Rating: 3.5 stars
*Please note, I was provided with an ARC version of this book by the author and am voluntarily leaving an honest review*
I firstly need to admit that I committed a cardinal reader sin here: I failed to do a reread of book one before embarking on book two. Where the world the author has build is so vivid, nuanced and intricate, a reminder of the previous happenings is an absolute must, and it's clear that my failure to do so did have a knock on impact to my enjoyment. At the same time, however, I was definitely left wanting more!
The best thing about this book is the relationship between Hector and Arwyn. The hangover from the last book is perfectly continued here (yes, that part I did remember!) and the 'enemies' portion of 'enemies to lovers' is just electric. Their history means you can't help but feel the tension and chemistry between them, and honestly there is just something about their interactions that has you waiting for one of them to snap, grab the other by the throat and leave a trail of clothes to the bedroom. My only criticism is that the flip back to their previous good place is possibly a bit quick; there's a lot of history that feels a little brushed aside, and while they are just. So. Cute! When they're happy, at the same time it seemed to let that previously fiery tension slip away. It does recover significantly towards the end though, with the post-Trial scenes being gut-wrenching and beautiful... and their final scene just made me melt all over again.
In some respects, the pacing and overall plot of the book did feel like it mirrored this round of the Witch Trials a little - the end goal is clear, but the journey there is trying too hard to be original and so ends up as a bit of a cobbled together job. The writing didn't feel quite as disciplined as the first time around (or indeed as per many of the author's other works); there are perhaps just a few too many plot strands to weave together, so none of them really get the depth of attention they deserve. As a result, it was harder to truly engage with the story as I just couldn't invest in the 'life or death' nature of the situation. There are also several instances of plot points being introduced and their resolutions falling a bit flat. I honestly don't think it's a bad book at all; it is an enjoyable read overall, but there's just something missing from the mix.
At least now I do have a better understanding of Tomin and why he is the way he is. I mean, the zealotry totally makes sense now. But in the wider community? Forgive me, but I still have just a tiny amount of good faith in human nature and struggled with the notion that, even if there was a mass witch attack, the populace would all quite happily resort to the pyre within 24 hours. This made the settibg much harder to picture; it still felt like we were looking at more like 15th / 16th century London. On a related note, I’m the first to tell you that, in a fictional world, even if it mirrors our own, history and fact mean nothing; if this London burns witches, then fine! But yes, my inner history nerd did get a bit itchy - in England we hang witches, we don't burn them...
Put both halves of the duet together and you have a really good time. But by itself, while still very entertaining, it just didn't quite check all my boxes.