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Biker Bitches #2
Fat Louise
She needed a hero; instead, she got Cade.
Cade was no hero. He was a nomad, a wanderer with no ties and he liked it that way. Hired out to save Fat Louise and her spoiled sister from a cartel run Mexican city was a risk he was willing to take, for the right price. With a certain gray eyed woman on his mind, he set's out to find her, fuck her and forget her. No harm, no foul. But it's all easier said than done when it comes to this plain Jane.
He expected a biker bitch who knew the rules; instead, he got Fat Louise.
Fat Louise wasn’t about to put her crew in danger. She had to learn to handle problems on her own, even if they included a six-foot biker she was forced to rely on, if she was going to rescue her sister. She never expected to see Cade again after she'd left Mexico, but all it takes is one night with him to prove that even a bitch’s heart can be broken.
Cade was no hero. He was a nomad, a wanderer with no ties and he liked it that way. Hired out to save Fat Louise and her spoiled sister from a cartel run Mexican city was a risk he was willing to take, for the right price. With a certain gray eyed woman on his mind, he set's out to find her, fuck her and forget her. No harm, no foul. But it's all easier said than done when it comes to this plain Jane.
He expected a biker bitch who knew the rules; instead, he got Fat Louise.
Fat Louise wasn’t about to put her crew in danger. She had to learn to handle problems on her own, even if they included a six-foot biker she was forced to rely on, if she was going to rescue her sister. She never expected to see Cade again after she'd left Mexico, but all it takes is one night with him to prove that even a bitch’s heart can be broken.
220 pages, ebook
First published January 22, 2015
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49 books7,697 followersJamie Begley is not your average Kentucky girl, and while she does like to cook her southern meals, this down-home momma prefers living in her biker and alien worlds!
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Jamie Begley Reading Order:
1. Soul of a Man (The Dark Souls)
2. Soul of a Woman (The Dark Souls)
3. Soul of a Demon (The Dark Souls)
4. Razer's Ride (The Last Riders)
5. Viper's Run (The Last Riders)
6. Knox's Stand (The Last Riders)
7. Sex Piston (Biker Bitches)
8. Teased (The VIP Room)
9. Tainted (The VIP Room)
10. Shade's Fall (The Last Riders)
11. King (The VIP Room)
12. Cash's Fight (The Last Riders)
13. Fat Louise (Biker Bitches)
14. Riot (Predators MC)
15. Shade (The Last Riders)
16. Stand Off (Predators MC)
17. Lucky's Choice (The Last Riders)
18. Keeping What's His: Tate (Porter Brothers Trilogy)
19. Merry Blissmas (Biker Bitches)
20. Hostage (Predators MC)
21. Winter's Touch (The Last Riders)
22. Train's Clash (The Last Riders, Biker Bitches)
23. Standing His Ground: Greer (Porter Brother's Trilogy)
24. Crazy B!tch (Biker Bitches)
25. Rider's Revenge (The Last Riders)
26. Stalked (Predators MC)
27. Claiming the Enemy: Dustin (Porter Brothers Trilogy)
28. T.A. (Biker Bitches)
29. Dangerous Love
30. Gavin’s Song (Road to Salvation: A Last Rider's Trilogy)
31. Ho Ho Hennessy
32. Reaper’s Wrath (Road to Salvation: A Last Rider's Trilogy)
33. Reaper’s Salvation (Road to Salvation: A Last Rider's Trilogy)
34. Dark Ties: Desmond
35. Jewell (Biker Bitches)
36. Firewalker (The Colemans' Legacy)
37. Desired by Doom (The Last Riders, Ohio Chapter)
38. A Treepoint Christmas
39. Moon’s Promise (The Last Riders)
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goodreads.com/JamieBegley
www.jamiebegley.net
Jamie Begley Reading Order:
1. Soul of a Man (The Dark Souls)
2. Soul of a Woman (The Dark Souls)
3. Soul of a Demon (The Dark Souls)
4. Razer's Ride (The Last Riders)
5. Viper's Run (The Last Riders)
6. Knox's Stand (The Last Riders)
7. Sex Piston (Biker Bitches)
8. Teased (The VIP Room)
9. Tainted (The VIP Room)
10. Shade's Fall (The Last Riders)
11. King (The VIP Room)
12. Cash's Fight (The Last Riders)
13. Fat Louise (Biker Bitches)
14. Riot (Predators MC)
15. Shade (The Last Riders)
16. Stand Off (Predators MC)
17. Lucky's Choice (The Last Riders)
18. Keeping What's His: Tate (Porter Brothers Trilogy)
19. Merry Blissmas (Biker Bitches)
20. Hostage (Predators MC)
21. Winter's Touch (The Last Riders)
22. Train's Clash (The Last Riders, Biker Bitches)
23. Standing His Ground: Greer (Porter Brother's Trilogy)
24. Crazy B!tch (Biker Bitches)
25. Rider's Revenge (The Last Riders)
26. Stalked (Predators MC)
27. Claiming the Enemy: Dustin (Porter Brothers Trilogy)
28. T.A. (Biker Bitches)
29. Dangerous Love
30. Gavin’s Song (Road to Salvation: A Last Rider's Trilogy)
31. Ho Ho Hennessy
32. Reaper’s Wrath (Road to Salvation: A Last Rider's Trilogy)
33. Reaper’s Salvation (Road to Salvation: A Last Rider's Trilogy)
34. Dark Ties: Desmond
35. Jewell (Biker Bitches)
36. Firewalker (The Colemans' Legacy)
37. Desired by Doom (The Last Riders, Ohio Chapter)
38. A Treepoint Christmas
39. Moon’s Promise (The Last Riders)
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January 24, 2015
I found this disappointing. I liked Jane, even though I still don't understand why the hell her nickname would be Fat Louise if her first name isn't even Louise. I didn't like Cade much at all. And I'm getting really sick and tired of Begley's heroes fucking other women after they've slept with the heroine because they're afraid of their freaking feelings for said heroine. Grow up, douches. Blech.
