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Hearts Burn Slow
Layni’s brain tumor brings vivid dreams of a fae prince and a world of magic, launching her author career. But when life-saving surgery threatens to end both, the stunning prince himself appears with a bargain: come to Fairy and save his world.
When visions show her a different path to Fairy’s salvation, Layni is torn between the only guide that never failed her and the prince who may have his own agenda.
Can she become the savior he believes she is—or will her doubt destroy them all?
When visions show her a different path to Fairy’s salvation, Layni is torn between the only guide that never failed her and the prince who may have his own agenda.
Can she become the savior he believes she is—or will her doubt destroy them all?
- GenresRomantasy
330 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 16, 2026
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September 25, 2026
Tropes: Romantasy, Portal Fantasy, Slow 🔥, Fated Mates, Chosen One, Sibling Villain, Choosing Herself First, Fae Prince MMC, Fantasy Writer FMC, Found Family
Review No Spoilers: If you love portal fantasy, fae, prophecy, forbidden secrets, and a romance that takes its time building, this one is definitely worth picking up!
Layni is a bestselling fantasy author whose books are inspired by the incredibly vivid dreams she’s had for years. But when she’s diagnosed with a brain tumor and faces life-saving surgery, she’s terrified that the dreams and the magic behind them could disappear forever. Then, just before her surgery, one of the people from those dreams literally walks into her living room. 👀
Calyx, a fae prince, reveals that the world Layni has been dreaming and writing about is real and it’s in serious danger. He believes Layni is the prophesied Fireheart, the only one capable of saving Fairy from destruction before the coming Eclipse.
Once Layni crosses into Fairy, though, things are nowhere near as simple as Calyx made them sound. Political intrigue, hidden agendas, secrets, and conflicting versions of the truth quickly make her question who she can actually trust. And when her dreams begin showing her a completely different path to saving the realm—one involving a mysterious purple-haired fae Layni finds herself caught between what she’s been told, what she sees in her dreams, and what her instincts are screaming at her.
I loved the concept of an author literally stepping into the world she created from her dreams. The whole setup gives this story such a fun, immersive “what if the fantasy world you wrote was actually real?” feeling. Add in fae politics, prophecy, magic, secrets, and a slow burning romantic connection, and there’s plenty here to keep you turning the pages.
Layni’s journey is especially intriguing as she learns that the truth isn’t always as straightforward as it seems and that sometimes trusting yourself can be just as dangerous as trusting the wrong person.
Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️.5
Spice: 🌶️🌶️
Review No Spoilers: If you love portal fantasy, fae, prophecy, forbidden secrets, and a romance that takes its time building, this one is definitely worth picking up!
Layni is a bestselling fantasy author whose books are inspired by the incredibly vivid dreams she’s had for years. But when she’s diagnosed with a brain tumor and faces life-saving surgery, she’s terrified that the dreams and the magic behind them could disappear forever. Then, just before her surgery, one of the people from those dreams literally walks into her living room. 👀
Calyx, a fae prince, reveals that the world Layni has been dreaming and writing about is real and it’s in serious danger. He believes Layni is the prophesied Fireheart, the only one capable of saving Fairy from destruction before the coming Eclipse.
Once Layni crosses into Fairy, though, things are nowhere near as simple as Calyx made them sound. Political intrigue, hidden agendas, secrets, and conflicting versions of the truth quickly make her question who she can actually trust. And when her dreams begin showing her a completely different path to saving the realm—one involving a mysterious purple-haired fae Layni finds herself caught between what she’s been told, what she sees in her dreams, and what her instincts are screaming at her.
I loved the concept of an author literally stepping into the world she created from her dreams. The whole setup gives this story such a fun, immersive “what if the fantasy world you wrote was actually real?” feeling. Add in fae politics, prophecy, magic, secrets, and a slow burning romantic connection, and there’s plenty here to keep you turning the pages.
Layni’s journey is especially intriguing as she learns that the truth isn’t always as straightforward as it seems and that sometimes trusting yourself can be just as dangerous as trusting the wrong person.
Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️.5
Spice: 🌶️🌶️
October 15, 2026
Hearts Burn Slow by Serenity Von
Fantasy, slow burn, mysterious enemies, and enough miscommunication to make you want to sit these characters down for a serious conversation!
Having enjoyed Serenity's previous books, I was looking forward to this one. Unfortunately, I struggled a bit.
The world building had me lost several times, although things eventually started falling into place.
My biggest frustration was Layni. I love a strong FMC, and I kept waiting for her to stand her ground. She eventually decided she was going to stand up for herself, but I never felt she completely followed through.
And Calyx? Sir, can we PLEASE communicate?!
Layni would ask perfectly reasonable questions, and he'd deflect, grunt, or give her an intimidating look. And she'd let it go!
Me? We would NOT have been moving on from that conversation!
The romantic bond also seemed to develop rather quickly, and I would have liked more time to see that connection grow.
What kept me reading was wanting answers. There are secrets, mysterious enemies, and plenty of twists that kept me wondering what was really happening.
I do think the story has potential. With the world building established, I'm hopeful the characters and their relationships will develop further.
Serenity also leaves us with quite the cliffhanger!
This wasn't my favorite of her books, but that doesn't mean it won't be someone else's. I'm curious to see where the story goes, when I'm ready to read book two.
Fantasy, slow burn, mysterious enemies, and enough miscommunication to make you want to sit these characters down for a serious conversation!
Having enjoyed Serenity's previous books, I was looking forward to this one. Unfortunately, I struggled a bit.
The world building had me lost several times, although things eventually started falling into place.
My biggest frustration was Layni. I love a strong FMC, and I kept waiting for her to stand her ground. She eventually decided she was going to stand up for herself, but I never felt she completely followed through.
And Calyx? Sir, can we PLEASE communicate?!
