These MCs were immature throughout the whole book. (Possible spoilers ahead)
I think the bones of the plot were unusual and could have really been a great story, but it got bogged down and became clunky. There were things that made no sense.
So 6 years previously, H dated h’s BFF, Harper. One day, H and h had a private talk, where h let her guard down and admitted she liked to write dirty fanfic. H went back and told Harper, then Harper blasted it all over the school. 🙄 End of that friendship.
So, now they’re all at the same college. H’s relationship with Harper is always so back and forth. One minute they date, the next they break up. Typical college behavior
h is the nerdy, overweight girl who writes dirty fanfic. She has major trust issues. h and Harper are no longer friends. h hates H. h keeps mentioning how H bullied her, but most of the things were very mild. Mostly, it was just H sharing her secret about the fanfic.
There’s some goofy college thing where H is involved in some type of bachelor reality show. 10 girls enter, and he picks one to be his homecoming date and they also win 10k.
This year, somebody has put up h to be a contestant. She is not happy but decides to go along with it to pay H back for all the years bullying her. Well, it’s H who put h up for this contest. He has plans to win her over, while she has plans to ruin him. 🤪
Let’s me state again- these two are painfully immature
H will spend the majority of the book lying to h. He lies about stuff that he didn’t even need to. h will spend the majority of the book lying to H and being in her head about how insecure she is. Her poor BFF, Cole, is stuck in the middle of this nasty mess. She basically treats Cole like crap. I loved how h apologized to Cole at the end and he’s like “yeah, I don’t think we can be friends anymore”
What gets me- It’s revealed H has LOVED h for 6 years. Huh? He was even in love with her when he was dating Harper? Ouch.
Then we have the setup by Harper by pretending she slept with H. So….after h believes H had just slept with Harper, h decides to go over there and hate shag him??? Wut the fk? Eek 😱 Even though we know he didn’t sleep with Harper, h does believe he did. Why would you want to sleep with a guy who supposedly just had smex with another woman?
I’m sorry, but I would have a BIG problem with my bf hanging around in his dorm room with his ex. 🤷♀️ especially if she’s my ex BFF. Now…..I did like that Harper admitted she set the whole thing up and I’m glad h decided NOT to be friends with her.
The biggest issue I had with this book other than the immaturity of the MCs- it was the chemistry between the MCs. There was none. At least none that would explain why these two were attracted to each other.
Finally, I feel the other 9 contestants got totally ripped off. H already KNEW h was going to win this money from the start. The other contestants were scammed. Boooooo