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Elizabeth Bennet, Author: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Elizabeth Bennet must keep her secret at all costs…especially from Mr Darcy!
After Mr Bennet’s untimely death, Elizabeth finds an unusual solution to her family’s financial woes - writing thrilling Gothic novels! Her debut novel of romance and adventure takes the young ladies of London by storm, but success comes at a cost. If anyone were to discover that the mysterious author Mrs Laurence is actually Elizabeth Bennet, spinster, the resulting scandal would sink her sisters’ frail chances of marriage forever. And when Elizabeth’s second novel is an even bigger success, all London is on fire to discover the author’s secret identity.
Mr Darcy may not understand his sister’s obsession with reading Mrs Laurence’s new novel, but he intends to see to it that Georgiana gets what she wants. When the novel is a smash hit, selling out across London, their quest leads to an unusual new Elizabeth Bennet, a young woman who generously lends her copy to Georgiana.
This Elizabeth Bennet is obviously far below them socially. Though elegant and kind enough to be suitable as a friend to Georgiana, Mr Darcy knows she is far from an eligible match for himself. He knows he must smother the admiration and protectiveness that come over him each time he sees her. He knows he must not forget himself in her enchanting eyes.
But what Mr Darcy doesn’t know could change everything…
Elizabeth Bennet, Author is a story of overcoming loss, finding strength, and rediscovering joy. Readers can expect friendship deepening into love, a gradual overcoming of prejudices, and a great deal of suspense and excitement. Fans of spending time at Pemberley, the Gardiners being wonderful, and Caroline Bingley being dreadful will find much to enjoy here. Happily ever after guaranteed, of course!
After Mr Bennet’s untimely death, Elizabeth finds an unusual solution to her family’s financial woes - writing thrilling Gothic novels! Her debut novel of romance and adventure takes the young ladies of London by storm, but success comes at a cost. If anyone were to discover that the mysterious author Mrs Laurence is actually Elizabeth Bennet, spinster, the resulting scandal would sink her sisters’ frail chances of marriage forever. And when Elizabeth’s second novel is an even bigger success, all London is on fire to discover the author’s secret identity.
Mr Darcy may not understand his sister’s obsession with reading Mrs Laurence’s new novel, but he intends to see to it that Georgiana gets what she wants. When the novel is a smash hit, selling out across London, their quest leads to an unusual new Elizabeth Bennet, a young woman who generously lends her copy to Georgiana.
This Elizabeth Bennet is obviously far below them socially. Though elegant and kind enough to be suitable as a friend to Georgiana, Mr Darcy knows she is far from an eligible match for himself. He knows he must smother the admiration and protectiveness that come over him each time he sees her. He knows he must not forget himself in her enchanting eyes.
But what Mr Darcy doesn’t know could change everything…
Elizabeth Bennet, Author is a story of overcoming loss, finding strength, and rediscovering joy. Readers can expect friendship deepening into love, a gradual overcoming of prejudices, and a great deal of suspense and excitement. Fans of spending time at Pemberley, the Gardiners being wonderful, and Caroline Bingley being dreadful will find much to enjoy here. Happily ever after guaranteed, of course!
437 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 16, 2025
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December 24, 2025
This unique plot has Elizabeth living in London with the Gardiners. Mr. Bennet died two years before, in 1809. Mrs. Bennet and her other four daughters are living quietly in a cottage in Meryton, funded by Elizabeth. She writes Gothic novels with a pen name, in order to avoid scandal. Her just-released second book sold out immediately, leaving many readers scouring bookstores for a copy and leaving disappointed. Such is the case with Georgiana Darcy. And this is how Elizabeth meets Darcy and his sister for the first time.
There's no Wickham in this one, and no Lady Catherine. Mr. Collins is only mentioned as the current master of Longbourn. Caroline Bingley, as her usual sniping self, is the only villain. Darcy never insults Elizabeth, and with all of his helpful efforts for her family, they are quickly attracted to each other. The difference in their social standing, along with the secret she must keep from everyone, prevent them from acting on it. Neither realizes what the other is feeling.
