2★'s fck me, this finale felt anemic, and the twilight: breaking dawn ending was the final straw. it’s been days since i finished this book, and the disappointment keeps growing.
the first book was phenomenal—easily one of my best reads of 2025. they also changed the art in this book, and i think it's way better. unfortunately, the second book suffered from middle-book syndrome, and this finale ended up being the most disappointing of the three.
in my opinion, Gabriel de León’s best moments have always been the ones he shares with his brothers—aaron, baptiste, and the silversaints. their camaraderie was one of the strongest elements of the first book, and something i sorely missed in the sequel. that’s why i was relieved to see that brotherhood return in the first act of this finale.
but that relief faded quickly once the story shifted toward celene and wulfric’s backstory (does it have to be so long? i think this should’ve been in book 2) and dior’s role as the grail, while gabriel, the main character, was pushed further and further into the background...
it felt like kristoff forgot his own protagonist—gabriel is absent for about 60% of the book. because of that, the middle part felt like a slog without him. it was incredibly frustrating that he didn’t get any epic moments like in the first book. he is the heart and anchor of this story, the very reason i fell in love with it. i wanted the finale to focus on him, to see his arc come full circle, yet the plot kept wandering away from him.
when gabriel finally reunited with dior after so long apart, i felt nothing. the emotional impact just wasn’t there—nowhere near the devastating moments he shared with aaron and baptiste. honestly, i’ve never bought the father-daughter dynamic. they barely connected in book one and in the next books they’re separated or arguing nonstop, they didn't had enough moments to bond, to grow, so their relationship always felt surface-level to me.
another major gripe is that most of the battle scenes are full of deus ex machina. even the characters are dumbfounded when something miracle happens to swoop in and save them from their own poor decisions.
there are a lot of battle scenes, but very few are epic and felt unrewarding to read with gabriel constantly beaten down, helpless while his loved ones are killed or in danger, not once he took control of his fights, making his “legendary” status as a vampire hunter so hard to believe. the battle at the city of leon was great though!! but after that everything felt flat.
but the biggest disappointment of all? we never even got to see gabriel explore or master sanguimancy, the special abilities about his esani bloodline that was teased in the first book. the 16 year old gabriel who could boil blood literally hasn’t evolved at all (well he can use his blood as a tracking device but that's it???) such a bummer that he had little character development BUT no power progression.
and this may be a small thing, but i was so disappointed that gabriel’s aegis light never returns after book one. other than his esani ability, the silverclad was one of the coolest, most original ideas i’ve seen in fantasy or vampire stories—hunters tattooing silver onto their skin to shine against vampires. it's literally what protected him during the battle of the twins, (the 3 vs. 10,000 vampires) in book one, yet in the sequel and this finale, that concept is all but forgotten. losing that element stripped away a major part of what made him and the series feel fresh and exciting.
the side characters are just as frustrating as in book two, constantly making dumb choices that make you want to pull your hair out. at times, i even found myself rooting for their deaths, even though they weren’t villains.
celene was insufferable, and i’m sorry, but i’ll never be a fan of reyne, dior, or phoebe. i still find their constant cursing off-putting, unnatural, and rude. dior is only 17, yet she swears like gabriel or phoebe, who are nearly twice her age. it ends up feeling the characters have the same age, same personality, same humor, they talk the same way, and share the same snarky and prideful attitude. which makes them feel so one-dimensional. their ages don’t feel believable at all (especially dior)
tbh, kristoff’s female characters didn’t fully work for me with many of them falling into that “not like the other girls” archetype.
as for the romance...personally, i found it gross, unnecessary, and completely unbelievable.
pls skip because the rant below contains more spoilers about the romance and the ending.
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but even after dior discovers her lover is her half-sister, she still wants to make out with her. YUCK. honestly, i appreciated the twist because there was hardly any chemistry between them.
the same goes for gabriel and phoebe. there’s barely any chemistry. at most, they feel like casual fuck buddies. i love romance, but this was the first time i actually wished there was none at all. i ended up skimming their intimate scenes because the dialogues were cringy—the constant “bite me”, “harder” and “hurt me” screams during sex made it feel far from romantic and more like porn.
on top of that, gabriel and phoebe were separated for roughly 80% of the book, so how are you going to convince me they're in-love? they only get together near the end of book two, and let’s not forget phoebe spent most of that book hating him and cursing him out. she saved his life and gave him a bl*wj*b, sure, but that alone doesn’t equal love.
and the constant exchange of “i still don't love you, gabriel de leon” and “i still don't love you too.” in mid battle scenes was so unnecessary. i hope it's true that they don't love each other.
sometimes i think it's best for some main characters to remain single, at least it's realistic for him to stay devoted to his deceased wife, than falling in love in less than a week with your fuck buddy. in the first two books, he dreams, yearns, talks about his beloved deceased wife—his queen. he couldn’t move on from astrid, because he was deeply in love with her, and have been married for 11 years. but the moment kristoff gives gabriel a fuck buddy so he can get laid, he suddenly stops thinking and talking about astrid in book three. even worse, he calls this new woman “his queen” too...hmm. idk, but astrid is the only queen to me. at this point, i’d rather Gabriel had died and reunited with the family he loved than end up in a romance with his fling.
the only romance that feels genuine and well-written is the queer relationship between aaron and baptiste.
what frustrated me most was the ending. it felt very “twilight”, a happy finale with no real consequences, where everything was a lie. i understand gabriel is an unreliable narrator, but the reveals still felt cheap after all the battles with supposedly powerful vampires. if the forever king couldn’t kill a single character, then the threat never felt real. after the brutal stakes of empire of the vampire, this was incredibly underwhelming and less impressive. it's the first time i felt disappointed that the characters that i was happy to be dead, are not dead...it's better when they stayed dead.
and because of that ending, i'm not sure i'd want to reread this series knowing everything is a one big lie. everything i’ve read feels meaningless because of that revelation. perhaps, i’m also a little okay knowing the things that hurt and grates me were also just lies…but as readers, we’ll never know the truth. we were left with too many plot holes. and you’ll never find the answers to those plot holes no matter how many times you reread the series because everything is a lie.
and to add but the story also felt predictable. gabriel insisting that dior is dead never fully works—especially when the white moth keeps appearing, like a red exclamation point screaming that she isn’t!! it was so obvious that they are just stalling, since something is clearly being set up for the end, likely an invasion, especially with all the vampire houses conveniently gathered in one place. so i find it weird how this was called master of storytelling when everything was pretty obvious from the start???
in the end, i still recommend empire of the vampire, it’s my favorite in the series, but end it there.