Nhialii was just another forgotten woman—until she was hunted, brutalized, and left for dead. But death did not claim her. Something older did. Something powerful.
Now reborn in storm and shadow, Nhialii is no longer prey. They are vengeance incarnate, and their hunt begins with the man who tried to unmake them. But they do not return alone. Forces both divine and damned stir in their wake. The Legion watches as the storm of retribution builds.
What rises from ruin is not the woman he killed—it’s the reckoning he never saw coming.
Sienna Rae currently lives on the East Coast with their husband and collection of furry creatures who may or may not be plotting something. Armed with a neurodivergent, spicy brain, they navigate life with Ehlers-Danlos Syndrome and other chronic conditions, finding both refuge and rebellion in the written word. Raised on crime shows and horror films, Sienna was drawn early to stories that linger in the dark and refuse neat conclusions. Their writing leans toward the unsettling and the unexpected—wonderfully disgusting stories with endings that don’t always let you off easy. When not buried in a book, Sienna can be found tending to their plants, talking to weird insects, or wandering in the woods. While some people recharge in sunlight, Sienna Rae prefers the rain.
This is the fleshed out version of the short story that was featured in the Fallen Anthology. It was darkly suspenseful, thriller and horror vibes topped off with feminine rage. I loved the defiant transformation from victim to avenger. This is *very* violent and graphically so, so if that turns your stomach, I would avoid it. I really enjoyed it. I enjoyed this version with the follow through of where it was heading in the short story. There was so much more detail and feminine rage in this, it was a really good read!
Nhialii has had people try to break her before. But she refuses to let them win. And when things go is so very wrong for her? She comes back not only for revenge on her attacker, but on those that let it happen.
A poetically macabre romance with death. The tone, instantly dark, hope tainted with a past of pain. It twists. A battle of vengeance against the blind and arrogant. Visceral, gory, and raw.
Steel your heart and prepare your mind when reading this one. The warnings are serious.
“This is not resurrection,” I command, voice resonant with energy and fury. “This is awakening.”
The writting is superb, the plight relatable to anyone who has felt hurt or held back. Pain and sadness take charge, but the ending has hope. Very much worth the read. Honestly would have liked more. For Nhialii and Soriel to have time to explore the changes their circumstances has wrought beyond their battle for life and right to exist. However, as they are, they are enough.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
For the first half of this book, I was literally shaking and tears were pouring down my face. Nhialii is such a compelling character when we first meet her, and the addition of Cheeto just made me love her even more.
The contrast to the villian, Eddie was so poignant and I felt that this story would rip my heart from my chest. As everything escalated and our inciting event occurs, I was so invested and this would have been a five star if it had stopped there.
Unfortunately, it felt as if I was reading a completely different story after that. The introduction of Sacriel was promising and I absolutely loved the idea behind so many things. Much to my dismay, the story being told from first person pov as well as multiple povs makes it really disjointed. There were so many times Nhialii knew things she shouldn't that took me out of things. Not to mention that the Nhialii I adored from the beginning was nowhere to be found after she came back.
The soft, quietly resolute woman was replaced by a character that just had cheesy one liners and too much bluster and pride for someone who shouldn't know or be capable of the things she does.
The writing was so overly metaphorical and overdone that it was just a constant barrage that never let up and any emotional weight evaporated under me trying to figure out what the heck was going on.
Honestly I kind of liked the ending minus the presence of a character that appeared out of nowhere and shouldn't be there with no explanation. I just wish it was not so confusing and blustery and overly wordy. I got brain fatigue and despite the tension I believe she wanted, I found myself bored even through the gory things.
I gave this a three star because the first part is so magnificent, I wish this story was just focused on that. The vengeance on Eddie just felt so anticlimactic and I felt too much time was spent on characters I didn't build any care for. I really, really wanted to walk away from this loving it and giving a five star.
Im on the fence if id recommend. I just feel disappointed, I wanted more of Nhialii at the beginning and just her story.
