Emma wakes up in a beautiful room overlooking a floral garden. She has no memory of how she got there, but casually dismisses it to her wild partying until she realizes she is utterly restrained and gagged.
As she tries to make sense of it, a masked maid arrives with the sadistic tools to keep Emma under total control. This begins a thrilling rollercoaster ride of mystery and plot twists. Will Emma discover why she's in a Beautiful Prison, and more importantly, can she escape?
This is not the story you’re looking for. The dark romance/smut/kink standard troupe is not here. What is here is a gripping, slow burn story asking; what is a prison and how do we escape? Enjoy this story for what it is: slow burning journey of deep character development, with an amazing, gratifying, worth it, end.
Possible Trigger Warning: This book is meant for adults only, and may contain sexual situations, family drama and trauma, talk of suicide, and elements of power exchange that some may consider outside the usual scope of the BDSM ideals of safe, sane or consensual.
I was one of the fortunate people to receive an advanced copy of “A Beautiful Prison” last year and have since read it several times and purchased a copy when it was finally released on Amazon.
The author was clear that this is a “slow burner” but to be honest after "Shackled" and "The Contract" my initial thought that this was too slow, but a necessary reflection of the tedium experienced by Emma with the constant over the top restraints by her maids / guards. It all becomes clearer in chapter 9, Answers when we discover that Emma is in charge and the prison is to keep her safe from herself. It sounds confusing but reminded me of the cult series “The Prisoner” (1967) No 6 who was also detained in a beautiful prison, albeit with more freedom.
The passage of time is difficult judge and I suspect that was how Emma felt with no indication of the days turning into months, although Emma comments on the passing of the seasons but there is no mention of holidays such as Christmas or Easter being marked thus time slips by until we see Lucy and Ang leave and Emma chooses the reward of Ask a Question and discovers that they have both retired, her resulting scream suggests that she not only lost her first two maids / guards whom she liked but had to confront the time spent imprisoned. Emma’s prison operates on a punishment, a nasty shock stick that the maids appear to be able to make it appear when necessary, and rewards for good behaviours which are shown in a catalogue with varying points and bonus points which appear to be random but Emma notes that they could be manipulated by storing and spending, although the catalogue shows her “freedom” on the final page if she can accrue one million, three hundred and fifty seven thousand, one hundred and eleven, clearly an impossible number. Several pairs of maids come and go until she is being restrained as usual but Emma’s handcuffs slip off and she is able to move her hands onto her lap but wonders looking at them “whose hands are these?” “My Grandmother’s” and “what must I look like” Emma observed during her initial days in her “beautiful prison” that there were no mirrors and no mention that she had seen her reflection in the glass doors and so this would have been a stark reminder of the passage of time. It isn’t until her final maid Tonia shows that Emma has a doubler bonus thus finally achieving enough to gain her freedom. Looking at the final page Emma indicates that she wants the opposite page which shows a pyramid with an eye at the apex, the All Seeing Eye – Answers. The answer is Emily, a health tracker created by Emma to remind her to eat regularly and to call her mother on her birthday; we discover that Emma seeds more responsibility to Emily who has had to call an ambulance several times in order to save her life. Emma tells Emily that she “keeps fucking up, you gotta stop me, whatever you have to do; you have to stop me from doing stupid shit.” Emily’s parameters were to keep Emma alive; in addition she wanted to keep her happy with a beautiful prison, her primary objective had kept Emma alive for eighty six years in her beautiful prison, Emma whispers “time flies” when she realises that she is one hundred and fourteen years old. Emma is offered the opportunity of freedom or to remain, her choice is to remain and the final line is “Emma tested her restraints, then closed her eyes and had the best sleep ever” Are we to conclude that Emma dies in her sleep or that her demons that drove Emily to construct the beautiful prison are at last vanquished?