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March 20, 2017
This author really has a theme going with her cheating male leads that I am getting quite sick of. Of the top of my head the only male lead I liked was Shade at least he did no run hot and cold like the others. This guy was a cheat and I could not believe Fat Louise forgave him even knowing he was having sex with another woman the night she lost their baby I honestly don't think I could have been as nice!
January 26, 2015
This must be the worst jamie begley book I've ever read, It doesn't even deserve 1 star. cade was an absolute douche! !! Who goes off and has a temper tantrum because the person they call doesn't answer right away and when they explain they simply forgot their phone in his room. does he go oh wow I was worried. no he doesn't he simple goes and cheats with lots of other women!! what a dick and looser. sorry nothing in this story could have made up for that. I'm tired of reading about weak ass men who cheat and women who put up with it.
February 1, 2021
2 ⭐⭐ - Meh!
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UPDATE: Reread 30 January to 01 February 2021
Rereading the author's books in the order indicated by her while I wait for Gavin's third book.
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First, the way he treated our heroine and after kissing her sister and flirting with the bitch in the heroine's face. I wouldn't even say good morning to him.
Heroine gives virginity to the hero thinking they have something special, but the hero keeps having sex with the club whores rubbing it in her face.
They don't wear protection the first time... and surprise! She gets pregnant. But she doesn't say anything because he's fucking all the whores in the club.
The day she's losing the baby, he's at the club having sex.
What a son of a bitch!
He deserved a bath, inside and out, with bleach.
It was painful to reread, but I'm following the recommended order.
Be glad the heroine's happy with this one. Aff!
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UPDATE: Reread 30 January to 01 February 2021
Rereading the author's books in the order indicated by her while I wait for Gavin's third book.
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First, the way he treated our heroine and after kissing her sister and flirting with the bitch in the heroine's face. I wouldn't even say good morning to him.
Heroine gives virginity to the hero thinking they have something special, but the hero keeps having sex with the club whores rubbing it in her face.
They don't wear protection the first time... and surprise! She gets pregnant. But she doesn't say anything because he's fucking all the whores in the club.
The day she's losing the baby, he's at the club having sex.
What a son of a bitch!
He deserved a bath, inside and out, with bleach.
It was painful to reread, but I'm following the recommended order.
Be glad the heroine's happy with this one. Aff!
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“Damn, that’s hard to turn down. One woman may be possible to get out, but two is going to be close to hopeless,”
“They aren’t going to want to give Bailey up easily,” Cade remarked.
Bailey was tall and blond with rounded feminine curves, which were fully displayed in the little black dress she was wearing. Her golden skin showed she either spent hours lazing in the sun or in a tanning bed.
Jane was thin, and everything about her screamed nondescript. She faded into the background of the ugly couch she was curled up on. There was nothing that would make her stand out; therefore, she wouldn’t pose any of the problems her more attractive sister would in getting her out.
“That one will be easier to get out.” Cade tapped the photograph of Jane.
Cade’s mouth curled. “Let me guess; she’s not her daughter.” “No. I had Jane during my first marriage. Her mother raised her, and I was allowed to spend too little time with her.
“Montgomery?” Cade’s voice halted Benedict’s departure. “Which one?”
“If I can only get one out alive, which one do you want it to be?”
“Bailey.
“Stay away from him, Jane. Teresa doesn’t even like it when I talk to him. She gets angry if she thinks you’re trying to make a play for him.”
“Oh, my God.” T.A.’ s mouth dropped open. “She went after that stupid bitch, didn’t she?”
“Don’t say that!” Sex Piston ordered. “She is strong. Who is the one we depend on when we need shit done? She’s always there for us.”
“You the bitch who’s always putting Fat Louise down?” Crazy Bitch asked.
“I know you’re the reason Fat Louise took off after that stuck-up daughter of yours. She told me you were pulling a guilt trip on her, and I told her she should shove a fucking foot up your ass. If something happens to her, you’re not going to miss that daughter of yours, because I’m going to send you there in a fucking casket.”
“You let Fat Louise’s mom and that bitch of a wife treat her like shit. If anything happens to her, that bitch won’t be the only one I come after.”
She saw Teresa sitting at a table with Cade.
“What?” Before she could say anything else, his mouth slammed down on hers.
“Why am I not surprised he picked Teresa?” Jorge’s sarcastic comment had Jane’s blood boiling.
It was over an hour before Teresa returned to the bar, shooting her a triumphant look, which she ignored.
Cade was standing in the bedroom doorway, putting on his T-shirt. Jane turned bright red. Teresa must have brought him upstairs using the back steps and had left him in her bed when she returned downstairs.
Raul was standing over the helpless woman removing his pants, Jane saw more of her brother-in law than she ever wanted to see, he had a tattoo of two pistols framing his cock. Jane felt like scrubbing her eyeballs to remove the picture from her mind.
The one Raul was raping must have been giving him too much trouble, because the guard was holding her down for him.
“Do you always have to be such an ass?” “Yeah.”
“Why should we help you?” Train’s smart-ass remark didn’t surprise her. His wounded male pride was still stinging from her disappointment of his lackluster sexual performance.
Cade stared down at Jane in the morning light, fighting back the surge of protectiveness he felt for the woman.
Cade felt guilty, and he didn’t want to feel that way. He wanted to get rid of the women and get back to Martina. He promised himself a week in bed with her for the trouble this job had cost him.
