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The Admiral's Daughter: A Sapphic Romance
A sapphic romance set on the high seas
An arrogant sailor who never sticks around.
A guarded journalist who doesn’t trust the Navy.
One reckless night turns into months at sea…
Royal Navy able rate River Dawson never drops anchor in the same harbor twice—especially when it comes to women. With a reputation as the fleet’s heartbreaker, she lives for no-strings seductions and swift departures. But when her latest redheaded fling turns out to be the Admiral’s daughter—and her new crewmate aboard HMS Queen Elizabeth—River’s easy-come, easy-go lifestyle hits rough waters.
Cleo Carter has sworn off sailors. After years of watching duty outrank family—and suffering one heartbreak too many—she’s done with sea life. But when she’s assigned to cover one of her father’s ship, Cleo finds herself trapped on board with the one woman she should’ve left on shore.
As scandal brews and sparks ignite below deck, River and Cleo must decide if their chemistry is just a shipboard fling—or the start of something worth risking everything for.
Perfect for fans of sapphic romance, forbidden love, and sharp banter.
An arrogant sailor who never sticks around.
A guarded journalist who doesn’t trust the Navy.
One reckless night turns into months at sea…
Royal Navy able rate River Dawson never drops anchor in the same harbor twice—especially when it comes to women. With a reputation as the fleet’s heartbreaker, she lives for no-strings seductions and swift departures. But when her latest redheaded fling turns out to be the Admiral’s daughter—and her new crewmate aboard HMS Queen Elizabeth—River’s easy-come, easy-go lifestyle hits rough waters.
Cleo Carter has sworn off sailors. After years of watching duty outrank family—and suffering one heartbreak too many—she’s done with sea life. But when she’s assigned to cover one of her father’s ship, Cleo finds herself trapped on board with the one woman she should’ve left on shore.
As scandal brews and sparks ignite below deck, River and Cleo must decide if their chemistry is just a shipboard fling—or the start of something worth risking everything for.
Perfect for fans of sapphic romance, forbidden love, and sharp banter.
443 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 3, 2026
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Alyson Root
21 books237 followersAlyson was born and raised in the heart of England. She moved to Paris in 2015 when she met her wife. Together they moved to the west of France where they now live with their two dogs and pet bird. Alyson spends her time running a small campsite and holiday home. During her off time, she loves to read lesbian romance books, write and Scuba Dive.
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February 3, 2026
The Admiral's Daughter by Alyson Root started well enough for me. There were some laughs from the banter, and we quickly got an idea of our main characters' personalities and respective traumas.
A playboy sailor looking for another leave conquest and a journalist with a sailor fetish hook up for a one-time fling. To both of their surprise, Cleo has been enlisted by her admiral father to write an article on the Royal Navy while aboard the very ship where River is stationed.
They briefly discuss the night and go their separate ways. Of course, despite the size of the ship, they are forever in each other's orbit, and the forced proximity takes its toll. Due to circumstances, they end up talking again, and up until this point, I had been happily going with the flow. Both have been very adamant about their positions: River doesn't do relationships, and Cleo doesn't date sailors. I don't want to include spoilers, but in a record-scratch moment for me, without much build-up to a relationship and in a somewhat impulsive way, they change things up. At that point, it felt abrupt and incongruous. I was so thrown—actually surprised at my strong reaction. However, I wanted to finish this review copy so I could give my honest opinion, and I carried on.
I actually ended up enjoying the story overall. I found both main characters to be immature at points, but endearing. They showed solid growth. There is a strong found-family support system. The Navy insight was nice. The camaraderie aspect was lovely. The scandal mentioned in the blurb is interesting and adds a bit of adversity to manage. I liked the romantic grand gestures and the trajectory of the main relationship. The ending was good, but it also included a time jump that glossed over a large portion of time that would have included some significant challenges and growth opportunities for the couple.
This novel was good—not my favorite by this author, but enjoyable. I will always pick up books by Alyson Root. I give this one 3.5 stars, rounded up.
PS That cover is fantastic!
#RoyalNavy #investigativejournalist #sailor #oppositesattract #forcedproximity #onenighttoforever #scandal #HEA #consentissexy #competencyissexy
I received a review copy from the author. This is my honest opinion.
A playboy sailor looking for another leave conquest and a journalist with a sailor fetish hook up for a one-time fling. To both of their surprise, Cleo has been enlisted by her admiral father to write an article on the Royal Navy while aboard the very ship where River is stationed.
They briefly discuss the night and go their separate ways. Of course, despite the size of the ship, they are forever in each other's orbit, and the forced proximity takes its toll. Due to circumstances, they end up talking again, and up until this point, I had been happily going with the flow. Both have been very adamant about their positions: River doesn't do relationships, and Cleo doesn't date sailors. I don't want to include spoilers, but in a record-scratch moment for me, without much build-up to a relationship and in a somewhat impulsive way, they change things up. At that point, it felt abrupt and incongruous. I was so thrown—actually surprised at my strong reaction. However, I wanted to finish this review copy so I could give my honest opinion, and I carried on.
I actually ended up enjoying the story overall. I found both main characters to be immature at points, but endearing. They showed solid growth. There is a strong found-family support system. The Navy insight was nice. The camaraderie aspect was lovely. The scandal mentioned in the blurb is interesting and adds a bit of adversity to manage. I liked the romantic grand gestures and the trajectory of the main relationship. The ending was good, but it also included a time jump that glossed over a large portion of time that would have included some significant challenges and growth opportunities for the couple.
This novel was good—not my favorite by this author, but enjoyable. I will always pick up books by Alyson Root. I give this one 3.5 stars, rounded up.
PS That cover is fantastic!
#RoyalNavy #investigativejournalist #sailor #oppositesattract #forcedproximity #onenighttoforever #scandal #HEA #consentissexy #competencyissexy
I received a review copy from the author. This is my honest opinion.
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January 25, 2026Thank you NetGalley and the publisher (author?) for the ARC in exchange for a review.
I don't think classifying this as a "slow burn" is the best description to use. While there is definitely a slow build element to it, and there is emotional development and growth that happens, a "slow burn" to me is when it takes characters a significant portion of the book to get together (the sweet spot for me is roughly around 75% of the way through it). There is something akin to insta-love (or, er, lust) between these two since River and Chloe sleep together before the book starts, and they begin dating fairly early on. Rather than "slow burn", I would instead call this a relationship study. Chloe truly has the patience of a saint, lol.
I did enjoy the discussions surrounding emotional vulnerability and that the two didn't jump straight into a deep relationship. There were some moments I found myself smiling at, especially the creative ways the two go on "dates" in the book. This was a great depiction of a healthy relationship rife with actual communication; although River can be quite immature in moments, I think the author did an excellent job of holding River accountable for her immaturity and using conflict/obstacles as a way to deepen Chloe and River's relationship. I also loved the inclusion of Cheddar, Kit, and Boot. It was quite nice that they were in the story quite frequently, as a huge shortcoming (I find) of romance books is that friends fall to the wayside.
One thing I wished to see more of was the final get together scene. It would have been emotionally impactful to see one final scene between River and Chloe where they reunite without hesitation or fear for the future—instead, there is a timeskip, then an epilogue.
As a side note, I am not rating this book on platforms, mostly because this is an ARC of an indie writer in a genre I personally do not read often, and I find that unfair. I also think it's high time I accept that I am just not a romance-genre reader. While I have certainly read many romance novels in the past, I find myself always wishing for more than just romance (I!! am!!! an!!! idiot!!!!!).
This is definitely a great romance book for someone specifically looking for the relationship growth between two women. I found myself far more interested in Chloe's article and wish that had been pulled to the forefront of the story rather than being a secondary plot, and I wanted to see a littleeee bit more of what River actually does as a crew member. But again: I think I am just not a romance genre reader. I was, however, in the mood to read a HEA about two lesbians, and I got just that, so with that I am pleased.
I don't think classifying this as a "slow burn" is the best description to use. While there is definitely a slow build element to it, and there is emotional development and growth that happens, a "slow burn" to me is when it takes characters a significant portion of the book to get together (the sweet spot for me is roughly around 75% of the way through it). There is something akin to insta-love (or, er, lust) between these two since River and Chloe sleep together before the book starts, and they begin dating fairly early on. Rather than "slow burn", I would instead call this a relationship study. Chloe truly has the patience of a saint, lol.
