Ashworth Academy tightened the leash. And this time, they went for my heart.
I was never meant to be more than a stabilizer, an anchor for four monsters the Covenant can’t control. But after I broke a bond that should’ve been unbreakable, the Council decided I was too dangerous to trust.
So they put me in a cage. Severed from my bonded. Locked in isolation. Stripped of the only thing keeping my power, and my sanity, intact.
Caine’s cold restraint is gone. Ronan’s careful masks are cracking. Dagon’s fire is burning out of control. Bastian’s shadows are hunting answers I’m not sure I want.
The Covenant wants obedience. The Council wants a weapon. And my enemies want me broken before I can choose who I become.
They caged the girl. They unleashed the Binder.
dark academy romance, reverse harem, enforced separation, slow burn, obsession, political intrigue, touch-her-and-die energy, morally gray heroes
If you read critically, pay attention to detail or care about continuity then this book isn't worth your time. The overall story concept has potential but it's not realised.
There were plot issues and inconsistencies, such as the number of times Briar did things. Don't mention the specific number of times if you can't get it right! Like saying something "never" happens when we've seen it happen on page 2-3 times or saying that a character "never" knew something when she literally wrote about it in a journal (and finding the journal was a significant plot point). Or the timeline being wrong-Briar is 19 and her mother died when she was 7, but then it's been 25 years since her mother died? Briar knew her mother died but was lied to about how, but then later we're told that Briar was given away as an infant and knew nothing about her mother. She was at the Academy for about 6 weeks in book 1 but then in book 2, after another month, she's been there for 4 months? Then there were the times that characters knew things without explanation. Like how did Briar know the name of the woods outside the Academy when she was just portalled there? How did she know the headmaster's name without an introduction or a nameplate or something? How did she know the council member's name, again, without an introduction or anything? Finally, there were scenes that didn't make sense. For instance, she's brushing hair out of her face and gets ink on her fingers? She's across the room brushing shoulders with one person and then next to another person on the bed without moving?
There were also issues with the storytelling perspective. Some chapters are in first person, some are in third. Some chapters are in one character's POV but have slips of other characters being the POV with no "change". In one scene in book 2, the current POV references "book one"- how does the character know about book one?
This author needs a content editor and/or beta readers that will read critically.
When I chose to start reading this series, I expected a variation on the standard unwilling bond stories. I was extremely surprised to find out that that’s not what it was. I don’t do spoilers so I’m not going to explain what makes it so different. But I think it’s well worth the read. I have finished book one and two. Now to see where book three takes this story.
I wanted to love this book. The plot sucks you in and keeps your attention but there are SO many repetitive phrases/ scenarios that I almost DNF’d multiple times. Towards the end of the book they started calling her “Iris” , and it randomly switched from 1st person to 3rd person story telling in the middle of a chapter. The concept is great but needs a lot of work.
I enjoyed the premise of this series. The first book had some issues but was pretty good. However, this book is where you start to see severe issues. The FMC is literally called the wrong name twice. There are repeats of things that have already happened. It's said that she looks like her mother but when her father shows up, they have the same hair and eye color? Anti-climactic ending as well and then finding out there's a bigger enemy.
Ahhh! What a MESS! I want to read the smooth version!
The flow of this book is so irritating. The lines the characters use are regurgitated so many times I actually rolled my eyes. The problem is, even with the errors of calling people wrong names and out of order or less than ideally edited chapters, the story has merit! It's like the author provided a great thesis to an AI program and then let it take the wheel. I have no idea if that is correct, but it sure reads that way.
I like the story and characters but the execution of the story is a little weak. It can be repetitive and story events are out of order, like you hear that there are 14 people released but it is a bit later when you find out where they came from. It really needed some editing.