➸ 3.75/5 stars
I devoured this book for two big reasons:
1) It's Gothic, and I'm straight-up obsessed with the genre. Like, serve me a Gothic tale with a side of poison, and I’ll chug it without a second thought.
2) My bestie Iqra wanted to buddy read it, and of course, I was like, HELL YES!
This was my first Keri Lake book, It’s a promising start. Her writing is lush, dramatic, and just so exquisite. The way she uses language had me fully hooked I don’t even care what she’s writing about, it’s just gorgeous. Plus, she’s got that spooky, chilling touch with words that I absolutely loved. If I pick up more of her books, it'll be for the writing alone.
and Speaking of vibes... the Gothic vibes in this was Chef’s kiss. It delivered. The setting is eerie, smoky, and darkly atmospheric. it wraps around you and pulls you in. It’s everything I want from a Gothic dark fantasy with horror elements, and I ate it all up.
But... okay, let’s talk about the issues. Because as much as I enjoyed it, it wasn’t perfect. If you’ve read my reviews before, you know I’m picky about pacing and monologues. These two things can make or break a book for me, and unfortunately, both were shaky here.
First, the pacing. It wasn’t terrible. it wasn’t rush-rush or crawl-slow. But with 700 pages, it started feeling sluggish, especially in the second half. There were scenes that just dragged and didn’t really move the plot forward.
second, the monologues, they were beautifully written, don’t get me wrong. But there were just too many, and at some point, they started to feel like homework. The first half of the book had me thinking “four stars, easy,” but the second half brought the vibe down a notch.
Another thing is that at times, the book read more like a draft or a manuscript. There was so much repetition and filler info that the plot sometimes felt stuck in neutral. And the fantasy elements fell a little flat. I get what the author was going for, but the overuse of obscure, fancy words to build “depth” just didn’t land for me. It felt more like decoration than substance.
The main Characters:
Okay, let’s get into the tea.
Zevander. Rydainn. “The Scorpion of Nyxteros” Lord of Eidolon. My man. My man. My man. Who said this guy is like Rhysand? Zevander is just ✨better✨ Or maybe that’s my inner Rhysand hater showing. Either way, Zev is all kinds of broody, sexy, and sharp tongued. His filthy poetic mouth, I was living for it. Their banter was absolute Perfection.
“Goodnight.”
“Goodnight, Lunamiszka.”
“Do I still annoy you?” she asked.
“Endlessly.
Maevyth had so much potential. she comes from this badass lineage and has the wild ability to control “death”. But somehow, she spends most of the book as a damsel in distress, constantly needing Zev to save her. Girl, come on! It was frustrating to read, especially over 700 pages.
now for the side characters:
Dolion I’m Obsessed!! 😭 He’s hilarious, unhinged, and brilliant. a total scene stealer. And Rykaia and Aleysia? I’m screaming!!! please, can we get a spinoff or FF romance for them? They’d be everything. And that ending?! That cliffhanger. I can’t lie, even with all the flaws, I need the second book immediately. I had so much fun reading this. it wasn’t perfect, but sometimes i like messy books!
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Thank you for my baby iqra—we Finally buddy read something after being friends in here for almost two years lmaoo we did jump from tt to fable to here, it was a chaotic br but so fun and I can’t wait for us to read book two!!