This book was super frustrating to finish. Typos, inconsistent character names, derivative details aside, this dark romance would be a lot better if it wasn't a romance.
First of all, this book is as dark as the color gray. If there are "pitch black" dark romances, this would be more like a "twilight dark" romance. One explicit sex scene, mentions of drug addiction, kidnapping but that to me isn't dark.
Next, this story would vastly improve without the romance element. Specifically, without the toxic male main character. Honestly, the story was super intriguing for the first 100 pages. After dealing with her drug addict mother's death and living on the streets, suddenly Peyton's world is turned upside down when she is brought to her mother's hometown and she meets her biological father. Suddenly plucked from the streets of L.A., Peyton learns how to deal with being a part of a family and community and her time working on the ranch is helping her to be more mindful, heal, and find some peace for herself.
And then Colter shows up and Peyton's story turns from one of healing and self-discovery to an overpowered cowboy mafia empire where Colter is the crown prince and everyone bends to his will. Even though the story is dual POV, we mostly get Peyton's story so whatever chapters are through Colter's eyes are filled with his own self-absorbed views that his word is law, he claims Peyton as his, and no one is to question him because he was power. And once their "romance" develops, it is super quick (even Peyton thinks it is too quick!), they are barely together to make it romantic or have any feasible chemistry (they don't even know anything about each other, likes and dislikes, moods, etc).
I personally despise Colter. I see a lot of reviews that DNF because he was with another girl and Peyton caught them. This HIS POV, the reader is lead to believe that the other girl really is nothing. Just a bit of stress relief (btw any female character who isn't Peyton is basically either a sex object or wholesome ranch wife, nothing else). But then it is revealed that this other girl was in love with him for AGES, wanted to be married to him, but he and his father didn't want that. So instead...Colter just uses the girl for sexual relief for over a decade. Absolutely VILE. And this is never properly dealt with. And because Colter is the cowboy mob boss, he is an overpowered "perfect" example of toxic masculinity who is obsessed and manipulative and no one can stand against him. There is nothing to like because there is nothing that humanizes him, we can't empathize with him. He is just a mythical being that we are supposed to be in awe of because he has power.
The reason I am giving three stars is because this story has potential but I hope that the writer does a re-release with lots of heavy edits. Now, it is too repetitive, too derivative (character named John Denver, town named Crimson Ridge when there is another cowboy romance series, describes itself as Yellowstone-vibes), and the romance is not there at all.
Thank you to the Smuthood PR for giving me an advanced reader's copy in exchange for an honest review.