I did enjoy the discussions surrounding emotional vulnerability and that the two didn't jump straight into a deep relationship. There were some moments I found myself smiling at, especially the creative ways the two go on "dates" in the book. This was a great depiction of a healthy relationship rife with actual communication; although River can be quite immature in moments, I think the author did an excellent job of holding River accountable for her immaturity and using conflict/obstacles as a way to deepen Chloe and River's relationship. I also loved the inclusion of Cheddar, Kit, and Boot. It was quite nice that they were in the story quite frequently, as a huge shortcoming (I find) of romance books is that friends fall to the wayside.
One thing I wished to see more of was the final get together scene. It would have been emotionally impactful to see one final scene between River and Chloe where they reunite without hesitation or fear for the future—instead, there is a timeskip, then an epilogue.
As a side note, I am not rating this book on platforms, mostly because this is an ARC of an indie writer in a genre I personally do not read often, and I find that unfair. I also think it's high time I accept that I am just not a romance-genre reader. While I have certainly read many romance novels in the past, I find myself always wishing for more than just romance (I!! am!!! an!!! idiot!!!!!).
This is definitely a great romance book for someone specifically looking for the relationship growth between two women. I found myself far more interested in Chloe's article and wish that had been pulled to the forefront of the story rather than being a secondary plot, and I wanted to see a littleeee bit more of what River actually does as a crew member. But again: I think I am just not a romance genre reader. I was, however, in the mood to read a HEA about two lesbians, and I got just that, so with that I am pleased.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
Thank you to NetGalley for the advanced reader copy.
3.5/5— rounded up to 4/5 for review.
Pros:
- This is just a really feckin' fun book. Truthfully, I was genuinely never bored reading this. I found both of the characters likeable and, for a book that's marketed as a slow-burn, I felt as though the relationship actually progressed really quickly. (Or maybe I'm just used to 40k-words-just-for-a-kiss type slowburn?)
- It is so unapologetically queer. So gay. Nearly every single character in this book is queer. I love it. You know those kinds of books that are, like, "Oh, there are these two girls and they like each other, but they're not gonna address how they're sapphic and stuff?" This is not that. It's himedanshi heaven.
Cons:
- I was kind of just wishing for more beneath the main relationship? This might just be because I don't typically read romance books, but I felt as though this book had so many opportunities to delve deeper into certain topics. I enjoyed the subplot with WO Benson, but it felt as though it was over just like that. The amount of angst potential just solved in, like, 5 chapters. Same thing goes with the themes. There are themes like trust, camaraderie, pleasure, growth, but it didn't really feel like it went anywhere except for the main relationship. Which, again, I don't read much romance, but I felt as though there was a big missed opportunity to send a larger message to the audience.
- They didn't bring up the actual reason why River joined the Navy after the interview; I was genuinely curious!
- There are a couple typos, which I suppose are to be expected from indie publishers, but I'll point them out anyway. The ones I spotted are in chapter 11 ('literary' instead of literally) and 29 ('to' instead of 'too'). These aren't bad enough to deter me or anything, but it always makes me pause slightly.
3.5/5— rounded up to 4/5 for review.
Pros:
- This is just a really feckin' fun book. Truthfully, I was genuinely never bored reading this. I found both of the characters likeable and, for a book that's marketed as a slow-burn, I felt as though the relationship actually progressed really quickly. (Or maybe I'm just used to 40k-words-just-for-a-kiss type slowburn?)
- It is so unapologetically queer. So gay. Nearly every single character in this book is queer. I love it. You know those kinds of books that are, like, "Oh, there are these two girls and they like each other, but they're not gonna address how they're sapphic and stuff?" This is not that. It's himedanshi heaven.
Cons:
- I was kind of just wishing for more beneath the main relationship? This might just be because I don't typically read romance books, but I felt as though this book had so many opportunities to delve deeper into certain topics. I enjoyed the subplot with WO Benson, but it felt as though it was over just like that. The amount of angst potential just solved in, like, 5 chapters. Same thing goes with the themes. There are themes like trust, camaraderie, pleasure, growth, but it didn't really feel like it went anywhere except for the main relationship. Which, again, I don't read much romance, but I felt as though there was a big missed opportunity to send a larger message to the audience.
- They didn't bring up the actual reason why River joined the Navy after the interview; I was genuinely curious!
- There are a couple typos, which I suppose are to be expected from indie publishers, but I'll point them out anyway. The ones I spotted are in chapter 11 ('literary' instead of literally) and 29 ('to' instead of 'too'). These aren't bad enough to deter me or anything, but it always makes me pause slightly.
February 3, 2026
Review of an advanced copy received from NetGalley
2.5 ⭐ rounded up to 3!
This was a lovely read and I did really like seeing how River's character and her relationship with Cleo progressed (even if it was faster than I would usually prefer) and the fact that River’s friends have such a prominent role! However, I do think some more time could have been spent on that sub plot with Cleo’s investigation and the writing style was unfortunately just not to my tastes. In addition, and perhaps this is a little petty, but I am very particular with the usage of slang and that 100% colored my opinion on the writing.
Overall, this one I think would better suit those who are seeking a more lighthearted, low stakes sapphic romance with plenty of spice!
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC!
2.5 ⭐ rounded up to 3!
This was a lovely read and I did really like seeing how River's character and her relationship with Cleo progressed (even if it was faster than I would usually prefer) and the fact that River’s friends have such a prominent role! However, I do think some more time could have been spent on that sub plot with Cleo’s investigation and the writing style was unfortunately just not to my tastes. In addition, and perhaps this is a little petty, but I am very particular with the usage of slang and that 100% colored my opinion on the writing.
Overall, this one I think would better suit those who are seeking a more lighthearted, low stakes sapphic romance with plenty of spice!
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC!
February 3, 2026
Fabulous read by an amazing author! I was sucked in from the very first line lol. I very much enjoyed the dual POV’s as they really added more depth and understanding to the MC’s.
Cleo is the Admiral’s daughter. She wants nothing to do with the Navy having been burned not only with her father but also her ex.
River has built her life around the Navy, her small found family and playing on every shore leave.
After a fun night, both women are faced with being near one another for a couple of months. River’s world is thrown into turmoil because 1: seeing a one night stand again and 2: having her ego slighted. Forced proximity, chemistry and openness may just lead to something both women are meant to find…
Highly recommend!
Cleo is the Admiral’s daughter. She wants nothing to do with the Navy having been burned not only with her father but also her ex.
River has built her life around the Navy, her small found family and playing on every shore leave.
After a fun night, both women are faced with being near one another for a couple of months. River’s world is thrown into turmoil because 1: seeing a one night stand again and 2: having her ego slighted. Forced proximity, chemistry and openness may just lead to something both women are meant to find…
Highly recommend!
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
A super cute, sex-positive lesbian romance in dire need of more swashbuckling.
ARC was provided by the publisher via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
ARC was provided by the publisher via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
3.5 ⭐
This story follows River, a sailor whose main love language is love ’em and leave ’em and Cleo, a journalist who’s asked by her father (the admiral) to write an article encouraging people to enlist. Things get complicated when Cleo realizes her one-night stand from the night before is actually River — who now has to act as her guide during two months at sea. So the question becomes: was that night just a one-time thing, or the start of something neither of them expected?
This book felt different from what I usually read from Alyson, but in a good way. The premise immediately caught my attention because sapphic navy romances are still pretty rare, and I was really excited to see how the story would handle that setting.
I genuinely liked both FMCs. River especially stood out to me. I loved how meeting Cleo shifted something inside her; not just romantically, but in how she saw her future in the navy and in life in general. Watching her slowly grow into a more grounded, emotionally honest version of herself was really satisfying. She moves from that classic charming casanova energy into someone who is more self-aware and emotionally present. And her relationship with her shipmates? One of my favorite parts. The found family vibes were strong, and you could really feel how much they protected and supported each other. As her walls start coming down, you realize River has always cared deeply about others, even when she tried to hide it. Seeing her get nervous around Cleo was honestly adorable, and I loved how she made the effort to communicate, even when it was new and uncomfortable for her. It made their growing relationship feel very genuine.
With Cleo, I initially thought River would be the one struggling more emotionally, but I think it turned out to be Cleo. And honestly, it makes total sense once you understand her history with her parents and her past experiences with navy culture. I’ll admit her arc didn’t hit me as strongly as River’s, maybe because I didn’t connect with her as deeply. But I still appreciated how the book showed her motivations as a journalist. Her curiosity and strong sense of justice leading her to expose what was happening on the Royal Navy ship was really compelling.