This is the second book I've read by this author, the first being Crimson Chains, which I really enjoyed, so when this one came available as an ARC on BookSirens, I immediately jumped at the chance to read it. Sienna has such a way with words, their writing so visceral with so much imagery that you can't help but be transported directly into the world they've created (which is not generally a place you'd want to be based on the type of books they write... definitely make sure you check out the trigger warnings before jumping in).
We start off with some of the most misogynistic views possible via Eddie's POV to the point that you can't help but root for his demise, even before you know how he chooses to spend his time, and then we're introduced to Nhialii, who finally escaped an abusive relationship and is trying to rebuild her life one day at a time with her cat Cheeto at her side. Unfortunately, these two ultimately cross paths in what is likely a much more horrible scene than you could imagine. But then a Guardian named Soriel steps in at the last moment, and Nhialii is remade into something that seeks vengeance on Eddie for what he did, not only for herself but all those who came before her.
This book is divided into four acts, and I thought the first three were absolutely amazing. They follow the story of Eddie and Nhialii, giving us backstory on both as we're led to their fatal encounter, followed by the aftermath, when Nhialii absolutely embodies feminine rage to the point that it practically leaps off the page and drags you into the fight with her as she dishes out her own form of justice. If the book had ended after the third act, I would've been utterly content and likely have given this at least 4 stars.
However.
There's a fourth act, which delves into the Legion, those who commanded Soriel until he disobeyed and broke ranks to try and save Nhialii, and how they go about dealing with that rebellion. That part got a bit boring and tedious, in my opinion, especially after how fast-paced and emotion-driven the first three acts were, to the point that I started skimming sections rather than reading word for word as I had been doing. That final act really dragged the rest of the story down for me and kept me from giving it a higher rating, as the pacing and tone of it just seemed like something that would be better served in the middle of the story rather than the climax. Granted, the very end does pick up a bit, and there's a satisfying conclusion to the story, but it felt like a slog to get through the handful of chapters before that in order to reach it.
All in all, I enjoyed this book, but of the two I've read so far, I'd have to say that I liked Crimson Chains a lot better. However, I'll still be looking out for Sienna's next book to see what twisted ideas they have next.
3 stars
**I received an ARC copy of this book from BookSirens and am voluntarily leaving this review. All thoughts and comments contained within are my own.**
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
For me this started as a 3/4 star book but by the end was a 2.5 ish stars. The length of the book struck me as unusual for a fantasy novel which I assumed it was from the name, cover and blurb, but if done well a lot can happen in 182 pages. The beginning was so strong, the language so visceral and powerful that I was physically grimacing and cringing at the body horror and terrifying action (in a good way!). On a similar note, the writing about the cosy home with the aroma of soup and the loving cat were touching and captivating.
However, there was no let up for the descriptive and, in my opinion, over the top language. Yes the author follows the guidance of a mix of short and long sentences but the descriptive language over one sensation or one new setting, for example, continues for so long that it reads like one long sentence. I found myself scanning these descriptions to get past them and then finding myself lost and unsure of the plot.
The pace is the same throughout, and that is very fast. Even for 180 pages very little happens, it feels like we are only in the novel for about 2 or 3 days of book time but each element is so extended because of the language (unfortunately not in a good way). So for me, it was a combination of moving very fast through a story where not much was happening but a lot was described.
I think there could be an important lessons to learn here about being rigorous with the delete button... Even within dialogue, the writing becomes disjointed because of the unnecessary description of everything.
The world building, what is there, is enjoyable. I felt invested but left feeling like I wanted more also. It didn't make sense to me why Nhialii and Soriel were SO connected, yes, I know they had there bond but like, so? The politics are obviously established and complex but if anything I feel that made the main conceit illogical. The plot is centred around something that shouldnt have happened, I think it's unlikely that this breaking of the rules that occurs wouldnt have happened before now, it seems actually like a problem that would occur frequently owing to the set up of the rules, and so the actual conceit fell a bit flat for me.
