, is refreshing. She is not the impetuous and stubborn Lizzy of the original.
In fact, there are many inner dialogues going on, which make us privy to changes in attitude or just development of intentions of the characters. The characters are rational and sensible people, with the exception of Lady Catherine and Lydia. It was easy to develop a deep sympathy and respect for everyone, even some of the more annoying characters. Some of the principal players, including Jane, Caroline, Wickham, and Col. Fitzwilliam, have very different outcomes than the original version, and it's all so we'll done that it feels natural.
It's well written and well edited, a gem of a story. I recommend it highly.
I have yet to be disappointed by this author, and look forward to the next book. He is a master storyteller who knows how to properly develop every situation and character. The premise of the story, that Elizabeth mistakenly accepts Darcy's offer of marriage at Hunsford parsonage because she is ill and delirious, was immediately entertaining, as events spiral out of control and she has to dig her way out of a hole of her own making. This version of Elizabeth, one who thinks before she speaks or acts, is refreshing. She is not the impetuous and stubborn Lizzy of the original.
In fact, there are many inner dialogues going on, which make us privy to changes in attitude or just development of intentions of the characters. The characters are rational and sensible people, with the exception of Lady Catherine and Lydia. It was easy to develop a deep sympathy and respect for everyone, even some of the more annoying characters. Some of the principal players, including Jane, Caroline, Wickham, and Col. Fitzwilliam, have very different outcomes than the original version, and it's all so we'll done that it feels natural.
It's well written and well edited, a gem of a story. I recommend it highly.
July 30, 2022
Although I’m going to complain I did enjoy this variation. There was some humor and the writing was good except for some of my comments.
This was a reread and I deducted one star. I guess I’m getting pickier or meaner take your choice.
There was a lot of modern language which bothers me including: surreal, sweaters, and input.
Lady Catherine can’t revoke the living so all that angst was manufactured.
There were non sequiturs with replies to questions that made no sense.
This was a reread and I deducted one star. I guess I’m getting pickier or meaner take your choice.
There was a lot of modern language which bothers me including: surreal, sweaters, and input.
Lady Catherine can’t revoke the living so all that angst was manufactured.
There were non sequiturs with replies to questions that made no sense.
February 7, 2018
To love someone completely doesn't mean having no secrets. Love needs understanding, as well as respect, which leaves space fore individuality and, sometimes, some secrets that might never be shared. Here, C. P. Odom brought a variation where the main characters weren't as open as we are used to.
Elizabeth never discovered what Wickham did to Georgiana.
William never found out Lizzy actually didn't accept his proposal (cause she was, to be fair, feverish and delirious at the time).
The part William played in separating Jane and Mr. Bingley remained unknown for the rest of their lives.
This was somewhat a new concept for the story, fairly different from what I'm used to reading. I really liked how Lizzy discarded right on the beginning some misconceptions she had from Wickham's babbling (which makes justice for her intelligence and good sense), how she and William constructed and strengthen their bond after his proposal on the Hunsford Parsonage and how she discovered, bit by bit, the true nature of his character.
Another unexpected and most welcoming change from the original was Jane's storyline.
Here, Colonel Richard Fitwilliam is actually the third son of the Earl of Matlock. His brother, George, the second son, was a Captain on the royal Navy ho saved quite the fortune during his twenty years on the sea. A bit of a brute, rustic and "very male", George and Jane were actually quite feat for each other, as two complementary peaces of a puzzle. His decisiveness and her sweet temper worked. I have a bit of a grudge with Bingley leaving Jane so easily on P&P, and always questioned the depth of his feelings - and whether it was love both of them felt for each other. Even if it was love, though, he gave up to easily, he didn't try to change her feelings (like another gentleman we know that doesn't get no for an answer), so when here Jane and Captain George found their HEA, I was quite happy for them!
I never, NEVER (repeating, NEVER ) would've guessed what expected Richard and Caroline - and this is all I'm gonna say about the hole business.
