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Shattered Promises #4
Scattered Ashes
My name is Gemma Lucas and my life’s a wreck. Alex, the guy I just might be falling in love with, and the father of my unborn child, left me. Not to mention if I do admit I’m in love with him, it could potentially kill us both. My father’s trapped in his own mind and my mom’s working for the dark side. Oh, and did I mention I was being haunted by the ghost of Nicholas, the annoying half-faerie, half Foreseer who won’t leave me alone. The world has entered apocalyptic mode; fires in the streets, mad chaos. Everyday more vampires, witches, and fey get marked by evil. Innocent humans are dying. And I’m the only one who can stop it, which sounds easy, but I have to die in order to save everyone. And I have to let Alex die as well, something I’m not so certain I can do. (This is a new adult paranormal romance re-imagining of my book, The Promise [the Fallen Star Series, book 4]).
300 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 24, 2015
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March 13, 2016Dear Jessica
Consider how book three is finished I am begging you to tell us when book four is going to be released! till then I am going to sit in the corner and cry and scream a little! Please hurry up!
Yours Maria
Consider how book three is finished I am begging you to tell us when book four is going to be released! till then I am going to sit in the corner and cry and scream a little! Please hurry up!
Yours Maria
April 6, 2015
You don't understand the greatness and amazing was of this series!! It's just mind blowing! Must read now! Drop everything. Go
July 28, 2015
3.0. For a series that was based so much on Gemma and Alex's attraction to each other, they didn't spend very much time together at all. Also, while the series did end in a way that most people will like, it was very anti-climactic, almost to the point of being forced.
Plot:
Gemma and Alex think they're falling in love with each other, and Gemma is pregnant with Alex's baby. Because of their connection with the star, they can't act upon their love, or it will kill them both. It's basically a moot point anyway because if they don't kill the star (dying themselves in the process), a portal will open, and evil will take over the world.
Characters:
As Gemma continues to learn more about her gifts, she and Alex fight their attraction for each other. Sadly, the only way we know they're fighting their attraction is that they both share longing looks, and they both refuse to let the other die. The desperation that was once there seems to be missing. To add to that, for two people who are so concerned with prophecy, neither of them is willing to listen, and as a result, they both counteract each other just about every time they try to do something.
Gemma, as in the last few books, seems to care more about what Laylen thinks than what Alex thinks. I found that kind of tiresome, mainly because I wanted Laylen and Aislin to end up together. Instead, Laylen never admits any feelings for Aislin and seems to pine away for Gemma even though he says he's accepted the fact that she wants to be with Alex. Aislin was probably my favorite character in the whole series, and I thought she deserved better.
Nicholas continues to haunt Gemma, and I was actually kind of glad because he brings the comic relief. Stephan also returns, but he seems nowhere near as threatening as everyone makes him out to be.
Writing:
While Sorenson shows a great deal of imagination, her books could really benefit from a good editor. Because of Gemma and Alex teleporting from place to place to time to time, the plot was already hard to follow. The spelling and grammatical errors just made for even more distraction. While this book didn't feature near as many sex scenes as the previous ones, I would still probably give it an R rating. In addition to the sexual situation (which were kind of nondescript), there was a lot of cussing and a ton of violence.
The Bottom Line:
If you made it this far, it's worth the read, but be warned.... There is a LOT going on. Also, even if you like the way the series ends, you might not like how it gets there.
Plot:
Gemma and Alex think they're falling in love with each other, and Gemma is pregnant with Alex's baby. Because of their connection with the star, they can't act upon their love, or it will kill them both. It's basically a moot point anyway because if they don't kill the star (dying themselves in the process), a portal will open, and evil will take over the world.
Characters:
As Gemma continues to learn more about her gifts, she and Alex fight their attraction for each other. Sadly, the only way we know they're fighting their attraction is that they both share longing looks, and they both refuse to let the other die. The desperation that was once there seems to be missing. To add to that, for two people who are so concerned with prophecy, neither of them is willing to listen, and as a result, they both counteract each other just about every time they try to do something.
Gemma, as in the last few books, seems to care more about what Laylen thinks than what Alex thinks. I found that kind of tiresome, mainly because I wanted Laylen and Aislin to end up together. Instead, Laylen never admits any feelings for Aislin and seems to pine away for Gemma even though he says he's accepted the fact that she wants to be with Alex. Aislin was probably my favorite character in the whole series, and I thought she deserved better.