The author has clearly created a fantastical world with many elements of powerful imagery but I think the translation to page doesn't always work.
I would say the book certainly starts strong, and at its strongest point and then the quality worsens throughout the rest of the book. Come the final section I was confused about who cared about what and why. Having said that, I didn't give up, I actually felt frustrated because I knew there was so much promise here.
Veinfire by Sienna Rae delivers a dark, atmospheric story driven by vengeance and power.
The world-building is rich and immersive, with a moody tone that draws you in early and keeps you invested. Themes of loss and retribution are handled well, giving the story genuine emotional weight, and the character dynamics are compelling—particularly the way trust, control, and consequence are explored throughout the narrative.
The plot unfolds with strong moments of intensity and intrigue. However, there were a few areas where clarity could be improved. Some sentences required me to look up specific words, as the phrasing was not always immediately clear, and in places a more straightforward sentence structure could make the story more accessible to a wider range of readers.
I was also slightly confused by a continuity detail regarding the MFC, as she appears to know the name of her murderer despite it not being clearly established that she knew him previously or that he gave his name when entering her home. This moment briefly pulled me out of the story, as it felt like a missing piece of information.
Additionally, I noticed a minor formatting issue while reading on Kindle, where some pages appeared to be duplicated (for example, two pages both labelled page 144). I am unsure whether this was a Kindle-specific issue or an error within the book itself, but it is worth noting.
Overall, Veinfire is an engaging and rewarding read with strong atmosphere and morally complex characters. If you enjoy dark fantasy with an undercurrent of simmering tension and vengeance-driven storytelling, this book is well worth picking up, just be prepared to look words up that you do not know or understand.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I received a copy of Veinfire for an ARC review. I think it is really important to read over the content warnings before reading, as some may find the vivid descriptions of violence triggering. I also want to note that I did come across some errors in the Kindle format of the book. While this book is definitely in my wheelhouse, it ended up falling flat for me about halfway through. It kept me engaged, but not enough to fully win me over, landing somewhere in the middle. As much as I genuinely enjoyed Rae’s writing, I found myself frustrated by the end. While the fast pace eases the story along, it also takes away from the potential to explore character growth and development as well as providing more reasoning and explanation behind certain issues. It also comes across as rushed and takes away from the cohesion. The plot is divided into two main series of events- one focusing on Eddie and Nhialli, and the other focusing on the Legion and the ensuing battle. Ultimately, this created a disjointed plotline that realistically could have been separated into two stand alone stories, as opposed to patched together haphazardly. It felt like the author could have built upon the story more to allow a more cohesive way to join the two plots together. This was my biggest issue with Veinfire, and because of that, it brings my rating to a very solid three out of five stars.
Thank you to the author for the opportunity to read this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
Veinfire opens with a compelling and atmospheric first act. The contrast between Eddie’s POV and Nhiali’s storyline created an intense psychological edge that immediately drew me in. It gave strong criminal-procedural tension layered into dark fantasy. The early pacing felt sharp and intentional, and the tonal balance in the first third was particularly effective.
As the story progressed (especially after Nhiali’s awakening) the narrative direction shifted drastically. The prose remained vivid and consistent throughout, but I personally found myself wishing for more dialogue and emotional grounding to maintain my connection to the characters during this transition. Rather than emotional grounding, it almost felt as if she was robotic and nothing but revenge. The stylistic emphasis leaned heavily into description, which will likely resonate with readers who enjoy deeply atmospheric, gore-forward storytelling.
While horror isn’t fully my primary genre, I can absolutely see this connecting with readers who appreciate visceral imagery, darker fantasy arcs, and unsettling psychological elements. For me, it ultimately felt slightly uneven in pacing and emotional investment, which is what landed it at 3 stars.
Sienna Rae captivated me from the very start with their enthralling and vicious debut. When I found out they were releasing a new novel, I knew I had to have it and luckily for me, they allowed me that chance.