Another thing I really appreciated was how the story handled dysfunctional families. River’s parents shaped her ability to trust people, and you can see how that fear of things “not leading anywhere good” influenced her relationships. I liked seeing her set boundaries and stand firm about cutting off toxic behavior. With Cleo, I found it really interesting to see her trying to repair her relationship with her dad despite everything that happened with her mom. I do wish we had gotten more scenes exploring that, but overall, this part of the story felt very real and emotionally layered, and it was something I personally connected with.
If I had to point out something that didn’t fully work for me, it would be how fast their relationship started. It felt a little hard to believe how quickly they moved from trying to forget their night together to being completely focused on each other, especially River. At first, it gave me strong insta-love vibes. That said, I ended up really liking how their relationship developed during their dates. You could see them building emotional intimacy and trying to figure out if they could actually last long-term. By the end, I was rooting for them. The epilogue time skip, though, surprised me... and not in the best way. Since their relationship still felt new, I wanted more exploration of how hard it is to date someone in the navy. That’s a unique kind of distance and uncertainty, and I felt like we skipped over a big emotional section of their relationship. Because of that, the ending didn’t feel as smooth or as emotionally satisfying as I wanted.
Overall, this was a solid romance. Maybe not Alyson’s most memorable one, but still really enjoyable. If you love found family, slightly awkward but very sweet first dates, and stories that show what life at sea can be like, this is definitely worth picking up.
Thank you NetGalley & publisher for the early read!
This story follows River, a sailor whose main love language is love ’em and leave ’em and Cleo, a journalist who’s asked by her father (the admiral) to write an article encouraging people to enlist. Things get complicated when Cleo realizes her one-night stand from the night before is actually River — who now has to act as her guide during two months at sea. So the question becomes: was that night just a one-time thing, or the start of something neither of them expected?
This book felt different from what I usually read from Alyson, but in a good way. The premise immediately caught my attention because sapphic navy romances are still pretty rare, and I was really excited to see how the story would handle that setting.
I genuinely liked both FMCs. River especially stood out to me. I loved how meeting Cleo shifted something inside her; not just romantically, but in how she saw her future in the navy and in life in general. Watching her slowly grow into a more grounded, emotionally honest version of herself was really satisfying. She moves from that classic charming casanova energy into someone who is more self-aware and emotionally present. And her relationship with her shipmates? One of my favorite parts. The found family vibes were strong, and you could really feel how much they protected and supported each other. As her walls start coming down, you realize River has always cared deeply about others, even when she tried to hide it. Seeing her get nervous around Cleo was honestly adorable, and I loved how she made the effort to communicate, even when it was new and uncomfortable for her. It made their growing relationship feel very genuine.
With Cleo, I initially thought River would be the one struggling more emotionally, but I think it turned out to be Cleo. And honestly, it makes total sense once you understand her history with her parents and her past experiences with navy culture. I’ll admit her arc didn’t hit me as strongly as River’s, maybe because I didn’t connect with her as deeply. But I still appreciated how the book showed her motivations as a journalist. Her curiosity and strong sense of justice leading her to expose what was happening on the Royal Navy ship was really compelling.
Another thing I really appreciated was how the story handled dysfunctional families. River’s parents shaped her ability to trust people, and you can see how that fear of things “not leading anywhere good” influenced her relationships. I liked seeing her set boundaries and stand firm about cutting off toxic behavior. With Cleo, I found it really interesting to see her trying to repair her relationship with her dad despite everything that happened with her mom. I do wish we had gotten more scenes exploring that, but overall, this part of the story felt very real and emotionally layered, and it was something I personally connected with.
If I had to point out something that didn’t fully work for me, it would be how fast their relationship started. It felt a little hard to believe how quickly they moved from trying to forget their night together to being completely focused on each other, especially River. At first, it gave me strong insta-love vibes. That said, I ended up really liking how their relationship developed during their dates. You could see them building emotional intimacy and trying to figure out if they could actually last long-term. By the end, I was rooting for them. The epilogue time skip, though, surprised me... and not in the best way. Since their relationship still felt new, I wanted more exploration of how hard it is to date someone in the navy. That’s a unique kind of distance and uncertainty, and I felt like we skipped over a big emotional section of their relationship. Because of that, the ending didn’t feel as smooth or as emotionally satisfying as I wanted.
Overall, this was a solid romance. Maybe not Alyson’s most memorable one, but still really enjoyable. If you love found family, slightly awkward but very sweet first dates, and stories that show what life at sea can be like, this is definitely worth picking up.
Thank you NetGalley & publisher for the early read!
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
When I do ARC reads, I find myself returning to the book blurb to reconcile the narrative. The reason I wanted to read it was because of the Navy framework in which a sapphic romance buds.
Alyson Root’s “The Admiral’s Daughter” gave me more than that, but also less. The story revolves around River and Cleo spending a rewarding night together, with River sneaking off in the morning. This doesn’t sit well with Cleo. The next day, the Admiral wants Cleo on the ship so her journalism skills can increase recruitment. River is assigned escort duty. So, bitterness becomes the underlying foundation of the women’s interactions as they come to terms with being more closely acquainted.
Structurally, Root’s novel is sound. It’s gone through an editing process, so readability is high. Dual POVs, immediate tension when Cleo (the titular character) joins the ship and River freaks out, and progressive worldbuilding within the Navy where WLW has normalized within a patriarchal system. The women serving aren’t given special treatment. In the realm of normalized WLW, I especially admired the strong friendship between River and her friends/teammates. It’s my first time reading a Navy romance, and for that, I’m happy I went with a sapphic take.
I also appreciate the well-rounded secondary characters. River’s friends tease her for her habits, but they also have backstories. The narrative gives them depth throughout the narrative and shows the reason why River is considered a good friend. Despite the progressive Navy, discrimination lingers in the atmosphere, which makes found family so much sweeter in the novel.
The “less” part of the novel had been voice. I find River’s character very flat when it comes to the romantic aspect, and since her POV opens the book, the first chapter had been jarring. The interiority overexplains often, such as trying to justify that River’s habits require therapy but she’s too ‘badass’ to bother. While tempting to DNF at that point, I pushed forward, remembering that the world itself called my interest. In contrast, Cleo has stronger POV, almost compensating in who River is through her interactions on the ship. Sometimes, she also falls into similar issues as River, where sex is on her mind, like seeing potential in the ship’s Captain.
Lust overtakes voice. One of the strongest motifs in the novel is one-night stands, particularly from the non-committal River. It’s understandable that lust would play a huge part, given what Chapter 1 shows. This can work for readers who want more lust-tones rather than a balance of plot and romance. It just didn’t work for me because I hadn’t expected it. Related to voice, the dialogue in the first part didn’t always land for me. Establishing dynamics can be hard, as can dialogue tags when there’s a group of people using the same pronouns. I appreciate that Root tried to make it easier for the reader via nickname use in dialogue.
For the reasons I’ve listed, I rate the novel a 3/5. However, I’m positive that the themes and characterization will work for many sapphic fans. Root’s writing style is very clean, straightforward, and progresses plot, just missing an equal strength of voice.
Alyson Root’s “The Admiral’s Daughter” gave me more than that, but also less. The story revolves around River and Cleo spending a rewarding night together, with River sneaking off in the morning. This doesn’t sit well with Cleo. The next day, the Admiral wants Cleo on the ship so her journalism skills can increase recruitment. River is assigned escort duty. So, bitterness becomes the underlying foundation of the women’s interactions as they come to terms with being more closely acquainted.
Structurally, Root’s novel is sound. It’s gone through an editing process, so readability is high. Dual POVs, immediate tension when Cleo (the titular character) joins the ship and River freaks out, and progressive worldbuilding within the Navy where WLW has normalized within a patriarchal system. The women serving aren’t given special treatment. In the realm of normalized WLW, I especially admired the strong friendship between River and her friends/teammates. It’s my first time reading a Navy romance, and for that, I’m happy I went with a sapphic take.
I also appreciate the well-rounded secondary characters. River’s friends tease her for her habits, but they also have backstories. The narrative gives them depth throughout the narrative and shows the reason why River is considered a good friend. Despite the progressive Navy, discrimination lingers in the atmosphere, which makes found family so much sweeter in the novel.
The “less” part of the novel had been voice. I find River’s character very flat when it comes to the romantic aspect, and since her POV opens the book, the first chapter had been jarring. The interiority overexplains often, such as trying to justify that River’s habits require therapy but she’s too ‘badass’ to bother. While tempting to DNF at that point, I pushed forward, remembering that the world itself called my interest. In contrast, Cleo has stronger POV, almost compensating in who River is through her interactions on the ship. Sometimes, she also falls into similar issues as River, where sex is on her mind, like seeing potential in the ship’s Captain.
