This is the email the great Howard Zinn sent me after he read CONVOLUTED in 2005:
George Stietz: I apologize for taking so long to respond to you after you sent me your book. It was in a pile of manuscripts I was going to read, but my life is such (that is, hectic, busy, too busy!) that I didn't get to it until now. Once I started to read it, I was immediately drawn in. You certainly can write! It's an odd book, of course, doesn't fit any orthodox notion of what a book is. Fragments, stories, a man's story, a woman's story, fine poems -- all very engaging, sometimes poignant, sometimes shocking. Altogether, intriguing, fascinating. I imagine that if you wrote a novel that wasn't so outrageously different in form (publishers are so cautious!) someone would publish it. In any case, thanks so much for sending it to me. Have you written other things, and have they been published? As I said above, you can write!
This book is carried by the poetry (unlike his other books) and I found the poetry to be quite good from a dystopian standpoint. Like Zinn said, it is not a conventional book. Has a strong indie feel, and it certainly is easy to tell that this precedes his later works.