Emma is clearly a damaged individual and DX asks “what is a prison and how do we escape?” McGoohan, No 6 argued that institutional constraints are less of a prison than our own fears; and that individuals, rather than external forces are largely responsible for their own captivity. And we see this with Emma. So what is “A Beautiful Prison?” A love story, a cautionary tale, a journey of discovery and forgiveness? Firstly it’s a love story, the maids clearly love Emma, one could argue that they all have Lima Syndrome; developing sympathy for their captive overtime, but that suggests that they didn’t have a natural affection for Emma. Emily said that all the maids requested not to retire but to remain; she suggested that it could have been because the pay was very good in an area with poor employment but she didn’t believe that was the case. We saw with Lucy, her first maid that there was genuine affection for Emma even though she broke her nose when trying to escape, Emma is upset that she caused the injury and made a mental note that any future escape would not involve hurting Lucy, there weren’t any further escape attempts which may have been because Emily increased the already physical restraints. Although none of the maids were able to communicate with Emma we see a hint of humour when she has a small plaster over her mask to show her broken nose. We also saw, in a video recorded by Lucy after she left, and played by Emily in Answers, the only verbal communication she had that she loved Emma and forgave her for breaking her nose. We also saw that Ang, the second maid with Lucy was also affectionate towards Emma even though she appears to have used the shock stick the most and was the maid responsible for cleaning and feeding Emma when she was put into a cage as a punishment for hurting Lucy. We also see Tonia, the final made with Olive, who we don’t read about clearly loves Emma. It was interesting that despite Emily telling all the maids that Emma was a dangerous individual; hence the necessity for the restraints Lucy knew it wasn’t true after the first day and the other maids reached the same opinion. We see that Emily loves Emma and even sheds a tear when discussing the necessity of punishing Emma in the cage, admitting that she almost crashed her system, then telling Emma that she, the maids and even her mother loved her and perhaps it was time to forgive herself. I had mixed feelings about the Epilogue and I still can't decide whether I really like the addition of Caitlin, Emma wrote the programme for Emily to take care of her, keep her from harm, from making "shitty decisions" and to keep her alive, the addition of Caitlin is almost a paradox from the original directive, although it seems that Emily takes Emma literally when she asks what will happen after she’s gone, “the maids will receive severance pay and the place will be torn down” Emma’s comment of “seems a waste” gives Emily a new directive, she even condones the use of the shock stick with the proviso that “shocking centenarians is strictly prohibited!” Caitlin, like Emma has agreed to the prison, although one can argue that she has been coerced into asking for help. We saw that Emily, the programme was capable of love, was this written by Emma during one of her drug induced states or has Emily, like HAL gone rogue, she tells Caitlin that she has many such sites helping persons like her from making bad decisions, is this a lie and if so can the programme lie and if so wouldn’t that cause a paradox unless Emily has been able to rewrite her own prime directive? An interesting twist is somewhat sinister. In conclusion “A Beautiful Prison,” even after several reads doesn’t lose its appeal, I have had to re-evaluate my origin comment to the author that this was one of the best books of this genre, DX has set a benchmark that will be difficult to surpass and is, in my view the best of its kind.
The blurb was indeed very accurate: This wasn't the story I expected. I didn't find the usual clichés. I can't assign the story to any conventional genre. (Strict Confinement / Total Bondage?) It's certainly not BDSM. I didn't find it erotic either.
The story begins mysteriously and develops very slowly. [I was actually tempted not to read it to the end.] A woman is held indefinitely in a prison. The security measures there guarantee total control and the level of bondage is, in my opinion, completely excessive. Escape is impossible. The prison conditions are bizarre.
The prisoner's monologues irritated me. In fact, there's hardly any dialogue in the entire story. One might assume that the silence around her is oppressive. The prisoner is almost always gagged, but she still "talks" constantly. Only in her thoughts, though!
The ending of the story is astonishing and resolves the mysteries.
