just finished w/a garden of sand...jacky, 14 in may in that one, determined to join the marines, on his way back to wichita...now this one....
okay...so here at the 186 page mark and the war is over.
this one starts out w/this line:
that germany had surrendered smacked of yet another damn thing too keep the boy from glory.
and i'm reminded of john knowles's story, a separate peace.
about the only thing the two stories might have in common is that boys want to go to war, want to be men, want to establish themselves....and so on.
anyway, jacky uses some stuff to change his birth certificate, tries the marines no go there, tries the navy, and although he is under weight--112 pounds--he is only 14--he forges the necessary line in his birth certificate, acquires his grandparents' blessing to enter the service, and does do.
but here by the 186-page mark, the war is over....v-j day.
we've just witnessed an event w/jacky and a sergeant (who is as queer as a nine-dollar bill) on the train back to kansas...a scene that portrays the "gay"...we are politically correct now, and though the word "gay" is not used, we can't speak about things w/o a nod that all things are okay.
well...all things are NOT okay, this thing called "diversity" does not recognize MY RIGHT to believe whatever and whenever i want or what 4,000 years of religion and civilization has provided...my belief system does not count....only YOUR BELIEF SYSTEM counts here and i'll try to play along...
anyway, interesting scene on the train, this sergeant who is decorated is returning home, fearful...and he wants to take jacky home to chicago with him to have someone with him....the guy leaves a book and his watch however....and it takes two of jacky's friends frorm kansas, al and gorilla, to inform him that the other was "queer as a nine-dollar bill". i wonder how long before thompson is censored and rewritten like huck finn?
onward and upward.
yeah so i'm at page 233 here, but i wanted to write a bit about this thingy thompson might have going....
....say like on page 79...he's w/this avis, this girl who shares his birthday, may twenty-fourth...so they are geminis as she explains to him...they are "cosmic twins"....that they "have dual personalities"...
a bit later, there's this "he loved her the way he loved the woman's voice in his head." this is an idea that is repeated several times up to p 233 where i'm at now...i suspect it continues.
later he hears a black woman's voice coming from...a radio?....kansas city blues...likened to a low grade current flowing into him w/a feeling like love..."venus darling was the voice that always spoke in his head! he was certain." (131) he is watching some sort of stage act...later when he sees her sans get-up...that image is enough--"she hadn't been the woman whose voice spoke in his head after all."
he uses italicized words to indicate this voice, forget it, darling (134) the voice says at one point when some other recruits give him a ration of crap...
at home there, back in kansas, just after v-j day, thompson uses a dream to describe the voice....a beautiful woman, although definition is lacking other than that...(192)
...thanksgiving day morning...8 eastern....humpty-zwatch zulu time...set your transmitters and receivers...all that stuff about voices has stopped......it is like w/the last entry there...192? thereabouts?...i'm at page 359, chapter 23....
muskrat and his friends have gone from okinawa where muskrat went on a souvenir safari w/some marines, shot a jap--i recall japanese coming out of caves on islands in the pacific in my youth...i think that happened-=-hidden japanese emerging--from war's end until/...maybe it is still happening? and it's simply not "correct" to report on it? yeah...i could believe that....that correct part.
and then they went to a hospital ship...delivering 500 nurses to...japan i think and then relieving the uss hope on duty off the coast of shanghai...meanwhile, muskrat sees another sailor corn-holing another sailor while underway...i believe it was a big black man corn-holing another...and...he has seen a big black sailor holing a nurse, her feet off the deck, her face an ecstatic...shadow or something...over the black's shoulder...and meanwhile...muskrat and two of his buds, al, gorilla, and keating...keating has the biggest donk among white men ever seen...the four of them take turns w/a drunk nurse during a storm at sea...but they all use rubbers so as to prevent the family way
weird, cause i just watched, saw stephen king at the jfk library talking about his book about the 60s, how a couple there had to leave town to "do it". here in thompson's story the sin is evident for all to see and participate in, no hold's barred...corn-holing included. a word thompson uses/used on occasion.
there have been a few other never saw that before in stories...i have witnessed unmarried sex of all manner and persuasion....but there was one scene where his mother held her pussy shut as she pissed, to act like a douche? before letting it whiz out....and in a recent scene, after visiting a chinese whore=house....complete with r/l gall-or...muskrat swabs out the end of his urethra w/some device...yum!
i was cringing as i read that one....some sort of anti-v/d prevention and he wasn't checking for chlamydia.
onward and upward.
finished it last night, the 26th nov 2011
in a sense, unless jacky died in this one (he does not and there's another volume to the trilogy as i understand it...this is the second) then nothing described could really be a dreaded spoiler. other people die in this story...this is after all, a story about life, jack andersen's life, and those around him.
this 686 page story goes into detail about his life from age 14 or so to a point where he has turned 19...whereas the first story about jacky-- a garden of sand begins w/that line about the war ending (ww2)too soon--in this tattoo he does get to go on that souvenir safari on okinawa and shoot a jap...and by story end he is wounded in korea.
there was nothing more about voices so i take it that...whatever it was...questioning by thompson through jacky's character was there and then--there could be more to it, one could argue...i won't.
he beds every woman he comes across, and he continues that even after he is married. is that okay? no, it is not. he pays the price for that, his first marriage ends. does he learn from it? he claims to be "in love" again and that "love" is reciprocated this time--it was not the first time through--she said as much--i don't love you--so give the guy a moment of grace.
so...in story one the scene moves from kansas to the south gulf coast and back to kansas...this one moves from kansas to california, to the sea, to okinawa, to the coast of china, back to kansas, to california, to germany...to korea...
jacky joins the army at one point--this after his failed marriage, after he heads to california on route 66...heh! just that one ref to the fabled highway though...it does go west...as it goes east...
jacky at times lives under his own standard, and he can't seem to grasp the idea that he needs to live according to others standard at times--like getting to forking work on time and no, fifteen minutes is fifteen minutes late. he pules and whines about some strange things at times...much like his grandfather....the proverbial old man, as his biological father died in book one, a garden of sand...
i'm reminded again of stephen king speaking at the jfk library, interviewed by tom perrotta, speaking about characters in 11/22/63 who had to go out of town for their unmarried sex, purchasing condoms from a drugstore three towns over. that does not happen in tattoo...in this story, you need to remind yourself time and again that this isn't the wonderful 60s or 70s that gave us unbridled passion and illicit wanton sex....and 1 out of 2 marriages ending in divorce....verily, hallelujah and amen...this story happens at the end of ww2 and bring us to korea...1950 or so...
does that mean that people did not have unmarrried sex in the 40s and 50s? they certainly did, but there is/was not much in this story to indicate that what jacky does, how he behaves is not the norm, and yet maybe that is the point...maybe that is sposed to be a given?
they story contains moments in time that must be autobiographical....urchings...small kids popping up from beneath some sort of boardwalk or pier in china...tsinsgtao or something like that...horrid spelling you bet...sue me..
but these moments like that...orphans apparently, popping up from where they've gathered to sleep....a kind of lord of the flies moment.
there are other things like that...
anyway...good read...and as i understand, the next one...the devil to pay...jacky's name is changed to jarl.....in this one, he was called muskrat by his navy buddies....for a time.