18+ This story contains adult situations, hot sex, bad language, love triangles, sexy vampire bites and violence. If that’s not for you, then maybe this story isn't either. Years after the Great War between the humans and vampires, the world is a very different place. Humans live under the rule of vampires, often becoming little more than slaves or personal blood bags. Ariana and her brother Chase have managed to live off the radar for twenty years with a small pocket of other humans, but when they are caught and forced into Vampire City, everything changes. The steaming hot vampire king, Alexander Morgan, takes a particular interest in Ariana. There is something about her that he can’t ignore. Despite her defiance and general loathing of his kind, he wants her, and she isn’t exactly against the idea. Ari grew up being taught that vampires were evil, psychopathic, killers. She had no reason to think otherwise. Vampires killed almost everyone she ever knew or loved. Yet when she finds herself with Alexander, there is an overwhelming connection that she isn’t sure she would fight, even if she could. But Alexander isn’t the only one she feels this bond with. She also can’t seem to stay away from his half-brother, West. Caught between everything she ever believed, and the sexy vampire she is quickly falling for, Ariana must decide if their relationship is worth being threatened by the humans, hunted by the vampires, and losing herself to some unknown force that is dragging her deeper and deeper into a world that not even Alexander understands.
L J lives on the Jersey Shore with her husband, four kids, two cats, and an inherited dog from hell (a.k.a. the sewer gremlin). Though writing has always been her first passion, she got a degree in psychological counseling and worked in the mental health field for awhile, which she finds very helpful in dealing with her crazy family. She is a lover of all different types of music and books, switching between genres so wildly it sometimes makes people wonder if she has multiple personalities. She is most likely to be found writing romance stories of all kinds (contemporary, erotic, new adult, young adult, fantasy, paranormal, etc.) . When she's not writing, she prefers to spend her time reading, taking photos, watching Doctor Who or Supernatural, or spending time with her family. She loves to hear from readers so visit her on Facebook at www.facebook.com/AuthorLJBaker or check out her website at www.lj-baker.com
First, I like the concept of the plot. A post-apocalyptic-like world where vampires and humans fought and the humans lost. Of course. We always lose. Vampire "king" feels a bond and falls in love with a human girl. It really isn't a new concept, but it's one that can be done really well. (For example, the Captive series by Erica Stevens). Here, the characters were not developed enough and it's not because there wasn't enough time in the book. It reads like the author tried to develop the characters, or thought she was developing them, but they are very one-dimensional characters, and everything we know about them has been decreed by the author. We don't get to learn their emotions or behaviors as readers. Instead, the author has to tell us everything. Character X is evil. Character Y is hot. Character Z is good. And how many times did I have to read that the vampire king will do anything for Ari because that's how much he loves her? It's as though the author accidentally cut and copied the same block of text in various places throughout the book.
Not only do the characters suck, but the plot is really wonky, too. Honestly, Ari just read like a slut to me. I like erotics and romances, but Ari was just a slut. If the plot is going to revolve around the idea of a "bond" then there shouldn't be three of them. Or, there really isn't much of a bond in the first place if Ari can't help herself from ripping her clothes off anytime a male vampire comes around. And the ending/denoument was just a big let down. Really? That's what it was all about? And Ari is still a big slut? Will definitely not bother with the second book.
But horrible female lead character, Ari. There really is nothing good about her. She is supposed to be a loving, innocent, and deeply caring individual. However, she is none of these. She is selfish, self-absorbed and I hate to say this, but slutty. I could care less if she had multiple partners, but she just meets the guys and she is taking her clothes off, yet she supposedly loves another man. She is suppose to bring peace between the two races, but she is just as bad as the rest of humans, yet she is suppose to be empathetic. Do you notice a lot of supposes? That is all that we get from her. She is a really unlikable character. Now on the other hand, Alexander is yummy. His character development was right on the head; a masterful vampire who runs his kingdom with an iron fist, yet underneath is a vulnerable man who just wants to be loved. However, he has been shorted when it comes to who he is paired with. I hope in the next book, Ari's character gets better, or there is no way, I will be able to finish it. The only reason I finished this one and going to read the next book is because I want to know what Micah is going to do to Alexander.
