The writing style, pacing, and character development was so terrible, I can’t believe I read the whole book. Far too much telling vs showing. For as long as the book was, several events were completely glossed over. It took forever for the secrets to get spilled. There was wasted narrative explaining things with little emotion or focus on the relationships or feelings. When we did finally get bits of the reason why Charley and Emme ran to WY, it was overrun with an EXCESS of emotion, to the point where it was forced and caused me to detach from the story even more.
There was zero chemistry between any of the characters. Charley was a terrible friend, never really THERE for her supposed BFF who was apparently dealing with a LOT of trauma. I didn’t get invested in her at all as the primary voice/narrator. I have no idea how a relationship even blossomed between Charley and Wes, particularly because she hid so much of herself from him for so long, was incredibly selfish, and cried all the time. The parts where we got Wes’s perspective were even worse because all I learned was that he was incredibly shallow and wanted sex all the time. The things he said to her in the lead-up to sex were just cringey.
I choose romance novels to get caught up in the whirlwind of emotions that happen when a couple first meets and stumbles their way through a relationship, including a major event that pulls them apart for a bit. They are supposed to be the focus of the story, but in a lot of ways, Charley and Wes’s story took the backseat to what I can only conclude is an attempt at world-building, character development, and setup for the rest of the series, which was a huge disservice. The sex scenes were lackluster, always vanilla, and the writing was almost mechanical in them. Way too much usage of pet names with each other, to the point it was just annoying. And they never had a real moment where their relationship was strained/tested.
Overall, the dialog was atrocious and not at all realistic. There was the overuse of pet names as well as too much use of first name in conversation. I was not convinced any of the “friends” were actually friends based on how they spoke to one another. It was especially bad when something heavy or emotional was happening.
I realize this is a debut novel, but I will not be reading any other books by this author. I just was not pulled into the story at all due to how badly this book was written. It was painfully obvious only 25% into the book where the series is going and I just don’t want to go there. I stuck it out because that’s who I am and for the reason I explain below.
The only reason why I read this book in its entirety is because I stumbled across this author’s blog post exposing another author’s blatant copying of her original ideas. I’d read a book that was supposedly a rip-off of this one. I did see the similarities in a lot of the concept and key plot points (hero is professional snowboarder/makes custom snowboards, heroine running away from some hurt in her past, hero teaches heroine how to snowboard, heroine has skills in graphic design and hero insists she work for him), however, there is NO comparison between the books. While I do have sympathy for this author’s situation, the sad truth is the other book was way better (I’m STILL feeling all the feels from their story almost a week later). There are enough differences in the details of the plot points between the books/series for them to coexist in the market, and I hope for the sake of this particular author’s livelihood that her writing skills improved.