Bailey screamed as she stepped over the body of the man Cade had just killed.
“I had a happy marriage before you showed up! You can fucking die for all I care.” Bailey lowered her head to the rock and cried.
Cade and Bailey were sitting next to each other by the pond talking. Jane had seen that look on women’s faces too many times not to know what it meant. Her sister was attracted to Cade. She was looking up at him beneath lowered lashes, smiling at him flirtatiously.
Cade made no pretense of not watching, and Jane couldn’t blame him. Her sister had large breasts and a small waist that flared out to curvy hips. She had shaved her pussy, which highlighted her long, golden legs. Bailey had not had anything to do for the last few weeks except sunbathe while her family worried about her.
“You look like you need to gain ten pounds.”
“Bailey doesn’t seem to be having any trouble with her weight,” Cade remarked. “No, she doesn’t.”
She didn’t stand a chance against her sister’s more obvious flirtation, though.
Cade and Bailey were plastered together, with him giving her the same passionate kiss he had once given to Jane, except the one he was giving Bailey looked real.
When she came back to the camp, Cade was still sitting next to Bailey, her hand lying intimately on his thigh.
“That’s right. I am. And I’m fed up with you two. Both of you need to quit worrying about who’s going to get inside my pants instead of getting our asses out of here alive!”
“I don’t even mind taking both of you up on your invitations, but you’ll have to wait until we’re in a hotel where I don’t have to worry about being sneaked up on by drug runners while taking a piece of pussy.”
“Wait, Cade. Don’t forget you promised me dinner when we got back,” Bailey stopped him. “I remember. I’ll meet you downstairs tonight at eight,” he said, going out the door.
Killyama, Sex Piston, T.A., and Crazy Bitch were her sisters. They were all she was ever going to need.
The problem was in deciding which one of the brothers she was going to fuck and give her virginity to.
“But don’t worry, I won’t be trying to get your attention like the rest of the bitches out there. I don’t share dick with my sister.”
“My dick hasn’t been near your sister.” Jane frowned. “Don’t lie. I saw her coming out of your hotel room when I came back from looking for the both of you at the restaurant.”
Turning his back to the room, he wrapped his arms around the blond, pulling her close for a kiss, hoping his dick would stand up and take notice.
“You never learn, do you, Demie?” Sex Piston snarled at the woman who was turning a sickly shade of green.
“I haven’t touched Stud, and Cade doesn’t belong to you.” “No, he doesn’t, but he does to Fat Louise.” “No, he doesn’t. Let’s go, Sex Piston.” Jane tried to pull her friend away.
“Let me save you the trouble, Cade. We fucked, and now you want something new. No hard feelings.”
Cade shrugged. “Late night.” “I saw the empty bottle of Tequila when you went to your room with Gina. Between you and the bitches, I can’t keep enough Tequila in stock.” Stud studied him out of the corner of his eye.
“Gina still hanging around the club?” “Yeah, brother, she’s still there.” “Problem solved.” “She might be a little tired. I left her sleeping in my bed,” Cade told him, wondering if he had fucked the man’s woman.
“Sure,” Stud laughed, setting his beer down on the worktable. “Way you’ve been hitting the sheets with every bitch in the club, you can’t blame Fat Louise for getting her some, too.”
“She was pregnant? Who…?” “It doesn’t matter who the father was. He didn’t care about her any more than you do. Get out!”
“It was mine, wasn’t it?” he asked Stud hoarsely. “Yeah, brother, it was your kid.”
“Every morning, when I woke up with a different woman next to me, I intended to get on my bike and leave town, just like I’ve left every other place I’ve stopped in. But I couldn’t this time, because I would be leaving you behind.
“No. I’m not going to give you another chance to hurt me. If we do this, it’s going to be what it is— just sex,” Jane said, the words stripping her soul away. “Leave town when you want. Do what you want. I’m not going to expect a damn thing from you, Cade.”
“Get a condom. I’m not fucking you without one.”
“What did you think? That I’d lie here and let you fuck me all night like you did the other bitches in the club? No, thank you. I need to go get the girls their beers.”
She couldn’t forgive how he had been with other women in the clubhouse after his night with her, nor had he regained her trust.
“Did you use a condom with her?” Jane shrieked at him. “Yes. I haven’t fucked anyone but you without a condom.” “Thank God I made you use one after that one night.”
“Hell, you were fucking Demie the night she lost her kid.”
February 17, 2016
I fucking hate cheating scumbags. Enough said.
January 24, 2015
It doesn't even deserve one star, I absolutely hated it.
I hate when the male lead sleeps with others after he has slept with the heroine, especially when the heroine gives him her virginity.
Cade was a total arsehole repeatedy cheating on jane (fat louise) even on the night she miscarried their baby, but she still took him back! most of the heroines in these books dont have a spine and let men walk over them because they love them, its bull!
I hate when the male lead sleeps with others after he has slept with the heroine, especially when the heroine gives him her virginity.
Cade was a total arsehole repeatedy cheating on jane (fat louise) even on the night she miscarried their baby, but she still took him back! most of the heroines in these books dont have a spine and let men walk over them because they love them, its bull!
read-when-i-am-brainless
December 5, 2016HERO SLEEPS AROUND AFTER HER!
Can't touch this one.
JUST NOT HAPPENING FOR ME.
Can't touch this one.
JUST NOT HAPPENING FOR ME.
February 10, 2015
NO...JUST NO!