A multi-person view graces the fine pages of this story, that I myself was not ready for. A gripping tale that sank it’s hooks in from the very start. Character development had me feeling the emotions through words that sang with a prose of exquisite beauty, but bloody. Sienna held no punches when they wrote this story. The graphic detail allowed me to smell the faint whisps of copper as the blood flowed on page all the while the knife in my heart dug in deeper from the heart wrenching story that kept me turning page after page.
A disgustingly beautiful story that uses the gory details to accentuate the story. Maddening emotional stitches that grip your thoughts like none I have ever read before. Sienna is a top tier author who has crafted yet again another story so immersive that I found myself within the action.
Thank you Sienna for giving me the chance to ARC this amazing story that holds another key spot in my heart.
ABSOLUTELY NO AI GENERATIVE programs were utilized to create this review including, but not limited to ChatGPT.
Veinfire is a brutal, gruesome, and powerful novel. It is also a bit disjointed and has it's flaws.
Nhialii was just trying to get on with her life, away from abuse and misery. Unfortunately, along came Eddie. He thought he could get away with it, but he had no idea what was awaiting him after.
Sienna Rae's writing is lyrical and beautiful if not a little flowery. I was brought into Nhialii's world immediately and started to get attached, even though I knew I shouldn't. As the story goes on though, the prose became a bit much, taking me out of the story and making me want to start skimming instead of devouring every word. I also took issue with Nhialii's knowledge. She somehow knew Eddie's name even though there was no indication that they had ever met before. She just knew, instinctively, what she became, the power she possessed, what to do in fights, etc. It was hard to believe at times. I did thoroughly enjoy the ending, which brings the rating back up for me.
Overall, it's a good little novel. If you want something brutal with vengeance and a strong female character give this one a go. But read the trigger warnings first.
Thank you to Booksirens and the author for an ARC of Veinfire.
I got into Sienna’s writing last year when I first met them, and they told me about their book Crimson Chains (which if you haven’t checked out that book yet, you definitely need too). I was super excited when I saw Sienna post about an upcoming book coming this year aka Veinfire, and jump on the wagon to read it. All I can say, this book absolutely blew my expectations out the window. Every aspect of the story was so well written and kept the story flowing the whole time. I loved the way justice was served in this story as it wasn’t just for one person entirely. It gave a sense of depth that even outside of Veinfire, there’s a Nhialii out there fighting (might I add brutally and justifiably) for your justice and bringing down judgement to those who believe they have dominance over you. I honestly could ramble on and on in this review about this book, but I’ll keep this as short as possible. I highly recommend reading this book. It’ll definitely push you out of your comfort zone. Sienna’s books are definitely not for the weak (meaning if you can’t handle gory writing and I mean GORY, then I would stay away lol). I can’t wait for their next book, and I’m super thankful to have gotten the chance to ARC read this book!
Veinfire is a unique story written by Sienna Rae. This story is very poetically written and the trigger warnings need to be read!!! This is not a story for the light hearted. This book made me cry and feel justified in many way than just one. Nhialii Is a freaking force to be reckoned with and she will not back down from anything. This book is pain, grief, and everything in between. The story does split in the middle a bit with little to connect them, but it is a good storyline. I would like to see more of a backstory on how Soriel and Nhialii possibly connect. to possibly blend it together more. After reading this arc I am sobbing. It has a certain poetic justice that you can't find in most books. The justice and peace that define the morality of the story are amazing and the ones who need it the most will find it.
This book to me felt good and had every emotion it needed. The characters are beautifully written. The backstories I would love to have a little more of just because I feel it would connect everything a little better in the middle.
Overall this book is a great read and I definitely recommend reading the triggers before reading.
Religion. Some people can and will morph religion to their own beliefs. This book shows our FMC spiraling into fear / paranoid escape from a boyfriend who used religion to control, to shape, to fear the wrath of not obeying.
Our FMC Nhailii escapes from her boyfriend Eddie. A horrible twist of fate has our FMC (who has finally escaped) with her trusty cat Cheeto, is brutalized in her new home. Her attacker leaves her for dead. Her soul crying out for help.