And to talk about unexpected, I couldn't end this review without a comment about our dear "villain on duty": Mr. George Wickham. As Odom himself put:
Elizabeth never discovered what Wickham did to Georgiana.
William never found out Lizzy actually didn't accept his proposal (cause she was, to be fair, feverish and delirious at the time).
The part William played in separating Jane and Mr. Bingley remained unknown for the rest of their lives.
This was somewhat a new concept for the story, fairly different from what I'm used to reading. I really liked how Lizzy discarded right on the beginning some misconceptions she had from Wickham's babbling (which makes justice for her intelligence and good sense), how she and William constructed and strengthen their bond after his proposal on the Hunsford Parsonage and how she discovered, bit by bit, the true nature of his character.
“She looked up at him as they walked, and his face was tight as he spoke. “I have had many responsibilities thrust upon me, and I forced myself to assume them when I wished to do differently. I have done what was expected of me…but I did so in strict isolation that, I fear, is hardening into distant reserve. Everyone, especially young ladies, and most especially those with ambitious mothers, courted and flattered me. I value civility and manners, yet I was sick to death of excessive courtesy and deference. I am not a joyful man, Elizabeth…but your playfulness and liveliness drew me. They gave me hope…that I might not have to be so alone my whole life.”
Another unexpected and most welcoming change from the original was Jane's storyline.
Here, Colonel Richard Fitwilliam is actually the third son of the Earl of Matlock. His brother, George, the second son, was a Captain on the royal Navy ho saved quite the fortune during his twenty years on the sea. A bit of a brute, rustic and "very male", George and Jane were actually quite feat for each other, as two complementary peaces of a puzzle. His decisiveness and her sweet temper worked. I have a bit of a grudge with Bingley leaving Jane so easily on P&P, and always questioned the depth of his feelings - and whether it was love both of them felt for each other. Even if it was love, though, he gave up to easily, he didn't try to change her feelings (like another gentleman we know that doesn't get no for an answer), so when here Jane and Captain George found their HEA, I was quite happy for them!
I never, NEVER (repeating, NEVER ) would've guessed what expected Richard and Caroline - and this is all I'm gonna say about the hole business.
“To quote that esteemed philosopher, Mrs. Thomas Bennet, it is most vexing!”
And to talk about unexpected, I couldn't end this review without a comment about our dear "villain on duty": Mr. George Wickham. As Odom himself put:
“I put Wickham right smack in the middle of some of the most horrific battles of the Napoleonic Wars with the idea that, if it didn’t kill him, it might cure him”
March 19, 2015
I absolutely loved this novel. I loved the differences from the original. As one who has read way too many variations etc this was a breath of fresh air. I felt there was one time when changes in thinking occurred a little too rapidly but overall it was marvelous. I especially loved one of the descriptions of the carriage you could tell a man wrote it... Caroline bingley Whoohoo. Jane Bennet was fascinating. I would tell this author keep up the good work. I actually plan on reading it again in case I missed anything by staying up way too late at night to continue reading.
February 7, 2016
3.5 stars. This is a gentle read without a lot of angst. While dealing mostly with Darcy and Elizabeth's story, it does give an interesting view of what happens to some not so favorite characters like Miss Bingley and Wickham. I would have wished for more sisterly interactions between Jane and Elizabeth. Jane's story is a bit rushed and I would think that Elizabeth would have shared some secrets with her.
February 1, 2015
Nothing happened.
Proof that you need more than a gentle amble through Recency England to have a story. There were no black moments or grey moments or even a stubbed toenail to make readers doubt the happy ever after. Lady Catherine being cranky isn't enough to carry the story especially since her part was over in first third of book.
Proof that you need more than a gentle amble through Recency England to have a story. There were no black moments or grey moments or even a stubbed toenail to make readers doubt the happy ever after. Lady Catherine being cranky isn't enough to carry the story especially since her part was over in first third of book.
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