Layni would ask perfectly reasonable questions, and he'd deflect, grunt, or give her an intimidating look. And she'd let it go!
Me? We would NOT have been moving on from that conversation!
The romantic bond also seemed to develop rather quickly, and I would have liked more time to see that connection grow.
What kept me reading was wanting answers. There are secrets, mysterious enemies, and plenty of twists that kept me wondering what was really happening.
I do think the story has potential. With the world building established, I'm hopeful the characters and their relationships will develop further.
Serenity also leaves us with quite the cliffhanger!
This wasn't my favorite of her books, but that doesn't mean it won't be someone else's. I'm curious to see where the story goes, when I'm ready to read book two.
September 19, 2026
I really enjoyed this story!!! I loved it was a story within a story. I loved the character Lani. She was courageous and selfless, and as we learned in the book had a tough upbringing that made her more caring of other people and the desire to help. I thought the world building was incredible, loved the magic system, the characters were very relatable and I can tell the author put so much time and devotion into this story. I highly recommend
I want to thank the author for allowing me to read and review for her. I truly enjoyed this
I want to thank the author for allowing me to read and review for her. I truly enjoyed this
September 7, 2026
Hearts Burn Slow completely pulled me in with its blend of the human and fae worlds. The idea of Layni’s dreams being tied to her brain tumor, the thing doctors want to take away being the very thing that’s kept her sane, is such a haunting, original concept, and it makes every crossing between the two realms feel weighted with real stakes.
I got so emotionally attached to these characters and the ending had me on the edge of my seat. Cannot wait for the next one!
I got so emotionally attached to these characters and the ending had me on the edge of my seat. Cannot wait for the next one!
September 10, 2026
I really enjoyed how unique this book felt, especially with the different realms and the complexity of the story. The author didn’t shy away from heavier themes like trauma, illness, and manipulation, which added so much depth to the characters and their experiences. There were so many layers to unpack, and I really appreciated how thoughtfully everything was woven together.
October 12, 2026
ARC Review
Hearts Burn Slow is everything I needed in a book! It’s by far different than any fantasy/romantasy than anything I’ve ever written. I love that it’s in the real world and also fantasy. The world building and characters are top notch. If you like a slow burn and a book that will capture your attention from the very beginning than I highly recommend giving this book a shot!
Hearts Burn Slow is everything I needed in a book! It’s by far different than any fantasy/romantasy than anything I’ve ever written. I love that it’s in the real world and also fantasy. The world building and characters are top notch. If you like a slow burn and a book that will capture your attention from the very beginning than I highly recommend giving this book a shot!
October 9, 2025
An absolutely incredible book! A great read for those who love reading fantasy books about fae! I can’t wait to read more of this because I’m absolutely dying to for it!
September 22, 2025
Hearts Burn Slow hooked me from the start with its mix of modern life and high fantasy, and the way those two threads crash together is what made it unforgettable for me. Layni is such a layered main character—an author with a brain tumor, a strained relationship with her long-term boyfriend Greg, and these vivid, haunting dreams that are more real than her waking life.
And then there’s Calyx. From the moment he steps into Layni’s dreams—this magnetic, brooding fae prince searching for his “Fireheart”—the book takes on a whole new intensity. Their connection feels inevitable, but also dangerous. It’s not the kind of insta-love you roll your eyes at; it’s more like fate dragging two people together whether they’re ready or not. By the time Calyx calls Layni “Fireheart,” I was just as swept up as she was.
Greg, on the other hand, absolutely grated on me—and I think he’s meant to. He’s controlling, dismissive, and while he has these moments where you almost feel for him, it’s clear he doesn’t understand Layni’s world or her needs. The contrast between him and Calyx is stark, and it makes Layni’s choices all the more powerful.
The fantasy side of the book is equally rich. The gods of Fairy, the politics, the sacrifices—it’s all dripping with tension. It’s beautiful, but also cruel and unforgiving. Sienna and the other fae characters add depth to the sense that this isn’t just a love story; it’s also about survival, destiny, and resisting forces bigger than yourself.
By the time the book closed, I was left both satisfied and desperate for more. Layni’s journey is far from over, and I have a feeling the stakes—both in her world and in Fairy—are only going to get higher.
And then there’s Calyx. From the moment he steps into Layni’s dreams—this magnetic, brooding fae prince searching for his “Fireheart”—the book takes on a whole new intensity. Their connection feels inevitable, but also dangerous. It’s not the kind of insta-love you roll your eyes at; it’s more like fate dragging two people together whether they’re ready or not. By the time Calyx calls Layni “Fireheart,” I was just as swept up as she was.
Greg, on the other hand, absolutely grated on me—and I think he’s meant to. He’s controlling, dismissive, and while he has these moments where you almost feel for him, it’s clear he doesn’t understand Layni’s world or her needs. The contrast between him and Calyx is stark, and it makes Layni’s choices all the more powerful.
The fantasy side of the book is equally rich. The gods of Fairy, the politics, the sacrifices—it’s all dripping with tension. It’s beautiful, but also cruel and unforgiving. Sienna and the other fae characters add depth to the sense that this isn’t just a love story; it’s also about survival, destiny, and resisting forces bigger than yourself.
By the time the book closed, I was left both satisfied and desperate for more. Layni’s journey is far from over, and I have a feeling the stakes—both in her world and in Fairy—are only going to get higher.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 8, 2025
(ARC provided in exchange for an honest review)
Hearts Burn Slow has such an original concept. A writer whose dreams connect her to the fae realm — and whose imagination may not be imagination at all — is such a fascinating idea. It’s creative, fresh, and full of potential.
Layni Blackthorn is an author facing brain surgery that could sever her link to Fairy, the world she dreams of and writes about. I found that setup really compelling — the emotional conflict of wanting to hold on to something magical, even when reality says you shouldn’t. Her toxic relationship with Greg is also written uncomfortably well; his controlling and belittling behavior felt painfully realistic and added a lot of depth to her character’s isolation.