Lust overtakes voice. One of the strongest motifs in the novel is one-night stands, particularly from the non-committal River. It’s understandable that lust would play a huge part, given what Chapter 1 shows. This can work for readers who want more lust-tones rather than a balance of plot and romance. It just didn’t work for me because I hadn’t expected it. Related to voice, the dialogue in the first part didn’t always land for me. Establishing dynamics can be hard, as can dialogue tags when there’s a group of people using the same pronouns. I appreciate that Root tried to make it easier for the reader via nickname use in dialogue.
For the reasons I’ve listed, I rate the novel a 3/5. However, I’m positive that the themes and characterization will work for many sapphic fans. Root’s writing style is very clean, straightforward, and progresses plot, just missing an equal strength of voice.
Review of advance copy received from Author
The Admiral’s Daughter by Alyson Root
Thanks to Aly for letting me have this one early!
At the start of this book, I thought I knew the direction it would take.
One hot cocky sailor wakes up next to a sexy redhead after a night of….Well….She doesn’t actually remember!
After sneaking out and leaving said redhead fast asleep, she rushes back to the naval base just in time for inspection
Little does River (aka cocky sailor) know that sexy redhead is in fact the daughter of the Admiral!
When Cleo, a journalist, is asked by her father to come on board HMS Queen Elizabeth to boost PR and encourage some new recruits, she’s soon comes face to face with the ships Romeo!
Now, you might think seeing they’ve already slept together it would just be a case of “Temptation is too much”….that they’ll be “ BOOM BOOM BOOMING” all over the ship?!
Nope! because suddenly this story becomes a slow burn.
After Cleo knocks River’s ego by saying their night together was “Very nice” LOL…
River isn’t impressed with this description and pouts a bit ha
Cleo explains she needs to feel a connection with her sexual partners for it to be anything MORE than “very nice”
River is then assigned to being her guide around the ship and introducing her to other crew members get a feel of life in the Navy
As they spend more time together, talking, being honest and open with not only their pasts but their feelings that are slowing growing, River sets out to prove she wants to be who Cleo needs by wooing her.
Cleo makes it very clear she doesn't want to River to change just for her.
Whilst yes, this a romance there’s also a side story happening, involving higher ranking officials and Cloe’s investigative journalism
We also get found family with River’s bunk mates Kit, Chedder & Boot who prove blood isn’t always thick
All in all, this is an Alyson Root book! Full of humour, fun interesting side characters, touching moments and topics that need handling with care handle…well….with care.
Thanks to Aly for letting me have this one early!
At the start of this book, I thought I knew the direction it would take.
One hot cocky sailor wakes up next to a sexy redhead after a night of….Well….She doesn’t actually remember!
After sneaking out and leaving said redhead fast asleep, she rushes back to the naval base just in time for inspection
Little does River (aka cocky sailor) know that sexy redhead is in fact the daughter of the Admiral!
When Cleo, a journalist, is asked by her father to come on board HMS Queen Elizabeth to boost PR and encourage some new recruits, she’s soon comes face to face with the ships Romeo!
Now, you might think seeing they’ve already slept together it would just be a case of “Temptation is too much”….that they’ll be “ BOOM BOOM BOOMING” all over the ship?!
Nope! because suddenly this story becomes a slow burn.
After Cleo knocks River’s ego by saying their night together was “Very nice” LOL…
River isn’t impressed with this description and pouts a bit ha
Cleo explains she needs to feel a connection with her sexual partners for it to be anything MORE than “very nice”
River is then assigned to being her guide around the ship and introducing her to other crew members get a feel of life in the Navy
As they spend more time together, talking, being honest and open with not only their pasts but their feelings that are slowing growing, River sets out to prove she wants to be who Cleo needs by wooing her.
Cleo makes it very clear she doesn't want to River to change just for her.
Whilst yes, this a romance there’s also a side story happening, involving higher ranking officials and Cloe’s investigative journalism
We also get found family with River’s bunk mates Kit, Chedder & Boot who prove blood isn’t always thick
All in all, this is an Alyson Root book! Full of humour, fun interesting side characters, touching moments and topics that need handling with care handle…well….with care.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for this ARC in exchange for an honest review. 3.5 Stars rounded to 4 for reviews
I’ve come to really love Alyson Root’s books. There is always more to the story than romance and she does a great job at doing so. I am not sure why this is labeled a slow burn, it honestly felt like they moved a little too fast for me. I get them being on a ship and close quarters but it still felt like both MCs were thinking about being in love within weeks.
I really enjoyed the investigative journalism Cleo did and would have loved to see even more of that. I think it was an important story to tell.
I liked how the author mentioned several times about Cleo not wanting to change who River was. The discussions on consent, fears, insecurities, etc were so well done!
The found family in The Admiral’s Daughter was a wonderful part of the story. I found myself wanting to know more about each of them and wouldn’t mind if they got their own little love story/back story. The love they all had for each other really showed.
I am a sucker for epilogues and I love when they are done far into the future. However, I feel like 15 years was too much. I wanted more before the epilogue, in terms of seeing how the MCs navigated their relationship with River being on leave for the majority of the year. A big plot point was that River went from being a womanizer/player to a kept woman. I get that it is said that she doesn’t see herself with anyone else and that Cleo changed things for her, but reality is reality. Any relationship with someone in the Navy, deployed nonetheless, is going to be difficult. I wanted to see more of that. I think if I did, I would’ve loved the 15 years later epilogue. I won’t spoil what happens in it, but I honestly would’ve figured that it would’ve happened already.
I definitely liked The Admiral’s Daughter but I don’t feel like it lived up to the standards I’ve come to know when it comes to Alyson Root’s works.
I’ve come to really love Alyson Root’s books. There is always more to the story than romance and she does a great job at doing so. I am not sure why this is labeled a slow burn, it honestly felt like they moved a little too fast for me. I get them being on a ship and close quarters but it still felt like both MCs were thinking about being in love within weeks.
I really enjoyed the investigative journalism Cleo did and would have loved to see even more of that. I think it was an important story to tell.
I liked how the author mentioned several times about Cleo not wanting to change who River was. The discussions on consent, fears, insecurities, etc were so well done!
The found family in The Admiral’s Daughter was a wonderful part of the story. I found myself wanting to know more about each of them and wouldn’t mind if they got their own little love story/back story. The love they all had for each other really showed.
I am a sucker for epilogues and I love when they are done far into the future. However, I feel like 15 years was too much. I wanted more before the epilogue, in terms of seeing how the MCs navigated their relationship with River being on leave for the majority of the year. A big plot point was that River went from being a womanizer/player to a kept woman. I get that it is said that she doesn’t see herself with anyone else and that Cleo changed things for her, but reality is reality. Any relationship with someone in the Navy, deployed nonetheless, is going to be difficult. I wanted to see more of that. I think if I did, I would’ve loved the 15 years later epilogue. I won’t spoil what happens in it, but I honestly would’ve figured that it would’ve happened already.
I definitely liked The Admiral’s Daughter but I don’t feel like it lived up to the standards I’ve come to know when it comes to Alyson Root’s works.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
The Admiral’s Daughter by Alyson Root is an engaging addition to her repertoire. She seems to have a knack for creating high-stakes environments, and the setting of the HMS Queen Elizabeth provided the perfect backdrop for the tension between River and Cleo.
And I enjoyed their character dynamic. River Dawson is the quintessential heartbreaker sailor—arrogant and elusive—while Cleo Carter brings a necessary groundedness as the guarded journalist who has reasons to be skeptical of the Navy. The "one reckless night" trope can sometimes feel overdone, but finding out that River’s fling was not only the admiral's daughter but also her new crewmate, of sorts, added a delightful layer of scandal and forced proximity. You’ll likely find the pages turning at a crisp pace :).
The banter between the two is sharp and funny, which helped balance the heavier themes of family duty and personal reputation. Root does well here with the slow-burn; the chemistry below deck is palpable, and the transition from a fleeting shipboard fling to something more substantial felt earned.
I’m rating this four stars rather than five for a couple of reasons: I found that the middle was slightly repetitive in terms of the "will-they-won’t-they" internal monologues. While the tension was excellent, there were moments where the pacing suffered a little by the characters’ hesitancy. Also, while River’s arc is satisfying, you’ll need to be ready for her initial arrogance and bear with it for a number of pages. You might find it a little jarring, as I did.
