One Direction fanfic - Larry Falling in love with your step-brother’s best friend is a disaster enough. When he happens to be the boy everyone loves and you’re a nerd who wears sweater vests and cries during rom-coms, it takes it to a whole new level. Words: 77538 complete
This was a nice one. There was barely any drama through which is what I really wanted from it. It was all very smooth sailing and the only real drama is in the “alternative ending” on the authors tumblr page. This fic was basically smut with more smut with a side serving of fluff and a slimmer of plot. The story itself was interesting though and their dynamic was kind of cute. I did enjoy reading this and it was a nice fic; It was nice to read about Harry crushing on him for years and then seeing Louis finally like him back and see them start to like each other. It was very fast paced but overall a nice read.
So, in my opinion this ff has a wonderful start and the idea is already brilliant on its own. But then in the middle it gets long and a bit boring. I really like the Harry and Louis of this acting at the beginning, but then I start to dislike them very much. Above all I think that the epilogue is not nice. I think the end needed to be revised but the beginning is really good
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so fun fact, i started reading this and thought it sounded familiar - didn't remember much of the plot anyway so i read it and went to ao3 to give it a kudos and apparently i already left one, probably ten years ago.