Sadly, I could not bring myself to finish this one, much as I tried. I really, really loved Alexander. I was intrigued by him from the beginning, but unfortunately Ari ruined it all. Even saying her name leaves a bad taste in my mouth - she totally didn't strike me as someone to go gagga over, and yet, three of the men in this book were doing just that. Why? She was nothing special - she wasn't funny, witty, smart, bright, ornery, hungover... nothing. So I'm just confused as to what exactly her appeal was. She would say one minute she's not going to kiss Alexander, and the next she's lip-locked with him like her life depends on it. What's worse - she does this with every guy she encounters! WHHYYY? I need to know what her damage is, because she beyond ruined this potentially life-altering book for me. I had to stop because I couldn't take how flighty she was, and how she was literally attracted to every guy she looked at. And West? What's his deal? No joke, he was not worth ruining things with Alexander. I can maybe see Dex's appeal, but most certainly not West's. No way, dude. So that's that. Ari's an idiot and should be drawn and quartered (thus leaving Alexander up for grabs hehe), Dex is so-so, and West is bonkers. If you want to like this book, I suggest not reading it and making up your own version. You've been warned.
Wow is all I can say. The characters, the story line, the description in this book was so good. Ari lived in a world where vampires had taken rule. When her and her small clan of humans are taken to the Vampire City that is where Ari learns that not everything she has been taught was correct. She has caught the eye of the Vampire King Alexander and he is not about to let her go. The bond between them is increasing to the point she is now in danger. She is caught between loving and sharing bonds with Alexander and his half brother West, not to mention a bond with Alexander's best friend Dex. So much turmoil and hatred and she is in the fight for her life and her brothers. This book will not disappoint and I cant wait to read the next one.
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These Vampires aren't lovey dovey or even that sweet, they are more like a biker book. They love the women they love and don't give a shit about the rest. They aren't good Samaritans hidden in there either, so keeps me? They are complex and unfold their layers like a great craft beer. It is a little of that theme of "Oh wow, all the guys want me" but the writer makes it work and even threw in some humor. I will be reading book two and look forward to the series unfolding.
Awesome read getting to know Ari and Lex among the other main characters is nothing like your average paranormal Twilighty read. Real bloodsuckers rule the kingdom and king Alexander (Lex) has finally found his mate. There something about little insignificant Ariana (Ari) that peaks his interest and turns Lex’s world upside down. Not to mention that of his most trusted allies.
The plot was full of many enjoyable twists and turns that made this book that much better. Characters were well written and I felt like I knew them personally from the authors writing style. Tons of danger and action. Of course The main characters had great chemistry and I enjoyed reading about their steamy encounters. I love vampire book stories and this is one of the best!!
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Overwhelming, sexy, heart breaking, and captivated my attention from page 1. Ariana is put in difficult situations with the Vampire King, Alexander Morgan. Her naivety in the vampire lore and to relationships, causes many twists and turns amongst unforeseen enemies throughout the book. Cannot wait to continue the series.
Undeniable (Vampire Romance) by LJ Baker is a wonderful story to read. This is a wonderful start to a brand new series. I loved reading this story cause I love reading about vampires, I highly recommend this story to everyone who loves reading about vampires.
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If you haven't already read you really should!!!!!
If your looking for a book that has every thing and more you will love this book Alex and Ari will keep you wanting more. Ari will not disappoint you but you will hope for what Alex and Ari being to have. Or at least I do
No...the hero doesnt get the girl...surprize!! Thats what I enjoy the most about this book it's un predictable....keeps you on the edge...guessing...""saying come on tell him". you love him all ready.. Won't you😰😪😰
This is my first from this author, but not my last. Cause now I gotta know what happens. Without giving anything away, let's just say choices need to be made. At this point, I'm not really sure who's gonna get the girl.
I am so in love with this book.. I love Alexander, West, and Dex, but I really can’t stand Ari, I think she is kinda selfish and clueless. I can’t wait to see what happens next.. Because I am so hooked on this series...
Liked the characters. Of course they had flaws,but love wins all. An interesting take on vampires and how they interact with others. Really hot love scenes. Enjoyed and recommend the book and series.
This book was great. I laughed out loud on parts wanted to cry on others. It made you feel the emotions of the characters. I would recommend this book to anyone who loves vampire books.
