1 Messy-Star. ★
There was so much that I didn’t like.
#1. It took over 3 years to release this book. I was into the first three despite the weird combination of sex and gore and torture. But after so long, I lost whatever passion I had reading this series.
#2. I didn’t like how each chapter was supposed to be from a different character’s perspective; titled with a different character’s name, but only Jude’s chapters were written in first person. Actually, it irritated me. And almost every chapter was from his point of view. It felt one-dimensional and redundant to even keep naming chapter after chapter with his name.
#3. Multiple times, the story got really weird. I almost forgot all about Jude’s demented fascination with biting off his victim’s nipples and saving them as mementos until I was reminded. And later stroking them while he jerks off. God help me! I can’t believe I’m even writing this. I read a lot of crazy sh**, I even have some pretty odd fantasies, but this bites the cake. I couldn’t get into the sex scenes because they were so f**ked up!
#4. I couldn’t connect with Jude because, 1, he’s f**ked up. & 2, he’s so void of any emotions and feelings, that he didn’t seem like an actual person.
“I simply dipped my head towards him and inhaled, a deep draw of air through my nose.
I smelled her there on him. Her perfume, her soap, her hair products…and her c#nt.”
“F#ck yes,” I exhaled and pulled her against me. I kissed her, tasting her sweetness, imagining her mouth full of blood, our tongues exchanging the flesh of our victim”
-with sentences like this, why did I think this was a great series? What the hell is wrong with me?!
“I didn’t know you were getting out. Donovan and I…just this morning…it’s dirty…”
“I don’t care,” I replied, looking up at her, “I need to taste you.”
I plunged my tongue between her lips and licked her dripping wet c#nt. I could taste him too, a pungent salty addition to her own sweetness. I ached to f#ck her hard, to expunge him from her body with my conquering seed, but I felt a strange compulsion to drink of him first.”
-WHAT??!!?
“I called you sis,” I growled, “We share the same father.”
“We’re related?” she moaned and relaxed, pushed back against me and took me deep inside of her.
“We are, Pet,” I replied, my ragged breathing filling the spaces between the sounds of our naked flesh slapping against each other. “I’m your big brother.”
“Oh my god,” she cried out and started to sob. She attempted to pull away,”
-This part was kinda hot. Different. Original. Sexy. ;) I don’t think I remember ever reading about a guy telling his half-sister they are related mid-f#%k...
#5. I’m sorry but I don’t understand wanting to f#%k a girl while she just set a building on fire and your inside of it with her.... don’t forget the dead body she set on fire. I just don’t think I would be able to get hard, but what do I know?... and if I was the girl being rammed by a d!ck, welcomed or not, I would NOT be able to come! What the hell is wrong with Ronnie? And all the character to be honest.
I disliked how the detective had psychotic thoughts. All of the sudden he was just as bad as Jude, the serial killer.
#6. And the conversations between characters just didn’t jell for me.
“What makes you think you have the right to let me do anything. I f#%king own you, Pet. Haven’t you figured that out by now? If I wanted to slice off your f#%king ears and feed them to you for breakfast, I’ll do so regardless of whether you have a problem with it or not.”
-Really? Who the hells says sh** like this? Oh, yeah, ...Jude.
Interesting enough, this story did surprise me with some MMF action. But sadly it was not enough to save this story for me. Which sucks, because I rooting for this book to come out. I contacted the author, message boards, etc. just to find out when and where I could get it. Now that I had it, I wish I never picked up the series. I’m sorry.