Where the story lost me a bit was in the execution. The transitions between dreams, reality, and the fae world often felt disjointed, and it made it hard to follow what was happening or to connect emotionally. I also struggled to feel the chemistry between Layni and Calyx — the romance developed very suddenly, and I would have loved more buildup before such big decisions (like the marriage bond).
There are glimmers of brilliance here, scenes that shine with emotion and imagination, but the flow sometimes gets lost in the chaos. The magic system especially felt a little confusing, and some world details appeared abruptly (like the dragon introduction).
Still, S. Von’s creativity really stands out. The core idea of dreams as a bridge between worlds is something I haven’t seen done quite like this before. With a bit more structure and polish, I think this story could have been truly magical.
Hearts Burn Slow has such an original concept. A writer whose dreams connect her to the fae realm — and whose imagination may not be imagination at all — is such a fascinating idea. It’s creative, fresh, and full of potential.
Layni Blackthorn is an author facing brain surgery that could sever her link to Fairy, the world she dreams of and writes about. I found that setup really compelling — the emotional conflict of wanting to hold on to something magical, even when reality says you shouldn’t. Her toxic relationship with Greg is also written uncomfortably well; his controlling and belittling behavior felt painfully realistic and added a lot of depth to her character’s isolation.
Where the story lost me a bit was in the execution. The transitions between dreams, reality, and the fae world often felt disjointed, and it made it hard to follow what was happening or to connect emotionally. I also struggled to feel the chemistry between Layni and Calyx — the romance developed very suddenly, and I would have loved more buildup before such big decisions (like the marriage bond).
There are glimmers of brilliance here, scenes that shine with emotion and imagination, but the flow sometimes gets lost in the chaos. The magic system especially felt a little confusing, and some world details appeared abruptly (like the dragon introduction).
Still, S. Von’s creativity really stands out. The core idea of dreams as a bridge between worlds is something I haven’t seen done quite like this before. With a bit more structure and polish, I think this story could have been truly magical.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 9, 2025
Wow okay so Hearts Burn Slow is such an interesting concept for a fantasy and I found myself bouncing back and forth between what is going on and flipping the pages because I need to know more! This read is a 3.75 ⭐️ rounded up to 4 for me.
I love so many aspects of this story, the dreams Layni experiences, bringing her to Fairy and living out this alternate life, the tumor invading her brain, creating this chaos of 'is it even real?', and the way her relationship with Greg so aptly shows how a toxic relationship can cause feelings of isolation and self doubt. I think for me personally I had a difficult time with Layni and Calyx's relationship. There felt like so much could have been explored with them, I was left feeling like I was on the outside looking in rather than a part of their growth. However, the chemistry is there, I think for me personally I just needed more time for them together to bloom.
Both these main characters are stubborn and set in their ways, yet it's clear they have this pull towards each other like no one else before. Layni is driven, wants to do right by Fairy and herself, and is impulsive in nature. Calyx is very secretive, and holds his cards close to his chest. He's so protective of Layni and seems to truly want to keep her safe from things she isn't fully aware of in Fairy.
I'm obsessed with Niko, and thought his character was such a fun addition to the story and Fairy in general. I'm really looking forward to what other magical creatures come about in the next story!
This is an ARC review I am leaving voluntarily and all thoughts are my own.
I love so many aspects of this story, the dreams Layni experiences, bringing her to Fairy and living out this alternate life, the tumor invading her brain, creating this chaos of 'is it even real?', and the way her relationship with Greg so aptly shows how a toxic relationship can cause feelings of isolation and self doubt. I think for me personally I had a difficult time with Layni and Calyx's relationship. There felt like so much could have been explored with them, I was left feeling like I was on the outside looking in rather than a part of their growth. However, the chemistry is there, I think for me personally I just needed more time for them together to bloom.
Both these main characters are stubborn and set in their ways, yet it's clear they have this pull towards each other like no one else before. Layni is driven, wants to do right by Fairy and herself, and is impulsive in nature. Calyx is very secretive, and holds his cards close to his chest. He's so protective of Layni and seems to truly want to keep her safe from things she isn't fully aware of in Fairy.
I'm obsessed with Niko, and thought his character was such a fun addition to the story and Fairy in general. I'm really looking forward to what other magical creatures come about in the next story!
This is an ARC review I am leaving voluntarily and all thoughts are my own.
September 14, 2026
Spellbinding, twisty, and utterly unforgettable, a fantasy romance that burns bright! ✨🔥
Where do I even begin?! Layni has lived with a brain tumor her whole life, and with it, vivid, impossible dreams of a magical realm called Fairy that inspired her career as an author. She’s always believed it was real… but she never expected a fae prince to step straight out of her dreams and into her life, begging her to come save his world. It feels like everything she’s ever waited for, until her visions start telling her a different story, one the prince isn’t sharing, and a mysterious purple-haired fae appears in her path, making her question everything.
The tension here is incredible, torn between the charming, desperate prince who brought her there, and the quiet, mysterious figure her own dreams keep guiding her toward. Layni is such a brilliant, relatable heroine ,she’s brave, she’s human, and she trusts her own mind even when everyone’s telling her to follow their lead. The world building is lush, immersive, and full of secrets, nothing is as simple as it seems, and every revelation left me gasping! It’s slow burn, high stakes, and so beautifully written, you feel every choice weighing on her, every spark of connection, every moment she realizes she might be walking into a trap.
Serenity Von has crafted something truly special here, a story about trust, fate, and learning that the truth isn’t always the one being handed to you. The ending hit me like a punch to the chest and I need book two immediately. If you love fae fantasy, love triangles that actually hurt to choose between, and heroines who don’t just fall in line, this is a masterpiece! 🧚♀️💜✨
Where do I even begin?! Layni has lived with a brain tumor her whole life, and with it, vivid, impossible dreams of a magical realm called Fairy that inspired her career as an author. She’s always believed it was real… but she never expected a fae prince to step straight out of her dreams and into her life, begging her to come save his world. It feels like everything she’s ever waited for, until her visions start telling her a different story, one the prince isn’t sharing, and a mysterious purple-haired fae appears in her path, making her question everything.