There's an error in the timing of the Epilogue, which is dated Christmas Day, 1814. It would have to be 1815 in order for the events mentioned to have taken place. Apart from a few errors, it is well-written and very enjoyable. I had to force myself to put it down. 4.5 stars
There's no Wickham in this one, and no Lady Catherine. Mr. Collins is only mentioned as the current master of Longbourn. Caroline Bingley, as her usual sniping self, is the only villain. Darcy never insults Elizabeth, and with all of his helpful efforts for her family, they are quickly attracted to each other. The difference in their social standing, along with the secret she must keep from everyone, prevent them from acting on it. Neither realizes what the other is feeling.
There's an error in the timing of the Epilogue, which is dated Christmas Day, 1814. It would have to be 1815 in order for the events mentioned to have taken place. Apart from a few errors, it is well-written and very enjoyable. I had to force myself to put it down. 4.5 stars
May 23, 2026
Light and romantic
Elizabeth authors gothic novels under a pseudonym as a means to support her impoverished family after Mr Bennett dies and Longbourn is lost to them. While living with the Gardiners in London, she meets Darcy and his sister Georgiana, who is a devoted and enthusiastic reader of "Mrs Laurence's" novels. Darcy is immediately attracted to Elizabeth, but she feels guilt for having to keep hidden her secret life as an author, a truth that could cause scandal to her family if discovered.
This is a fairly angst free tale that is more than a little too sweet at times. There's no acrimony between Elizabeth and Darcy, and the only villain is Caroline Bingley, who is in fine, vicious form here. Caroline's role here is one that makes me question, philosophically: Why does no one speak out against her when she behaves so blatantly horrid? Doesn't silence in the face of her misbehavior give it tacit approval? Ah, well. A question for the ages, I guess.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it for a predictable and sugary romantic confection.
Elizabeth authors gothic novels under a pseudonym as a means to support her impoverished family after Mr Bennett dies and Longbourn is lost to them. While living with the Gardiners in London, she meets Darcy and his sister Georgiana, who is a devoted and enthusiastic reader of "Mrs Laurence's" novels. Darcy is immediately attracted to Elizabeth, but she feels guilt for having to keep hidden her secret life as an author, a truth that could cause scandal to her family if discovered.
This is a fairly angst free tale that is more than a little too sweet at times. There's no acrimony between Elizabeth and Darcy, and the only villain is Caroline Bingley, who is in fine, vicious form here. Caroline's role here is one that makes me question, philosophically: Why does no one speak out against her when she behaves so blatantly horrid? Doesn't silence in the face of her misbehavior give it tacit approval? Ah, well. A question for the ages, I guess.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it for a predictable and sugary romantic confection.
February 2, 2026
Very interesting concept
I greatly enjoyed this variation from a new perspective. The situations were original, the characters kept their traits adjusting to the new circumstances and I loved the way Elizabeth’s wit was portrayed. A truly swoon-worthy Darcy was a plus.
I greatly enjoyed this variation from a new perspective. The situations were original, the characters kept their traits adjusting to the new circumstances and I loved the way Elizabeth’s wit was portrayed. A truly swoon-worthy Darcy was a plus.
April 26, 2026
I love the premise for this story, though knowing what I do about Jane Austen's actual success from writing, it's a bit difficult to believe Elizabeth Bennet doing so very well. And the execution of the story is such that while reading I thought it must be a debut novel, though it's not. It's a bit awkward, great in places, not so much in others. But good entertainment nonetheless.
January 8, 2026
A delightful story
A truly charming tale, told with skill and care. Rescues abound: Elizabeth rescues her family with her writing; her books rescue Georgiana from despair; Darcy rescues Elizabeth and the Gardeners; and true love rescues Darcy and Elizabeth. A great big sigh of appreciation for a lovely book.
A truly charming tale, told with skill and care. Rescues abound: Elizabeth rescues her family with her writing; her books rescue Georgiana from despair; Darcy rescues Elizabeth and the Gardeners; and true love rescues Darcy and Elizabeth. A great big sigh of appreciation for a lovely book.
January 11, 2026
This tale starts out with a very interesting plotline about Elizabeth moving to London, to live with the Gardiners after Mr Bennet´s death, in order to conduct a secret career as an author, and thus provide for her remaining family in Meryton.
Early on the story starts to set up traps for itself, making logical mistakes, puzzling choices and subplots, and just moving away from coherent thought process altogether, as the book moves forward.