Nicholas continues to haunt Gemma, and I was actually kind of glad because he brings the comic relief. Stephan also returns, but he seems nowhere near as threatening as everyone makes him out to be.
Writing:
While Sorenson shows a great deal of imagination, her books could really benefit from a good editor. Because of Gemma and Alex teleporting from place to place to time to time, the plot was already hard to follow. The spelling and grammatical errors just made for even more distraction. While this book didn't feature near as many sex scenes as the previous ones, I would still probably give it an R rating. In addition to the sexual situation (which were kind of nondescript), there was a lot of cussing and a ton of violence.
The Bottom Line:
If you made it this far, it's worth the read, but be warned.... There is a LOT going on. Also, even if you like the way the series ends, you might not like how it gets there.
July 19, 2015
Great series! full series review to come
January 16, 2018
Nail biting suspense and heart wrenching! I can't believe it ended like that! Jessica Sorensen did it again and kept my heart racing throughout this book as well! definitely going to read this series again and again!!!!
August 13, 2024
Read this in one sitting!! Love the ending !!
March 2, 2018
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July 25, 2015
Omg this last book was so epic and amazing that I couldn’t have imagined a better ending than this. There are/were so many emotions I had going through me that yes at times it was hard to concentrate because all I wanted were to things to be ok and be righted in the story. I really loved that we got to have both Alex and Gemma’s POV in the last book it really completed that circle to see everything come together for everything they needed to do.
The main character Gemma the person she has become by the end of this book is absolutely incredible and what does and how she goes about it is amazing, it actually makes you look up to her because of how incredible she is. The fact that she is also pregnant (not a spoiler it’s in the synopsis) makes it that much more surreal because all the decisions she makes is to protect her unborn baby and Alex, as a mother I completely was able to connect with Gemma on a new level and understand her so much better.
I really am sad to see this story come to an end, but Jessica did the right ending she didn’t drag the story on and on and on, she gives you the answers you seek (there is nothing left unsaid or undone), no you don’t get everyone’s ending but for the ones you don’t find out about that’s completely ok and it’s something I can live with as a reader. This is by far my favorite book in the entire series, loved it.
The main character Gemma the person she has become by the end of this book is absolutely incredible and what does and how she goes about it is amazing, it actually makes you look up to her because of how incredible she is. The fact that she is also pregnant (not a spoiler it’s in the synopsis) makes it that much more surreal because all the decisions she makes is to protect her unborn baby and Alex, as a mother I completely was able to connect with Gemma on a new level and understand her so much better.
I really am sad to see this story come to an end, but Jessica did the right ending she didn’t drag the story on and on and on, she gives you the answers you seek (there is nothing left unsaid or undone), no you don’t get everyone’s ending but for the ones you don’t find out about that’s completely ok and it’s something I can live with as a reader. This is by far my favorite book in the entire series, loved it.
September 18, 2016
Well... In the end, deciding to finish the series was a good choice.
I read in some of the previous comments that the characters hold no depth but in this particular case it kind of makes sense. The main characters are emotionally unstable, detached (in Gemma's case literally) and immature. You see them grow throughout each book, both of them discovering new emotions and at the same time trying to cope with not only their newly discovered feelings but also everything else that is being thrown at them.
Also, some of the comments state that Alex and Gemma share an unhealthy relationship since Alex is "abusive" and his behavior is being romanticized in an unhealthy way. Hmm... Honestly I didn't think much of it, I would never call his behavior abusive. Possessive definitely. Plus... If Alex was a d-bag for not telling her the truth (all excuses aside), Gemma was a d-bag for occasionally being all over Laylen.
Why two stars? I loved the plot but at the same time the story reminded me of other books and other characters, not a bad thing, just déjà vu. I am not a fan of love triangles. If you are going to write about a fallen star and the end of the world, maybe focus on that instead of a love triangle and repeating love scenes. Finally, the main character didn't get to me. On certain occasions, Gemma was simply annoying.
I read in some of the previous comments that the characters hold no depth but in this particular case it kind of makes sense. The main characters are emotionally unstable, detached (in Gemma's case literally) and immature. You see them grow throughout each book, both of them discovering new emotions and at the same time trying to cope with not only their newly discovered feelings but also everything else that is being thrown at them.
Also, some of the comments state that Alex and Gemma share an unhealthy relationship since Alex is "abusive" and his behavior is being romanticized in an unhealthy way. Hmm... Honestly I didn't think much of it, I would never call his behavior abusive. Possessive definitely. Plus... If Alex was a d-bag for not telling her the truth (all excuses aside), Gemma was a d-bag for occasionally being all over Laylen.