The tension here is incredible, torn between the charming, desperate prince who brought her there, and the quiet, mysterious figure her own dreams keep guiding her toward. Layni is such a brilliant, relatable heroine ,she’s brave, she’s human, and she trusts her own mind even when everyone’s telling her to follow their lead. The world building is lush, immersive, and full of secrets, nothing is as simple as it seems, and every revelation left me gasping! It’s slow burn, high stakes, and so beautifully written, you feel every choice weighing on her, every spark of connection, every moment she realizes she might be walking into a trap.
Serenity Von has crafted something truly special here, a story about trust, fate, and learning that the truth isn’t always the one being handed to you. The ending hit me like a punch to the chest and I need book two immediately. If you love fae fantasy, love triangles that actually hurt to choose between, and heroines who don’t just fall in line, this is a masterpiece! 🧚♀️💜✨
March 20, 2026
Updated Review:
I enjoyed the first release of this book, but reading the rereleased I enjoyed the changes made.
The story is overall the same just with some changed or added details. Niko is a bigger part of the story and showed up in some of Layni’s dreams which I loved.
The addition of Layni not just deciding for herself to break the bargain, but seeming to be confused into believing she had decided made it more realistic on why she agreed so quickly.
If you have already read this I recommend re-reading it cause it does have a lot of good added details, if you haven't read it already I definitely recommend the read.
Original Review:
I absolutely enjoyed this book. I loved the twist of Layni being human and dreaming of Fairy and the Gods' War. The world built was unique and I am very curious about learning more about Fairy. There are a lot of twists and turns that had me not wanting to stop reading so I could get questions answered.
Every time I thought Greg may be okay, he did something and I was like nope we need Layni to just leave him. Layni and Calyx are a cute couple and I think with time they will have a great love story. What we have seen already seemed rushed and they did not get much time actually together.
I loved Nikos character, I want to see more of him and learn more about what and where he came from.
I am excited to see where the story goes and will be waiting for the next book to be released.
I enjoyed the first release of this book, but reading the rereleased I enjoyed the changes made.
The story is overall the same just with some changed or added details. Niko is a bigger part of the story and showed up in some of Layni’s dreams which I loved.
The addition of Layni not just deciding for herself to break the bargain, but seeming to be confused into believing she had decided made it more realistic on why she agreed so quickly.
If you have already read this I recommend re-reading it cause it does have a lot of good added details, if you haven't read it already I definitely recommend the read.
Original Review:
I absolutely enjoyed this book. I loved the twist of Layni being human and dreaming of Fairy and the Gods' War. The world built was unique and I am very curious about learning more about Fairy. There are a lot of twists and turns that had me not wanting to stop reading so I could get questions answered.
Every time I thought Greg may be okay, he did something and I was like nope we need Layni to just leave him. Layni and Calyx are a cute couple and I think with time they will have a great love story. What we have seen already seemed rushed and they did not get much time actually together.
I loved Nikos character, I want to see more of him and learn more about what and where he came from.
I am excited to see where the story goes and will be waiting for the next book to be released.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 25, 2026
Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️
I received an ARC of Hearts Burn Slow thanks to the author.
This story follows Layni, an author who has a brain tumor and begins dreaming about the Fae. She turns those dreams into a bestselling debut novel while dealing with her illness, a long-term relationship that feels like it's slowly falling apart, and trying to hide her diagnosis from her publisher and editor.
Then the Fae prince from her dreams shows up offering her a marriage bargain. With a desire to help the land of Faerie, Layni agrees, but there are things happening in this world that may depend on her more than she realizes.
The title of this book really says it all because this is a SLOW burn romance. The yearning between Layni and Calyx was something I could actually feel while reading, and I loved it. When Layni and Calyx finally make that connection, it was unforgettable.
And then the ending... 😭 So much happened that I honestly had a hard time putting my emotions into words. I went from sad, to confused, and finally to relieved. The whole time, I felt like I was experiencing everything right alongside Layni because even she wasn't always sure what was real and what wasn't.
This was such an emotional fantasy romance, and that slow-burn yearning absolutely worked for me. Layni and Calyx's connection is definitely going to stick with me.
Thank you to Serenity Von for providing me with an ARC.
I received an ARC of Hearts Burn Slow thanks to the author.
This story follows Layni, an author who has a brain tumor and begins dreaming about the Fae. She turns those dreams into a bestselling debut novel while dealing with her illness, a long-term relationship that feels like it's slowly falling apart, and trying to hide her diagnosis from her publisher and editor.
Then the Fae prince from her dreams shows up offering her a marriage bargain. With a desire to help the land of Faerie, Layni agrees, but there are things happening in this world that may depend on her more than she realizes.
The title of this book really says it all because this is a SLOW burn romance. The yearning between Layni and Calyx was something I could actually feel while reading, and I loved it. When Layni and Calyx finally make that connection, it was unforgettable.
And then the ending... 😭 So much happened that I honestly had a hard time putting my emotions into words. I went from sad, to confused, and finally to relieved. The whole time, I felt like I was experiencing everything right alongside Layni because even she wasn't always sure what was real and what wasn't.
This was such an emotional fantasy romance, and that slow-burn yearning absolutely worked for me. Layni and Calyx's connection is definitely going to stick with me.
Thank you to Serenity Von for providing me with an ARC.
October 26, 2026
Thank you for the Arc♥️
Tbh, I really enjoyed this fantasy read! 🖤 There was something so interesting about the experience of getting to know an author through their writing while also following a character who is an author within the story itself. It gave me a unique perspective that I really appreciated!
