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Maid to Submit
Maid to Submit is a short story of approximately 8,000 words.
Ally's all dressed up and eager to spend Halloween night with her spanko boyfriend, Mark, but on her way out the door her roommate regretfully informs her that she saw Mark having lunch with another woman. Ally's heartbroken, but she's also angry...angry enough to hurl toilet paper through all the trees in front of Mark's house, among other naughty things. She doesn't plan on being caught red-handed, but she soon finds herself being tossed over Mark's shoulder and carried into his house.
Mark insists they talk about whatever has Ally so upset, and if he has to hold her captive--or spank her--until she settles down enough to listen, so be it. He informs a stunned Ally that the busty blonde he had lunch with was...his mother! Now he's got his hands full with an apologetic French maid who is very much in need of correction. He's understanding that Ally has some trust issues because of her past, but he certainly won't tolerate such naughty, irresponsible behavior from the woman he loves. He informs her that she's to endure a thorough inspection followed by a hard spanking on her bare bottom, and that's just the beginning of her punishment.
Will Mark get his errant maid to submit to an ordeal that is sure to leave her blushing?
This story contains a naughty French maid who looks good in handcuffs, a no-nonsense firefighter with a twitchy palm, bare bottom spankings galore, and other erotic scenes sure to make your e-reader sizzle. Please don't buy this book if such material offends you.
Ally's all dressed up and eager to spend Halloween night with her spanko boyfriend, Mark, but on her way out the door her roommate regretfully informs her that she saw Mark having lunch with another woman. Ally's heartbroken, but she's also angry...angry enough to hurl toilet paper through all the trees in front of Mark's house, among other naughty things. She doesn't plan on being caught red-handed, but she soon finds herself being tossed over Mark's shoulder and carried into his house.
Mark insists they talk about whatever has Ally so upset, and if he has to hold her captive--or spank her--until she settles down enough to listen, so be it. He informs a stunned Ally that the busty blonde he had lunch with was...his mother! Now he's got his hands full with an apologetic French maid who is very much in need of correction. He's understanding that Ally has some trust issues because of her past, but he certainly won't tolerate such naughty, irresponsible behavior from the woman he loves. He informs her that she's to endure a thorough inspection followed by a hard spanking on her bare bottom, and that's just the beginning of her punishment.
Will Mark get his errant maid to submit to an ordeal that is sure to leave her blushing?
This story contains a naughty French maid who looks good in handcuffs, a no-nonsense firefighter with a twitchy palm, bare bottom spankings galore, and other erotic scenes sure to make your e-reader sizzle. Please don't buy this book if such material offends you.
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First published October 14, 2014
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Sue Lyndon
198 books915 followersUSA TODAY BESTSELLING AUTHOR SUE LYNDON writes naughty, heartfelt romance filled with sexy discipline, breathless surrender, and scorching hot passion. Hard alpha males, strict husbands, fierce alien warriors, and stern daddy-doms make her go weak in the knees. She’s a #1 Amazon bestseller in multiple categories, including Sci-Fi Romance, Historical Romance, BDSM Erotica, and Fantasy Romance. She also writes vanilla sci-fi romance under the name Sue Mercury—but no matter the genre or pen name, her books always have a swoon-worthy happily ever after.
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December 17, 2017
A cautionary take about jumping to conclusions
Sometimes you can't help wondering if people, or characters, have considered where they are likely to land before they jump. Ally may think her roomie/ best friend has given her sufficient reason to jump to conclusions, but her boyfriend's response (even if you take the kink out) is both honest and understandable... The kink simply makes it more memorable.
Sometimes you can't help wondering if people, or characters, have considered where they are likely to land before they jump. Ally may think her roomie/ best friend has given her sufficient reason to jump to conclusions, but her boyfriend's response (even if you take the kink out) is both honest and understandable... The kink simply makes it more memorable.
August 6, 2023
This is a very short and very steamy romance. Although a strong woman, Ally enjoys submitting to Mark. They have special plans for Halloween but, when Ally finds out Mark was seen with a busty blonde, Ally changes those plans and plays some Halloween pranks at Mark's house. Once everything is explained and accepted, Ally now must accept her punishment for her actions which she does willingly. They thoroughly enjoy their night!
July 10, 2023
Not traditional
SPOILERS!!!!
In this book you will find spanking, punishment with a belt, cuffs, blindfold and no enter in a traditional hole, just in the back entrance. If you are an adult and like this things : enjoy.
SPOILERS!!!!
In this book you will find spanking, punishment with a belt, cuffs, blindfold and no enter in a traditional hole, just in the back entrance. If you are an adult and like this things : enjoy.