How could Jane aka Fat Louise get saddled with a cheating manwhore like Cade! That was just cruel, even for Ms. Begley! What I always liked about Jane was how sweet and innocent she always seemed, even though her best friends are quite possibly tougher than all those bikers they hang out with. Yeah she was a bit wimpy at times and hell even a doormat, but so sweet. I felt awful that she had such a low opinion of herself and I couldn't understand why. She totally proved her worth in Mexico, but come to find out that those same bikers that she hangs with treated her like an ugly duckling out of some misguided sense of self preservation on their parts had me so disgusted! Who the fuck does that to someone! That's low...even for a biker. They made her feel like trash just because they were attracted to her in some fashion but didn't want to be settled down? Really!!!!!!
I'm so disappointed with Jane's story because she deserves so much better than to end up with a man like Cade. He's such a fucking hypocrite, always spouting how she needs to stop running and talk to him but the first time he thinks she blows him off, he goes off to fuck the first whore he sees, then the second, third, forth and so on! He acted more like a recalcitrant child than a mature grown man! What I hate most about these women, is the fierce loyalty they feel towards these cheating asswads! He was out fucking everything with a hole, but she couldn't bring herself to even try and pursuit a new relationship with a man who genuinely cared about her, because all she thought of was Cade's nasty ass! I'm tired of reading of stupid females like this...
I hope and pray that Killyama's story is different, because if there's one woman who will not put up with a cheating douchebag..its her! If said man does cheat...I hope to God she gets back at him...She cannot let us strong women down!
Two stars because the sex was hot and you gotta love Sex Piston and her crew! If they are involved..then its going to be a funny, interesting and page turning scene!
How could Jane aka Fat Louise get saddled with a cheating manwhore like Cade! That was just cruel, even for Ms. Begley! What I always liked about Jane was how sweet and innocent she always seemed, even though her best friends are quite possibly tougher than all those bikers they hang out with. Yeah she was a bit wimpy at times and hell even a doormat, but so sweet. I felt awful that she had such a low opinion of herself and I couldn't understand why. She totally proved her worth in Mexico, but come to find out that those same bikers that she hangs with treated her like an ugly duckling out of some misguided sense of self preservation on their parts had me so disgusted! Who the fuck does that to someone! That's low...even for a biker. They made her feel like trash just because they were attracted to her in some fashion but didn't want to be settled down? Really!!!!!!
I'm so disappointed with Jane's story because she deserves so much better than to end up with a man like Cade. He's such a fucking hypocrite, always spouting how she needs to stop running and talk to him but the first time he thinks she blows him off, he goes off to fuck the first whore he sees, then the second, third, forth and so on! He acted more like a recalcitrant child than a mature grown man! What I hate most about these women, is the fierce loyalty they feel towards these cheating asswads! He was out fucking everything with a hole, but she couldn't bring herself to even try and pursuit a new relationship with a man who genuinely cared about her, because all she thought of was Cade's nasty ass! I'm tired of reading of stupid females like this...
I hope and pray that Killyama's story is different, because if there's one woman who will not put up with a cheating douchebag..its her! If said man does cheat...I hope to God she gets back at him...She cannot let us strong women down!
Two stars because the sex was hot and you gotta love Sex Piston and her crew! If they are involved..then its going to be a funny, interesting and page turning scene!
January 24, 2015
I don't even know where to start. I feel so disappointed in this book, its like its not even by this author....who I might just mention is one of my all time favourites. I love her Last Riders Series, not to mention her others, but somehow this one is falling way behind the rest!!!!
The hero and I use this term very lightly was such a mother freaking douchbag/asshole from start to finish.....I mean, yes we know in the beginning of a book, the lead character is gonna be a hard ass and man whore, but come on for 75% of this book he screwed anything he could get his hands on (in front of her), which meant we only got like 15% of them together and again that is not a very accurate description as that too had drama in it....
I think my mouth hung open more than not, and not in a good kinda way either......I really and truly hope this disappointing feeling is a once off kinda thing and I will again be blown away by her next book.....
On a plus side the cover is really hot and totally drool worthy!!!!
The hero and I use this term very lightly was such a mother freaking douchbag/asshole from start to finish.....I mean, yes we know in the beginning of a book, the lead character is gonna be a hard ass and man whore, but come on for 75% of this book he screwed anything he could get his hands on (in front of her), which meant we only got like 15% of them together and again that is not a very accurate description as that too had drama in it....
I think my mouth hung open more than not, and not in a good kinda way either......I really and truly hope this disappointing feeling is a once off kinda thing and I will again be blown away by her next book.....
On a plus side the cover is really hot and totally drool worthy!!!!
October 26, 2019
I hated it. I hate books with cheating. I should have read other reviews before jumping into it.
May 5, 2015
I AB-SO-FUCKIN-LUTE-LY CAN'T WAIT!!!!
Ok seriously, Jane is a BADASS BITCH THAT I'D TRUST WITH MY 6 ANY DAY!!!
Reading Order
Razer's Ride (The Last Riders book 1)
Viper's Run (The Last Riders book 2)
Knox's Stand (The Last Riders book 3)
Sex Piston (Biker Bitches book 1)
Teased (The VIP Room book 1)
Tainted (The VIP Room book 2)
Shade's Fall (The Last Riders book 4)
King (The VIP Room book 3)
Cash's Fight (The Last Riders book 5)
Fat Louise (Biker Bitches book 2)
Riot (Predators MC book 1)
Shade (Last Riders book 6)
Stand Off (Predators MC book 2)
*Challenge: A book published this year*
April 2, 2015
This Book is about Fat Louise
and Cade
She needed a hero; instead, she got Cade.
He expected a biker bitch who knew the rules; instead, he got Fat Louise.
The Story starts with Fat Louise beeing down in Mexico trying to save her Sister Bailey,
and she doesnt want any help from her Biker Bitches, she wants to do this on her own.