Why two stars? I loved the plot but at the same time the story reminded me of other books and other characters, not a bad thing, just déjà vu. I am not a fan of love triangles. If you are going to write about a fallen star and the end of the world, maybe focus on that instead of a love triangle and repeating love scenes. Finally, the main character didn't get to me. On certain occasions, Gemma was simply annoying.
July 5, 2015
Review coming soon!
April 23, 2017
So, will we ever get a book about Laylen and Aislin?
May 17, 2021
The original series was better. The added spiciness/smut made it odd, it didn’t fit as well at a lot of times. The original series was followed the instalove trope but this one was that on crack. I also didn’t really enjoy the whole “we’ll die if we fall in love” thing because they were already in love with each other and aware of that fact. I feel like the feelings and their aware of their feelings would matter more than vocalizing it. It just didn’t make a lot of sense to me.
Sometimes when you read a book you just know that the author wanted to write a romance or fantasy’s of theirs and write some smut and that’s what this is and it affected the overall quality of the book.
Sometimes when you read a book you just know that the author wanted to write a romance or fantasy’s of theirs and write some smut and that’s what this is and it affected the overall quality of the book.
August 20, 2017
Even throughout a heartbreak
Thank you Jessica I read this novel a while dating whom I thought was my Alex but it turn put to be he was my white walker. Gemma and Alex love story and struggles were very relatable! I enjoyed it.
Thank you Jessica I read this novel a while dating whom I thought was my Alex but it turn put to be he was my white walker. Gemma and Alex love story and struggles were very relatable! I enjoyed it.
June 22, 2018
Finally took the time to finish reading this series. Had to re-read the first 3.5 books before I could read the last one since it had been awhile, and I'd forgotten a bunch of it. Plus, there's so much going on it can get confusing. But it was an entertaining series with an HEA for the good guys.
March 1, 2021
Amazing
I am so amazed by this series. I can't wait for the next book in the series to come in March to Amazon Kindle. I can't wait to see what the future holds for Gemma, Alex and Alana. Laylen and Aisle too hopefully.
I am so amazed by this series. I can't wait for the next book in the series to come in March to Amazon Kindle. I can't wait to see what the future holds for Gemma, Alex and Alana. Laylen and Aisle too hopefully.
March 28, 2018
Live this series
I've read this series like 5 times I absolutely love it and the dynamic of gemma and Alex I wish there were more books lol
I've read this series like 5 times I absolutely love it and the dynamic of gemma and Alex I wish there were more books lol
September 14, 2018
Love love love!!
Still by far one of my favourite authors, no surprises that I loved this ending just as much as I did with the original Fallen Star series ending
Still by far one of my favourite authors, no surprises that I loved this ending just as much as I did with the original Fallen Star series ending
November 10, 2018
Absolutely loved this book. The entire series is great.
January 23, 2023
Read this series while I was breast feeding.
Was a great series to get me though the long nights.
Was a great series to get me though the long nights.
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August 17, 2023I could not put this book down, had to read it finish
July 27, 2015
ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! I LOVE THIS BRILLIANT SERIES!
I was blown away and sold by Jessica Sorensen's Shattered Promises Series! I enjoyed reading this Amazing Series, and Scattered Ashes was not the exception. I was not disappointed by it! It captivated me from start to finish! Jessica Sorensen's writing style is just Brilliant, is not every day that you find and amazing author who's talented as a writer and with the gift of being able to tell the story!
I love this series, and even though I was upset because it was taking forever for this book, I could never say anything bad about this series! Jessica's flawless writing style is also captivating. All the suspenseful twists and turns kept me on the edge of my seat until the last page. I enjoyed Jessica's take on the paranormal world, it was just awesome. It was a breath of fresh air into Gemma and Alex's world!
I was blown away and sold by Jessica Sorensen's Shattered Promises Series! I enjoyed reading this Amazing Series, and Scattered Ashes was not the exception. I was not disappointed by it! It captivated me from start to finish! Jessica Sorensen's writing style is just Brilliant, is not every day that you find and amazing author who's talented as a writer and with the gift of being able to tell the story!
I love this series, and even though I was upset because it was taking forever for this book, I could never say anything bad about this series! Jessica's flawless writing style is also captivating. All the suspenseful twists and turns kept me on the edge of my seat until the last page. I enjoyed Jessica's take on the paranormal world, it was just awesome. It was a breath of fresh air into Gemma and Alex's world!