For ex., Elizabeth being a gothic novels´ author is a super well guarded secret, but the reasons for secrecy are unclear. Aside from being a paid author was somewhat "scandalous" for a young lady, the turmoil around this is a muddle = were Lizzy´s books scandalous in content? (not really), is writing for money more scandalous than becoming a governess? does "working" make Elizabeth undesirable or reproachable company? (unclear to say the least!).
If we take Miss Austen´s example as a measuring bar, we know that she was very discreet about her writing, she did consider that being an author was part of her private life, and she didn´t take any action during her lifetime to disclose this to the wider public. But we also know all her family knew of it, and it wasn´t considered scandalous or shameful in any way. Indeed, her writing was admired and hughly valued by her family members, who freely spoke/wrote to Jane about her books and bok characters in their private letters.
From the above, we cannot unquestionably believe that this version of Elizabeth would be so utterly consumed by shame for being an author, that it would drive her to lie, remove herself from social situations, and cause her great distress (to the extent of allowing herself to be manipulated over threats of disclosure).
Lizzy meets Georgiana (and Darcy) over the girl´s admiration of the books, unknowing that Elizabeth is the author, which evolves into a quick and intimate friendship between both ladies, and Darcy´s fast-paced admiration towards Elizabeth (unexplainable projection of traits from canon into this alternate story).
Early on in the story Lizzy and uncle Gardiner walk into the street in Gracechurch Street, and he smells smoke... we can all imagine how quickly were we to read about a devastating fire that would offer oportunity for a "forced proximity" scenario [eye roll]. When the predictable catastrophy unfolds, Darcy is ready to invite the Gardiners to Pemberley after a very recent aquaintance!
One token sample of lazy editing was that when Darcy finds out about a fire in Cheapside, he takes his carrige to convey Georgiana from Bingley´s to the Darcy London home, and he explicitly says he will do so in order to take his horse from there and ride to Cheapside because that would be quicker... only to read in the next scene how Darcy descends from his carriage once he arrives there (what??).
Once at Pemberley, Elizabeth falls in love with Darcy, but still feels her secret career would forever separate her from any man or a respectable marriage (OK!), and when Caroline Bingley discovers her secret and theatens her with scandal, Lizzy complies and runs away to Meryton. The main couple´s separation is dull and drags until Darcy gathers his courage to seek Elizabeth in Meryton.
Another strange glitch is that Bingley had let Netherfield ahead of the story, but he didn´t meet Jane or any of the Bennets because they don´t visit anyone anymore... but he had heard of the family from Sir William, who said they are great neighbours and beloved by the town, and yet somehow Mrs Bennet has managed to keep some kind of social mourning period, shunning visits and banning the girls from society for well over a year (unlikely, unbelivable). The Bennets´ isolation is later explained because Mrs Bennet is ashamed of her relative poverty and the girls´ lack of new dresses. But Bingley´s nonsensical fascination with Jane as soon as he finally meets her goes beyond Bingley´s canon infatuation with Jane at the Meryton assembly, and it rings like a distorted mirroring from canon into this alternate new plotline (as if Bingley had always been magically waiting to be matched up with this Jane, albeit never having met her).
When Elizabeth´s secret is finally revealed to Darcy, he goes into a weird crisis of consciousness and decorum, which is very awkward to read, regardless of its quick positive resolution.
When stories sound interesting, but rely on some cornerstones that don´t make much sense, the result is that readers remain stuck on those points that don´t fit for the whole duration of the story. Logical flaws and coherence mistakes grate and clash with the audience´s inner voice, unless masked by a very strong and compelling narrator... I can´t say that was the case this time.
Early on the story starts to set up traps for itself, making logical mistakes, puzzling choices and subplots, and just moving away from coherent thought process altogether, as the book moves forward.
For ex., Elizabeth being a gothic novels´ author is a super well guarded secret, but the reasons for secrecy are unclear. Aside from being a paid author was somewhat "scandalous" for a young lady, the turmoil around this is a muddle = were Lizzy´s books scandalous in content? (not really), is writing for money more scandalous than becoming a governess? does "working" make Elizabeth undesirable or reproachable company? (unclear to say the least!).
