The hardships of childhood were mentioned too many times and the stories about his fiancée too many times In would have been good to know that Bianca’s cabin was cleaned up when they fixed the roof
I enjoyed the book for the most part but I felt like everything was going in a circle and certain things didnt make sense. Im one chapter they would talk about something and in the next they would repeat it as if they never even mentioned it at all. The argument was constantly the same. If this was supposed to be a billionaire ranch and they had money and investments beyond wall street dreams why did they keep acting as if they didnt have money to expand, especially at the end when the contract came through and they made it seem like this is what they needed to make a financial difference. It was just a lot of the confusion. One paragraph she said she turning down the offer and the next she is talking about having to make a decision. It was almost like the author forgot what she wrote in the previous chapters.
Good storyline, but exhausting! The repetitiveness! We know the struggle she went through but does it have to be repeated in every chapter? The constant back and forth with them was frustrating. Thought it would be better. It took me too long to get through this book.
Oh Yeah its a darn good steamy western romance about the Dalton Ranch, it really caught me by surprise with its excitement and vulnerability. Bianca Lawson is a career independent woman who fought her way out of Detroit with sheer will and by putting herself through Northwestern college on scholarships while working three part-time jobs, she had to climb her way up the ladder to work at one of the most prestigious marketing firms in the country, She literally clawed her way up from nothing, a Black woman in an industry that didn't welcomed her at first, and she could face any challenge. Now she had spent five hundred million dollars on a campaign that didn't even exist 😂😂 haha. Now then there's Chase Dalton of Dalton Ranch is one of the most undeniably handsome rugged man in a weathered kind of way, his hair is sun-streaked with his pale blue eyes, that can stare directly into a person, with a stern expression that's closed off, that tells you he doesn't suffer fools gladly, he's also stubborn and he turn their ranch into a billion dollar business starting in his teens while raising his younger sister. I wasn’t expecting the honesty of these two main characters as they struggle to overcome the fears and burdens of their past loves to try and build a future…hopefully together. It's a breath of fresh air, just like the incredible Wyoming landscapes. The story has just the right amount of spice with excitement which made me enjoy the story more and to become mildly obsessed with these two characters. I totally expected more drama but I'm okay with the way things happen. What a delight! I'm pretty sure I read this book in my head with a voice that had a country accent and there were two little old ladies with their fingers in everybody's business and maybe some unbelievable places where lovers would sneak off to make Love and then some good ole fingers licking Hot barbecue spare ribs that's sticky on your fingers and melted in my mouth, along with some laugh-out-loud funny antics. But there are some sweet family relationships moments, a ride-or-die best friend, and a romantic interest all set to the backdrop of a small town and there are also a few deeper topics to deal with, like uncovering each other past, and charting a future out of uncertainty. Plus I'm amazingly mildly obsessed with the cowboys. I can’t wait for the another book to be released! What a brilliant debut for this story that's a joy to read. I highly recommend.
Parts of the story were very repetitive They just kept saying the same thing over and over which was very irritating Even at the very end of the book they repeated the same thing again the storyline without that repetition would have been good but.I have to be honest I don't understand this billionaire thing.Why was he a poor billionaire. To do what his sister was doing in the book? Was he a billionaire or was he poor I don't get it and it totally threw me off. Did he actually need money. Why was he working so hard. could he hire people to help him.Was he a Billionaire? Land rich cash poor? was he just stupid? I didn't get it was a little confusing. And then, it took her this long to come up with her final idea? Really?
Bianca worked hard to get where she was. Chase main focus was his ranch. Love was not in the picture. That is until these two met under a weird circumstance. The tension between the two of them was very thick. Bianca was determined to not quit! Chase was determined to not give in! Well, the sparks between the two of them heated up. Their love for one another was undeniable. True love prevailed ❤️🔥
I enjoyed getting to know this couple. First time reader. Enjoyed their story, but the last third became a repetitive circular storyline that went nowhere and felt like that just copied and pasted the same thing. I would have preferred some kind of plot twist to added a little drama, a little more spice, and a great epilogue about the wedding, what the kids were like, life down the road for them to make it more interesting. Decent read, but it needed more
It would have been a good story, however, too much redundancy. Without all that repetitive drama, this book would have gotten 5 stars. Why not have enter a pregnancy or something to improve the bond between Bianca and Chase. That would have put this book over the top.
But… repetitive especially 3-4 last chapters. I mean the story felt like it was dragging on, saying the same things. It kind of spoilt it for me. Other than that this was a quick easy read.
An enjoyable read, good storytelling with full enjoyable characters. Had laugh out loud moments, and on I just want to knock their heads together moments. I recommend.
A wonderful story of two very different people finding love unexpectedly and realizing that some things are worth the wait and sacrifice Great job as always Raven