October 20, 2018
BDSM
stunt woman versus firefighter. A case of mistaken identity causes Halloween prank and attempted break up. short spanking and anal with bondage story.
stunt woman versus firefighter. A case of mistaken identity causes Halloween prank and attempted break up. short spanking and anal with bondage story.
October 11, 2022
Loved it...
A typical Sue Lyndon story....A discipline with a whole lot of love. These stories are a must read. I will definitely be reading more of her books.
A typical Sue Lyndon story....A discipline with a whole lot of love. These stories are a must read. I will definitely be reading more of her books.
October 14, 2014
Maid to Submit is a fast-reading erotic short story. If you’re the type who likes to “skip to the good parts,” well, this short story is all good parts.
An insecure submissive, Ally mistakenly believes her Dom boyfriend has been cheating on her. While in her French maid costume on Halloween night she sets out to TP and “fork” his front yard. Of course, he catches her in the act, and once he clears up the misunderstanding, he takes his wayward sub in hand. This erotic short contains all the things you come to expect from a Sue Lyndon work: TLC, spanking, anal play, and plenty of “young lady” admonishment.
Maid to Submit is great to read while passing out the candy to the trick-or-treaters. Just don’t let kiddos look at your Kindle while you’re answering the door!
An insecure submissive, Ally mistakenly believes her Dom boyfriend has been cheating on her. While in her French maid costume on Halloween night she sets out to TP and “fork” his front yard. Of course, he catches her in the act, and once he clears up the misunderstanding, he takes his wayward sub in hand. This erotic short contains all the things you come to expect from a Sue Lyndon work: TLC, spanking, anal play, and plenty of “young lady” admonishment.
Maid to Submit is great to read while passing out the candy to the trick-or-treaters. Just don’t let kiddos look at your Kindle while you’re answering the door!
October 23, 2014
I loved this short story and my only complaint was that it ended too soon! Ally is super excited to surprise her boyfriend, Mark on Halloween night but on her way out the door her roommate informs her that she saw him with another woman. Armed with toilet paper timid Ally grows a pair and sets out for revenge.
Mark catches Ally trashing the front of his house and he can't fathom what got into her except that she is making a huge mess. Once Mark tells Ally the truth she can't help but be embarrassed.
I loved Ally's attitude in Maid To Submit, she was a spitfire character. Maid To Submit is a well written short that is sure to make you want more from Ally and Mark. It's easy to get into and you'll find the story over before your ready. Fantastic read!
October 14, 2014
This is a short but page turning erotic romance with a sizzling scene. Ally is a strong woman in her job as a movie stunt double. She is now involved with Mark, a firefighter! But in comes the roommate with tales of infidelity, and then the insecurity evolves. Dressed as a French Maid for their Halloween night at his house, turns quickly into her vandalizing his yard! Hell hath no fury like a woman who thinks she has been scorned. Getting caught in the act, paying the price for doubt and non communication puts her into serious trouble. This story involves safe, sane and consensual punishment spanking and anal play.
June 19, 2016
Naughty girls get it hard in the ass... That is basically the sum of this story. This is okay at a 2.5. The story is fast, erotic and as expected. What I don't get is people who believe their lover never has a meal with a person of the opposite sex. The conflict here is all because a girlfriend is jealous and can't communicate worth shit. This contrived conflict through miscommunication is needed so unjustly accused boyfriend can get his kink on with spankings and anal.
The story is technically well written with a smooth sexy tone. The story moves from beginning to end with a nice sensual tension. The kink is a bit mild for me, but still interesting.
The story is technically well written with a smooth sexy tone. The story moves from beginning to end with a nice sensual tension. The kink is a bit mild for me, but still interesting.
November 19, 2016
This was a very short story by Sue Lyndon but it was on Kindle Unlimited so I didn't mind that it was so short. Even as quick a read as this was it still packed a punch and if you like a good spanking story than this is for you. It's Halloween and Ally is dressed as a french maid to surprise her boyfriend of three months, Mark. Because of a misunderstanding Ally does something really stupid because she thinks Mark is cheating on her. When he sees what she's done and after he explains the truth to her it's time for her punishment.
September 25, 2016
Cute little story
This is a cute little story, if you don't like stories with really hard spankings you won't like this but they're are a few cute things especially when she plotted her revenge on him at the beginning of the story
This is a cute little story, if you don't like stories with really hard spankings you won't like this but they're are a few cute things especially when she plotted her revenge on him at the beginning of the story
March 22, 2015
yummy
Sue Lyndon weaves a story of love with elements of bsdm and spanking that kept me holding my breath loved it
Sue Lyndon weaves a story of love with elements of bsdm and spanking that kept me holding my breath loved it
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April 14, 2016Was curious, but spanking... not my cup of tea.
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