the protection variable is a very quick and easy read with a strong start, but it didn’t quite hold up all the way through for me.
the beginning was genuinely engaging. it hooked me quickly and made me feel like i was in for something intense and emotional. the pacing early on worked really well, and i was interested in where the story was going.
unfortunately, the emotional arc didn’t land the way i hoped. the main character’s heartbreak felt over-the-top in a way that came across more like angsty teenage drama than genuine, complex emotion. instead of feeling deep, it often felt a little immature and hard to take seriously.
there were also noticeable spelling and grammar mistakes throughout, which pulled me out of the story more than once and made the writing feel unpolished.
overall, the protection variable is a fast, accessible read with a promising start, but the emotional depth and writing quality held it back for me.
easy to get through, but not particularly memorable 🤍📖