But The Admiral’s Daughter is a steamy, mainly well-paced romance that offers a neat nautical twist, great for those that enjoy forbidden love stories and strong, independent female leads. A solid 4-star read :).
Thank you to the author, the publisher, and to NetGalley for the opportunity to sail with the characters in this ARC.
And I enjoyed their character dynamic. River Dawson is the quintessential heartbreaker sailor—arrogant and elusive—while Cleo Carter brings a necessary groundedness as the guarded journalist who has reasons to be skeptical of the Navy. The "one reckless night" trope can sometimes feel overdone, but finding out that River’s fling was not only the admiral's daughter but also her new crewmate, of sorts, added a delightful layer of scandal and forced proximity. You’ll likely find the pages turning at a crisp pace :).
The banter between the two is sharp and funny, which helped balance the heavier themes of family duty and personal reputation. Root does well here with the slow-burn; the chemistry below deck is palpable, and the transition from a fleeting shipboard fling to something more substantial felt earned.
I’m rating this four stars rather than five for a couple of reasons: I found that the middle was slightly repetitive in terms of the "will-they-won’t-they" internal monologues. While the tension was excellent, there were moments where the pacing suffered a little by the characters’ hesitancy. Also, while River’s arc is satisfying, you’ll need to be ready for her initial arrogance and bear with it for a number of pages. You might find it a little jarring, as I did.
But The Admiral’s Daughter is a steamy, mainly well-paced romance that offers a neat nautical twist, great for those that enjoy forbidden love stories and strong, independent female leads. A solid 4-star read :).
Thank you to the author, the publisher, and to NetGalley for the opportunity to sail with the characters in this ARC.
Review of advance copy received from Author
📚 ARC Review 📚 Thanks to the author for this advanced copy in exchange for an honest review.
'The Admiral's Daughter' follows Cleo and River — two women who share one sexy night, only to discover, in a very sapphic twist of fate, that they’ll be spending the next two months at sea together.
Cleo is a journalist whose father is an Admiral in the Royal Navy. She’s joining HMS Queen Elizabeth to write a special segment on the fleet’s flagship. River, meanwhile, is a navy sailor — and ends up being appointed Cleo’s guide on board, turning close proximity into something even more intense 🔥
The story unfolds through dual perspectives and River’s voice is particularly engaging and fun, though initially arrogant and vulgar — a self-proclaimed “big-headed arsehole”. I warmed to her after a few chapters. Her early confidence, thinking she’s God’s gift, is made even funnier when juxtaposed with Cleo’s thoughts: Cleo couldn’t be less interested at first.
Their chemistry builds naturally, with River’s bruised ego leading them towards second chances, honesty and growth, alongside plenty of angst and yearning. It’s not quite a slow burn — feelings develop quickly, and we follow along as both women clearly want each other 🔥 While I personally would have loved a little more 🌶 at sea, there’s ample sexual tension, and it felt true to their characters really that emotional intimacy took precedence over physical chemistry.
I also enjoyed the investigative journalism subplot running alongside the romance. Overall, there’s a satisfying HEA and a romantic epilogue set fifteen years later. If you fancy escaping into a sapphic romance on the open sea, this is definitely one to pick up.
'The Admiral's Daughter' follows Cleo and River — two women who share one sexy night, only to discover, in a very sapphic twist of fate, that they’ll be spending the next two months at sea together.
Cleo is a journalist whose father is an Admiral in the Royal Navy. She’s joining HMS Queen Elizabeth to write a special segment on the fleet’s flagship. River, meanwhile, is a navy sailor — and ends up being appointed Cleo’s guide on board, turning close proximity into something even more intense 🔥
The story unfolds through dual perspectives and River’s voice is particularly engaging and fun, though initially arrogant and vulgar — a self-proclaimed “big-headed arsehole”. I warmed to her after a few chapters. Her early confidence, thinking she’s God’s gift, is made even funnier when juxtaposed with Cleo’s thoughts: Cleo couldn’t be less interested at first.
Their chemistry builds naturally, with River’s bruised ego leading them towards second chances, honesty and growth, alongside plenty of angst and yearning. It’s not quite a slow burn — feelings develop quickly, and we follow along as both women clearly want each other 🔥 While I personally would have loved a little more 🌶 at sea, there’s ample sexual tension, and it felt true to their characters really that emotional intimacy took precedence over physical chemistry.
I also enjoyed the investigative journalism subplot running alongside the romance. Overall, there’s a satisfying HEA and a romantic epilogue set fifteen years later. If you fancy escaping into a sapphic romance on the open sea, this is definitely one to pick up.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
The Admiral's Daughter follows Cleo, a journalist who happens to also be the Admiral's daughter of her majesty's Navy, and her father has strong arm her into writing an article for Navy recruitment. Before she joins the ship, she has a one night stand with River "Romeo" Dawson, a sailor that is allergic to commitment. But once River encounters Cleo on the ship and finds out that their one night stand was "Fine and nice", River's world is turned upside down. As they navigate their chemistry and connection on a ship brimming with its own intrigue.
I loved this book. I am not sure if I can pin point exactly what caught me, but I devoured this book quickly, to the point of staying up later than I should just to finish it. I like both River and Cleo as individuals and as a couple. They talked to each other, they make mistakes, but are mature about how they handle it. There is a bit of a mystery, not much, but enough to provide some tension without the characters acting poorly. Their ages are never mentioned, or at least not that I am aware of, so it makes it a little difficult to gauge their actions, but it is a very minor gripe.
Overall I really enjoyed this book very much. All of the characters, including the side characters were fun to read and made the story fly by. I would recommend this to anyone who enjoys contemporary romances, especially those who like the military or uniforms. The military aspects didn't feel overwhelming, this is a romance first. Definite read. I'll be revisiting this one again.
Thank you Netgalley for an ARC
I loved this book. I am not sure if I can pin point exactly what caught me, but I devoured this book quickly, to the point of staying up later than I should just to finish it. I like both River and Cleo as individuals and as a couple. They talked to each other, they make mistakes, but are mature about how they handle it. There is a bit of a mystery, not much, but enough to provide some tension without the characters acting poorly. Their ages are never mentioned, or at least not that I am aware of, so it makes it a little difficult to gauge their actions, but it is a very minor gripe.
Overall I really enjoyed this book very much. All of the characters, including the side characters were fun to read and made the story fly by. I would recommend this to anyone who enjoys contemporary romances, especially those who like the military or uniforms. The military aspects didn't feel overwhelming, this is a romance first. Definite read. I'll be revisiting this one again.
Thank you Netgalley for an ARC
Review of advance copy received from Author
River is a sailor and quite the player, she prides herself being great at her job and an excellent lover. There is a reason she is called River “Romeo” Dawson, but her one and done play is challenged when her most recent hook-up Chleo shows up at her ship the morning after she ditched her. The journalist Chleo Carter, the Admiral’s daughter, is joining the ship for two months to write a piece about how things work on a ship.
When they talk to clear up things, Chleo tells River that their night together was fine but not more, she needs also an emotional connection to really love it. River’s pride is hurt, she hooks up with a couple of other women to get over that, but nothing feels right since she still thinks about Chleo. River convinces Chleo that they should start dating as an experiment, to find out if they can be more, to test if dating is for her. Chleo not easy to convince to give her a chance because she does not trust any sailor but agrees finally. This experiment is very successful where they get to know each other and do not need to hook up all the time.
Overall this was an enjoyable read, personal growth and a fantastic friend group on the ship. However, I had a few issues. One was that I never really warmed up to River and Chleo being right for each other, I don’t understand the whole Benson side story and especially not how fast that suddenly was resolved and then the epilogue just jumps 15 years into the future before I even see the love story evolve into something real and not just lust.
I received a free ARC from the author and leave an honest review voluntarily.
When they talk to clear up things, Chleo tells River that their night together was fine but not more, she needs also an emotional connection to really love it. River’s pride is hurt, she hooks up with a couple of other women to get over that, but nothing feels right since she still thinks about Chleo. River convinces Chleo that they should start dating as an experiment, to find out if they can be more, to test if dating is for her. Chleo not easy to convince to give her a chance because she does not trust any sailor but agrees finally. This experiment is very successful where they get to know each other and do not need to hook up all the time.
Overall this was an enjoyable read, personal growth and a fantastic friend group on the ship. However, I had a few issues. One was that I never really warmed up to River and Chleo being right for each other, I don’t understand the whole Benson side story and especially not how fast that suddenly was resolved and then the epilogue just jumps 15 years into the future before I even see the love story evolve into something real and not just lust.