Angels or Legion (how they are referred to in this book), are to express no emotion to be neutral in all things.
Another twist of fate. Our FMC is given a second chance which she uses to wreak havoc on the all those who have stood by while an innocent has been abused.
This tale of vengeance is one for the ages a war fought on the promise of love. Of that person who will stand by you no matter what. And of that person who would follow you wherever you may go. Of fighting the wrongs of the past and trying to make the future better. I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
When I volunteered to arc read this book, I came in it blind. I love the author and her work, so I had the highest hopes I’d enjoy it.
What I did not expect is to be absolutely stunned and broken. Each page is written in such graphic detail, I swear you’ll feel the blood splashing on your face. Was that a spoiler? Whoopsies.
Siennas writing is immersive, dark, and will leave you needing your comfort blanket immediately! She has a talent that rivals all authors in her wording. I have never met another author that can spin a story like she does that feels like you are seeing it for real. And to me that makes for the best dark, horror books.
This book will have you screaming, crying, and begging it to not end. And once it concludes you’ll be bawling. I am glad to have been allowed to read this as an ARC and I leave this review ENTIRELY of my volition. ChatGPT was not used in the making of this review!
The story in this book was rage, was loss, and the end acceptance. At several points in this story I felt rage and sorrow. It was raw and it felt so painfully real in the first part.
It was easy to get into. It grabbed you quickly, and it demanded me to witness it.
"This is what justice looks like when the heart of the innocent refuses to bend."
If you are looking for a story of rage, pain, vengeance, and resolution - this is for you. Personally I enjoyed how it was written. There was parts and sang to me, that recited like poetry, and left me unable to part.
I wish there had been more in between. It moved very quickly. This story ran through me, but it also moved at the same place - rapidly. There was a part of the ending that left me confused, and questioning how. I am unsure how this was even possible - even using in book logic. Lost me, but the story was good to me and I would recommend to be read.
Another 5 star book for me. Anything they write I’m immediately signing up.
It’s a raw. It’s a visceral take on the afterlife & the celestial order, where obedience means losing who you are, questioning authority becomes an act of rebellion.
Nhialii’s journey🥺 Gosh their story is filled with rage, sorrow, revelation, & ultimately a hard-earned sense of justice. Their connection with Soriel adds depth & emotional grit that was pulling my heart strings the moment he showed up.
Together, they challenge a system designed to keep them obedient & beneath its heel, stopping them for being the very being everyone needed.
Siennas writing is intense & immersive. The emotions felt so real. Their death had me sobbing. The feminine rage woven throughout hits with a force that leaves you breathless.
Will always read Sienna Rae’s books. They’re an inspiration & so talented. I’m so proud of you for another incredible book!
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I received this as an ARC, and the beginning felt genuinely promising. I was actually intrigued by the idea of following Eddie, a misogynistic character who very clearly felt like he was heading toward some well-earned karma. I fully expected (and hoped) to see him get what was coming to him.
Unfortunately, the story takes a sharp turn, and from that point on I was completely lost. The female MC shifts from being a strong, independent survivor to an all-powerful being who seemingly just… knows everything, with very little explanation. The pacing and continuity also became confusing, at one point they’re in a chamber, then it breaks, and then suddenly they’re still in the chamber? I genuinely had to stop and question whether I’d missed pages.
Once the retribution arc is resolved, the plot seems to lose its direction entirely. What started as a compelling setup slowly unravels into something disjointed and unclear, which was disappointing given how strong the opening was.
Ok trigger warning on this book. It does go into detail about what happens to Nhialli and a few more people. This book is like when religion goes to far and it creates these monsters. In the prologue, you meet Eddie who is so bent on doing what is right from the Legion, because of his abusive father who beat it into him to understand he has to follow the word. And one of those words is women's don't speak, they're not to be seen, they're not to be heard. And in his mind every woman is a disease. And that's where pur MFC Nhialli comes into play, she's just trying to leave an abusive relationship that she was in with a another religious man. She's moved multiple times and finally feels like she's safe. Clearly she's not. This book is not long and I'm not going to spoil it but it's a very interesting book. If you like to see when religion goes too far in the aftermaths of it. I'd give this book a read.