Cade is the Mercenary hired to find and rescue both sisters.
The Mission in Mexico is extremely dangerous and doesnt go as planned at all!
Shy, timid and sweet Fat Louise (aka Jane) becomes a real Badass and the absolute hero of the Story.
Cade cant forget about her, because Jane is not as one would expect at all.
Back home at the Biker Club that Jane belongs to, Cade turns up and here the real Story of them both beginns.
Jane wants Cade, Cade wants Jane and thats exactly what happens until one of them screws up so badly, there is almost no coming back from, or is there?
This was a 5 Star read for me, simply because of Fat Louise.
You just cant help but feel for her, she and her Story broke my heart.
This has to be one of the sweetest, most generous woman ever and even though
she is such a shy and timid Person she is so strong.
Cade was a douche in the beginning, a real stubborn fool in the middle and in the end he was just all about our Girl Jane, no doubt about it. ;)
Bailey - Jeeeeez , i am missing words for her but she got what she deserved in the end...
I also loved all the glimpses we got about the other characters in Jamie Begleys World,
especially the other Biker Bitches and of course we did get some Last Riders here too!!
Fat Louise!!
I cant wait! I love the idea of these Biker Bitches and i adored Sex Piston!! Bring it on!!! :)
and Cade
She needed a hero; instead, she got Cade.
He expected a biker bitch who knew the rules; instead, he got Fat Louise.
The Story starts with Fat Louise beeing down in Mexico trying to save her Sister Bailey,
and she doesnt want any help from her Biker Bitches, she wants to do this on her own.
Cade is the Mercenary hired to find and rescue both sisters.
The Mission in Mexico is extremely dangerous and doesnt go as planned at all!
Shy, timid and sweet Fat Louise (aka Jane) becomes a real Badass and the absolute hero of the Story.
Cade cant forget about her, because Jane is not as one would expect at all.
Back home at the Biker Club that Jane belongs to, Cade turns up and here the real Story of them both beginns.
Jane wants Cade, Cade wants Jane and thats exactly what happens until one of them screws up so badly, there is almost no coming back from, or is there?
This was a 5 Star read for me, simply because of Fat Louise.
You just cant help but feel for her, she and her Story broke my heart.
This has to be one of the sweetest, most generous woman ever and even though
she is such a shy and timid Person she is so strong.
Cade was a douche in the beginning, a real stubborn fool in the middle and in the end he was just all about our Girl Jane, no doubt about it. ;)
Bailey - Jeeeeez , i am missing words for her but she got what she deserved in the end...
I also loved all the glimpses we got about the other characters in Jamie Begleys World,
especially the other Biker Bitches and of course we did get some Last Riders here too!!
Fat Louise!!
I cant wait! I love the idea of these Biker Bitches and i adored Sex Piston!! Bring it on!!! :)
January 24, 2015
Liked the first book so much better! Spoilers...
Without a doubt, Jamie Begley is a good writer. And because of how much I enjoyed reading Sex Piston (no matter how much the name made me cringe), I had high expectations for this one. Unfortunately, it missed the mark.
For the most part, I liked Jane aka Fat Louise. I really felt for her and how she has always been made to feel she is second best, and was excited to read about her journey.
The first half of the story was intriguing and kept me glued to my kindle. Loved how her girls had her back (especially Killyama, but she's such a kick-arse chick it didn't surprise me). I even really liked Cade , the hero, and was hopeful he was going to be like Stud (Sex Piston's man).
****Spoilers ahead****
After some misunderstandings, Cade and Jane finally get together. But she has to leave the next morning and accidentally leaves her phone behind. He tries calling her, can't get through so takes that as an excuse to have sex with another woman. Jane finds out and runs away. For the next two months, Cade sleeps with every willing woman around, but then when he finds out about the consequences of their night together, he decides only then that they should be together. I find it hilarious (and not in a funny way) when the hero blames the heroine for him sleeping around, and that's exactly what Cade did. Jane ran away so it's her fault. Yes, she tells him she no longer trusts him and doesn't want to be hurt that way again, and they sorted out their issues to get to the HEA. But I can't help but lose all respect for him when he acted like a cheating POS and was waiting for the next time he had a teenage drama meltdown and do it again.
I expect cheating men in the Last Riders series because I never really felt like any of those men were passionately possessive of their women (hence the cheating and sharing in EVERYsingle book!). But I expected more from this one so am giving this a disappointed 3 stars.
Without a doubt, Jamie Begley is a good writer. And because of how much I enjoyed reading Sex Piston (no matter how much the name made me cringe), I had high expectations for this one. Unfortunately, it missed the mark.
For the most part, I liked Jane aka Fat Louise. I really felt for her and how she has always been made to feel she is second best, and was excited to read about her journey.
The first half of the story was intriguing and kept me glued to my kindle. Loved how her girls had her back (especially Killyama, but she's such a kick-arse chick it didn't surprise me). I even really liked Cade , the hero, and was hopeful he was going to be like Stud (Sex Piston's man).
****Spoilers ahead****
After some misunderstandings, Cade and Jane finally get together. But she has to leave the next morning and accidentally leaves her phone behind. He tries calling her, can't get through so takes that as an excuse to have sex with another woman. Jane finds out and runs away. For the next two months, Cade sleeps with every willing woman around, but then when he finds out about the consequences of their night together, he decides only then that they should be together. I find it hilarious (and not in a funny way) when the hero blames the heroine for him sleeping around, and that's exactly what Cade did. Jane ran away so it's her fault. Yes, she tells him she no longer trusts him and doesn't want to be hurt that way again, and they sorted out their issues to get to the HEA. But I can't help but lose all respect for him when he acted like a cheating POS and was waiting for the next time he had a teenage drama meltdown and do it again.