I received a free ARC from the author and leave an honest review voluntarily.
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
A light hearted sapphic romance taking place on a naval aircraft carrier that actually takes the setting into account. The narrow halls, the shared bunks and showers, how everyone knows everyone and finding privacy is hard. Also, the military structure, with power dynamics coming into play of officers and crew, how those ranks affect who can fight back against injustice and who has to meekly go along.
The relationship between the two women is … fine, except that River has to change who she is — a love-’em-and-leave-’em playboy — because Chloe, the woman she spent one night with, is her fated mate, the person she falls in love with despite … not really being in love. She becomes obsessed with her, and decides she can’t live without her. Chloe, on the other hand, accepts River’s advances because … because?
The biggest problem with that is it’s their first real meeting, and that one sour note shades everything that follows. If even the author, the book, and the characters don’t know why they’re acting the way they are, how am I supposed to? And it’s a shame because there’s a lot to like here. I just can’t get past the setup to really enjoy it.
Even so, I do recommend it if you’re looking for a sapphic military romance, or something that’s low angst but charming. There’s a strong friend group, a solid B plot, and Chloe and River do have a charming chemistry once they (and I) get past that first meeting. It’s just … that first meeting.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
My rating is 4 stars!
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"The Admiral’s Daughter" is a heartfelt sapphic romance that blends emotional depth with a gentle sense of adventure. The story focuses on connection and longing as much as romance giving the relationship time to develop in a way that feels natural and sincere.
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What stood out most to me was the emotional intimacy between the characters. Their bond grows through shared vulnerability stolen moments and the tension between duty and desire. The romance is soft but meaningful with a slow burn quality that makes the payoff especially satisfying.
The writing has a calm steady pace that allows the characters and their feelings to take center stage. It’s not overly dramatic but instead leans into tenderness and quiet strength making it a lovely read for anyone who enjoys character driven love stories.
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Overall, it is an affirming sapphic romance that offers both heart and hope and is perfect for readers looking for something romantic, gentle and emotionally grounded. Thank you NetGalley for providing me an ARC to this beautiful Love story!
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"The Admiral’s Daughter" is a heartfelt sapphic romance that blends emotional depth with a gentle sense of adventure. The story focuses on connection and longing as much as romance giving the relationship time to develop in a way that feels natural and sincere.
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What stood out most to me was the emotional intimacy between the characters. Their bond grows through shared vulnerability stolen moments and the tension between duty and desire. The romance is soft but meaningful with a slow burn quality that makes the payoff especially satisfying.
The writing has a calm steady pace that allows the characters and their feelings to take center stage. It’s not overly dramatic but instead leans into tenderness and quiet strength making it a lovely read for anyone who enjoys character driven love stories.
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Overall, it is an affirming sapphic romance that offers both heart and hope and is perfect for readers looking for something romantic, gentle and emotionally grounded. Thank you NetGalley for providing me an ARC to this beautiful Love story!
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
Thank you to Netgalley and J&M Books for providing me with an ARC in exchange for my honest review.
This is the first book I’ve read by Alyson Root, and after receiving this ARC, I’m excited to dive into more of her work. ‘Broken Parts Included’ is already on my TBR.
I really liked River’s character growth, she goes from a carefree player to someone who learns to confront her trauma and embrace happiness. Plus, she’s clear about consent and boundaries, which I love. Cleo, while still a great character, was a bit harder for me to connect with, especially with her 'don’t date soldiers' stance that didn’t quite add up with her actions.
The side characters were also fantastic, especially Cheddar; best girl! Her unwavering support for River was heartwarming.
The book is described as a slow burn, but it’s more of an insta-lust situation that quickly moves into pining before the characters get together. The epilogue jumps 10+ years later, and I really wish we’d seen more of their everyday life and how they navigated their relationship with River being shipped out.
The subplots about Navy politics and Cleo’s investigative journalism were fascinating and added unexpected tension to the story.
Would I re-read it? Yes. Will I buy a physical copy? Yes.
(longer more in-depth review available on my socials soon)
This is the first book I’ve read by Alyson Root, and after receiving this ARC, I’m excited to dive into more of her work. ‘Broken Parts Included’ is already on my TBR.
I really liked River’s character growth, she goes from a carefree player to someone who learns to confront her trauma and embrace happiness. Plus, she’s clear about consent and boundaries, which I love. Cleo, while still a great character, was a bit harder for me to connect with, especially with her 'don’t date soldiers' stance that didn’t quite add up with her actions.
The side characters were also fantastic, especially Cheddar; best girl! Her unwavering support for River was heartwarming.
The book is described as a slow burn, but it’s more of an insta-lust situation that quickly moves into pining before the characters get together. The epilogue jumps 10+ years later, and I really wish we’d seen more of their everyday life and how they navigated their relationship with River being shipped out.
The subplots about Navy politics and Cleo’s investigative journalism were fascinating and added unexpected tension to the story.
Would I re-read it? Yes. Will I buy a physical copy? Yes.
(longer more in-depth review available on my socials soon)
Review of advance copy received from Author
Well, not necessarily a likeable main, or at least likeable perhaps as a pal but you wouldn’t want your best friend to hook up with her. There is a bit of a clue that the image put on up by River, is a front and I look forward to seeing the real her. I have to say she is quite…… different from my normal mains. A bit more “earthy”. Not a criticism, more of an observation…. I hadn’t quite noticed before. I wouldn’t say all the mains I read are a certain type…. But they are not this type.
I think it is really smart that actually both mains are in the relationship with baggage. It makes the dating trial much more interesting than if it was saint and sinner..
The romance is lovely but I cannot believe how tense the secondary plot is making me!
Well! I loved it and adored the development of one main in particular. It was development or evolution rather than just a change. The ending gave me the feelz….. An indicator, if one was needed, that one main grew on me, in the same way she grew on the other main. Another great book from a writer who keeps delivering different!
I think it is really smart that actually both mains are in the relationship with baggage. It makes the dating trial much more interesting than if it was saint and sinner..
The romance is lovely but I cannot believe how tense the secondary plot is making me!
Well! I loved it and adored the development of one main in particular. It was development or evolution rather than just a change. The ending gave me the feelz….. An indicator, if one was needed, that one main grew on me, in the same way she grew on the other main. Another great book from a writer who keeps delivering different!
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
3.5 ⭐
While reading this book, all that my mind could make sense of, was that it just kept wandering back to one thing: sex.
This wasn't a slow burn but rather it was more of a lust burn. For the first 80%, the main focus of the book revolved around sex, not romance, not love but just the sex, sex and more sex. The sexual attraction and desire, the sexual tension, the sexual neediness and sexual frustrations and longings and incidentally one's sexual prowess etc.
Oh how they wanted each other, oh how they lusted, they hungered, desperate to be in each other's pants. Yes, I was well aware after the first two chapters.
What I did enjoy very much was the side plots: the investigations, the ship politics, the friendly banters, the friendship and family dramas. Those were what kept me hooked to the end. The ending itself wasn't too bad, it did put a smile on my face, at least..
I'm pretty sure many would love this book but as for me, it's not really my cup of tea.
I received a free ARC from Netgalley.
While reading this book, all that my mind could make sense of, was that it just kept wandering back to one thing: sex.
This wasn't a slow burn but rather it was more of a lust burn. For the first 80%, the main focus of the book revolved around sex, not romance, not love but just the sex, sex and more sex. The sexual attraction and desire, the sexual tension, the sexual neediness and sexual frustrations and longings and incidentally one's sexual prowess etc.
Oh how they wanted each other, oh how they lusted, they hungered, desperate to be in each other's pants. Yes, I was well aware after the first two chapters.
What I did enjoy very much was the side plots: the investigations, the ship politics, the friendly banters, the friendship and family dramas. Those were what kept me hooked to the end. The ending itself wasn't too bad, it did put a smile on my face, at least..
I'm pretty sure many would love this book but as for me, it's not really my cup of tea.
I received a free ARC from Netgalley.
Review of advance copy received from Author
A Sizzling, Slow-Burn Masterpiece at Sea!
The Admiral's Daughter by Alyson Root is an absolute triumph for fans of sapphic romance! If you love high-stakes forbidden romance, forced proximity, and witty, sharp banter, this book is an essential addition to your library.
Root perfectly balances the "grumpy/sunshine" dynamic between the arrogant, heartbreaker sailor River Dawson and the guarded, cynical journalist Cleo Carter. The premise—one reckless night turning into months trapped on the HMS Queen Elizabeth—creates an incredibly tense atmosphere. You can feel the heat building below deck, making the slow-burn romance both agonizing and deeply rewarding.
