The Demon's Watch was a weird book for me. On one hand, I love a nautical, piratey setting, & unlikely heroes such as Grubb. The story, too, was good, gripping & interesting, & all the different threads were tied up nicely. Port Fayt had a very specific feel to it that I liked, & although it took me an an entire quarter of the book to realise there was a guide on what the different creatures living in Fayt were, the port itself felt very alive.
My problem with this book is its presentation. It has a very hectic way of switching between setting & POV characters, even in the middle of chapters, that made it far more convoluted to read, & sometimes forced me to reread an entire page to figure out which character I was following now & where exactly they were. Some of the chapters could've been so much shorter, if the point of view change in the middle of them was just turned into its own chapter.
Another thing was Joseph Grubb himself, & how the book presented him. By the blurb, I excepted him to actually DO something, even if not immediately. Instead, the first three quarters of the book were almost never from his point of view, leaving him to feel underutilised & like this wasn't his story, but Tabitha's instead. There are good books that make you believe one character is the main character, the hero, the protagonist, when someone else is actually the main focus of the story, but this book isn't one, even if it didn't feel like this weird stylistic choice was nothing more than an accident. And, the fact that Newton was so ready to let Grubb join the Demon's Watch before the actual climax (Grubb had proven himself by the Epilogue, but I am not talking about the Epilogue), when all he had done by that point was manage to hold onto the package & get tossed into a shark pit seemed so hamfisted.
Speaking of the Demon's Watch, I didn't like them. Just, as a company of crimefighters, I didn't like them. Their fame didn't feel deserved, they weren't mystical enough, there was nothing in the book that truly made me feel like this was a group of actually powerful individuals who deserve the fame they have. The worst contenders of this were Hal & Old Jon, whose skills & powers were hardly expanded upon (especially in the case of Hal, & magic in this world as a whole) & they barely even felt like characters at all. Old Jon is just an old elf who fights with an old cudgel & rarely speaks, & Hal is a stuck up aristo mage who gets tired after one spell. Even the Bootle twins have more personality than that. I can only hope they get better in the sequels.
One thing I did like, however, was, spoilers ahead:
Slik's betrayal. I felt sufficiently angry when that happened, & thinking back at earlier parts of the book, I can definitely say that his two-facedness was warranted & hinted at prior, mainly in his dislike of Newton & the crass way he talked to the other watchmen. It was a very minor aspect of the actual book, but it was a good part, & I enjoyed it.