I absolutely adore Layni and the fact that she has such a good friend, Renee by her side. Having that kind of friendship in a story always makes me happy! 🫶🏽 There were a few moments when I found myself asking questions about certain parts, but I brought myself back into the story with some questions but continued reading. Some parts pulled me in.
Her husband..... let's just say I am not a fan.
The fae portal especially intrigued me, and getting to know Calyx’s background was another highlight for me. 👀✨ His character kept me guessing because I wasn’t entirely sure what his intentions were with Layni. Was he good? Was he bad? I loved having that little bit of mystery surrounding him and wondering what was really going on!
Overall, I genuinely enjoyed this book! S. Von did an amazing job bringing the story together, and I found the writing flowed well enough for me to follow along and stay invested.
Tbh, I really enjoyed this fantasy read! 🖤 There was something so interesting about the experience of getting to know an author through their writing while also following a character who is an author within the story itself. It gave me a unique perspective that I really appreciated!
I absolutely adore Layni and the fact that she has such a good friend, Renee by her side. Having that kind of friendship in a story always makes me happy! 🫶🏽 There were a few moments when I found myself asking questions about certain parts, but I brought myself back into the story with some questions but continued reading. Some parts pulled me in.
Her husband..... let's just say I am not a fan.
The fae portal especially intrigued me, and getting to know Calyx’s background was another highlight for me. 👀✨ His character kept me guessing because I wasn’t entirely sure what his intentions were with Layni. Was he good? Was he bad? I loved having that little bit of mystery surrounding him and wondering what was really going on!
Overall, I genuinely enjoyed this book! S. Von did an amazing job bringing the story together, and I found the writing flowed well enough for me to follow along and stay invested.
October 12, 2026
I received this book from the author and I'm leaving this review voluntarily.
I gave Hearts Burn Slow 4.5 stars. 1 chili pepper. It's definitely a slow burn and I'm not usually a fan of those but this one seemed to work well that way. The spice doesn't come into the story till near the end. And it had me begging for more.
Layni and Calyx's chemistry was perfect. After he visits earth or our realm, however you want to say it. He becomes almost obsessed with Layni and believes she is the "Fireheart" of the prophecy to save Fairy. If they forge a marriage bond.
Layni is an author who wrote a book about the Fae realm of Fairy. She has no idea that it's real until shows up at one of her signings takes her there. Where they must fight for each other, the love they have found, and the entire realm from destruction.
The world building is fantastic. And the characters draw you in immediately. Even though this book didn't necessarily end in a Cliffhanger, there will be more books where we will see Layni and Calyx's again but they will not be the MMC/FMC.
I can't wait to get back to Fairy!
I gave Hearts Burn Slow 4.5 stars. 1 chili pepper. It's definitely a slow burn and I'm not usually a fan of those but this one seemed to work well that way. The spice doesn't come into the story till near the end. And it had me begging for more.
Layni and Calyx's chemistry was perfect. After he visits earth or our realm, however you want to say it. He becomes almost obsessed with Layni and believes she is the "Fireheart" of the prophecy to save Fairy. If they forge a marriage bond.
Layni is an author who wrote a book about the Fae realm of Fairy. She has no idea that it's real until shows up at one of her signings takes her there. Where they must fight for each other, the love they have found, and the entire realm from destruction.
The world building is fantastic. And the characters draw you in immediately. Even though this book didn't necessarily end in a Cliffhanger, there will be more books where we will see Layni and Calyx's again but they will not be the MMC/FMC.
I can't wait to get back to Fairy!
November 8, 2026
3.5 ⭐️
I thought this had such an original premise! An author who can travel to the fae world she writes about is facing brain surgery, and she’s afraid removing the tumor will mean losing her connection to that world. That idea immediately drew me in.
My favorite part was that this other world gave her the chance to discover her true self. I loved that her journey there meant something beyond the magic and romance.
Unfortunately, I struggled with the world building. It felt disconnected at times, and I didn’t always understand what was happening or how everything fit together. Some things fell into place as I kept reading, but I finished still feeling confused about others.
I also had a hard time connecting with the romance. Their feelings were strong right away, which is absolutely fine, but I wasn’t emotionally there with them, and I wanted more time to feel their chemistry.
There was a lot of creativity here and an element of self-discovery that I really appreciated, but overall, the story didn’t quite come together for me. Obviously the author is very talented. I just think the story wasn’t for me .
I thought this had such an original premise! An author who can travel to the fae world she writes about is facing brain surgery, and she’s afraid removing the tumor will mean losing her connection to that world. That idea immediately drew me in.
My favorite part was that this other world gave her the chance to discover her true self. I loved that her journey there meant something beyond the magic and romance.
Unfortunately, I struggled with the world building. It felt disconnected at times, and I didn’t always understand what was happening or how everything fit together. Some things fell into place as I kept reading, but I finished still feeling confused about others.
I also had a hard time connecting with the romance. Their feelings were strong right away, which is absolutely fine, but I wasn’t emotionally there with them, and I wanted more time to feel their chemistry.
There was a lot of creativity here and an element of self-discovery that I really appreciated, but overall, the story didn’t quite come together for me. Obviously the author is very talented. I just think the story wasn’t for me .
September 17, 2026
The potential is there in this book. I loved the premise and where it could go… it just fell a little flat for me. I didn’t hate it, but I didn’t love it either.
It felt like there was a lot of behind the scenes scheming that never made it to the light that would have cleared up a lot of confusion. Like Eviana… her villain arc made no sense to me. Where was her why?
Layni is such an interesting character. Writing novels in the human world that involved real people in the fae world all based on dreams?! I love that! And Calyx being a fae prince in her stories who is trying to save his world in real life?! Amazing!!! But the insta-love and acceptance of the bond with really no lead up lost me.