There was a great war between humans and vampires which the vampires won. Now humans are little more than slaves and blood banks. Follow those who are able to live under their radar until they get caught
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Loved this book! Could not put it down. Stayed up all night reading it! Can't wait to read next one in series to see what happens to Alexander and Ari.
I feel like this is a 3.5 star story. Not a 3, but not a 4 either. So the story telling is good. There is mystery and drama, but the mystery is weak and there wasn't anything that couldn't be seen well ahead of time. No twists or surprises. I started out liking Ari until she started falling for every guy around her and trying to jump their bones. It didn't matter that Lex is in her head and in love with her. Usually in the same building or room she was trying to pull shirts off other guys while kissing them. So she has this crazy bond and connection to him and she is fighting it. So he has done some bad things, but it's just at the end of the story that it matters enough to push him away? But let's say okay, I get it, it still in no way excuses the way she throws herself at every guy around him knowing it is hurting him. She go see him around like a chump. I couldn't see a vampire this powerful taking that. Yep he kills people to protect her, but her behavior is much more damaging yet she doesn't care. Hopefully she grows up and finds the maturity to stop lip locking every guy around her and admits her feelings and tries to figure out if they can make things work. Lex says he will give her anything she asks, so she demands the life of a guy who would kidnap her to keep her against his will, but doesn't think to ask him to not kill humans unless it's a matter of life or death? Problem solved!
The setting for the book grabbed my attention as it is described in a way that makes you feel conncected. Humans as slaves or food and Vampires in charge. The characters are well developed and very likable . I really like how much gumption Ariana has right from the start. She gets a bit carried away with sexual attractions, and I wanted to shake her a few times, but I understood the bond better after reading the 2nd book. Alexander is portrayed as a true vampire, heartless and cruel at times, but what do you expect? Their need and hunger for love is obvious. They make an incredible pair. I highly recommend this book for anyone who loves a great vampire story with endless twists and turns.
I really enjoyed this book. FYI - there is much graphic sex. The book takes place after a human/vampire war and the vampires have won. A small group of humans have been brought before the vampire king (Alexander). They have managed to survive in the outskirts and have now been caught. Ariana and her brother Chase are standing amongst the humans and Alexander finds Ariana has sparked his attention. The book goes on with their story. She realizes that much of what she has been told about vampires isn't how it really is and he realizes that she has a real hold on him.
It is the first book in the series and it was so good. I haven't bought the second book but I'm thinking about it.
I thought it was a little redundant but it turned out to be a good story. All the drama over a human girl. Who would of thought it? Well women are the center of the universe so we might as well start some drama. This story was different and had me captivated by the first page. Alexander is a prince who rules by an iron hand. Vampires bring him humans that have been living in the outside and it turns out to be his true love. I would like to say it's all sunshine and rainbows but really it's not and that the adventure. Happy Reading!!
Love, love, loved the story line, but I have to admit here that I felt like throttling the author for, what felt like a vapid, non-ending ending. For me, the ending of this interesting story was a bit like the sneeze or orgasm that just doesn't quite get there...unfulfilling. Is there a sequel? Love it if it's in the works, but found no mention made. Story 5 stars, but the somewhat of a copout ending brought it down...on the other hand, what do I know!
When I read a book, it’s usually very hit or miss. I haven’t come across many that I feel undecided about or have lukewarm feeling for. This is one of the few. I eagerly dove into this story because I love LJ Baker’s zombie romance series and this one promised hot vampires. I have to say that while I did like this book, it was just ok for me. Not a total love fest, but I didn’t dislike it at all. I’m going to give it three stars. Maybe book 2 will really make me fall for this series. Hey it’s happened before. :)
This super hot PNR will keep you guessing until the end! I had the pleasure of beta reading this story, and it's a hot one. I'm a big fan of LJ Baker, and the world she's created in Undeniable is fascinating, the merging of a post-event story with Vampires is such an interesting spin.
An old witch, a vengeful vampire queen makes one check of a story. Air and her twin Chase are caught up in a web of love, hurt, pain and lots of passions. Can a Love Bond between Ari and the vampire king Alexander stand the test of time? Will much needed blood sharing confuse the love triangle? I love this series and cannot wait to read more.
This book of Alexander and Ari is what got me started in this series. Best Vampire series I have read in awhile. Just finished book 4 and impatiently waiting on book 5