If we take Miss Austen´s example as a measuring bar, we know that she was very discreet about her writing, she did consider that being an author was part of her private life, and she didn´t take any action during her lifetime to disclose this to the wider public. But we also know all her family knew of it, and it wasn´t considered scandalous or shameful in any way. Indeed, her writing was admired and hughly valued by her family members, who freely spoke/wrote to Jane about her books and bok characters in their private letters.
From the above, we cannot unquestionably believe that this version of Elizabeth would be so utterly consumed by shame for being an author, that it would drive her to lie, remove herself from social situations, and cause her great distress (to the extent of allowing herself to be manipulated over threats of disclosure).
Lizzy meets Georgiana (and Darcy) over the girl´s admiration of the books, unknowing that Elizabeth is the author, which evolves into a quick and intimate friendship between both ladies, and Darcy´s fast-paced admiration towards Elizabeth (unexplainable projection of traits from canon into this alternate story).
Early on in the story Lizzy and uncle Gardiner walk into the street in Gracechurch Street, and he smells smoke... we can all imagine how quickly were we to read about a devastating fire that would offer oportunity for a "forced proximity" scenario [eye roll]. When the predictable catastrophy unfolds, Darcy is ready to invite the Gardiners to Pemberley after a very recent aquaintance!
One token sample of lazy editing was that when Darcy finds out about a fire in Cheapside, he takes his carrige to convey Georgiana from Bingley´s to the Darcy London home, and he explicitly says he will do so in order to take his horse from there and ride to Cheapside because that would be quicker... only to read in the next scene how Darcy descends from his carriage once he arrives there (what??).
Once at Pemberley, Elizabeth falls in love with Darcy, but still feels her secret career would forever separate her from any man or a respectable marriage (OK!), and when Caroline Bingley discovers her secret and theatens her with scandal, Lizzy complies and runs away to Meryton. The main couple´s separation is dull and drags until Darcy gathers his courage to seek Elizabeth in Meryton.
Another strange glitch is that Bingley had let Netherfield ahead of the story, but he didn´t meet Jane or any of the Bennets because they don´t visit anyone anymore... but he had heard of the family from Sir William, who said they are great neighbours and beloved by the town, and yet somehow Mrs Bennet has managed to keep some kind of social mourning period, shunning visits and banning the girls from society for well over a year (unlikely, unbelivable). The Bennets´ isolation is later explained because Mrs Bennet is ashamed of her relative poverty and the girls´ lack of new dresses. But Bingley´s nonsensical fascination with Jane as soon as he finally meets her goes beyond Bingley´s canon infatuation with Jane at the Meryton assembly, and it rings like a distorted mirroring from canon into this alternate new plotline (as if Bingley had always been magically waiting to be matched up with this Jane, albeit never having met her).
When Elizabeth´s secret is finally revealed to Darcy, he goes into a weird crisis of consciousness and decorum, which is very awkward to read, regardless of its quick positive resolution.
When stories sound interesting, but rely on some cornerstones that don´t make much sense, the result is that readers remain stuck on those points that don´t fit for the whole duration of the story. Logical flaws and coherence mistakes grate and clash with the audience´s inner voice, unless masked by a very strong and compelling narrator... I can´t say that was the case this time.
March 25, 2026
I really loved the idea of Lizzy being a writer, and a successful one at that! After her father's death, she is supporting her mother and four sisters with her royalties, though not to the standard they had lived at Longbourn (which is now owned by Mr. Collins). She meets Mr. Darcy and Georgianna in London where she's living with her aunt and uncle Gardner. She and Darcy like each other immediately, and while she has to hide her writing status (for fear of her sisters losing the ability to marry well), Georgianna is a huge fan of her writing. They become great friends. This is a really lovely story and I will have to check out some more of the author's writing.
May 25, 2026
A new author to me
This was a new author who seems to be gaining plenty of interest so I was keen to see how her writing stood up to scrutiny. I think my overall impression was that it was OK, a fun read, but not without issues.
the book has rather a jerky, constructed feel to it rather than a smooth flow. It is obviously fiction and some licence is needed but there are holes in it that add to this sense of jerkiness. Ideas come into the plot which is great but they don't seem always seem adequately fleshed out. It gives. sense of a story being assembled from ideas rather than growing organically. I will include a couple of examples as spoilers,
The language is charming at times, but at other times is wildly incorrect; e.g. "hello", "quit" to mean stop rather than leave; "brilliant' to mean intellectual rather than brightly coloured/lighted.