Overall, Serenity Von has a great writing style. The structure was good and the writing itself flowed naturally. I just needed more of, well, everything to make it really hit for me.
Thank you to the author for the opportunity to read their work. I received this book as an ARC and this is my true and honest review.
It felt like there was a lot of behind the scenes scheming that never made it to the light that would have cleared up a lot of confusion. Like Eviana… her villain arc made no sense to me. Where was her why?
Layni is such an interesting character. Writing novels in the human world that involved real people in the fae world all based on dreams?! I love that! And Calyx being a fae prince in her stories who is trying to save his world in real life?! Amazing!!! But the insta-love and acceptance of the bond with really no lead up lost me.
Overall, Serenity Von has a great writing style. The structure was good and the writing itself flowed naturally. I just needed more of, well, everything to make it really hit for me.
Thank you to the author for the opportunity to read their work. I received this book as an ARC and this is my true and honest review.
October 10, 2026
This was a fun read! I really like the concept of the story, as I love a good portal romance. I also really liked that the FMC is an author writing about epic fantasy worlds and conflicts. To me this was a super original idea.
I liked the FMC in general, but some of her actions seemed a little naive/ out of character for a 29 year old. I do also wish that I felt a little more connected to the MMC. It seemed like we could’ve gotten to know him a little more, and then maybe some of his actions would have been more clearly explained. Personally, I was a little confused by their connection despite their lack of communicating openly.
Spice wise, I would give this book about a 1.5/5 🌶️ was there spice? Yes. Was there a lot of tension building? In my opinion not really.
I really hope we get a continuation of these character’s story. Although, I did read they wouldn’t be the central focus of the next book. I just have so many questions that I’m hoping get answered, so I’m definitely excited to read the next book!
I liked the FMC in general, but some of her actions seemed a little naive/ out of character for a 29 year old. I do also wish that I felt a little more connected to the MMC. It seemed like we could’ve gotten to know him a little more, and then maybe some of his actions would have been more clearly explained. Personally, I was a little confused by their connection despite their lack of communicating openly.
Spice wise, I would give this book about a 1.5/5 🌶️ was there spice? Yes. Was there a lot of tension building? In my opinion not really.
I really hope we get a continuation of these character’s story. Although, I did read they wouldn’t be the central focus of the next book. I just have so many questions that I’m hoping get answered, so I’m definitely excited to read the next book!
October 12, 2026
ARC Review. I was lucky enough to be picked to ARC read this book for an honest review.
O...M...G... This is an amazing tale of finding yourself, fated mates, and real life struggles. Serenity Von does a wonderful job of pulling you into her story and making you feel what the characters are going through.
Layni is an author of fantasy books covering the Fae life and struggles as they deal with the gods rules and demands.
Calyx is the Prince set to take over Fairy from his father. The problem there is, before that can happen, he must stop an evil plan that would destroy them all.
Together, there is nothing Layni and Calyx can't handle...but the real question is, can they make it to the point where they are truly together? What is Calyx hiding from her? What is Vi hiding from her? With all of the secrets, Layni may just walk away from it all.
With twists and turns that will leave you wondering what else is hidden, Hearts Burn Slow is a magical tale that will keep you wrapped up in it until the very end...and still leave you wanting more.
O...M...G... This is an amazing tale of finding yourself, fated mates, and real life struggles. Serenity Von does a wonderful job of pulling you into her story and making you feel what the characters are going through.
Layni is an author of fantasy books covering the Fae life and struggles as they deal with the gods rules and demands.
Calyx is the Prince set to take over Fairy from his father. The problem there is, before that can happen, he must stop an evil plan that would destroy them all.
Together, there is nothing Layni and Calyx can't handle...but the real question is, can they make it to the point where they are truly together? What is Calyx hiding from her? What is Vi hiding from her? With all of the secrets, Layni may just walk away from it all.
With twists and turns that will leave you wondering what else is hidden, Hearts Burn Slow is a magical tale that will keep you wrapped up in it until the very end...and still leave you wanting more.
October 2, 2025
Hearts Burn Slow offers a compelling premise with a strong start—the first chapter immediately draws you into a world of magic, gods, bargains, and high stakes. Told through a dual POV, the story explores telepathy, mystical bonds, and the fight to save a fading fae people. The setup is rich and full of promise.
While the writing didn’t always land for me—solid, but occasionally uneven—I appreciated the depth of the themes the author aimed to explore. Topics like trauma, illness, power dynamics, and emotional manipulation are woven throughout, though at times they felt a bit heavy-handed or underdeveloped. That said, the author’s willingness to take on such layered, complex subjects is admirable.
There’s a lot of heart and imagination here, and though the execution wasn’t perfect, the ideas behind the story are engaging. Readers who enjoy dark, emotionally intense fantasy with threads of romance and mythology may find this a worthwhile read.
While the writing didn’t always land for me—solid, but occasionally uneven—I appreciated the depth of the themes the author aimed to explore. Topics like trauma, illness, power dynamics, and emotional manipulation are woven throughout, though at times they felt a bit heavy-handed or underdeveloped. That said, the author’s willingness to take on such layered, complex subjects is admirable.
There’s a lot of heart and imagination here, and though the execution wasn’t perfect, the ideas behind the story are engaging. Readers who enjoy dark, emotionally intense fantasy with threads of romance and mythology may find this a worthwhile read.
October 3, 2025
Hearts Burn Slow grabbed my attention with Layni’s struggle. She’s dealing with the reality of her diagnosis while also being drawn into Fairy through dreams that feel way too real. That tension between what she knows and what she feels made the story really interesting. Layni shows vulnerability, stubbornness, and strength, and I liked watching her try to balance both worlds.
Calyx definitely had the broody prince thing going on. I wished we got to see more of him beyond the surface, but his relationship with Layni was lovely. The moments where he let his guard slip made me want to know him better. I also really liked her best friend, who grounded Layni when things started to spiral.
