I never thought a vacation could rewrite a marriage in a single weekend.
Katie and I arrived at the resort sunburn-ready and normal. The kind of couple who still held hands at dinner. The kind of couple who laughed at other people’s drama and swore we’d never be those people.
Then we met Carly.
She was all heat and confidence, the type of woman who makes you feel like you’re already halfway into a bad decision just by standing too close. She didn’t flirt like it was harmless. She flirted like she was testing a lock. And the worst part? She wasn’t wrong about us. About me. About what Katie was curious enough to pretend she wasn’t.
It started small. A look across the pool. A too-long conversation at the bar. Two men—Wes and Mike—watching my wife like they’d already decided she was theirs for the night. I told myself it was nothing. I told myself Katie was just enjoying the attention.
Until the elevator ride. Until the hallway. Until I realized she’d gone right up to the edge of their door… and didn’t seem scared of what was on the other side.
And then it wasn’t flirting anymore.
It was the sounds through the wall. It was the curtain shifting while I watched another man stretch my wife open and make her moan in a way I’d never heard. It was Carly on her knees in front of me, keeping me quiet with her mouth while I stared at the proof that Katie wasn’t just tempted… she was choosing it.
Jealousy and arousal don’t mix cleanly. They twist. They rot and burn and turn into something you don’t recognize until you’re already hard and you’re already complicit and your wife is already begging for more.
I wanted to stop it.
I wanted to watch.
And once the line is crossed, you don’t get to pretend it was an accident.
This is another hot thrilling hotwife story by a good author. Sure there’s good sex, but I love the way that the story unfolds.
It comes along slowly, while being erotic all the time. This is only a 2 year old marriage and it doesn’t sound like there has been anything other than the two of them.
But as we read, it’s clear that the husband has had some naughty thoughts which he’s not been vocalizing. Once a small occurrence is brought forward and once he can combine those thoughts with his wife, he begins to harden to the situation.
The excellent part of the writing is shown in the way that we are kept in the story, tied to its outcome almost as if we were the one faced with the questions of encouraging our wife to submit to the advances of her pursuers.
But there’s also a kink in the process. The evil woman is determined to not only draw the wife into the lifestyle, but she also wants the men that are grabbing for the gold ring. The ring that is on the married woman’s hand.
And once she can bring the young woman into the fold, she also wants to cap it off by also taking her husband. The one thing that the wife makes clear that would make her angry.
But you can tell how much the wife wants this, even though she always blames her husband for pushing it. She wants this for herself and for her husband, if he wants to come with her.
It’s clear from the story that the wife will willingly give herself up. She will and must open her legs. She now understands that it’s her pleasure, not just her husband’s. He has brought her here and now she is going to grab it by the proverbial balls and may not let go.
The ending is nice as we surmise he has been shown his faults and she does end up grabbing what she needs.
My only criticism of the story is that we don’t really see how the two of them will work this out. What agreements have they come to. What happens because of the husband’s transgressions.
This is a fairly short story and can be easily read in one sitting, assuming that you can keep your hands away from yourself and anyone else who is nearby.
Chris and Katie are a couple in their early thirties.
When they arrived at the resort, Katie showered and went to bed. Chris went on the patio and had a drink. The neighboring unit had the sliding doors open and there was a gap in the curtain. Chris got a great show looking between the shrubs along the border.
There was an attractive woman and he watched three men, one after another, screw her. Slowly, thoroughly and completely. No rush, they’re on vacation, too.
After Katie woke up, they went down to eat and He saw the lady next door. Her husband and two other men were with her. They were friendly and introduced themselves.
The two men were Wes and Mike. Both real-estate brokers. Ben was with Carly.
After they left, Chris told Katie what he had seen. Katie voiced her opinion of Carly and it wasn’t very good.
“She’s a flirt. She flirts with everybody,.. Or every man, or didn’t you notice?”
Katie is jealous and not just a little. Carly is a slut and she want’s every man in the place. Her husband doesn’t seem to mind.
The bookend boys shower Katie with all the attention they can without making Chris irritated. They are persistent and smooth.