I expect cheating men in the Last Riders series because I never really felt like any of those men were passionately possessive of their women (hence the cheating and sharing in EVERYsingle book!). But I expected more from this one so am giving this a disappointed 3 stars.
January 27, 2015
When I first came across Jamie Begley as an author, it was Viper's story. I finished it and I had such mixed feelings....I mean he was sleeping with Bliss when Winter was basically dying. Honestly I don't think I could come back from that, when Winter finally called them both out I was cheering inside, and then it just was forgotten (WHAT THE HELL?!?!?!) I'd give Viper the big F*&% You and never look back, but I thought maybe I'm being to harsh, maybe there was more to this series, since I came in on the 2 book. So I went back read Razer's (another NOPE total D-bag, can we just kill Bliss off seriously) but I took another shot( 3 time's a charm) Then finally came Knox...total marshmallow, I was hooked! Which took me to Shade and Cash, the Last Riders got me, I'm salivating for Lucky and ::fingers crossed:: Willa's story. Then I read this... and I am a basket of WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS?!?!!?!? Could the lead character be anymore of a jackass!! This book is NO NO NO HELL NO!!! Jane is sweet and her backstory just makes you wants to Mama Bear her. You want the kinda love story Lily And Shade had or even Cash and Rachel, but no. So I'm sorry to say I hated this story, I wanted to pull a Killyama and just beat Cade's ass the whole time. I hate to say it but if this is the kinda stuff I'll read in Willa's story(if she's it) I'm quitting. I just can't stand the heartbreak and I am not that forgiving.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 23, 2015
So, I am just going to put it all out there and say...Fat Louise broke my heart...yep...I cried, and I know that you will be just as touched as I was once you get into FAT LOUISE, the second in the Biker Bitches Series by Jamie Begley. I think the only other JB romance I cried during was KNOX'S STAND, but that's cause I was super emotionally involved with Knox and Diamonds story...and Knox is a friggin marshmallow.....(#TeamKnox), sorry, back to Fat Louise (Jane) and Sexy Mr. Cade....love him, hate him...it's all the same to him!
I think Jamie really shakes things up with the Biker Bitches novellas. She takes these tough biker chicks, and she totally turns the tables on our assumptions on these ladies. I mean, SEX PISTON a Virgin...WHAT?! And now Fat Louise heading into a cartel run, mexican city to save her spoiled bitch of a sister....You Go Fat Louise!! (and I have to say, I LOVE that her name is Jane).
Cade had NO idea what he was getting himself into when he took the job to extract the girls, and after he is done with the job, he finds himself being drawn to Jane, and he takes matters into his own hands. What happens isn't an easy HEA, it's heartbreak, stupid pride and some very yummy make up sex...hee hee
Begley rocks the bicthes!! Keep em coming girl! I need me some Train and Killyama next!
I think Jamie really shakes things up with the Biker Bitches novellas. She takes these tough biker chicks, and she totally turns the tables on our assumptions on these ladies. I mean, SEX PISTON a Virgin...WHAT?! And now Fat Louise heading into a cartel run, mexican city to save her spoiled bitch of a sister....You Go Fat Louise!! (and I have to say, I LOVE that her name is Jane).
Cade had NO idea what he was getting himself into when he took the job to extract the girls, and after he is done with the job, he finds himself being drawn to Jane, and he takes matters into his own hands. What happens isn't an easy HEA, it's heartbreak, stupid pride and some very yummy make up sex...hee hee
Begley rocks the bicthes!! Keep em coming girl! I need me some Train and Killyama next!
March 27, 2018
I loved Fat Louise but I really didn't warm up to Cade till the very end and that was reluctantly
February 1, 2021
I loved jane. She was a pure human being who deserves the best and I don't think she got it. She deserves someone better than Cade. I didn't like Cade at all like he needed therapy. I just love Sex Pixton.
January 29, 2015
I enjoyed this book about one of my fav " biker bitch" Fat Louise.My reading slump broke with this book and I was a happy camper.
At first, Cade was an ass and typical manslut, but he did redeem himself towards the end. I wished that this book could have been longer to draw this couple's romance out more as I felt shortchanged in the romance dept, but it was great to see Sex Piston and her crew. The Last Riders made an appearance and it makes me want Lucky's book now.
At first, Cade was an ass and typical manslut, but he did redeem himself towards the end. I wished that this book could have been longer to draw this couple's romance out more as I felt shortchanged in the romance dept, but it was great to see Sex Piston and her crew. The Last Riders made an appearance and it makes me want Lucky's book now.
January 27, 2015
I enjoy reading Jamie's books, but alway end up rating them lower than expected...I think it would be great if just one of her H kept their d#?k in their pants...then I reckon I would be getting into more stars!
January 26, 2015
I'm loving the cover but isn't Fat Louise supposed to be.. er.. fat? or a lil chubby? O_O
Yeah?
No?
Maybe?
Ok.
ANYWAY.. can't wait to read this book!
As far as I remember, Fat Louise is more interested in food than dick so this will be interesting! Ohh.. and she loves Popeye's fried chicken! (just my kinda girl!)
Edited:
4.5 Stars! I loved Jane aka Fat Louise! I don't know but I really have a soft spot for doormatish heroines. She's insecure but did not come off as whiny.
Now Cade.. sigh.. I'm not really a big fan of Cade, he
He fucked up here.. big time, but it didn't bother me to the point that I would give this a low rating. I hated him and would love to smack the effing out of him but I think that mistake made him.. er.. more real? and made the story more interesting.