2.5/5. I’ve received an advance review of this book and am leaving a review voluntarily.
Veinfire started out with a lot of promise and I found it gripping. My attention was held until about halfway through when, as others have said, the focus shifted and I found it became a lot harder to follow and keep my interest. In the beginning the level of detail and description added to the experience, but the amount of description didn’t lessen as I kept reading and it became a bit distracting. I loved the idea behind this book and was excited for the read, but between the shift in focus and the way the whole book was very wordy, by the end I was struggling to get through. Overall for me this one was 2.5 / 5
First, I want to make sure that anyone who wants to read this book look at the trigger warnings first. They very clearly outline what the book contains. The author did an amazing job creating the conflict in this book. She sets up the religious hierarchy and the horrors done in its name. At no point does she sugarcoat the violence and atrocities. When you get to the rebirth of the female MC, you are cheering for something fighting the darkness in the world and for the success of the underdog. To me, the level and detail of gore was excessive to a level where it didn’t need to be for the point of the story to come across. Completely personal preference, but it stopped me from fully getting immersed in the book as I read it.
When the opportunity for this ARC opened, I took it without thinking or knew what this book was about. I just want to support the author 😊. when jumping into it. I didn't expect the thrill to jump-start at the beginning, and I was shocked and impressed at the same time. This read was definitely different for me and new. I truly enjoyed the quick read. The world building and the writing style is what I liked. Very detailed and lt gravitate you into her world. I love the strong FMC 💪 as well. I mean if I was the FMC I'd definitely get my revenge, too. Overall this read was 4/5 for me and I hope you take a chance on adding this baby to your TBR.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I feel that this book started off very strong at first. The descriptive language was noted then but seemed to add to the story. However, after a certain point it just became too much for me. The descriptive language became very chaotic in my brain in the sense that it was hard for me to focus and took away from the story. There were several points I just wasn't interested in continuing. Less would have been more. I did enjoy the premise and message emphasized throughout.
This was a beautifully intense story. I had the opportunity to read part one as it was a part of an anthology and was completely sucked in then. Veinfire is the complete story of Nhialii from death to resurrection, to rage and redemption. What I loved most about this book was how it addressed grief. I may be projecting but it felt like throughout her timeline and during the various conflicts (spoiler free) she experiences the different stages of grief whether it be her own or that of others, down to acceptance. Also, big shout out to Cheeto who deserves all of the snuggles forever.
This was a dark and twisted journey following Nhialii through a traumatic event and the ensuing aftermath. The novel was well written and easy to follow even though there are multiple points of view throughout. The story took a couple of unexpected turns, keeping it interesting for the duration of the book. All of that being said, the characters came across as 1 dimensional, leaving the reader wanting more feeling, emotion, and growth from the characters involved.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily. I absolutely love this author!!! I read their break out title Crimson Chains and couldn’t wait for this and it has lived up! The author has gotten better and the writing is incredible! I look forward to seeing future endeavours. I would 100% recommend this book for anyone with a love of fantasy and angels and Kick ass strong leads
Be prepared. This book is very graphic. It.waa told as if you are right there witnessing things. It is a fantasy, vengeance driven story that takes you on a ride. Be sure to read the trigger warnings before diving in.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I really enjoyed this story. It was a fresh take on the the afterlife and the celestial order. In a world where there is only order through obedience and submission means losing yourself.
The story follows Nhialii who learns the truths of the universal order the hard way. Lucky for her Soriel, an angel who was made to promote order through indifference, decides to defy it. Together they fight against the guardians who would hold them under their boots, who would them to succumb and blindly obey.
Bravo to the author for telling a destroy that encourages you to fight for your beliefs and to question unchecked authority.
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