The ending completely shocked me- I definitely wasn’t expecting it to stop the way it did! It left me wanting to pick up the next book right away. The setup of Fairy is interesting, and I hope the next story digs even deeper into that world. I’m curious to see where it all goes!
Calyx definitely had the broody prince thing going on. I wished we got to see more of him beyond the surface, but his relationship with Layni was lovely. The moments where he let his guard slip made me want to know him better. I also really liked her best friend, who grounded Layni when things started to spiral.
The ending completely shocked me- I definitely wasn’t expecting it to stop the way it did! It left me wanting to pick up the next book right away. The setup of Fairy is interesting, and I hope the next story digs even deeper into that world. I’m curious to see where it all goes!
October 8, 2025
We readers have a dream: to step inside the books we read.
But what if this time it were more like a situation between Inkheart and our favourite story?
Layni Blackthorn is a famous fantasy author who has become hugely popular with her stories about the Fae; but she has long understood that something is wrong within herself and in her relationship with Greg.
When she realises that there is a thin line between her dreams and the plot written in her books, the damage has already been done: she has met an important character from her novels, and he really needs her help!
Well, it seems like a fairly textbook situation, what we saw in The NeverEnding Story, doesn't it?
Well, between behind-the-scenes intrigues, secrets for the good of others and the desire to explore the unknown, Layni finds herself caught between a rock and a hard place, and must decide who to trust, and whether it will really be worth it.
But what if this time it were more like a situation between Inkheart and our favourite story?
Layni Blackthorn is a famous fantasy author who has become hugely popular with her stories about the Fae; but she has long understood that something is wrong within herself and in her relationship with Greg.
When she realises that there is a thin line between her dreams and the plot written in her books, the damage has already been done: she has met an important character from her novels, and he really needs her help!
Well, it seems like a fairly textbook situation, what we saw in The NeverEnding Story, doesn't it?
Well, between behind-the-scenes intrigues, secrets for the good of others and the desire to explore the unknown, Layni finds herself caught between a rock and a hard place, and must decide who to trust, and whether it will really be worth it.
September 16, 2026
Ohhhh, I enjoyed this book!! The cover is what originally drew me in and then the blurb sold me on reading it! The mix of fae and human worlds? Yes, please. This is probably a weird thing that I liked, but I liked the unique spelling of the characters names, ha ha! Other than this, this book is packed full of some heavy themes and I actually appreciated that because so many of these things are relevant in the real world, every single day. That being said, I would check your trigger/content warnings before diving in because your mental health is important.
In my opinion, this book is a great read and I would definitely recommend it. You've got dreams, tension, mixing of realms, secrets, visions, etc. What more could you want? If you read an ebook, go ahead and find yourself a physical copy, because you're going to want a shelf trophy of this one! I would love to see this translated into an audio book, for sure!! Love it!
In my opinion, this book is a great read and I would definitely recommend it. You've got dreams, tension, mixing of realms, secrets, visions, etc. What more could you want? If you read an ebook, go ahead and find yourself a physical copy, because you're going to want a shelf trophy of this one! I would love to see this translated into an audio book, for sure!! Love it!
October 9, 2025
Layni is the FMC who is trying to come to terms knowing she needs a brain surgery, but having this surgery will stop her from having the dreams that helps her write her fantasy books. She doesn’t want to lose her access to the Fae world that she visits during her dreams. Then she meets Prince Calyx. He is the broody male that you just can’t help but be drawn to. Their connection is electric, they were meant to be, but it’s dangerous. He is from another world. I did not like her boyfriend Greg from the human world. There are so many layers to this story. The brain tumor, her journey as an author, the fae world, her dreams, and her struggles between reality and Fairy. I can’t wait to see what is going to happen next. I was not ready for it to be over, I needed more. You will be hooked from the beginning!
October 10, 2025
(I received the ARC for my honest review)
What did i just read? I'm still confuso.
Layni is living the dream of many, yet sue manages to be unbearable, especially because of her inability to comminicate with anyone in the book.
The chemistry between her and Calyx, the Fae prince, was non existend and forcedb born out of nowere.
The villain is also unimpressive. Her plan is confusing and i didn't really understand what she wanted to do to destroy Fairy, or her motivations. Too unclear.
The structure of the book is unusual, and i don't Know if it's intentional but i found a bit cut off with a confusing and overly rushed ending.
In addition, a lot of info has been left unexplained, ad well ad characters who have been thrown into the mix whitout any real use or motivation.
The plot is good, enjoyable, but i didn't find the execution exceptional
What did i just read? I'm still confuso.
Layni is living the dream of many, yet sue manages to be unbearable, especially because of her inability to comminicate with anyone in the book.
The chemistry between her and Calyx, the Fae prince, was non existend and forcedb born out of nowere.
The villain is also unimpressive. Her plan is confusing and i didn't really understand what she wanted to do to destroy Fairy, or her motivations. Too unclear.
The structure of the book is unusual, and i don't Know if it's intentional but i found a bit cut off with a confusing and overly rushed ending.
In addition, a lot of info has been left unexplained, ad well ad characters who have been thrown into the mix whitout any real use or motivation.
The plot is good, enjoyable, but i didn't find the execution exceptional
October 14, 2025
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily. I absolutely enjoyed this book.
I loved the twist of Layni being human and dreaming of Fairy and the Gods' War. The world built was unique and I am very curious about learning more about Fairy. There are a lot of twists and turns that had me not wanting to stop reading so I could get questions answered.
Every time I thought Greg may be okay, he did something and I was like nope we need Layni to just leave him. Layni and Calyx are a cute couple and I think with time they will have a great love story. What we have seen already seemed rushed and they did not get much time actually together.
I loved Nikos character, I want to see more of him and learn more about what and where he came from.
I am excited to see where the story goes and will be waiting for the next book to be released.