The whole story is well written, it kept me on the edge. :)
So now the real question is.. Who's the next one? I'm hoping its Killyama and Train! OMGEEE!
January 27, 2015
Jane "Fat Louise", (what a name!) is not fat, she does eat a lot and frequently. She's usually the quiet one in this girl biker's group. She trusts her friends to defend her and keep her safe but when her half sister is in trouble in Mexico, she's determined to save her and bring her back home without endangering her girlfriends.
Cade Reed is a mercenary, when Fat Louise's dad pays him to rescue the two girls, he can't turn down the money. When he meets them, he can't seem to decide what to do with them and letting go of Jane is harder than he thinks. Life gets only more complicated when Cade decides to check out the MC life.
So I have learned to enjoy this world. This world were the heroes are not perfect. Not by a long haul. Sometimes it makes me so mad that I see red. Regardless, by the end I have forgiven these bastards and just like the heroine, they have my heart.
Cade made me furious at times. Man up dude! came to mind more than once but like I said in the end all was forgiven.
I loved Jane and I wished she didn't have to suffer so much pain in her life. Luckily, she has killer girlfriends. Killyama and Sex Piston especially. Thanks to Killyama we get some Last Riders cameos.
I wonder who's next in this series...
"Run, Jane, but when you get tired, I'll still be here. I'm not going anywhere."
4/5 Fangs
MrsLeif's Two Fangs About It
May 8, 2015
SPOILER ALERT!!!!
So I'd read reviews and was prepared for the cheating hero of this book. The weird thing is that I wasn't annoyed with him while he was screwing other chicks, but once he'd decided he wanted to be with Jane (Fat Louise) and was pursuing her big time, I kept thinking what an asshole he was.
And thank god Jane mostly went by her real name throughout the book! Fat Louise was only thrown in here and there. One of the reasons I hadn't read this book sooner was because of how much I hated the nickname Fat Louise.
I thought the plot was great in Mexico, definitely full of action and suspense.
ANOTHER SPOILER ALERT!!!
As happy as I was about Bailey getting what she deserved, it was kind of sad about Jane's father also dying. I'd hoped things could be patched up between them.
The only thing missing from the book would have been more from Cade's POV about how much he loved and cherished Jane. She was a really good person and it would've made me feel better about all his cheating.
So I'd read reviews and was prepared for the cheating hero of this book. The weird thing is that I wasn't annoyed with him while he was screwing other chicks, but once he'd decided he wanted to be with Jane (Fat Louise) and was pursuing her big time, I kept thinking what an asshole he was.
And thank god Jane mostly went by her real name throughout the book! Fat Louise was only thrown in here and there. One of the reasons I hadn't read this book sooner was because of how much I hated the nickname Fat Louise.
I thought the plot was great in Mexico, definitely full of action and suspense.
ANOTHER SPOILER ALERT!!!
As happy as I was about Bailey getting what she deserved, it was kind of sad about Jane's father also dying. I'd hoped things could be patched up between them.
The only thing missing from the book would have been more from Cade's POV about how much he loved and cherished Jane. She was a really good person and it would've made me feel better about all his cheating.
July 24, 2015
This was such an emotional read for me..
Not sure if I was PMSing or something but I couldn't stop the damn waterworks sheesh..
Cade had me wanting to rip his balls off a few times but he grew on me EVENTUALLY..
and Jane was just so gullible.. I wanted to shaker her up a bit as well!!
Not sure if I was PMSing or something but I couldn't stop the damn waterworks sheesh..
Cade had me wanting to rip his balls off a few times but he grew on me EVENTUALLY..
and Jane was just so gullible.. I wanted to shaker her up a bit as well!!
February 18, 2024
Please STOP ending books around 79%
Fat Louise I think is the nicest of the crew. She thinks of everyone else before herself. Cade I could smack a few time for being so good at rescuing people he can be really slow when it comes to the relationship.
Fat Louise I think is the nicest of the crew. She thinks of everyone else before herself. Cade I could smack a few time for being so good at rescuing people he can be really slow when it comes to the relationship.
January 23, 2015
5 Fat Stars!
Review by Natasha Gentile
I am in love with Jamie Begley and her Last Riders series. I will read anything that she writes, and I have to say that when I get these books I am one very scared person, because with Jamie you never know what you're going to get and who is going to get it!
This time she is back to the Biker Bitches and oh how we have missed Sex Piston and her crew.
Fat Louise has gotten herself into a pickle. Actually not really Fat Louise, more like her sister Bailey. She thinks it was a good idea to go to Mexico with her husband. Little did she know that her brother- in- law, well he’s not that nice of a person!
She needed a hero; instead, she got Cade.
This book was action packed- I tried to read faster than my eyes could go!
You see Cade, well he’s been hired to go in and rescue both girls. Bring them out. Little did he know that one look at her and he would be toast. He wanted to save her and get his kicks on and then leave. That is what he’s know for. He has no ties to anyone and that is the only way he wants it.
He expected a biker bitch who knew the rules; instead, he got Fat Louise.
Fat Louise has one problem, she has been so mentally bullied by her sister that she thinks she is just an after thought. She thinks no one really wants her, she thinks she is the ugly one of her friends and that is so far from the truth. Ready to let loose one night she goes out hoping to get someone drunk enough to sleep with her. Seriously seems like the roles are reversed. Little does she know that none other than Cade would be the one to take her on.
Now let me tell you how much I loathed Cade. I really did. He was the biggest ass out there. I can’t begin to tell you how I wanted to jump into the book and kick him so far up the wazoo. I didn’t think it would be possible for Jamie to actually redeem him, but well Jamie does what she does best, not only do you end up loving him, you end up rooting for him. This woman...