I can't rate this story: On the one hand, I'd only give it one star because I didn't find what I was looking for at all and am therefore disappointed. [To be fair, I have to admit: I was warned.] On the other hand, I'd give it four stars because the "monologues" were eloquent and the radio shows were entertaining. The dramatic ending touched my heart. That's usually what I'd give it five stars for.
Wow! This is a wonderfully written story! In fact, one of the best books I have read in a long time. It may not get recognized like it should because of its strong kinky storyline, but it is a masterpiece.
The book is loaded with plenty of delicious kink, but there is so much more, much more. The character development is so powerful that I actually felt I knew and cared about the MC by the end of the book. Her inner thoughts during her captivity make the story. At times she is so traumatized by her past and frightened by her captivity which made me feel her pain so intensely. However, there is a delightfully funny dialogue she has with herself that lightens the story and makes you love her even more.
Do yourself a favor and don’t read any spoilers. The fun is to read this book as a kinky story and try to solve the mystery. 5 strong stars for kink, story and superb writing!
Got a little delayed doing taxes, now I can finally post my review of this amazing work. Here's what I posted to Amazon just now:
As other reviewers have commented, this is a truly different and unique work that transcends genres but is unashamedly kinky and engrossing. This is a book to be savored, letting the mood suffuse you as you read. The premise is very engaging and the characters, especially the main character Emma, whose thoughts we are privy to, and the surrealistic "maids" are a total treat.
Fundamentally, this is a great read, extremely enjoyable. I've never really encountered anything like it, so it's really refreshing and heartening to see writing like this.
This is an outstanding work of whatever genre this is. Bare bones, it seems like a "total inescapable bondage" tale, of which there are many. But DX's writing takes this out of the realm of popcorn erotica. DX's lush, expressive prose sells the beauty of the prison...not only the physical surroundings but the luxurious food and drink. This is a stark contrast to the severe strictures the heroine endures. The surrealistic radio broadcasts, the anonymous "maids," give the work an X-rated Alice in Wonderland feel. The story is written in (very) close 3rd person, so that we know what the heroine is thinking and feeling. We feel her terror, her outrage her despair. The "explanation" which ends the story was foreseeable. There was a little foreshadowing, but the main reason is that DX had written herself (?) into a corner, and only a deus ex machina could resolve the mystery. But the end was still surprising and surprisingly touching. It becomes a strange love story. Something I didn't expect. "A Beautiful Prison" transcends genre. It's beautifully and evocatively written. It is well worth the read and worth taking some time to appreciate the writing. Buy it. You won't regret it.
A curious slow moving fever dream featuring a self-defeating leading character who has clearly whisked herself into the unknown. The setting, the bondage, the restraints, and her ever present servant are distractions from the very necessary inner journey she must take to discover herself.
A complex MC, a mysterious villain, bondage. Slow burning, and deeply rewarding. An emotional rollercoaster with a satisfying ending. Brilliant! (If I do say so myself!)
(ARC) This wonderful story defies classification. It is bondage, but a mystery, as our party loving hero wakes restrained in a room overlooking a floral garden. The author slowly delivers a story that pulls the audience into a maelstrom.
If you're looking for a well crafted, slow burn to forest fire, human emotion story, this is it.
(Thank you DX, for the ARC, but I've placed my pre-order)
This is not a story about Bondage, but it is all about Bondage. It isn't about Erotica, yet it is all about Erotica. This isn't a Mystery, or Horror, or Romance, or Kink, yet it is all those things.
What this is a complex story where a story can't possibly be, filled with twists and surprises. A slow burning, but brilliantly constructed story that quickly blazes into a fire storm you can't put down, all leading to a satisfying conclusion.
A lovable, but flawed main character, a mysterious antagonist, and a Beautiful Prison, all form to make a page turning amazing story worthy of reading again.
This is DX's best work!
Fans of Bondage, Long Term Restraint, or anyone looking for something different, this is your story!