I loved the twist of Layni being human and dreaming of Fairy and the Gods' War. The world built was unique and I am very curious about learning more about Fairy. There are a lot of twists and turns that had me not wanting to stop reading so I could get questions answered.
Every time I thought Greg may be okay, he did something and I was like nope we need Layni to just leave him. Layni and Calyx are a cute couple and I think with time they will have a great love story. What we have seen already seemed rushed and they did not get much time actually together.
I loved Nikos character, I want to see more of him and learn more about what and where he came from.
I am excited to see where the story goes and will be waiting for the next book to be released.
September 8, 2026
This is a new author to me and she did not disappoint! I didn’t know exactly what to expect with this fantasy story but I rather enjoyed this journey.
It started out a little confusing for me, but that could have just been my ADD coming out, lol. I felt at the beginning it was a little too quickly back and forth but then as I kept reading it clicked and started making more sense to me and all of the sudden I just couldn’t put it down. I had to keep reading to find out what happened.
This story was so unique and original. The MFC, Layni, is an author that is suffering from a brain tumor. She struggles with treatment because she feels it helps her with her writing. This story goes from her real life human world to her fairy world that she writes about. But you will soon be wrapped up in both worlds and will have to decide is it a story or is it real? I recommend you read to find out.
It started out a little confusing for me, but that could have just been my ADD coming out, lol. I felt at the beginning it was a little too quickly back and forth but then as I kept reading it clicked and started making more sense to me and all of the sudden I just couldn’t put it down. I had to keep reading to find out what happened.
This story was so unique and original. The MFC, Layni, is an author that is suffering from a brain tumor. She struggles with treatment because she feels it helps her with her writing. This story goes from her real life human world to her fairy world that she writes about. But you will soon be wrapped up in both worlds and will have to decide is it a story or is it real? I recommend you read to find out.
October 11, 2026
What a unique and emotional fantasy read! ✨🧚
I absolutely loved the concept of Layni, an author whose dreams inspire her fantasy novels, only to discover there may be more to them than she ever imagined. With a brain tumor threatening her connection to the magical world of Fairy, she’s left questioning what’s real and what’s not.
The crossover between the human and fae worlds had me hooked! I loved the complex characters, hidden secrets, unexpected betrayals, and all the twists that kept me guessing.
And Calyx?! 😍 A prince torn between duty and his heart? YES, PLEASE! I also need more of the mysterious Niko!
This story had me smiling, tearing up, and holding my breath toward the end. Such a creative, magical adventure filled with emotion, suspense, and romance. I definitely want more of Layni, Calyx, and Fairy! ❤️✨
I absolutely loved the concept of Layni, an author whose dreams inspire her fantasy novels, only to discover there may be more to them than she ever imagined. With a brain tumor threatening her connection to the magical world of Fairy, she’s left questioning what’s real and what’s not.
The crossover between the human and fae worlds had me hooked! I loved the complex characters, hidden secrets, unexpected betrayals, and all the twists that kept me guessing.
And Calyx?! 😍 A prince torn between duty and his heart? YES, PLEASE! I also need more of the mysterious Niko!
This story had me smiling, tearing up, and holding my breath toward the end. Such a creative, magical adventure filled with emotion, suspense, and romance. I definitely want more of Layni, Calyx, and Fairy! ❤️✨
October 13, 2026
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Layni dreams of a magical fae kingdom that becomes the story behind her bestselling novel, but when Calyx, the fae prince from her story, shows up at an event, the lines between realms begin to blur.
Layni’s character is infuriating yet intriguing. She felt relatable in the sense that we’ve all had things we wanted to hold onto while disregarding what was actually right for us and in her case, her health. Calyx is the typical brooding fae daddy, but boy, did his character do yearning well.
This is a slow burn, medium paced read. The story is full of questions, some of which are left unanswered, betrayal, and YEARNING. It does eventually lead to moderate spice, but it is minimal.
Read If You Enjoy
Dark Fantasy
Multi-Realm Universe
Fae × Gods
Slow Burn
Yearning MMCs
Fated Mates
I received an advance reader copy from the author. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
🔥🔥
Layni dreams of a magical fae kingdom that becomes the story behind her bestselling novel, but when Calyx, the fae prince from her story, shows up at an event, the lines between realms begin to blur.
Layni’s character is infuriating yet intriguing. She felt relatable in the sense that we’ve all had things we wanted to hold onto while disregarding what was actually right for us and in her case, her health. Calyx is the typical brooding fae daddy, but boy, did his character do yearning well.
This is a slow burn, medium paced read. The story is full of questions, some of which are left unanswered, betrayal, and YEARNING. It does eventually lead to moderate spice, but it is minimal.
Read If You Enjoy
Dark Fantasy
Multi-Realm Universe
Fae × Gods
Slow Burn
Yearning MMCs
Fated Mates
I received an advance reader copy from the author. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
September 6, 2026
This was a cool read. An author writes fantasy novels based off her dreams. However, this comes at a cost due to a mass that her doctor believes she needs to have removed. She doesn't want to do this because it's led to her best writing yet, but it's negatively affecting her personal life.
It also showcases a one-sided relationship with her boyfriend but also the bond between her best friend. Interviews begin to stack on top of each other with the same question circling, "Do you believe?".
When Prince Calyx appears in person from her dreams and asks her the same question, everything begins to shift. Is Fairy real? Can she see it for herself? Why does he call her Flameheart?
There's definitely so much more to be explored with this story, and I can't wait to see where it goes!
It also showcases a one-sided relationship with her boyfriend but also the bond between her best friend. Interviews begin to stack on top of each other with the same question circling, "Do you believe?".
When Prince Calyx appears in person from her dreams and asks her the same question, everything begins to shift. Is Fairy real? Can she see it for herself? Why does he call her Flameheart?
There's definitely so much more to be explored with this story, and I can't wait to see where it goes!
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