Now I know many of you get don’t like the cheating that goes on in these books, and I have to say I for one hate cheating. But it really isn’t cheating in their world, and when they finally get together, the men become whipped, but don't let on to any of these biker guys know you are on to them!
I was so excited to see many of her book series intertwine with each other. Now I’m ready for more.. You are going to give me more, right Jamie?
Review by Natasha Gentile
I am in love with Jamie Begley and her Last Riders series. I will read anything that she writes, and I have to say that when I get these books I am one very scared person, because with Jamie you never know what you're going to get and who is going to get it!
This time she is back to the Biker Bitches and oh how we have missed Sex Piston and her crew.
Fat Louise has gotten herself into a pickle. Actually not really Fat Louise, more like her sister Bailey. She thinks it was a good idea to go to Mexico with her husband. Little did she know that her brother- in- law, well he’s not that nice of a person!
She needed a hero; instead, she got Cade.
This book was action packed- I tried to read faster than my eyes could go!
You see Cade, well he’s been hired to go in and rescue both girls. Bring them out. Little did he know that one look at her and he would be toast. He wanted to save her and get his kicks on and then leave. That is what he’s know for. He has no ties to anyone and that is the only way he wants it.
He expected a biker bitch who knew the rules; instead, he got Fat Louise.
Fat Louise has one problem, she has been so mentally bullied by her sister that she thinks she is just an after thought. She thinks no one really wants her, she thinks she is the ugly one of her friends and that is so far from the truth. Ready to let loose one night she goes out hoping to get someone drunk enough to sleep with her. Seriously seems like the roles are reversed. Little does she know that none other than Cade would be the one to take her on.
Now let me tell you how much I loathed Cade. I really did. He was the biggest ass out there. I can’t begin to tell you how I wanted to jump into the book and kick him so far up the wazoo. I didn’t think it would be possible for Jamie to actually redeem him, but well Jamie does what she does best, not only do you end up loving him, you end up rooting for him. This woman...
Now I know many of you get don’t like the cheating that goes on in these books, and I have to say I for one hate cheating. But it really isn’t cheating in their world, and when they finally get together, the men become whipped, but don't let on to any of these biker guys know you are on to them!
I was so excited to see many of her book series intertwine with each other. Now I’m ready for more.. You are going to give me more, right Jamie?
January 23, 2015
I loved this book. It was a bit different. More emotional. Begley managed to make me shed a few tears.
Fat Louise (Her real name is Jane) is off to Mexico without her biker bitch friends to save her beautiful and spoiled sister, Bailey, from her cartel boss of a husband.
Cade is a retired missionary who comes out of retirement for the can't-pass-up money that Jane and Bailey's dad offered to bring them both home.
Getting out of Mexico is an adventure for sure. It was fun to read. Jane has a huge crush on Cade, but years of insecurity makes Jane afraid to go after what she wants.
After a misunderstanding, Jane is finally back home safe. I loved Jane. She's so relatable. We've all felt not good enough at some point. But Jane always manages to hold her head high even after so many disappointments. It was nice to see how much her biker family cared about her even if she didn't always know it.
Cade shows up to the clubhouse to become a member. He also can't get Jane out of his head. But he screws up royally. Idiot!
After Mexico I felt lukewarm towards Cade. I thought the sex scenes were too few and they were awkward. I didn't feel that spark. But really that's my only complaint.
Jane is plenty strong enough to read this book just for her. For her transformation. For the girl power. For the sweet, sad moments. For the hilarity. And for the encouragement. Well done!
Fat Louise (Her real name is Jane) is off to Mexico without her biker bitch friends to save her beautiful and spoiled sister, Bailey, from her cartel boss of a husband.
Cade is a retired missionary who comes out of retirement for the can't-pass-up money that Jane and Bailey's dad offered to bring them both home.
Getting out of Mexico is an adventure for sure. It was fun to read. Jane has a huge crush on Cade, but years of insecurity makes Jane afraid to go after what she wants.
After a misunderstanding, Jane is finally back home safe. I loved Jane. She's so relatable. We've all felt not good enough at some point. But Jane always manages to hold her head high even after so many disappointments. It was nice to see how much her biker family cared about her even if she didn't always know it.
Cade shows up to the clubhouse to become a member. He also can't get Jane out of his head. But he screws up royally. Idiot!
After Mexico I felt lukewarm towards Cade. I thought the sex scenes were too few and they were awkward. I didn't feel that spark. But really that's my only complaint.
Jane is plenty strong enough to read this book just for her. For her transformation. For the girl power. For the sweet, sad moments. For the hilarity. And for the encouragement. Well done!
January 26, 2015
2.5/3 stars
I wasn't really to interested in this story. It didn't hold my attention very much. I do love Fat Louise and Cade was an okay H. But other than wanting to know why they called her Fat Louise I didn't care for it.
I am looking forward to other stories by Jamie. This one just wasn't for me.
I wasn't really to interested in this story. It didn't hold my attention very much. I do love Fat Louise and Cade was an okay H. But other than wanting to know why they called her Fat Louise I didn't care for it.
I am looking forward to other stories by Jamie. This one just wasn't for me.
January 24, 2015
This book made me cry TWICE, my heart literally broke for Fat Louise & I still feel that Cade is a little undeserving, but I really enjoyed the story & thought it was a great second book to the series, right Sex Piston & Fat Louise are now taken who's next?
March 11, 2017
Wait again. How did I miss this I'm such a fan.
Omg did he pull a "ross " and claim a break!!!!
Love my gals
Omg did he pull a "ross " and claim a break!!!!
Love my gals
December 5, 2016
Another cheating asshole
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