Disclaimer: I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. Parental guidance is suggested.
3.5 stars (rounded up to 4)
Scott's Blunt Review: MC returns home for the summer. Brown-chicken-brown cow ensues. I am used to these Men Adventure/Harem stories having a sci-fi/fantasy background which helps the "story". This is just the promiscuous adventures of the MC. In the immortal words of my Uncle Henry, "It is what it is". Also, author uses the term "kitty" for a certain area of the female anatomy which seemed to bug me more than it should.
I was drawn by the premise of this story—I’d never come across a harem romance involving stepmom and stepsister and was intrigued by the possibilities. Unfortunately, right from the start the writing felt flat and the dialogue stiff. It just didn’t feel believable.
I pressed on hoping it would get better as things progressed, but I found myself having to push at times rather than being pulled along by the story. Then some odd word choices caught my attention and made me question whether this was written with AI assist—in that light all the other little things would make sense.
I’m still very interested by the premise, but this story didn’t deliver for me.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I was honestly surprised at just how amateurish this was.
Maybe in a few years the author will improve, but this is writing porn by number. Plot? Nope. Character development? Why bother. Even the spicy scenes feel awkward. Like, the writer has no experience, just watches a lot of bad porn.
The story is ok. The characterscand spicy scenes fall flat. They are very structured, with no emotional flow. The spicy scenes are spicy, never hot. There were also a few word/phrase choices that had me gafawing with how they screamed a robot pretending to understand feelings.
One of the best book I have read recently and the chemistry between the characters are on point and don't even start with the puns lol. If you are looking for a seductive taboo spicy book, this is the one and my fav one is lily!!! Waiting for more.
One guy and his family all naked having a great time exploring each other. Friends, sister, mother all teaching and sharing their love for him and each other.
I do rather a taboo tale and this one had it all. It was well written and the characters were portrayed very well. Can't wait to see what happens next!