I really wanted to give this book a higher review because I love this subject. But I was left so confused by many portions of this book. It had me looking up different passages in the Bible to figure out what happens when in Revelation. This is a good thing, endeavoring to find the truth in the Bible. However, when I am reading a novel, I want to be entertained.
First, why is the rapture completely disregarded? I could be wrong but I do not recall any mention to it. This is a very important part of Revelation. I will say that this novel picks up some time during the Tribulation so it could in theory, have happened before the novel picks up. But if this is true, why are there still children? Her brother is often referred to as a young person although no age is specifically referenced. Then near the end of the novel, a 6-year-old boy is in the crowd. The marking of the beast happens, I believe mid-Tribulation which could be three and a half years. So I could see a child being in the Tribulation if a woman was pregnant and had a child but this child couldn't possibly be 6 years old. So this is a major issue in the book for me.
Second, when Becky initially seeks out God and accepts him, it doesn't seem altogether genuine and quickly put together to get to the rest of the book. This should have been more momentous. She is making a life changing event.
Third, I felt like large portions of the book was spewing tons of information without laying a proper foundation. The book is primarily in a 16-year-old's perspective but the things we are finding out, sound like they are coming from someone much older, more knowledgeable and mature. It is out of context.
Finally, the way we are taken to past and present is not set up in a clear manner. I feel like we should have been given a better timeline and it could have been set up better. The different times in Becky's life jumped around and I had to stop and think most times this happened. It did not make for a fluent reading experience.
Although I have given a lot of criticism to this book, I want to state that half way through the book, I started to actually enjoy it. At this point, we get an appropriate perspective from Becky's POV and I started to feel some of her emotions as she is going through her trial.