This book started off with real promise, but by the end it completely collapsed under its own chaos. It was how poorly everything was handled and how unbearable the FMC became.
Journei was exhausting. She was aggressive, disrespectful, and emotionally unstable in almost every situation. She needed to be in someone’s chair. She hit people, screamed at everyone, jumped to conclusions, threw tantrums, and had zero respect for anyone around her, including Christian’s mother and medical staff who were literally trying to save her and her unborn child. She screamed at nurses, put her hands on people, and threaten violence every time she didn’t get her way and it was beyond frustrating. There was no growth and no accountability. As the book went on, my patience ran out. I started skimming her scenes, then eventually checked out completely. This FMC was highly unlikable.
Christian not checking her behavior made it worse. At some point, he should’ve checked her, like really checked her. He could barely keep her in line.
Kégo’s POVs POINTLESS. They were completely unnecessary. He and Christian were already planning to kill Alexis, and Kégo’s chapter did nothing but repeat information we already knew. His POV didn’t add tension, or insight. It was just redundant narration, easily the most pointless POVs I’ve read in a book.
The handling of major events was sloppy. Important moments weren’t shown, they were skipped. One second Journei is storming toward Christian, and the next thing we know, he’s spitting blood with no context. We don’t even find out why until later, when it’s casually mentioned that she punched him. The way it was written felt backwards and confusing, like the aftermath was shown before the action itself.
The Galleria situation was weak. We’re supposed to believe that Kégo and Diego just accepted Christian killing their blood relative. That alone made the story unbelievable. Then, in the final pages, the situation with Journei’s father was dropped like a grenade. It was crammed into the ending for shock value.
The book relied too much on extreme behavior and violence without any emotional payoff. Too many scenes happened off page. Characters acted irrationally with no consequences.The concept was there, but the execution failed badly.