Awesome. Some people gripe about the ending, but I like it just fine. When Willie told Octavia he'd see her later, I'm sorry to say I didn't believe him. But I should have believed more in the character, who we saw gain confidence and become more at ease in the world and with himself. Also, it's a dramatic rule of three. If a character tries something twice and fails both times, naturally s/he will succeed the third time, the time that really counts. Conversely, if someone has a proven method that nearly always works, it will let them down at the worst possible time. So Doyle and Jimmy's tricks work on people who are uneducated, scared, and don't know their rights. I should have known Willie wouldn't panic and let himself be jerked around like those others. So I find the ending totally believable and satisfying.
I read this prepared to ask myself if anything's changed in 50+ years. Well, one thing has: accountability. Dash cams, body cams, people with phone cameras. Also better training as far as sensitivity and not violating citizens' rights, and more citizens *knowing* their rights. And it's less acceptable, pretty much unacceptable, to brag about giving a civilian a "love tap...just *ing with him." Please don't think I'm saying that everything's okay now! Just that I don't think there's anyone still young enough to be active-duty police, who is white and thinks of non-whites as not really being citizens, or not really being *people*.
I appreciated getting the POV of the car salesman. Gah. So many white characters made simian comparisons about black people, and what happens when something upsets Chick? He picks up the nearest object and hurls it at the TV*, like an ape throwing a banana at the zookeeper. He loved his country? I'm sure he did. But it was Smith and Carlos' country too, and besides being a country that's supposed to have free speech, it was a country that wasn't doing right by a large part of the population. Not that I expect a guy like Chick to understand that, of course. Just saying that that kind of reaction sort of proves the point, that a lot of white people were unreasonable in what they expected from black people, and maybe it shouldn't have been up to them to *expect* anything, when they couldn't act civilized themselves.
All in all, it was upsetting to read at times (I swear, every character, black or white, used the N-word. I think the only exception was the Latino bartender.), but I feel better overall, having read it. And there were fewer implausible encounters with real historical figures than in "Motor City" (yes, I know this is not a sequel to that). Well done.
*But I wish there'd been a mention of what happened about the TV. Did he have to pay for it? I don't think there's ever been a time, since TV was invented, when replacing a TV was a trivial expense, and this was a color set in 1968. I hate to think of him getting a mulligan, ha ha, on that.