The winter dreams of an ambitious young Midwesterner burn at first like fever, but then gradually mature into a serene season of disillusionment, in F. Scott Fitzgerald’s story “Winter Dreams,” a 1922 work that bears comparison with Fitzgerald’s novelistic masterpiece The Great Gatsby (1925). As Gatsby would do more memorably three years later, “Winter Dreams” interrogates the ideology of the American Dream as it shows its protagonist pursuing not only financial success but also a transcending of his socioeconomic class origins – all of which is tied up in his love for a beautiful and seemingly unattainable woman.
The early passages of “Winter Dreams” introduce the reader to Dexter Green, a young man whose father owns a grocery store in the lakeside resort town of Black Bear Lake, Minnesota. In the summertime, when well-to-do tourists come from the Twin Cities to golf at Black Bear, Dexter caddies for pocket money, thus gaining exposure to members of the social elite and their ways.
Fitzgerald was born and raised in Saint Paul, Minnesota, and I find that some of my favorite passages from his work are those in which he provides evocative description of his northern homeland, as when the story’s narrator describes, early in the tale, how,
In the fall, when the days became crisp and grey, and the long Minnesota winter shut down like the white lid of a box, Dexter’s skis moved over the snow that hid the fairways of the golf course. At these times, the country gave him a feeling of profound melancholy – it offended him that the links should lie in enforced fallowness, haunted by ragged sparrows for the long season. It was dreary, too, that on the tees where the gay colors fluttered in summer there were now only the desolate sandboxes knee-deep in crusted ice. When he crossed the hills, the wind blew cold as misery, and if the sun was out he tramped with his eyes squinted up against the hard dimensionless glare. (p. 2)
In his work as a caddy, the 14-year-old Dexter encounters the wealthy and well-connected Mr. Mortimer Jones, and makes a very good impression, but abruptly quits caddying because he finds that he is disturbed by Jones’s 11-year-old daughter Judy. The story’s narrator states that “There was a general ungodliness in the way her lips twisted down at the corners when she smiled, and in the…almost passionate quality of her eyes. Vitality is born early in such women” (p. 3). Dexter feels a “spark” upon meeting Judy, who says that she needs a caddy so she can learn to play golf, and the reader gets a sense that Judy will be a character of importance in Dexter’s future – that, as the narrator puts it, “As so frequently would be the case in the future, Dexter was unconsciously dictated to by his winter dreams” (p. 4).
As Fitzgerald himself did in real life, Dexter in “Winter Dreams” leaves his Midwestern home for an elite Eastern university that sounds a lot like Fitzgerald’s own alma mater of Princeton. Dexter sounds something like Jay Gatsby, in that “He wanted not association with glittering things and glittering people – he wanted the glittering things themselves” (p. 7). Unlike Gatsby, who made his money through bootlegging, Dexter makes his money legally, by developing a series of laundries in a Midwestern city. Gifted a guest card for the Sherry Island Golf Club, Dexter once again encounters Judy, and is once again impressed by her beauty and charm, as the color in her cheeks “and the mobility of her mouth gave a continual impression of flux, of intense life, of passionate vitality – balanced only partially by the sad luxury of her eyes” (pp. 8-9).
When Dexter sees Judy later that day, and they are swimming together at the lake, he hears a popular tune of the day being played on a piano on shore, and “The sound of the tune precipitated in him a sort of ecstasy, and…with that ecstasy he viewed what happened to him now. It was a mood of intense appreciation, a sense that, for once, he was magnificently attuned to life, and that everything about him was radiating a brightness and a glamour he might never know again” (pp. 9-10). Judy expresses an interest in seeing Dexter again; Dexter’s “heart turned over like the fly-wheel of the boat, and, for the second time, her casual whim gave a new direction to his life” (p. 11).
The admirer of Fitzgerald’s work, by this point, is likely to have a strong sense that Dexter’s feelings for Judy Jones are quite similar to Jay Gatsby’s feelings for Daisy Fay Buchanan in The Great Gatsby. For Dexter, Judy embodies something deliciously unattainable – a chance not to build success from his humble origins, but rather to re-make himself as someone who is upper-class and somehow always has been. She is, for Dexter, what the green light shining at the end of Daisy’s dock was for Gatsby who looked across the bay at that shining green light, night after night after night.
Dexter’s recollection of the first time he kissed Judy has that delirious, magical quality of a number of passages from The Great Gatsby:
There was a pause. Then she smiled and the corners of her mouth drooped and an almost imperceptible sway brought her closer to him, looking up into his eyes. A lump rose in Dexter’s throat, and he waited breathless for the experiment, facing the unpredictable compound that would form mysteriously from the elements of their lips. Then he saw – she communicated her excitement to him, lavishly, deeply, with kisses that were not a promise but a fulfillment. They aroused in him not hunger demanding renewal but surfeit that would demand more surfeit – kisses that were like charity, creating want by holding back nothing at all. (pp. 13-14)
At the same time, Dexter is capable of observing, quite dispassionately, that “Whatever Judy wanted, she went after with the full pressure of her charm” (p. 15). The beautiful, charming, wealthy, much-sought-after Judy can take up a new beau or drop him with equal facility – and Dexter knows that he means no more to her, in that regard, than any other beau. He reflects grimly that Judy “was entertained only by the gratification of her desires and by the direct exercise of her own charm. Perhaps from so much youthful love, so many youthful lovers, she had come, in self-defense, to nourish herself wholly from within” (p. 16).
There is a brief engagement; but then Dexter sees another man taking his place in Judy’s affections, and the engagement is broken off. He becomes engaged to another girl, who comes of a good family and is “light-haired and sweet and honorable, and a little stout” (p. 17); she does not cast a spell as Judy does, but Dexter gets the sense that she will make a good wife, and her family likes him too. But in the time between their January engagement and their plans to announce the engagement in June, “The Minnesota winter prolonged itself interminably” (p. 18), and a series of chance events brings Judy back into Dexter’s life. One sees Judy’s brittleness and fragility as she invokes their past love – “‘I’m more beautiful than anyone else,’ she said brokenly, ‘why can’t I be happy?’” (p. 21) – and one senses that things will not end well.
In some ways, as mentioned above, Dexter Green recalls Gatsby; the story’s final section recounts how, when the Great War began, “He was one of those young thousands who greeted the war with a certain amount of relief, welcoming the liberation from webs of tangled emotion” (p. 24).
In other ways, however, Dexter may remind the reader more of Nick Carraway, the narrator and choral figure of Gatsby; like Nick, Dexter is capable of beta-thinking, of looking back on and consciously questioning his earlier behaviour, as when, in the story’s concluding section, he looks back on his relationship with Judy Jones and reflects that “He loved her, and he would love her until the day he was too old for loving – but he could not have her. So he tasted the deep pain that is reserved only for the strong, just as he had tasted for a little while the deep happiness” (p. 24). Hearing, years later, of what happened to Judy – an outcome that the reader may find surprising -- Dexter thinks with sadness that “these things were no longer in the world! They had existed, and they existed no longer” (p. 27).
Written in the sort of prose poetry that is characteristic of the work of this author whose work always seems to create a world of the brilliant and doomed, “Winter Dreams” provides a good if lesser-known example of the artistry of Francis Scott Key Fitzgerald.