After losing his best friend, Zane arrives at West Bridge with grief still lodged in his chest and a heightened awareness he never asked for. From the outside, life keeps moving. Inside, everything feels quieter. Sharper. He starts noticing the things others don’t.
The silences.
The jokes that land wrong.
The moments everyone else laughs through.
And then there’s Seren.
She is beautiful, untouchable, and deeply alone. Surrounded by people who want her, but no one who truly sees her. From the edges of the room, Zane watches her slip further beneath the surface, recognizing a pattern he’s seen before. One that doesn’t end well when it’s ignored.
Told entirely from Zane’s point of view, Notice Me is a slow-burn, trauma-informed love story about grief, quiet devotion, and the cost of paying attention. It explores what it means to notice someone when it matters most, and the weight of choosing not to look away.
This novel is a prequel to the viral sensation See Me and adds new emotional depth to the series, revealing what was happening in the background long before Seren ever told her story. For readers who believed Seren when she said she was fine. For the ones who wondered who was watching. For anyone who understands that safety isn’t the same as being okay.
Notice Me is part of the See Me series by Tella Alvarez, a collection known for its honest portrayal of mental health, grief, and being seen when it matters most.
This story contains depictions of grief, substance use, and suicidal ideation. Reader discretion is advised.
such a raw description of grief. getting to understand zane’s feelings, and how he handles his grief. to see how he sees Seren and to get his point of view was so impactful.
I thought I was emotionally prepared for Notice Me, but I absolutely was NOT. 😭❤️ After reading See Me, getting Zane’s POV made this story hit on an entirely different level.
Zane Briggs completely stole my heart. Seeing everything through his eyes—the things he noticed, the pain he carried, and the way his feelings for Seren developed—made me understand him in a way I didn’t know I needed. He wasn’t just the guy who fell for Seren; he was the person who truly noticed her when she was trying so hard to disappear.
And Seren… my heart broke for her all over again. 💔 Knowing what she was going through while seeing Zane slowly realize that something was wrong was incredibly emotional. Their connection felt genuine, complicated, and beautifully imperfect.
I loved getting the pieces of their story that we didn’t get to see in See Me. There were so many moments that made me stop and think, Oh my God… THIS is what was happening from Zane’s side.
Tella Alvarez has such a powerful way of writing broken characters without making their trauma their entire identity. This story isn’t about someone magically being “fixed” by love. It’s about being seen, being heard, and finding someone who makes you feel like you’re worth fighting for.
Zane and Seren will forever have a piece of my heart. ❤️
If you loved See Me, you absolutely NEED to read Notice Me. It adds so much depth to Zane and Seren’s story and made me fall in love with them all over again.
Emotional. Heartbreaking. Beautiful. And completely worth the tears. 😭❤️
tella alvarez deserves flowers because every book i've read from her is 5/5. i'm so grateful there's more of the see me series specifically from zane's pov. it was heartbreaking to learning about his grief. zane was a gentlemen, very perceptive and protective. i've shared my favorite quotes below.
Like he was checking on something he felt responsible for but didn’t claim ownership of. When someone brushed too close to her or said something that made her shoulders tense, Cain noticed. He didn’t intervene. He didn’t need to. He just adjusted the music, softened a beat here, shifted the rhythm there, like he was building a buffer around her without making it obvious.
The way her shoulder lifted, brushing against the place he’d touched, not dramatic enough to be obvious. Like she was erasing it before it had time to stain.
The water was already moving. And no one seemed to notice where it was headed.
I knew grief didn’t work like math. That you couldn’t trace it backward and find the exact moment that would have changed everything. But knowing that didn’t help.
Seren moved, and everyone else adjusted around her.
And that was the part I clung to. Knowing implied closeness and what I felt didn’t fit into that. It was just observation. Curiosity mixed with caution. Anyone would notice her. Anyone would get caught watching. That didn’t mean anything.
“It’s like that story… you know, the one with the stone and the sword. No one can pull it out, but they all keep trying.” He laughed, but it was dry.
The rest of them looked entertained, poorly hiding their smiles, like they’d just witnessed something amusing instead of something quietly brutal.
no matter how many people wanted her attention, no one ever seemed to ask what it cost her to give it.
They didn’t see her as a person. They saw her as an opportunity. A fantasy. A story to tell their friends on Monday. And when she pulled away, when she said no, they called it heartbreak. Once you noticed something like that about a person, you couldn’t really unnotice it.
She was always being looked at. And it was killing her.
Grief doesn’t soften you. It calcifies you, and then carves you into a different shape, whether you want it to, or not.
Her grief felt old.
I didn’t know how to stand beside something so fragile without crushing it under my own weight.
This was amazing to see Zane from the other end and even though it’s short it changes the way I see see me and Seren and how special this whole universe is
This helped me understand Zane a little better and where it all started. I thoroughly enjoyed it and appreciate how well written his response to grief was
wow this brought so much more depth to both seren and zane’s stories. was it a little bit long for a prequel (sometimes just repeated things we already knew)? probably but it was a well-written look into zane’s pov nonetheless. i loved zane and seren together and this novella made their beginning/their past make more sense.