Can we all club together and buy Elizabeth some soap to wash those hands please?
This was a new author who seems to be gaining plenty of interest so I was keen to see how her writing stood up to scrutiny. I think my overall impression was that it was OK, a fun read, but not without issues.
the book has rather a jerky, constructed feel to it rather than a smooth flow. It is obviously fiction and some licence is needed but there are holes in it that add to this sense of jerkiness. Ideas come into the plot which is great but they don't seem always seem adequately fleshed out. It gives. sense of a story being assembled from ideas rather than growing organically. I will include a couple of examples as spoilers,
The language is charming at times, but at other times is wildly incorrect; e.g. "hello", "quit" to mean stop rather than leave; "brilliant' to mean intellectual rather than brightly coloured/lighted.
Can we all club together and buy Elizabeth some soap to wash those hands please?
June 28, 2026
Elizabeth’s Etchings
I love this portrayal of Elizabeth as an author. This unique, creative exploration of the relationship between Darcy and Lizzy is warm, perceptive, and satisfying. Her selfless determination to provide for her family while sacrificing her wants and needs fits perfectly. I enjoyed the familial connection between Darcy and Georgiana. Clean romance featuring beloved characters and villains.
I love this portrayal of Elizabeth as an author. This unique, creative exploration of the relationship between Darcy and Lizzy is warm, perceptive, and satisfying. Her selfless determination to provide for her family while sacrificing her wants and needs fits perfectly. I enjoyed the familial connection between Darcy and Georgiana. Clean romance featuring beloved characters and villains.
January 8, 2026
Elizabeth Bennet, Author
Very well written, full of excitement adventure and love. Cool how the Darcy's and Elizabeth meet and how the story develops. Surprised Miss Bingley wasn't worse.
Very good. Would read again!thanks
Very well written, full of excitement adventure and love. Cool how the Darcy's and Elizabeth meet and how the story develops. Surprised Miss Bingley wasn't worse.
Very good. Would read again!thanks
March 28, 2026
Very well written, I thoughly enjoyed reading it 😁
This is amazing, it keeps your interest up until the end. Our couple sort of drove me crazy in places with their pride but all was concurred in the end.
This is amazing, it keeps your interest up until the end. Our couple sort of drove me crazy in places with their pride but all was concurred in the end.
April 5, 2026
Lovely, satisfying story
A lovely, satisfying story. The only reason I couldn’t give it five stars is because of typos. But still a good alternative story. I love reading books I can recommend in good conscience to my students.
A lovely, satisfying story. The only reason I couldn’t give it five stars is because of typos. But still a good alternative story. I love reading books I can recommend in good conscience to my students.
August 5, 2026
Elizabeth Bennet as an Author
This was a different take on Pride and Prejudice and I loved it. Elizabeth’s secret could ruin her reputation, but she had to keep her family out of the hedgerows.
This was a different take on Pride and Prejudice and I loved it. Elizabeth’s secret could ruin her reputation, but she had to keep her family out of the hedgerows.
December 22, 2025
So sweet!!
One of those that one cannot stop reading till the end…no Willam, no Lady Catherine…but Carolin B., had to make her debut as usual…Enjoy!
One of those that one cannot stop reading till the end…no Willam, no Lady Catherine…but Carolin B., had to make her debut as usual…Enjoy!
December 25, 2025
I enjoyed this book very much.
December 30, 2025
precious story
So very good. Such a loving story. So full of fear and fraught-filled love. Elizabeth doing anything and everything she can to ensure her families survival…
So very good. Such a loving story. So full of fear and fraught-filled love. Elizabeth doing anything and everything she can to ensure her families survival…
January 5, 2026
Beatrice Langford is a reliable must-read. This is a charming book, with Elizabeth taking responsibility for the welfare of her family in the most Austen-like way.
February 14, 2026
Beautiful story
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book. Love stories are best read in one sitting but I enjoyed reading this one anyway.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book. Love stories are best read in one sitting but I enjoyed reading this one anyway.
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