What makes this book stand out is how it navigates the scandal of their forbidden connection with the emotional stakes of trusting again. The character development is top-notch, turning a classic "shipboard fling" scenario into a deeply romantic story about risking everything for love.
A fantastic, "unputdownable" read that delivers on both tension and heart!
The Admiral's Daughter by Alyson Root is an absolute triumph for fans of sapphic romance! If you love high-stakes forbidden romance, forced proximity, and witty, sharp banter, this book is an essential addition to your library.
Root perfectly balances the "grumpy/sunshine" dynamic between the arrogant, heartbreaker sailor River Dawson and the guarded, cynical journalist Cleo Carter. The premise—one reckless night turning into months trapped on the HMS Queen Elizabeth—creates an incredibly tense atmosphere. You can feel the heat building below deck, making the slow-burn romance both agonizing and deeply rewarding.
What makes this book stand out is how it navigates the scandal of their forbidden connection with the emotional stakes of trusting again. The character development is top-notch, turning a classic "shipboard fling" scenario into a deeply romantic story about risking everything for love.
A fantastic, "unputdownable" read that delivers on both tension and heart!
January 23, 2026
I really enjoyed this! I wasn’t sure I would with the Navy parts but they only added to the story and made it all the more intriguing.
The characters were lovable and I can see why Cleo fell for River so quickly, who wouldn’t?!
I love the found family element in this too and the banter between them all really made me laugh.
I really enjoyed the epilogue and tend to go on what’s gone on in the book as to what I want to see in an epilogue and felt this jump was needed so I got my HEA!
Would I have loved to hear more about their years together and navigating through that? Yes! But I’m not sure how that would have fit in with the flow and length as it would have made it quite a bulky read so all in all I enjoyed the ending we were given!
I love this author and continue to like them more with every new read.
Also! Can we take a second to talk about the cover?? I love it!
Thank you to the author for my ARC of this in exchange for an honest review….one of my favourite ARCs to date.
The characters were lovable and I can see why Cleo fell for River so quickly, who wouldn’t?!
I love the found family element in this too and the banter between them all really made me laugh.
I really enjoyed the epilogue and tend to go on what’s gone on in the book as to what I want to see in an epilogue and felt this jump was needed so I got my HEA!
Would I have loved to hear more about their years together and navigating through that? Yes! But I’m not sure how that would have fit in with the flow and length as it would have made it quite a bulky read so all in all I enjoyed the ending we were given!
I love this author and continue to like them more with every new read.
Also! Can we take a second to talk about the cover?? I love it!
Thank you to the author for my ARC of this in exchange for an honest review….one of my favourite ARCs to date.
Review of advance copy received from Author
I absolutely loved this story!
It was fantastic being aboard a Ship of the Royal Navy with all these hot and lovable sailors!
River, her crew, and best friends kept me thoroughly entertained!
Sure, River "Romeo" Dawson is the main character, along with Cleo, the admiral's daughter!
But when the friends around them are so funny and warm, it makes a book and a romance so much more complete for me!
I'd read that some people don't consider it a typical slow-burn romance.
That's true; the two have their first passionate encounter quite early on, but to be fair, they didn't know they'd ever see each other again.
Everything that happens afterward is slow, painstaking, and new for River and Cleo, involving many obstacles and battles with old demons.
There are also injustices to uncover, which makes the story even more compelling!
I found it very well written and extremely entertaining.
Many thanks to Alyson Root for the ARC.
The erotic scenes shouldn't go unmentioned.
It was a pleasure, as always ;)
It was fantastic being aboard a Ship of the Royal Navy with all these hot and lovable sailors!
River, her crew, and best friends kept me thoroughly entertained!
Sure, River "Romeo" Dawson is the main character, along with Cleo, the admiral's daughter!
But when the friends around them are so funny and warm, it makes a book and a romance so much more complete for me!
I'd read that some people don't consider it a typical slow-burn romance.
That's true; the two have their first passionate encounter quite early on, but to be fair, they didn't know they'd ever see each other again.
Everything that happens afterward is slow, painstaking, and new for River and Cleo, involving many obstacles and battles with old demons.
There are also injustices to uncover, which makes the story even more compelling!
I found it very well written and extremely entertaining.
Many thanks to Alyson Root for the ARC.
The erotic scenes shouldn't go unmentioned.
It was a pleasure, as always ;)
Review of advance copy received from Author
First of all, I love this cover! It's a real eye-catcher! I was very excited to be able to read Alyson Root's new book in advance.
Her writing style is totally refreshing, lively, and vivid. Added to this are the humor and banter, which lend the story a pleasant lightness.
The plot of this book takes place on a Navy ship. River—a player through and through—meets the admiral's daughter and journalist Cleo. But they had already had a one-night stand, so there was immediate tension on the ship. I must admit that I had problems with River at the beginning. Her hurt feelings because Cleo described the night as “nice” just made me roll my eyes, and I couldn't muster much sympathy for her. The pace and the decision to date each other was a bit too fast for me and, on River's part, difficult for me to understand. Similar to Cleo, I couldn't gauge River's intentions. BUT... River evolved, and I found THAT simply stunning and authentic. For me, that significantly enhanced the whole love story between Cleo and River, and I wouldn't have thought that so much romance could take place on a ship. It was just beautiful. I would definitely describe the development of the relationship as slow burn... and phew, there was definitely a lot of tension building up. The two of them really had great chemistry. Apart from that, I loved River's friends. They were just amazing. A great community that stands up for each other. And Vigil was mentioned! God, I love that series so much.
I would have liked to see more of Cleo's investigative journalism. Somehow, it was only a short part, and the way she solved everything was very quick.
A beautiful book with lots of great sailors! I can recommend it.
Thank you to Alyson Root for the ARC!! It was so much fun.
Her writing style is totally refreshing, lively, and vivid. Added to this are the humor and banter, which lend the story a pleasant lightness.
The plot of this book takes place on a Navy ship. River—a player through and through—meets the admiral's daughter and journalist Cleo. But they had already had a one-night stand, so there was immediate tension on the ship. I must admit that I had problems with River at the beginning. Her hurt feelings because Cleo described the night as “nice” just made me roll my eyes, and I couldn't muster much sympathy for her. The pace and the decision to date each other was a bit too fast for me and, on River's part, difficult for me to understand. Similar to Cleo, I couldn't gauge River's intentions. BUT... River evolved, and I found THAT simply stunning and authentic. For me, that significantly enhanced the whole love story between Cleo and River, and I wouldn't have thought that so much romance could take place on a ship. It was just beautiful. I would definitely describe the development of the relationship as slow burn... and phew, there was definitely a lot of tension building up. The two of them really had great chemistry. Apart from that, I loved River's friends. They were just amazing. A great community that stands up for each other. And Vigil was mentioned! God, I love that series so much.
I would have liked to see more of Cleo's investigative journalism. Somehow, it was only a short part, and the way she solved everything was very quick.
A beautiful book with lots of great sailors! I can recommend it.
Thank you to Alyson Root for the ARC!! It was so much fun.
Review of advance copy received from Author
I absolutely loved this book. Thank you for allowing me to read this as an arc book.
Cleo is a journalist forced by her admiral father to do an article on the Royal Navy to help recruiting the next generation or saliors. And River is a sailor with a large ego and walls up around her heart.
After a night together that started in a bar and ended in Cleo taking River home.
They find they will be stuck together on the HMS Queen Elizabeth for a training exercise that will last a couple months. River starts to unravel when she sees Cleo and finds out she the admiral's daughter.
With a love story brewing and a story of homophobia and discrimination in the ranks on the ship. Cleo and River have to learn to open up and be honest and trusting each other as they navigate being in tight quarters together.
This book had me on the edge of my seat between the mystery and romance. Reading as River start to let her walls down and Cleo learns to trust again. I will be reading this book as many times as I can.
Cleo is a journalist forced by her admiral father to do an article on the Royal Navy to help recruiting the next generation or saliors. And River is a sailor with a large ego and walls up around her heart.
After a night together that started in a bar and ended in Cleo taking River home.
They find they will be stuck together on the HMS Queen Elizabeth for a training exercise that will last a couple months. River starts to unravel when she sees Cleo and finds out she the admiral's daughter.
With a love story brewing and a story of homophobia and discrimination in the ranks on the ship. Cleo and River have to learn to open up and be honest and trusting each other as they navigate being in tight quarters together.
