Sloan Archer is one talented author. I'll give her that. Her character's are fresh, funny, and fleshed out, especially Mercy and her roommate Liz. Their banter is some of the best in the book. She understands humour and can time a joke brilliantly. Though I'll admit the main sex scene felt a little choppy, it still had some smoulder to it, and I like the cover.
Mercy's Debt starts out with something a lot of recent college grads can relate to, many student loans and few job prospects. I don't know if the completely out-of-leftfield lesbian exploration passage was supposed to be something else recent grads could relate to, funny, or a red herring of some sort. I liked it well enough. It's something you don't see addressed in the genre often, but it seemed to serve no purpose in the book. In fact the book, in terms of the story, doesn't even start until Mercy meets Michael and Robert. The background information in the first couple chapters helped solidify Mercy's character, but seemed awful long for such a short novel.
Which brings me to my only MAJOR complaint, the shortness of the novel. This is something I seem to be harping on about a lot lately. Where is the rest of the book? I'd say it ends on a cliffhanger, but that requires an ending of some sort. Something has to wrap up and conclude. This is one of those books that just stops instead. You still don't know who the murder is, what happened to Liz, if Mercy will fall in love or accept the love offered her, pays off her debts, or lives happily ever after or not. You know the characters names, that the setting is in California, there are vampires and someone is killing women, that's is.
I laughed out loud a lot in this book. I liked the main and supporting cast. I routed for the fragile hero and witty heroine. I thoroughly enjoyed myself, right up until I hit the unexpected words 'The End' and got a little bit angry. The situation wasn't helped by the fact that there isn't yet a second book to run out and buy, even if begrudgingly. I have no problem buying sequel to finish a series. It always irks me to buy sequels to finish a book and that's what this feels like. I got a free teaser, but have to pay for the conclusion. This doesn't leave me with feelings of happy contentment, even if I enjoyed the book up until that point.