Er ist der 64-Millionen-Dollar-Goldjunge. Ich bin der Bösewicht, den jeder gerne hasst. Und jemand hat uns gerade auf Kamera erwischt.
GRAHAM
Mein Leben ist eine Inszenierung.
Als Kapitän von Torontos berühmtestem Profiteam habe ich die Maske aus Trophäen und medientauglichem Lächeln perfektioniert. Ich bin eine Marke, keine Person. Und eine Marke hat keinen Platz für einen Mann wie Ty Macek.
Vor zehn Jahren war er der Erste, der das Chaos unter meiner Rüstung gesehen hat. Dann bin ich einfach gegangen und habe ihn im Ungewissen gelassen.
Jetzt sind wir Zimmergenossen im Team Canada, und der Lärm in meinem Kopf verstummt nur, wenn er in der Nähe ist. Ich weiß, dass mein Podest bald zerbröckeln wird. Mir war nur nicht klar, wie sehr ich fallen wollte.
TY
Ich lebe für den Check. Es ist einfacher, der meistgehasste Enforcer der Liga zu sein, als wirklich gekannt zu werden.
Ich habe nie erwartet, das Ahornblatt zu tragen. Und ich habe schon gar nicht erwartet, mir ein Hotelzimmer mit dem Mann zu teilen, der am Morgen, nachdem er mir das Herz gebrochen hatte, einfach durch mich hindurchgesehen hat.
Die Welt will, dass wir Rivalen sind. Aber jemand beobachtet uns aus dem Schatten heraus. Jemand hat Fotos von dem, was hinter verschlossenen Türen geschieht.
Wenn ich mich jetzt nicht von Graham Holt fernhalte, werden die Leute, denen dieses Spiel gehört, sein Vermächtnis dem Erdboden gleichmachen.
Auf dem Eis spielen wir um Gold.Abseits des Eises bin ich das Einzige, was zwischen ihm und dem Ende seiner Welt steht.
3 Stars are only because I enjoyed reading it and like the dynamic of ty and graham but this is by far not edited. There are more timeline and continuity errors in this book than water on the earth. I’m overdoing it but yeah if this book gets re edited and the mistakes fixed it can be a solid three star book maybe even four stars
A mere 41 pages in, and the inconsistencies are seriously frustrating already.
Graham is stunned by the coaches speech after dinner, when he finds out (for the first time supposedly) that some guys will be doubled up. He's shocked to be paired with Ty. But why??! He'd already barged into Ty's room and told him they were sharing- this was BEFORE the dinner btw. And after they both checked into their own separate rooms across the hall from each other, (NOT adjoining like the coach states later). The author even mentioned the king beds in both. Yet another discrepancy; later the coach says they're twins. Best of all, far before either got to Montreal, Ty gets a text from Graham saying they'll be roommates. WTF?! All of these inconsistencies should have been caught during writing and proofing. No clue how the author confused so much, so often. I'm already dreading how many more times these characters will completely contradict themselves and each other. Roughly 300 pages to go. To be continued...
I really liked them. Golden boy and the bad boy are ALWAYS a good match. Their relationship goes from 0 to 100 in a day, but who cares? 😂
BUT I don’t think the book was properly edited. Why does Ty get a message from his dad on his burner phone and says Mom probably helped because his dad isn’t good with technology… when a few chapters later the dad has already been dead for a long time and the mom has had Alzheimer’s for years?
And even if that did make sense, how would she even get the number of a burner phone when the only person who knows about it is a teammate?
And in an earlier chapter, a reporter asks, “You and Tyler Macek are roommates for this tournament. What’s it like sharing space with the league’s most notorious enforcer?” But a few chapters later there’s this huge storyline about someone leaking the room assignments and exposing that they’re roommates. That’s basically where everything starts to spiral.
But… the author already let the media know earlier. So yes, you definitely have to overlook a few plot inconsistencies 😂
Errori e refusi a più non posso, oltre al fatto che è il secondo, e ultimo, libro che leggo di questo autore e che è una copia del primo per diverse dinamiche, soprattutto quelle famigliari dove il padre cerca di sottomettere il figlio e quando non ci riesce cerca di boicottarlo in tutti i modi, poi anche la cosa che prima padre e figlio si danno del tu, come è normale che sia, e poi dopo poco passano al lei. Anche il cognato coreano che poi ad un certo punto si scopre donna?? Insomma traduzione pessima ma anche scrittura pessima e con poca fantasia. Dimenticavo che prima il padre di Ty é morto, poi ad un certo punto il ragazzo dice di aver ricevuto un suo messaggio e poi dopo un po salta di nuovo fuori che é morto!
The story was sound, but it felt like the author had written various bits individually and then cobbled them together. Plot points didn't always line up, details go confused. Hell, Tys dad msgd him one page, then a few pages later he was dead.
These inconsistencies are a shame because it could have been a decent read otherwise.
I couldn't finish due to continuity mixups. It's pretty bad.
It seems written by AI, a human editor would have caught this. The roommates situation is revealed three different ways??
First theres an anonymous text Ty seems to know is from Graham. Then Graham goes to 1215 then moves to 1214, walking into the room, pushing past Ty.
THEN there's a physical list of room assignments after the team dinner where they both find out for the first time???
It's like the book was written with the same overall ai prompt but fed in different times then the individual chapters got picked at random... I can't find the author on social media either and aaalll the mm hockey romance authors are online.
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It started ok, promising even, but the continuity issues were too much. Just a few chapters in and my head kepy spinning with but didnt theg said this or that, and now this doesnt make sense. Example: Ty gets random text with "roommates" then you read Graham POV and he is not one to send that type of text. Each one has a room neighbors not roommates. Suddenly Graham knocks on Ty's door and says they are roommates now. Dinner they announced some will be roommates, wait didnt tgey already know They list the rooms like connecting, but before they said were across the hallway. Then in the room, is totally a different room. Yeah my head was spinning and this was just starting. This story needs an editor.
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Clear editing mistakes, short/choppy paragraphs, blatant copying of this work in other books by the same "author". Also clear looking at the authors page, publishing multiple books a month and lack of any details.
If you're ok with AI slop, go for it, but definitely don't pay money for this book.
story line: *** main characters: *** side characters: *** world building: ** editing: * The story had potential, but I didn't feel a connection between the mc's and some serious editing needs to be done.
I thought I was going crazy reading this book. Pretty sure they said "I love you" for the first time in two different chapters. I kept having to reread parts as it repeated then plit of the story but in a different way.
An enjoyable and easy read about parental control and not being able to be yourself. I liked the way Ty and Graham really saw each other. And their honesty with each other. I certainly didn't like Graham's dad!
Not bad but not great. Needs some editing due to some inconsistencies from chapter to chapter. Try’s too hard in places to be like heated rivalry series
They don’t even try to hide it, I wouldn’t trust anything by this account. I’m not going to investigate any of the other entries but I’m sure they’re the same
so they found out at dinner they’d be sharing a room but the chapter before, one came into the other’s room (before dinner) to tell him they’re sharing, so when did they actually find out?
La storia è molto bella (anche se con qualche pezzo di trama che stona), peccato per la traduzione e gli errori di editing (si passa da tu al lei e non si capisce niente e ci sono anche parole in altre lingue, sempre diverse)