This book had me on the edge of my seat between the mystery and romance. Reading as River start to let her walls down and Cleo learns to trust again. I will be reading this book as many times as I can.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
would like to thank netgalley and the publisher for letting me read this amusing book
its about friendship and love
river romeo dawson is a player ...shes earned her nickname romeo because of all the girls she leaves behind... she is expert at one night stands and holds herself high as leaving them with the best night they have ever had....
so when she heard it was fine and ok... she was truly stunned
cleo carter hadnt expected to see river again after their one night stand... she hadnt wanted it to happen in the first place so she annoyed with herself but shes also angry at her father for the stunt he had pulled with her being on board a ship for 3 months she also wasnt expecting to see river again....
antics abound on this ship with betrayals and high jinks galore but the friendships and the closeness that evolve from this are apparent... what a brilliant storyline... loved it and who wouldnt want river and her friends in your life.. i am jealous of the friendships they had found
its about friendship and love
river romeo dawson is a player ...shes earned her nickname romeo because of all the girls she leaves behind... she is expert at one night stands and holds herself high as leaving them with the best night they have ever had....
so when she heard it was fine and ok... she was truly stunned
cleo carter hadnt expected to see river again after their one night stand... she hadnt wanted it to happen in the first place so she annoyed with herself but shes also angry at her father for the stunt he had pulled with her being on board a ship for 3 months she also wasnt expecting to see river again....
antics abound on this ship with betrayals and high jinks galore but the friendships and the closeness that evolve from this are apparent... what a brilliant storyline... loved it and who wouldnt want river and her friends in your life.. i am jealous of the friendships they had found
February 3, 2026
A Joyfully Jay review.
3.75 stars
For me, this book is a flight of stairs with one single missing step. The writing and storytelling is solid and engaging. The relationship between the two women, once they get past the second meeting, flows well. But that second meeting, that missed step, is a big hole in the story that kept me from fully enjoying it. The whole book hinges on River changing who she is and how she behaves just to court Cleo, and even the character admits they don’t know why she’s doing this.
This is just a fun book … with a giant hole in it for me. If that moment had been better established, or given more room to be explored, it would have worked better. Even so, if you’re looking for a sapphic romance with a pleasant heat, strong storytelling and setting, and zero angst, give this book a try.
Read Elizabeth’s review in its entirety here.
3.75 stars
For me, this book is a flight of stairs with one single missing step. The writing and storytelling is solid and engaging. The relationship between the two women, once they get past the second meeting, flows well. But that second meeting, that missed step, is a big hole in the story that kept me from fully enjoying it. The whole book hinges on River changing who she is and how she behaves just to court Cleo, and even the character admits they don’t know why she’s doing this.
This is just a fun book … with a giant hole in it for me. If that moment had been better established, or given more room to be explored, it would have worked better. Even so, if you’re looking for a sapphic romance with a pleasant heat, strong storytelling and setting, and zero angst, give this book a try.
Read Elizabeth’s review in its entirety here.
Review of advance copy received from Author
It's an interesting story that starts with the main characters having a one night stand. River "Romeo" Dawson is a love them and leave them before dawn kind of sailor. Cleo is a journalist who has sworn off sailors for a reason, she needs connection but is struggling to trust anyone since her heart was broken.
They should never meet again, but the Admiral has yet again cornered her daughter, Cleo into doing something that she would probably not have chosen to do.
How will the pair cope being at close quarters whilst out on a navy exercise, especially when others on the ship seem to be acting above their station and making the lives of some individuals a misery. Cleo is on board to write a recruitment piece but can her investigative nature allow her to ignore what's going on aboard the HMS Queen Elizabeth. Will River be able to handle the fact that Cleo thought their night together was just "Nice"
They should never meet again, but the Admiral has yet again cornered her daughter, Cleo into doing something that she would probably not have chosen to do.
How will the pair cope being at close quarters whilst out on a navy exercise, especially when others on the ship seem to be acting above their station and making the lives of some individuals a misery. Cleo is on board to write a recruitment piece but can her investigative nature allow her to ignore what's going on aboard the HMS Queen Elizabeth. Will River be able to handle the fact that Cleo thought their night together was just "Nice"
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
Thank you NetGalley and publisher for the eARC!
Review: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️✨ (4.5 stars)
The Admiral's Daughter is a heartfelt romance about choosing to heal from your past in order to have that perfect life you wish for.
I really enjoyed this book, especially seeing how the main characters confront their pasts so they can move forward. Both character arcs were handled beautifully and made their growth feel earned. River's relationship with her bunkies was particularly lovely to read, that sense of camaraderie that comes from trust, loyalty, and genuine care for one another. And don't get me started on her efforts to plan the dates! Swoon worthy!
I also loved how the main characters consistently chose to communicate honestly with each other, even when it was difficult or scary. It felt refreshing to see a healthy sapphic relationship being depicted.
The only reason this wasn't a full 5 stars for me is that the moment when River and Cleo decide to date felt a bit rushed. I would have loved just a little more time to sit in that moment, and understand more why they felt that need to share how they felt with each other.
Other than that, this was a beautiful, and at times very funny, love story. Exactly what I've come to expect and love from Alyson Root.
Review: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️✨ (4.5 stars)
The Admiral's Daughter is a heartfelt romance about choosing to heal from your past in order to have that perfect life you wish for.
I really enjoyed this book, especially seeing how the main characters confront their pasts so they can move forward. Both character arcs were handled beautifully and made their growth feel earned. River's relationship with her bunkies was particularly lovely to read, that sense of camaraderie that comes from trust, loyalty, and genuine care for one another. And don't get me started on her efforts to plan the dates! Swoon worthy!
I also loved how the main characters consistently chose to communicate honestly with each other, even when it was difficult or scary. It felt refreshing to see a healthy sapphic relationship being depicted.
The only reason this wasn't a full 5 stars for me is that the moment when River and Cleo decide to date felt a bit rushed. I would have loved just a little more time to sit in that moment, and understand more why they felt that need to share how they felt with each other.
Other than that, this was a beautiful, and at times very funny, love story. Exactly what I've come to expect and love from Alyson Root.
February 2, 2026
I came for the cover, and was hooked by the pretext: A sailor who doesn’t want to settle and a journalist who doesn’t want a sailor get under each other’s skins out at sea. All fine and nice.😏
After a one-night stand, River and Cleo never expected to meet again. But they do, and River can’t seem to get the Admiral’s daughter out of her head.
I expected a melancholic story with angst and yearning. And the beginning delivered…until the leads snapped before I did, and suddenly they were giving dating a go. 😂
The epilogue was surprisingly heartwarming, too. And I’m glad the Admiral gets his own redemption arc. Though with so much trauma and baggage to work through, I would have preferred more time inside the leads’ emotional chaos, and watch them unravel it together. If you like a short swoony romance where both leads put their hearts on the plank, read this!
After a one-night stand, River and Cleo never expected to meet again. But they do, and River can’t seem to get the Admiral’s daughter out of her head.
I expected a melancholic story with angst and yearning. And the beginning delivered…until the leads snapped before I did, and suddenly they were giving dating a go. 😂
The epilogue was surprisingly heartwarming, too. And I’m glad the Admiral gets his own redemption arc. Though with so much trauma and baggage to work through, I would have preferred more time inside the leads’ emotional chaos, and watch them unravel it together. If you like a short swoony romance where both leads put their hearts on the plank, read this!
January 31, 2026
Nothing about this book was Fine and Nice! I loved it. I had read anything by Alyson Root before but I will certainly be combing the back catalogues now! A very sweet story, that felt authenticity sapphic.
My favourite thing about this book was how British the humour is, I enjoy sarcasm and this book used it well. All the characters are either loveable or love to hate, and that’s when you know it was written well.
There isn’t anything I would change about this book, I found the pace good which made it easier for me read (which means a lot to me); and for once I found the Epilogue fantastic, you can see where it’s going but it was also better than I thought I would be.
Thank you NetGalley and Ms Root for giving me the opportunity to read this wonderful heart warming story.
My favourite thing about this book was how British the humour is, I enjoy sarcasm and this book used it well. All the characters are either loveable or love to hate, and that’s when you know it was written well.
There isn’t anything I would change about this book, I found the pace good which made it easier for me read (which means a lot to me); and for once I found the Epilogue fantastic, you can see where it’s going but it was also better than I thought I would be.
Thank you NetGalley and Ms Root for giving me the opportunity to read this wonderful heart warming story.
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