As the story progresses, Mike and Wes operate as a bookend pair, seducing available women. Katie is their target of choice. And she LOVES it. When Carly shows up, her claws begin to show.
Chris observes to her,.. ‘The attention slides off you when she’s around. You’re jealous.’
She doesn’t care for that.
Every opportunity, the bookend boys are all over her. At the pool, the restaurant, whenever Chris isn’t at her elbow.
Chris goes to play a round of golf and is tied up at the links, gets frustrated and returns early.
He finds Katie on a lounger by the pool and she’s flanked by Mike and Wes. Chris sits at the bar and watches them for an hour or so while sitting at the bar.
She starts to leave and Chris quickly beats her to the room. But not before seeing the guys high five each other when she turns her back.
That evening while they’re having sex (they have a very active sex life), Chris starts pumping for information. He’s slow, methodical and thorough.
They picked her up at the elevator. She went to their room, then backed out and continued to the elevator and down to the pool,. But she was sorely tempted. She is fully aware how they fucked Carly.
All of this is revealed to Chris, (not volunteered, however). He has to work for it.
The reason for the ‘high five’,... was harder to get.
She was returning their flirts and one of the tags,... she ‘might’ go up to their room (they haven’t given up on her abandoned earlier trip). They keep pushing her to ‘come up’,.. When she left the pool, she left them with a ‘maybe’,..
She doesn’t think it matters,... Chris knows full well, it does.
In the next two days, Carly torments her about the boys, and Katie gets more and more pissed at her. “The slut”
Carly straps on three men every night,.. The sound effects are hard to ignore. She wonders,... Why they have rooms if they spend all their time in the room next door. Carly invites them to come and watch. Chris and Katie decline.
Till the third evening,... Carly knocks on the common wall when the boys show up. Then Ben (hubby) calls to extend an invite,..
Katie thinks about it,.. She’s still dripping from Chris’ lovemaking and she puts on her dress commando and goes next door.
Chris waits a few minutes and follows.
As they watch from the short sofa,... Chris starts playing with her leaking pussy as they watch,. Mike is pumping a load into Carly and Wes is letting Carly blow him. Ben is standing and watching.
Mike takes interest and joins Chris. He goes down on katie, as he cleans her from Chris’ earlier load. After she cums, Mike picks her up and puts her alongside Carly and gets in the saddle. Wes finishes and waits for a turn with katie.
Carly invites Chris to join her. He does. Katie is getting pounded, but she notices Chris alongside as he fucks Carly. She is NOT happy, but she’s coming too hard to say much. As if Chris wouldn’t shut her down if she said anything.
Ben just stands and watches.
After Katie gets screwed by both, Chris and Katie go back to their room.
Katie lights into him for being with Carly,. And Chris puts her in her place, but he asks if she wants to go to the ‘boys’ room.
She does. So she gets cleaned up, fresh clothes and makup, and goes to their room.
Chris goes back to Carly. While he’s with her,,, They hear Katie return (several hours later) Ben joins her.
Before long Carly and Chris hear Katie getting nailed again,,,, very hard.
Ben is NOT Carly’s husband. They are both single. Carly keeps him around for the size and stamina Ben delivers.
Carly and Chris go over to watch Katie and Ben without her knowing. By this time, Katie couldn’t tell you her name. By this time. Ben is her fourth stud tonight. She's carrying at least six loads, probably more than seven.
Chris and Ben trade paces well after dawn. She crashes till almost noon.
During their continued stay. Katie has more encounters with Ben. (the boys have left)
Six months later,... Chris and Katie have had long conversations
She does NOT like him with other woman,... but if she has sex,.. Chris needs to be ‘involved’. Chris makes it clear. If he's not part of her 'playtime',.. she won't be part of his. It's amazing the compromises that can happen if that becomes the attitude.
He is happy to watch,.. Join in, and reclaim her.
They don’t become full ‘swingers’, they are now a hotwife couple.
Chris is in the room and Katie has an audience she performs for with enthusiasm. She effectively has sex with two men. One is her husband.
Chris gets to join and reclaim her and they do this with regularity.
The story is hot. The characters are warm and real.
Great story, incredible sex and an easy five stars.