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November 13, 2015So Amazing!
Ohhh! I finally finished! I've been so busy and had to put this on the back burner but alas! I have finished and I was so not expecting the ending!!! Not giving away anything, but omg! Was so amazing! I've had so much fun reading this series, experiencing Gemma and Alex's fantastic journey. Filled with every emotion that makes for a wild rollercoaster ride! This really was one if my favorite series of all time! I absolutely love Jessica Sorensen, she's genius with her story writing! I fell in love with Gemma in the very beginning, I felt so sorry for what her life had become, what she had missed all her life. Then Alex changes everything and sends Gemma on one crazy emotional ride. They cannot rest, cannot love, cannot enjoy life until everything is fixed!
Ohhh! I finally finished! I've been so busy and had to put this on the back burner but alas! I have finished and I was so not expecting the ending!!! Not giving away anything, but omg! Was so amazing! I've had so much fun reading this series, experiencing Gemma and Alex's fantastic journey. Filled with every emotion that makes for a wild rollercoaster ride! This really was one if my favorite series of all time! I absolutely love Jessica Sorensen, she's genius with her story writing! I fell in love with Gemma in the very beginning, I felt so sorry for what her life had become, what she had missed all her life. Then Alex changes everything and sends Gemma on one crazy emotional ride. They cannot rest, cannot love, cannot enjoy life until everything is fixed!
July 18, 2015
I've been waiting on the conclusion for Gemma and Alex's story forever! I fell in love with this series from the beginning and couldn't wait to see how it all ended. Especially with the way the last book ended.
I enjoyed this story. There were twists and turns and of course some heart pounding moments. The chemistry and love Gemma and Alex have for each other is off the charts. Overall, I'm pleased with the way this story unfolded and it was a great conclusion to the series.
I give this 3.5 stars.
I enjoyed this story. There were twists and turns and of course some heart pounding moments. The chemistry and love Gemma and Alex have for each other is off the charts. Overall, I'm pleased with the way this story unfolded and it was a great conclusion to the series.
I give this 3.5 stars.
June 25, 2015
Waiting to see how the story would end for Alex and Gemma may have taken a while...but it was so worth it. After book 3, we were left wondering if Alex would ever come back to Gemma....and would their deaths be the only way to save the world. I won't give anything away, but the journey they had to take to save the world made me laugh, cry, hold my breath, and curse at the screen at times. Jessica Sorensen has done it again, and wrote another amazing book!!
June 29, 2015
WOW
I have to say I have absolutely loved this series! The suspense, angst, drama, love it was unbelievable! I couldn't wait to see how this story played out and I was seriously not disappointed. A love like Alex and Gemma is one that can not be taken for granted. They fought for each other...protected each other and sacrificed! And can I just say that Aislin and Laylin made a perfect couple...would love to see what's going on with that duo! Great book...perfect series!
I have to say I have absolutely loved this series! The suspense, angst, drama, love it was unbelievable! I couldn't wait to see how this story played out and I was seriously not disappointed. A love like Alex and Gemma is one that can not be taken for granted. They fought for each other...protected each other and sacrificed! And can I just say that Aislin and Laylin made a perfect couple...would love to see what's going on with that duo! Great book...perfect series!
July 1, 2015
I don't know why I waited so long to read this series because it was wonderful! I'm so glad though because I was able to read them all at once. It took me 3 days because I just couldn't stop, lol! I've read lots of paranormal before but this was nothing like what I've read in the past. This series sucked me in from the first chapter and held me captive til the very last page. Thank you Jessica for such a great change of pace.
August 4, 2015
I waited oh so long for this book and I can honestly say it was well worth the wait. I loved every minute of this series and I could not think of a better ending. This is a series I will pick up and read again in the near future just so I can read the entire straight through with no torturous time having to wait for the next book.
September 22, 2015
I was really looking forward to this book, and re read book Three to refresh my memory of things, and seriously liked book Three better.
I did enjoy this story, but it seemd to take forever to get to the end, plus there were so many typo's which just annoyed me. With better editing, I would have given this book four stars.
I did enjoy this story, but it seemd to take forever to get to the end, plus there were so many typo's which just annoyed me. With better editing, I would have given this book four stars.
July 15, 2015
I first read the young adult version of these books in 2013 and reading the story again now really took me back to a great time. I had just gotten started reading and this story is as great as I remember it. Maybe even better since some stuff was changed. I will always hold these books as some of my favs.
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